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Vesper by dapixam_q Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 91]
Summary:

E/B alternate universe. The Cullens stayed in Alaska for three more years than in the books, so Bella spends the end of her junior year in Forks without Edward. How will she deal with her inevitable feelings for him when she's already dating Jacob and mostly happy with her life?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 85699
[Report This] Published: August 15, 2008 Updated: December 28, 2008


Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Adrenaline (You can Google it)

I LOVED how Edward saved her from the car.  And the bit about Tyler and Alice was unexpected and rather funny actually.  So that's why he was driving so badly!  I'm so glad that Bella stood up to Jacob like that, she's more mature in your fic and I like that.

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12: The Truth

I've missed a few chapters, what a crime!  But I'm all caught up now, lucky me!  I'm so glad that the whole love triangle is now resolved, although Bella had to get hurt in the process.  A broken leg, ugh!  I've never broken a bone in my body so I have no idea what it's like.  It seems like it would be incredibly annoying, dealing with it. 

I thought it was funny, the whole making out thing and Jasper and Alice interrupting.  I guess Jasper is feeling better about things?  He didn't seem too upset just now?  Oh and the line about Edward saving sea otters?  Too funny.  

 
Summary:

Bella Swan meets a beautiful stranger, lawyer Edward Masen on a holiday in Rome. The chemistry is palpable, the sex passionate - and a physical relationship grows into something more. The days fly in a whirlwind of clothes, sand, sex and wine. After a painful realisation that the fantasy has come to an end, Bella returns apprehensively to Seattle, heartbroken at the loss of her love. 


But, little does she know that the 'beautiful stranger' isn't such a stranger, after all.

 

A surprise awaits Bella Swan in Seattle.

 

 

Rated for explicitly detailed sex scenes and language.

 

 

Beautifully accurate banner by the beautifully talented MrsC. Thank you!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 65735
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2009


Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: October 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: The Life of a Sex God and his Oh-So-Willing Whore

I just found this story and my libido thanks you.  Seriously.  I've been to Rome and the thought of being there young, single and with Edward at your beck and call to fulfill every sex fantasy ever is very hot.  Rome is so sexy.

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: October 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Once bitten....

Wow, Insatiable Edward is - well, I'm very very jealous of Bella!  Personally, I'd love to see Edward lose control.  Or, more specifically, be so caught up in the moment that he can't stop even though he should (as in someone walks in or something).  I'm a big perv though so may not be for everyone.  :-P

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: From AM to PM...

Mmmm, I love getting both POV's.  And I love all the sexin'.  Bella's going to need an IV she's going to get dehydrated with all that sex.

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: November 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Are you enjoying the view out of the window?

If Edward gets any hornier he may end up in the hospital!  I can't decide between a mental facility or the emergency room. 

How many days do they have left??  

 

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: November 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: A for Angst, B for Balconies, C for Chlamydia

Hmm, Bella's messed up in the head.  Wasn't expecting that.  That means plot.  Didn't know we needed plot for this story.  lol  Other than Italy, vacation, lots of sex.

I don't think the question did for Edward quite what Bella intended.  Or at least, Edward was able to turn it around on her.  Damn him.  *giggle*

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Doggy Style (S)

This was all kinds of awesome.  I loved the meadow, I loved the whole secrets thing, and of course I loved the fact that Edward has now realized he's in love.  And if only he had the nerve to admit it to Bella, it would be perfect.  But he just realized his feelings so I guess I should give the guy a break, right?  Right. 

And he bought her a Chanel dress!  How awesome is that!  Of course she didn't get to actually try on the dress to see if it fit but this is fanfic and we're allowed to play.  *grin*

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: January 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Beauty, Bolognese and Boarding

I can't believe she just left!  Heck even one-night stands will leave some sort of note behind!  Even if it's just a thank you.  Ugh.  I am cringing at what Edward is going to think when he wakes up...

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: February 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Early Morning Rousing

Oh, that was awesome and so not what I was expecting.  Seriously though I think it was pretty much perfect.  The bit of history on Edward, the way it tied into how he is now, the way he overthinks, the phone call, every little detail just made me want to cuddle him and tell him everything will be okay.  I hope Emmett hears how sad Edward is and realizes he needs someone to talk to.

