Reviewer: PhoenixRoseQueen Signed
December 29, 2008
Chapter 1: Just You
It was shorter than I had expected, but I think that it fit perfectly with the characters. Jasper would give anything to protect and content Alice and I'm sure that she would do the same for him. The fact that they dont-- cant-- have children really would not be a problem for the couple because they have everthing they want within one another.Author's Response:
HAHA, this is actually yhe extnded version! It was written for a contest with a max of 400 words. Which, let me tell you, was very difficult. But, moving on... thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it. I just couldn't see Alice as wanting children. Jasper is her whole world. It just felt right.