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Real name: Elizabeth
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25/f/delaware


loved the Twilight Books


didn't loved the Twilight movie when put up against the book, but on its own the movie was great! lol


 


 


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i love this site, there are so many great writers here, is amazing.


 


 


 


 


 


 


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Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3033]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

ALSO POSTED ON FANFICTION.NET


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Ghosts

damn, its 7:30 am and im about to go to work with tears in my eyes. lol

 
Realize by Goo82 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 640]
Summary:

Edward is a hot up and coming actor and Bella is his ever faithful best friend and personal assistant. Bella's feeling for Edward have changed over the years, but he is oblivious to her feelings. With the help of her friends, will she get the courage to tell him how she feels before it's too late, or will she just stand by and watch him fall in love with someone else? How will Edward take the news of these feelings from the girl he has always thought of as a sister? Will the obstacles along the way ruin even the best of friendships?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 93126
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2008 Updated: November 09, 2008


Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

HA! they didnt use condoms again....

 
Sanctuary by Jfly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2144]
Summary: Feature

Edward faces a monumental crisis and finds Sanctuary in the one place he refuses to look for it. All Human.

This story contains Religious themes and Mature themes: Edward is a priest struggling with his role in the Church and as a man.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 99900
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2010


Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Seventeen

why would his fathers death be considered a suicide? i dont understand that lol

 
Summary:

Bella Swan was your average woman working for a publishing company. She was certain that she was destined to be alone for eternity, much to her mother's dismay. However, two very different yet very similar men happen to walk into her life and change everything.

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Hilarity and sex ensue. Loosely based on the movie, "Bridget Jones’s Diary".

An awesome collaboration between XShear (Seducing Edward, Unknown & Smut Series) and kARLOTITA09 (Forever is Where We Meet).

Banner made by MrsC.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 132703
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2008 Updated: August 16, 2009


Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen - The Piano, a Puppy, and the Ex-wife

wow she is just the worst person, i can see if she fell for cullen, but to jump back into a relationship with masen and agree to marry him without even thinking.. the day after the tells the other one that she loves him...wth..

 
All Keyed Up by BlueJ Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 266]
Summary:

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Edward and the gang are college age and heading to Key West for summer jobs. Excitement, laughs and romance abound. Rated NC-17 for adult situations/lemonade. AH, some OOC moments, canon pairing.  Give it a chance and enjoy!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Other Character, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 122278
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2008 Updated: March 13, 2010


Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Telling Secrets

i like assertive but shy bella

 
Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5321]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Reunion

at first i thought the twister thing but thats too big.. now im curious

 

 
Out of Her Head by Blue25 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2757]
Summary:

Bella Swan moves cross country to take a teaching job, trying to escape the man who broke her heart. Edward Cullen is the school's music teacher with secrets of his own. Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together trying to work through their issues and unexpected feelings for each other.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 272412
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2009 Updated: June 26, 2009


Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

wow,didnt expect edward NOT to be mad,especially how it seems the last chapter.. Good  Job!  lol

 
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

ohhh i loved the story and i am actually really sad for it to be over... but thats a good thing.... becasue it means it was worth reading .. i hope you continue with any future story ideas

 
Summary:

It was a moment of deliciously impaired judgment.

Bella thought she would never see her one-night stand again.

She was wrong.

E/B AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 57020
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2009 Updated: July 15, 2010


Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 (vjgm)

aww.. how cute is that...

 
Summary:

Millie Reinhardt meets Robert Pattinson when she visits London for a weekend in 2007.  When Millie returns back to Rome, and ultimately the United States, she and Rob manage to keep in contact through e-mails and text messages.   They become good friends, but in the end will they be ready to admit to the fall?

Ready and Waiting to Fall


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 69176
[Report This] Published: January 18, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2009


Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

awww. soo cute.. like a normal couple



Author's Response:

As normal as Millie and Rob can get. 

 
Summary:

 

Bella is an aspiring writer, who doesn't have time to date. In an act of desperation, Bella tells her mom, she has a boyfriend. Now Bella must hire a boyfriend for the holidays. Will Bella find that she likes her pretend world better than her reality?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 64982
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2009 Updated: February 25, 2010


Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- From the Heart-

wow .. that was awhile in between chapters

 
Bright Like the Sun by Dryler Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 973]
Summary:

BLtS Banner 2

 

*Banner by time_lights over at Livejournal*

 

When Bella goes to live with her father in Forks, things go much better than she expected. At least until a slick parking lot, a careening van, a broken arm, and her weird lab partner from biology get in the way...


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 112401
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2009 Updated: December 17, 2011


Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Rudolph, Ladybugs and the Christmas Cactus

i love the banter back and forth.. i just.. freaking love it!



Author's Response:

lol Thank you :)

 
Collide by Martinibaby1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1057]
Summary:

As usual, Bella is late for work and as she crosses the street -without looking-, a cycling music teacher, better know as Edward Cullen, must do all he can to avoid her. But the collision that follows will change their lives for good. All human and AU.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 137633
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: January 12, 2010


Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

Keep it coming lol



Author's Response:

Sorry for the extremely late reply but now that I appreciate every word of feedback! Thanks!

 
Change of Heart by LuvCullens Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 855]
Summary:

Bella, has spent her life hating and loving the arrogant Edward Cullen. When she returns to Forks after ten years, will she fall for Dr Black, or will Edward see that he wants her to have a change of heart?

Thanks to heatherdawnc for her amazing banner work.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 201161
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010


Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

wow, hes really putting himselfout there... hopefully she doesnt screw it up by pushing him away after getting what she wanted.. i love the story.. my favorite part of this chapter was when he told the girls to give her hugs and tell her they loved here and they wanted to call her aunt bella.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Isn't Edward the perfect Uncle? I just love him *sigh*

 
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

great story, cant wait until edward shares his feelings with bella

 
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23(s)

Nnnnnoooooo... how dare you end it like that! lol

 
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

that was cute..



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Summary: Feature

 

Edward Cullen needs to pass Statistics. Bella Swan is his tutor. She thinks he's a flighty, arrogant--albeit sexy--asshole, and he thinks she's Bipolar, but tries to win her over, anyway.

Can he change her mind, or do first impressions really last?

 Thanks to my baby momma, Maximista, for the banner! <3


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 258464
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011


Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: April 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Busty & the Burro

that donkey thing that Renee said was hilarious!

 
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake 3: The Throwdown

i LOVED this... even though it was short it was awesome

 
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Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

i love love love their banter back and forth .. and that there is no sexual tension between them because they are oblivious to the fact that they are perfect for eachother! love love love it.. did i say that already? lol

 
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

did i say how much i love this story and all the banter back and forth... its soo hilarious

 
Summary: Feature


He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?

OOC, canon at heart.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Imps

OMG! he better not... but you have a some good drama there.. a REAL cliffie

 
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Angles

wow... i cant believe you left us hanging like that lol... i cant wait for the next chapter..

 
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Hunting

oh shiat! i die waiting for these updates and you leave me like that.. :(

 
Reviewer: Tookie83 Signed
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Seeking

i f'en love this story so much, i just love the way you write. The banter is fabulous

 




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