 
Going for the Gold by bethaboo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 701]
Summary:

Edward Cullen, an Olympic swimming star, goes to Beijing with winning gold medals on his mind, but is distracted by the beautiful but clumsy reporter he meets on his way. All Human AU.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 86569
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: May 09, 2009


Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Aw, that was sweet.  I love teddy bear Emmett, and that is so cool that he's proposing to Rosalie.  What a wonderful way to finish her Olympic run!

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: October 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I can't believe Bella didn't notice what was happening in Edward's swimsuit!  I mean that is just criminal.  Never mind she's got a phobia.

I thought that was a great way for Edward to introduce Bella to the water.  I know I'd be distracted.  You could set my toes on fire and I wouldn't notice if Edward was kissing me.

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: November 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Woohoo!  Update!  And I loved it!  Why do I get the feeling that Laurent is going to be a bigger problem later?  And let's not forget Jacob, the sore loser who won't stoop to sabotage to win.  Stupid cheater.

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: December 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hmm, methinks I smell Jacob's dirty little paws in the discovery of their relationship! (paws, get it? heh, I crack me up)  I wish Bella wouldn't be so insecure, I mean Edward's been practically jumping through hoops trying to show Bella how much he cares for her.  He doesn't even have a reputation for being a womanizer to justify insecurity, even.  Quite the opposite, really.  I do wonder how Carlisle is going to take the newspapers though, if he's going to throw a snitfit.  He seems so much more invested in the gold than Edward is - heck at this point I'm not sure Edward even cares that much compared to his longing for Bella.  Which is rather romantic to me.

Anyway, thanks for the update, and happy holidays!

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: January 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bella has way more willpower than me to not just say yes to his proposal.  Seriously more.  I can understand why she said no but I'm terrified of the repercussions.  And she GOT to know now that Edward is serious about their relationship and making it work.  Guys don't go around proposing with a ring just for the hell of it.  And he'd already gotten her in bed so that wasn't the reason.  I hope she makes sure to reassure Edward!  It's such a vulnerable thing for a guy to do and to not get a yes, that's got to be hard on him.

 
A Changing Heart by blondie Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 73]
Summary:

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WINNER:  Best Angst/Drama AND Best Missing Moment at The Twilight Awards 

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SPOILERS FOR BREAKING DAWN

Edward's experience during Bella's change - while she was unconscious.  Parallels pages 355-378.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4636
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008


Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: September 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: A Changing Heart

This is an excellent EPOV.  I'm loving it and can't wait to see how you handle the scenes to come.  Thanks very much for writing!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I don't know if any other scenes will strike me... Edward is busy telling me his NM story at the moment 8-).  Thanks for reading!

blondie

 
Redemption by oh Ivory Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 124]
Summary:

Her weight had dropped. She felt frailer now, more breakable.
Her skin had taken on a translucent hue. It was strangely disturbing.
Her previously silky hair was always now a knotted, tangled mess.
Her teeth never gave her lower lip a break; It was pulsing from all the biting she'd been doing.
She stopped reading.
She drank coffee in unhealthy amounts.
She slept 3 hours a night.
God. What have I done?


Edward has to deal with the repercussions of leaving Bella.


Categories: AU, New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 10392
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2008 Updated: October 05, 2008


Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: October 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Blood Lust

Poor Bella and Edward!  He's trying so hard.  And really, considering Bella's accident history you'd think she'd go with waxing instead of something as lethal as a razor.  :-P 

 
Summary:

It's a tough life being a music student, juggling lessons, practice, rehearsals, lectures as well as navigating through the social hierarchy.  Bella Swan, a gifted cellist, is given the opportunity to attend the prestigious Manhattan School of Music.  But it seems that she gets more than she bargained for when she meets the stunningly sexy piano major Edward Cullen.  When the rivalries heat up, and the competitive claws come up, musically and romantically, can Bella come out in the top of her class and win the love of her life?    


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 29117
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2008 Updated: December 07, 2008


Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: September 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Edward's Interlude

I love this story!  I love music, and so I love how this is happening at a music school.  The interaction between Bella/Edward is just so dreamy.  Loved how he paid Alice!

