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Penname: Tookie83 [ Contact]
Real name: Elizabeth
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Member Since: April 07, 2009
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25/f/delaware
loved the Twilight Books
didn't loved the Twilight movie when put up against the book, but on its own the movie was great! lol
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i love this site, there are so many great writers here, is amazing.
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Summary:  
He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?
OOC, canon at heart.
Banner by FatApolloLove
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue in Review
c'mon... i love this story... you hAVE to do a followup on these characters .. they are just too good
Summary:
Edward Cullen is a fire-fighter who has run away from a haunting past in the city of Chicago. Bella Swan is a blossoming artist who is trying to rebuild her life after a tragic event leaves her with a broken heart. Their paths cross when the once simple town of Forks becomes the backdrop for a series of mysterious arsons. Is it just a coincidence? Or has someone's past come back to haunt them?
NEW BANNER!!! by Megs at ADF (adifferentforest) Thank you!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Phil, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 60967
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: September 02, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Rags
good story.. cant wait to find out what happened in chicago
Summary: 
Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...
Beautiful banner by the awesome achelle131
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes
Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Relations & Revelations (V)
aww, that was sweet. never thought car sex was romantic but that was cute
Summary: Bella's having a bad day. Edward's the telemarketer who so happens to cross her path on that day. How does Edward react when Bella gives him a piece of her mind?
AU/AH, all canon couples. Varying POV between Edward and Bella.
Fantastic banner by Danger_Magnet
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 48348
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2009 Updated: June 15, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: April 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: A Day For Ranting
i LOVE the cartoon, its AWESOME!
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: April 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Confused is an Understatement
OH MY! I LAUGHED TEARS. SO.DARN.FUNNY!
Summary: Bella doesn’t believe in love. Edward relies on it to woo women into bed. Where will they end up one year and one bet later? Will they be able to change each other? Is change possible? Or are some things better left unchanged?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 34918
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2009 Updated: June 18, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Just When You Think You're in Control (S)
i loved it but it was too short lol Author's Response: I know! I promise I will make up for it in the next one. As soon as I get rid of this damn writers block. It's killing me! Thanks for the review.
Summary: When her marriage began to fall apart, she ran into a beautiful stranger on the streets of London. Can he show her how love should be and help her move on?
A HUGE thank you to Falconcranelove for the amazing banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Garrett, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Leah, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 154680
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: You Showed Me The Way
yeahhhhhhhhhh... babytime
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: October 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: You Make My Dreams Come True
aww iwould love to read a sequel down the road
Summary: 
When Charlie is diagnosed with cancer, Bella decides to move to Forks to help him through his treatment and recovery. What happens when the resentful son of the new cancer doctor meets up with the reason he was dragged to this small town? AH. E/B.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 99780
[Report This] Published: March 20, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Have You Ever
damn, i mean, i understand that he is just sad that shes not going to be there anymore but still.. damn Author's Response: We must remember that Edward is an average teenage boy. They aren't always rational and understanding. He has had a live in girlfriend for two weeks. Though she has been busy visiting Charlie, she is still there when he goes to bed, and there when he gets up in the morning. They have just had a fantastic Christmas together, and though he knew this day was coming, it hit fast. He reacted poorly, to say the least, but know that he is a good enough person that he will realize it.
For now, he is the head cashier at the jerk store. ;-)
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Storm Brewing
im glad that he does have some 'normal' teenage responses and actions... there are too many stories where the Edwards and Bellas are too grownup for their age
Author's Response: I agree. Everyone expects Edward to always be mature, because in the book, he is over 100 years old. He has gained a century of maturity. A true 17 year old boy...not always level headed.
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Just Like Heaven
i like the way you ended that
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: December 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue
oh my shit.... that was sooo sad... bittersweet i guess
Thank you for writing this
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Summary: Bella has been with Jacob for four years and everyone thinks they have the perfect relationship. Their friends and family expect an engagement any day, but Bella is having second thoughts. A story about old love, new love, and friendship.
Canon pairings. Slightly OOC. Rated for later chapters.
FINALIST IN THE INDIE TWIFIC AWARDS! CATEGORY: BEST AU HUMAN-COMPLETE.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 76222
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2009 Updated: June 05, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: April 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
omg the nervous edward is so hilarious and just down right adorable!
