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Penname: Ready4Jasper [Contact]
Real name: Susan
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Member Since: April 04, 2009
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Sanctuary by Jfly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2150]
Summary: Feature

Edward faces a monumental crisis and finds Sanctuary in the one place he refuses to look for it. All Human.

This story contains Religious themes and Mature themes: Edward is a priest struggling with his role in the Church and as a man.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 99900
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2010


Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: August 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Wine

She turned me to stone, but I looked away before I crumbled to ash.

 

Love that line!

 
Acting Out by eroticfan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 478]
Summary:

A story about the ultimate threesome: Edward, Bella and Jake. They're all juniors in Forks in this AU-human take on things. The story's very NC-17 with Edward and Jake both bi, but it's not PWP - there's actual plot and a fair amount of angst, humor and even occasional fluff, as these three messed-up kids figure out their complicated three-way relationship. Don't be put off if you're not a Jake fan - this story's converted some diehard anti-Jake readers.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 117219
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: July 28, 2009


Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: July 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Bitter-sweet

As with all wonderful stories when they come to a close, I am both saddened that it is over and content that the characters were able to find themselves in each other and become better people.

*sniff*



Author's Response:

Thanks for the lovely feedback!

 
Summary: Feature


He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?

OOC, canon at heart.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: June 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Short Ended Stick

Arrrrg!  For two people that write so well they can't talk, at all.  So frustrating.  Sigh.

 

Twilight - Fleeting

 
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Mindless

Go Bella!

Missed lunch today... too wrapped up in a great story I found online.

 
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: House Cullen

I'm so glad this update is up as I was starting to go into withdrawl.

LOL - Edward is jealous of his virtual self......ha ha ha ha ha.  Silly boy.

 
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Matters

Awesome chapter...  thanks for sharing your writing.

I like to wash dishes with The Doors but I scrub pots with the Pogues.

 
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Games

Venturesome...  the way I want Edward to be with his own feelings. 

Thanks for your writing, you've inspired me to do some of my own.

 
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: June 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Aisle C

This day has been dim and dreary with a constant rain.  This day could have been a miserable birthday but has been lightened with a new chapter from you.

Thank you.

 
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Overture

Dr. Pepper all the way.

 

I've never been a Rosalie fan, she always seems so bitter.  I love your version of her and th image of her sitting on the hood of a Mustang playing her guitar while listening to another girl's confession is... breathtaking.

All the women in ToV have such strength in them.

I can't wait for their performance!

 
Overtime by Dreamrider Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2250]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.

Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?

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Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: June 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Rivalry

Love it - totally worth the wait.

 
The Trip Home by MsKathy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary:

When Bella takes a long overdue trip back to Forks, an unexpected detour helps her find her way home. AU/AH ExBxJ M for adult themes and lemons. This is a story about a poly(amorous) trio. This means that there are sometimes moments where they all three have sex, sometimes BxJ, sometimes ExB, and sometimes ExJ.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 217268
[Report This] Published: March 31, 2009 Updated: January 20, 2010


Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Angela rocks!

Great chapter...  when is the next one up....  please?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  The next chapter should be up soon - I'd say sometime over the weekend :) Glad you're enjoying!

 
Off Limits by lexiecullen17 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3312]
Summary:

Womanizing Edward is in a cover band with his brother and best friend, who are pissed that Edward has managed to send their last three lead singers heading for the hills with his tendency to fool around carelessly.  Emmett and Jasper decide to create a "no intra-band dating" rule. 

But what happens when a gorgeous, talented brunette walks into the audition?  Will Edward adhere to his bandmates' new rule, or will he pursue what's now off limits?  OOC Edward/Bella.  Rated for DIRTY HUMOR and lots of future LEMONY GOODNESS. Canon pairings.

(thanks to Evilangel6714 for the banner!!!)

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 171702
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Game on indeed!!

I just found this story yesterday and can't wait for the updates.

Congrats on graduating!!



