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Penname: Tookie83 [ Contact]
Real name: Elizabeth
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Member Since: April 07, 2009
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loved the Twilight Books
didn't loved the Twilight movie when put up against the book, but on its own the movie was great! lol
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i love this site, there are so many great writers here, is amazing.
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Summary:  All Human AU – Shy, overprotected Bella Swan lives an unassuming life with her religiously zealous mother, Renée. When she has a chance meeting with town hellion Edward Cullen, Bella begins to realize that perhaps the sheltered life she’s been leading isn’t so much a comfort as it is a cage. 
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No
Word count: 112575
[Report This] Published: June 09, 2009 Updated: December 14, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Growing Up
i love this story, i love the discovery and the fact that she is so innocent
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: October 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Blue Bird
oh my.. that is so sweet... its so much better that edward did a 180 because he loves her
Summary: ******THIS IS A SERIES OF ALTERNATE POVS FROM THE STORY SHOW AND DON'T TELL. IN ORDER FOR THIS TO MAKE ANY SENSE, YOU MUST READ SHOW AND DON'T TELL FIRST! http://www.twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=3995 EPOV moments from Show & Dont Tell
Come join us on the forums!!! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=4148#p472374
Stephenie Meyer owns any Twilight characters and Twilight plot lines that may appear in this story. The remainder is my original work. No copying or reproduction of this work is permitted without my express written authorization. Copyright 2009 by Brits23.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Word count: 86153
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: January 16, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed 
Date: January 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: It's Only the Beginning
Seriously chick, this is one of the best fanfics i have read ( both the EPOV and BPOV), i hope that sometime down the road you do some more with these characters .. even if its an occasional one shot, because these characters are gold.
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Summary: An Abridged Account of the Sexual History of Edward Cullen, as told to Bella Swan. Edward recounts a somewhat disastrous history of encounters with women through the 20th century, while Bella grows impatient for an encounter of their own.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 65411
[Report This] Published: June 28, 2009 Updated: January 25, 2011
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: January 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: So Help Me God
shit.... i started reading this story today.. and this is the part im most eager to hear about and its the last chapter poster...darn it
> Author's Response: psst... There's more on ff.net: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5164036/1/An_Abridged_Account , though it will probably not go as far as you want :) Thanks for reviewing Tookie! --alchemilla
Summary: A pregnancy changes everything in an instant. Bella went from being a Godmother to a mother and ended up raising her best friends daughter after she died from giving birth. With her families support, she makes it through obstacles until she meets a gorgeous guy at a rare night out. Something in his past could tear her world apart, will it end up that way or will love conquer all?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 52897
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: August 04, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Dinner
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!
Summary: Bella doesn't hear news of Edward, months after he left for war, and begins to lose all hope of her love's return.
When she finds a letter she was never meant to read, how will she deal with the news she's been longing for? And when an eager stranger offers his help, will he do more harm than good?
"Only one person could pull her from the darkness, and I wasn't him."
Angst filled tale of those who are left behind, and maybe a happy ending.
Various points of view throughout.
All Canon after a little heartache.
Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 37098
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2009 Updated: June 08, 2012
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: October 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.
WOW.. DAMN... TOO BAD FOR DANIEL.. I MEAN SHE HAS TO BREAK IT OFF WITH HIM ITS JUST NOT FAIR TO ANYONE
Summary: They were the best of friends, "The Sovereign Six" as they were most notably called. After being apart for eleven years, they are all brought back together by a tragedy. Is their friendships strong enough to overcome the time they've missed together?
Here is the link for my thread over on the forums! Come and check it out!
http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=5213
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No
Word count: 135161
[Report This] Published: July 03, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- I Run to You
daaaaaaaaaaammmmmnnnnn.... i really did start crying. that chapter was written very well. Good Job.. and i forgive you for making me cry. Author's Response: lol, thank you. But I'm not done yet. So I hope the forgiveness extends to the upcoming chapters!