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: May 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
they are both wrong, hes being distant and shouldnt have told Tanya anything, and she shouldnt have hung out with Jacob even if he did help her with her car.
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue
wow, that seemed to end abruptly, yeah everythingwas wrapped up but it seemed abrupt to me.. but still a good story
Summary:
Bella meets Edward when he picks up his nephew from her Pre-K class and the sparks fly. As their feelings for each other grow, Edward has a prior commitment that he is convinced must be seen through. A commitment that is effectively keeping them apart. Are there some complications that even the strongest hearts can't overcome? Can they resist the one thing they can't have--Each other?
To get to the prize, they'll have to survive the temptation of one another, in this emotional waiting game.
Show and Don't Tell.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 124914
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2009 Updated: December 16, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
damn that was hot... and they are so good together... it just fits Author's Response: Yeah, they do don't they? Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed 
Date: June 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
oh geez... crazy tanya! cant wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
it was great.. the whole running and jumping on him.
it was very climactic.
you are doing a very good job, except he is still with the witch.. so that needs to stop.. and soon
:)
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: August 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Oh my sweet baby jesus, you did not just leave with that cliffy... Jeez... that the worst and best cliffy ever... i dont really care about tanyas pov but we will see... i just cant wait until we get back to bella.... i love you becuase you filled my world with a story of love :)
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: November 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Damn i loved this story, and can't wait for the Epilogue. I wish i could write like this.
Are you going to continue on the EPOV version up util the same point as well?
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Summary: This is the sequel to Can’t Let Go. Emmett just opened up Emmett’s Daily Grind, a coffee shop/cereal bar, and Rosalie and Emmett just had their first kid, Emmett Junior aka EmJ. Bella and Edward are now married and are trying to start a family. Original characters carry over, Hal, Coley, Eli. Humor/Fluff/Lemons
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 113022
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2009 Updated: August 02, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: June 20th, It's Go Time!
awww.. thats it.... i loved this story the whole time.
Summary: 
For par amour, I loved her first ere thou. -Chaucer; What if Myspace's Artist/Artist interview with Rob Pattinson & Hayley Williams was not the first time they met? What if there was much more? A love story for the ages. Rated M for LEMONS.
Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No
Word count: 125940
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2011
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
daaaaaammmmnnnn.. i loved this chapter.. and listening to the songs at the same time really made me connect to the story
Author's Response: YAY! i am so glad you listened to the songs while reading. don't know how many people actually do that, but i think it's essential to really get the feel of what they're each feeling. it would make me happy if anytime a reader heard a paramore song from the riot album, they thought of hayley and rob. that's what i do...but i'm twisted like that!
so glad you liked it! i'm submitting the next chapter for validation and it should be posted soon.
love ya!
Summary: When Bella takes a long overdue trip back to Forks, an unexpected detour helps her find her way home. AU/AH ExBxJ M for adult themes and lemons. This is a story about a poly(amorous) trio. This means that there are sometimes moments where they all three have sex, sometimes BxJ, sometimes ExB, and sometimes ExJ.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes
Word count: 217268
[Report This] Published: March 31, 2009 Updated: January 20, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: November 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
darn, good thing you update so often otherwise i would be dying waiting after that cliffy
> Author's Response: heh. Thanks for the review. Will it spoil the anticipation if I tell you the story is completed over at FFn?
Summary: Edward Cullen is Big Man on Campus at his high school in Port Angeles. Bella Swan is a quiet, sarcastic, marches-to-the-beat-of-her-own-drummer girl at Forks High. A part-time job brings them together, and an unlikely friendship and surprising feelings develop. Neither is brave enough to do anything about it, however, and they part ways when Edward heads off to college. Their paths cross again after a year of no contact, and Edward is determined to not only rekindle their friendship, but to man up and actually do something about his ever-present feelings for Bella.
Banner by the brilliant Anne Cullen
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 144739
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2009 Updated: October 08, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
wow sexual tension much? i loved it Author's Response: Glad the UST is working for you! :)
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I LOVE THIS STORY.... WITH THE FLASHBACKS IT MAKES IT REALLY INTERESTING Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
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