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Penname: Bella_Cullen_428 [ Contact]
Real name: Emily Dowie
Status: Member
Member Since: September 22, 2008
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Beta-reader: No
I absolutely love the Twilight saga and I check this site daily for new stories or updates to my faves. As an aspiring writer who hopes to study creative writing in college, Twilight has really inspired me. I hope to eventually submit stories that would make Stephenie Meyer proud.
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Summary: We always want what we can't have, but their love for each other was so much more than just temptation. He was the eager young teacher, Bella's friend and her inspiration in a high school world where she didn't quite fit. She was the bright young woman who took Edward completely by surprise, his saving grace after years of closing himself off from life and love. When their days are turned upside down by their secret relationship, will they find a way to be together?
Rated for subject matter and sexually explicit material in later chapters. Huge thanks to Anne Cullen for the awesome new banner and to m81170 the beautiful fan art/banner below! You are both amazing!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 64999
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: May 07, 2010
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: December 05, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Boundaries
I love this story! Keep writing and update soon, please!
Author's Response: I most definitely will! Thank you so much for the review!
Summary:
 What if the wolf pack hadn't interrupted Laurent before he bit Bella? This is the story of Bella being changed despite Edward leaving her to prevent it from happening.
Rated for later chapters. Just like in New Moon, Edward will make an appearance eventually!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 71429
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2008 Updated: November 24, 2009
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Calm Before the Storm
Great chapter! I loved the interpretation of Bella's precognitive dreams as a human.
Summary: Bella and Charlie move to Chicago and into a very old house. But there's something very different about this place. What if Edward had died in 1918 and what if he never really left his former home? Will he finally have a shot at romance after all these years? And will Bella fall for him? Rated NC-17 for language and future lemons. Usual pairings.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, James, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Word count: 61919
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2008 Updated: March 27, 2009
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: March 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: New Start
Is Bella raped in this story? Author's Response: No, no. Bella is not raped...thank god. For future reference, I don't plan on anything like that happening in any of my other work :-)
I hope you're liking the story so far!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: March 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: New Start
Omg thank you! And I really love your story so far!!!
Summary: Edward is adopted by the Cullens after living a nightmare. He meets Bella, and she tries to fight his inner monster. AH
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 104014
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2009
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: March 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Please write a sequel! I'm not ready for this story to end.
Summary: What if Edward and Bella acted like regular seventeen year olds? With all the passion, lust, and curiosity that comes with being a teenager. Would Edward be able to keep both monsters in check? And will there be other more disturbing consequences to his lack of control besides just giving in? Can their new love handle anything?
A somewhat OOC re-telling of Twilight (with a few small plot changes) until Port Angeles, AU after that. Canon Pairings, Alternating POVs of Edward and Bella, Rated NC-17 for violence, language, a little alcohol/drug use, sexual acts and assault. If those topics offend you, please do not read.
Beautiful banner by: AchelleDenaliCullen
Categories: Twilight, New Moon Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Collin, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Liam, Marcus, Mike, Phil, Quil, Renata, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Siobhan, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria, Vladimir, Zafrina
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 82752
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: March 11, 2010
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: May 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Spanish Inquisition
this is getting so good! please update soon!
Summary: When Catherine Hardwicke hires a young, unknown actor to play the lead in her new vampire movie "Twilight," Kristen Stewart is convinced from the start that something is not quite right about him. The team laughs off her bizarre theories - but what if she is right? What if the actor playing Edward Cullen is just pretending to be Robert Pattinson? What if the true identity of this man is not that of a young aspiring actor from London, but something completely different - an ancient Transylvanian vampire on the prowl for revenge and blood?
 
Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Peter Facinelli, Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 102578
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: December 08, 2009
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: November 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I really don't like this ending. It has deeply saddened me. I'm almost sorry that I kept up with this story, but I'll trust that you know what you're doing and maybe change your mind and surprise us all.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
This story is really getting good. Please update soon! Author's Response: Thanks, hun!! :) I have updated today - hope you like it! xx
Summary: Bella, the beautiful biracial Director of her church's Afterschool Program, has been faithful to her commitment to remain a virgin until she is married. Tallahassee Police Officer, Edward Cullen's charm and sex appeal severely challenges her resolve. AU/AH Rated R/NC-17 Adult Content
Disclaimer: This story deals with mature themes including attempted rape/violence against women, though it does not contain an actual rape.
Thanks to Shug for the banner!
Thanks to Readergoof for the banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 243141
[Report This] Published: August 25, 2009 Updated: December 29, 2011
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Love Yet Eludes Me
I really love and appreicate this story. Being biracial, sometimes it is hard to find characters you can relate to (and that actually look like you). I can relate to this story a lot and I love when i find interracial love stories as they are not a common occurrence, in literature or in real life it seems, so thank you! Author's Response: Thank you so much for the love and appreciation. I wrote this story because I felt there needed to be more diversity in the fandom and I am so pleased it is resonating with people like yourself. I am the mother of children that I have taught to love unconditionally, and I could one day be the grandmother of a biracial child, so I am really pleased that it speaks to you.
Bev
Summary: Edward over hears a very juicy secret regarding his younger sister, Alice. The plot to blackmail Alice in order to get closer to her best friend, Bella, forms in his mind, but doesn't exactly pan out the way he wants it to. Rated for Edward's foul mouth and the sprinkles of lemonade with the eventual lemon.
Thank you so much for the banner Selita! You rock my socks!!
michelleab09 from ff.net made me this fantastic banner!!!
michelleab09 is at it again with another lovely banner for the waterfall!!
The lovely Selita made this blinkie for me! I'm so very proud of it! :D :D
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 119037
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2009 Updated: November 11, 2009
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: October 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: For the better or for worse?