Summary: 
There is a rumor going around that there is a masked stranger that will slip into your room at night and give you one night of hot sexin, and after weeks and weeks of leaving her window open Bella is about to give up when who shows up...yeah, mask wearing Edward. Lots of sexin ensues.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 9526
[Report This] Published: July 04, 2009 Updated: July 29, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: July 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Urban Legend
i kept thinking that the end was going to show that edward and bella were just role playing.. but it was a good one shot Author's Response: Thank you bb!!
Summary: 
Bella remains sexually unfulfilled after three separate liaisons with “boys” instead of men. Diagnosed as frigid, she is on the verge of giving up on her sexuality. She encounters Edward Masen, another sexual misfit, and things begin to change. B/E/AH/AU/OOC. Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.
WARNING: THIS STORY CONTAINS ADULT THEMES RELATED TO VIOLENCE AGAINST WOMEN
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 149083
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2009 Updated: October 05, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Morning Amusements
OMG.. i love love love this story.. the playful sarcastic banter is great... please update soon
Summary: 
All human, Edward and Bella POV. Edward and Bella live in two different worlds, even though they live next to each other. Things get complicated when Edward, the leather jacket wearing cigarette smoking rebel falls for the girl next door.
*Banner by readergoof* : )
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 97025
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Criminal
lol ...Feel dirty about it. Feel dirty. Feel like its wrong- i love Rob
Summary: Bella Swan works at a child care center and Edward Cullen is the single dad she falls in love with.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Word count: 190579
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2011
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: December 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: I Will Not Take My Love Away
damn i cant wait to hear edwards reaction!
> Author's Response: I just submitted 16 so hopefully it won't be too long of a wait.
Summary: Bella finds herself trapped in a bad relationship and takes off to start a new life. She finds work as an exotic dancer, and finds she must overcome many issues in order to build a new relationship with a new man, Edward Cullen. Contains adult themes.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, James, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 29458
[Report This] Published: July 28, 2009 Updated: June 04, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: February 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
reminds me of Pretty Women>
Summary: 
With medical bills, school bills, not to mention rent, piling up, Bella looks for a way to dig herself out of debt. Rose tells her about a new business she’s gotten into. Bella tries her hand at the business, and ends up paired with Dr. Edward Cullen. But can she separate business and pleasure?
Here's a link to the thread. We'd love to hear your thoughts! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=5822
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 43549
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Mike Newton
oh damn!
Summary: An uptight Edward meets a carefree and vivacious Bella. How does their meeting change Edward's life... forever?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 7551
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: July 29, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
wow, its hard, after reading all the negative aspects for Tanya in all the other stories, to seperate that and think of her as suck a good person. i really thought that he was marrying bella and by some meracle she survived. But it was nice to have a diff outcome
Summary: Bella works at an amusement park, and Edward haunts her every fantasy. Upon meeting, they are forever attached. Ink, tats, and hot daddysexed out Carlisle.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 5475
[Report This] Published: July 31, 2009 Updated: August 20, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: August 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
wow, that was great Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Summary: Bella Swan is a nurse in the trauma center at Harborview Medical Center. She is introduced to Medical Director Dr. Carlisle Cullen's son, Dr. Edward Cullen, the trauma center's newest physician. Though their chemistry is undeniable, they try to ignore it. When Bella accompanies Edward to the tattoo parlor, sparks fly.
WARNING: CONTAINS A VERY GRAPHIC LEMON. FOR MATURE READERS ONLY!!
Categories: AU Characters: Carlisle
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 8962
[Report This] Published: August 08, 2009 Updated: September 01, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
damn that was hot with a plot!lol Author's Response: I am physically incapable of writing a lemon o/s without a plot. I wish I could, but I can't. So I'm grateful my idiosyncracies make for good reading!
Summary: A story about love, about death, about keeping secrets, and dealing with the consequences. Bella and Edward meet at a hospital when she is diagnosed with a life threatening disease and he is recovering from knee surgery. She confides her fears to him; he changes his life because of her. This is a story about their journey through the confusion, awkwardness, pain, and beauty of first love.