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: December 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I'm so glad to see this story back, I really enjoy it.  I find your writing style for Bella and Edward a bit different from the norm and I love the way your story flows.  Great chapter, and I was so happy to see the couple go official and for Tanya to get a serious dressing down.  Of course I'm sure there's going to be hell to pay for it, but still it was great to see.

Author's Response: Wow, I'm honoured by your compliment!  Glad you enjoyed the chapter :)  I'm trying to give each character a distinct voice, and it's good to see that it's working!

 
Summary:

 

The night Edward saved Bella in Port Angeles, Jessica called Bella's home and was surprised when Bella was home to answer.  (Twilight p194).

If Jessica didn't think Bella was home, exactly who WAS Jessica calling? Jessica's POV

 


Categories: Twilight Characters: Angela, Bella, Jessica
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 10272
[Report This] Published: August 27, 2008 Updated: October 24, 2008


Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: November 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Cafeteria

Well with the intense focus that Jessica has on the machinations of the hell that is high school, it would be a miracle to me if she passed any of her classes.  But it was fun and definitely interesting to see things from her perspective.  I thought you did an excellent job keeping this canon and also very realistic.  You really fleshed this out.

 
Summary:

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Bella attempts to live a normal life after Edward and the Cullen's leave her. Finding herself face to face with an Edward look a like, Andy Masen, she hasn't a clue how he will lure her back into the world of the undead. She will learn how the vampire came into existence, and the political war that is stirring in the bowels of the vampire world. She must chose her side, either with her newfound friend, Andy, or the love of her life, Edward. Where do her allegiances lie? Join Bella on the painstaking journey, and the ride of her life, that may just lead to the end of it. 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Other Character, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 67272
[Report This] Published: August 31, 2008 Updated: February 24, 2009


Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: October 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Healed

This was good, it flowed quite well.  Loved the Arby's thing, my favorite fast food in the world.  Except I sure as heck would have ordered more than some fries and a shake.  :-)

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: October 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Secrets and Lies (1)

Wow!  I wasn't expecting that about Andy!  In a way it's kind of fitting though, what with Bella getting hurt all the time.  Edward must be a complete mess inside.  But Bella still hasn't gotten around to telling him the big news about Andy, way to go there.  I mean it's kind of important and all.  Thanks for the big update!

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies (2)

Wow, Andy is freaking me out now.  I wasn't expecting him to be a pseudo-bloodsucker that would try to eat Bella also.  Good thing Edward was there, I don't think Bella had a clue what was about to happen. 

Author's Response:

pseudo-bloodsucker.... I like that.

Bella is a bit dumb in that sense. Stupid Naive Bella. *shakes head* Glad that she's SM's daughter and not mine. I got Andy though, mine all the way. lol

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: November 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Waking Up

Well, that was interesting.  I have no idea what Bella's going to do here, but honestly I still love Edward.  Even if he's an idiot, he's still the first idiot and first love, and I just can't imagine Bella loving someone else as much as Edward.  I know she loves Andy too, but it just can't be as much to me.  I dunno.  Maybe it's just me.

Author's Response:

It's not just you. I feel the same, but I am also very much like SM on this matter as well. I feel that you can love many people all at once. Not more or less, just differently. Bella is in love with Edward in a very supernatural way. It isn't a normal type of love, it's star crossed-gotta have you-can't live without you-love. 

I would say that Bella loves Andy in the way that she loved Jake. Disregarding everything with Nessie from Breaking Dawn, I feel that Jake would have been Bella's soulmate, that he would have been who she was really made for. We have Edward though, from a different time, a different world basically, who did not die when he was supposed to.... So we'll have to see where I go with that. 

I love Edward too. He's still my main man, no matter what. 

 
Reviewer: Sheeijan Signed
Date: January 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Shatter

Well of course this Harry thinks Andy is on the wrong side.  He sounds pure evil. 

I do feel a little sorry for the dad.  He's had a lot thrown on him today.  Fainting though, how emasculating!  *grin*  Not even once, but twice. hehehe

 




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