Just wanted to review and say how amazing this story is! I cheated and read the rest of the updated chapters on ff.net because I can just not get enough of this story. I actually like how you portray Charlie because I always thought he was an overprotective ass and this just gives us readers reason to hate him. Fathers are always so overprotective of their daughters and sometimes disrespectful of their feelings. Great story! Great Portrayals! Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it enough to cheat. I'm so torn on keeping my reviewers separated. It makes me think I have more readers that way! LOL!!! But I love hearing it from both sites from one person. It makes me so happy to know that you liked it that much that you HAD to go over there and read the rest of it because you just couldn't wait! That puts a little skip in my step, truly. :D
Thanks for all the reviews! You rock!
Summary:
Thank you to m81170 for the gorgeous banner!
I love my new banner, made by itsanewday! Thank you!
Renee is a mess and constantly on the move, dragging fifteen year old Bella around with her from one dump to another. Her life takes a turn for the worst and Bella is sent to Forks to live with the father she never knew existed. Charlie enrolls Bella into a support group to help her deal with her past. The support group doesn’t just change her life, but her intense attraction to her mysterious doctor and their subsequent relationship indelibly shapes the course of her future.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No
Word count: 198415
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: March 12, 2012
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: January 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: A Reason to Live
I just started reading your story and I really like it so far. I hope the age difference doesn't stop Edward and Bella from developing a romantic relationship, though it will be complicated because he's her psychiatrist and she's his underage patient, but you can't blame me for hoping lol. Please update soon. Author's Response: These two are meant to be and I won't keep them apart for long. I do plan to jump ahead in time in a few chapters - where a relationship between the two is not only more appropriate but more equal and balanced. Obviously they are on very unequal terms here in the beginning of the story and their relationship is a bit tortured. They need to struggle with each other a little before they can find peace and happiness.
Thank you so much for reviewing! And I hope that it continues to interest and intrigue you!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: February 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: No Turning Back
I like how this chapter shows the progression of Bella's and Alice's friendship, but I wish there was some Edward thrown in. Not thrilled to see Jacob because I am a bit of a Jacob-hater, but I still love your story. Hope to see the next update soon. Author's Response: My beta is a Jacob hater too and she was worried when I gave her this chapter to read. I can't promise that he wont influence the story. But this Jacob is different than others that you've read - give him a chance. But I can promise that Bella is meant to be with Edward and we will eventually get there. Edward will be a much bigger presence in the next few chapters as I can get enough of him either! :) Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: February 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Looking Forward (sixeightshuffle)
I really like this story, but I want more interaction between Edward and Bella in the following chapters...please. I'm trying so hard not to judge Jacob because I am one of those Jacob haters. Author's Response: I know I know. Jacob plays a part in this story but Edward is always the primary focus. I promise more interaction between them soon. The weekend scenes are coming up - at the Cullens and then, Bella's first party. Please stick with me through the next few chapters, we have a little more Jacob to get through. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Summary: 
Slash: Sexy, brooding Jack Charles left Seattle to escape the specter of a love he could never have. A fresh start in Chicago and a new relationship hold promise and hope for him. Spinoff from Over The Top. AU/AH. M for lemons & language. Original & canon characters.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Mike, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 201893
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2009 Updated: April 21, 2011
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: October 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I loved Over the Top and the outtake of Jack and Jacey so I have been really looking forward to this story! This was a great chapter and this story sounds promising. Keep up the good work.
Summary:  Edward Cullen was a loner, an outcast. He clearly hated everybody, including himself. He was not a nice person. So, why was I so drawn to him? And why did I get the crazy feeling he felt the same way?
WARNING: This story will deal with the aftermath of child abuse and rape. If that bothers you too much, I strongly recommend that you don’t read.
Thanks to steffyxxface for the lovely banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 115 Completed: Yes
Word count: 365612
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2011
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: December 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Great story so far. Very sad...the part at the beginning made me tear up a little but I like where this story is going. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon. Author's Response: Thank you very much! More will be up soon. :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: February 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Oh poor Edward and his self-doubt! I hope he continues to trust Bella. Can't wait for the next chapter of them eating lunch together. Author's Response: Thank you, you won't have to wait very long.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: January 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Irrevocably in love with this story lol. Please update soon! Author's Response: Aw, thank you, I'm so glad to hear that. :) The next chapter will be up as soon as it's been validated.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: January 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Please update soon. Hope there's more Edward and Bella in the next chapter. Author's Response: There will be some in the next chapter, yes. ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I love how Edward and Bella's relationship is progressing and how he's beginning to trust her more. This is such a well written story and I can't wait for the next update! Author's Response: Thanks you so much, next chapter will be up soon. :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: January 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Great chapter. I love how close Edward and Bella are getting and how Edward is beginning to let his guard down. So sweet and romantic! I wonder what trouble Edward's in. Please update soon. Author's Response: I will. Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: February 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
This story is really getting good. I can't wait until the next chapter. Please update soon. Author's Response: The next chapter should be up soon. Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: February 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
No more cliffhangers lol. I can't get enough of this story. It's so well written and i love your version of Edward and Bella. This story is really progressing. Hopefully the next chapter will be posted soon...please! Author's Response: The next chap is almost finished and I plan to post it tomorrow. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: February 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Slowly but surely becoming addicted to this story! Can't wait until the next update. Author's Response: Happy to hear that. :) More coming soon.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: February 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
This story is progressing so well. I can't wait until the next chapter. I hope you update soon. Author's Response: I will. Thank you!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_428 Signed
Date: April 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
This chapter was so sad and painful to read, but very well written. I think you represent Edward as a child of sexual abuse so well. I didn't expect Bella to find out this way, but I think you did a really good job of presenting this situation. You can tell the love they have for each other. Can't wait until the next chapter!
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