Excerpt from Chapter 2:
“What are you most afraid of?” Edward asks one last question.
“I'm not afraid of dying,” I answer truthfully.
“You're not afraid of dying?” he repeats, incredulous.
“No. There's so much more. I'm afraid of losing my hair but that's not my biggest fear. I'm afraid of leaving my mom and dad all alone. I'm afraid that if I survive, I'll never have children of my own.” I yawn again. Edward is quiet and I think for a moment that he's fallen asleep. “Edward,” I whisper, in case he is asleep, “What are you most afraid of?”
“I'm afraid I'm falling for you,” he whispers back so softly that I'm unsure if I've heard him correctly.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 82940
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2011
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Movement / Chap 1: Tears
wow, really well written, cant wait until the next chapter.
Author's Response: The next chapter is waiting validation right now. Thanks for taking the time to review!
Summary: 
Bella and Edward were best friends for years. When Bella finally decides to tell him that she has fallen in love with him, it's too late and he is to marry someone else. Human AU.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 22651
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2009 Updated: January 25, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
wow, its awsome.. i can already tell the story is going to be good! Author's Response: thank you so much for reviewing. I hope I dont dissapoint. Next chapter should be up soon. :)
Summary: Bella works in an entirely new kind of club. One night, she is visited by a new member. Things get very heated, very quickly. One-Shot, AH/AU, Lemon. Very OOC.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1989
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2009
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: August 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Stables
that would be awesome if it was a little longer... a comeback lol
Summary:
When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins. He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own. This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction. Can they find their way back to each other? And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?
HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No
Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2012
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: 1998 - The Dance
i love this story but it seems soooo slow because because i usually wait until there is like 50,000 words before i start reading stories but i couldnt reisist this one.. lol
Summary: 
Haunted by her past, Bella is broken and alone. Starting over in a new city, can she let go of the guilt that consumes her when she meets a beautiful tattoo artist, or will his own personal demons destroy them first? AH/OOC
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Word count: 20367
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2009 Updated: February 16, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: February 16, 2010
Title: Clipped Wings and Inked Armor
aw shit! No sequel? but i looovvvvveeeeee this story and characters!
i love you for your writing genious and imagination
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Summary: Two strangers, two computers.... one night.
Lonely ER doc Edward Cullen goes online one night to relieve some tension, never expecting to find what was awaiting him. AH/possibly some OOC. Rated NC-17 for a reason.
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Banner by Lindsi loolabell
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 132766
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2009 Updated: May 08, 2011
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: January 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ New York, New York
oh,i love this story
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Summary: Bella and Edward are the most unlikely couple at their California private school. She is the queen bee and he is the soulful musician, but against the odds they fall in love. At 18, Bella gets pregnant and the stresses of the music industry tear them apart. Ten years later, they are brought together again.
BxE then BxJ and back to BxE
Banner by PoorJacobBlack!!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 245378
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2009 Updated: November 02, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: April 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
oh my fucking shit, damn .. i completely didnt see it coming like that.. gives me whole new outlook on their relationship the way it is 'now'
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Summary: 
Edward Cullen and Bella Swan have been married for three years and are on their way to Seattle, Washington to commence Alice Cullen and Jasper Whitlock's upcoming wedding. It is going to be a momentous occasion filled with family togetherness and heartwarming love.
The only problem is that Edward and Bella have been separated for three months, can’t stand each other, and—oh yeah—their family has no idea.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 162323
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2009 Updated: May 09, 2010
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: October 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: All Fall Down
i love this story
> Author's Response: Aw thank you!
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: October 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Oh, Baby
damn damn damn... i cant believe you left us with that cliffie... im so juiced to read the next chapter
> Author's Response: Haha sorry about that. I really love cliffhangers even though I don't ever do them on purpose. I'm sure you'll like the next chapter! Thanks for reading!
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