Author's Response:

thank you!  updates soon, i promise :)  hope you continue to enjoy it!

 
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Phew!

That's all I can write at the moment.  I do love those Cullen brothers though.



Author's Response:

:) as do i.  thanks for you review!

 
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Sigh.... thanks for making it a happy Friday with an "Off Limits" update.

Off to peruse the husband's Disney collection for ideas...  yeah, I know.

 
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love that Alice found out...

I hate that some a-hole did that to your brand new civic.... what a jerk!

I love this chapter.

I hate that we have to wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

ah, i love you!  seriously--thanks for all the love (slash hate at the bastard who broke my car).  your waiting is almost through (hopefully), just a little bit more to be written until the next update :)

 
Summary:

Sequel to Fearless. AH Bella helped Edward conquer his inner monster. Now that they've graduated from Forks High School, what does the world hold for them? Have they truly conquered all of the monsters?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 46311
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: July 28, 2009


Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: April 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I'm so glad that you are writing this and can't wait to read more!  Great prologue too - very catchy.

 
Summary:

 

The madness of being an actor is certainly getting to Robert Pattinson.  He loves his job, but feels empty and alone.  After meeting a mysterious girl at his friend Sam’s show one night in Vancouver, he starts to wonder if he could ever have a normal relationship.  As fate would have it, Rob meets her again at a poetry reading later that night and gets a taste of the one who hopefully will not get away. 

 


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 98788
[Report This] Published: May 17, 2009 Updated: June 15, 2010


Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: March 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Family Trees

I would come back to read your grocery list, if you wrote it the way you write this story.

The fact that your Rob is poetic and articulate, even when smashed on real beer (Canadian, thank you very much) is great.

Thanks for taking the time to write and share your amazing words.



Author's Response:

Ha yes, we Canadians are proud of our liquid libation aren't we?

Thanks so much for your lovely review.

xox

songirl

 
The One by m244robp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 762]
Summary:

 

Rebecca Russell is a pretty, simple girl who owns a small bookshop in New York City.  Her best friend and knight-in-shining armor is Nick Frenkel, who has looked out for her and taken care of her whenever she found herself in trouble ever since their college days.  At one time in their lives, Nick -- who we all know manages Twilight star, Robert Pattinson -- promised to find Rebecca, THE ONE. 

Nick introduces Robert to Rebecca on a visit to New York City.  Nick thinks Robert is The One?  Rebecca is not so sure.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

Please join me over at the forum thread for this story. I'll be using it to update any of you who are interested, answer some of your questions, and post some occassional advanced blurbs of future chapters as well.

You'll need to sign up separately, if you're not already using the forums.   

 I'd love to hear from you!

 


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 141759
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: July 15, 2010


Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Sniff... I think that is a beautiful name too.

Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Welcome to The One.  I followed to your member page and saw that you are an author too.  I really enjoy hearing from fellow authors too.  The name "Aidan" came to me when I was writing Rob's dream in the previous chapter.  I was unsure of when I would bring it out, but as I wrote the last scene of this chapter, I felt it was time.  It means "little fire."  Hopefully the fire will continue to burn in Robert and Rebecca. 

Thank you.

 
Summary:

Shane lost everything: his family, his home, his money, his future. Now he's taking life day by day, hoping that somehow he'll manage to make it through.

I smiled softly at her and reached out to stroke her cheek. The expression on her face was unreadable but fear lingered in her dark eyes. I leaned forward and gently brushed my lips against hers.

"Thank you," I whispered into her ear, "for giving me something to live for."

This is the story of Shane and Leah


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Leah, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: A Little Thing Called Imprinting, Hey, Move The Damn Spotlight!
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 22535
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: July 03, 2011


Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: What Skeletons Could Possibly Be In Her Closet?

Really enjoying this story told from an outsider's point of view.



Author's Response:

Glad to hear that :)

 
Need to Escape by lostluggage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5760]
Summary:

 

 

When Robert Pattinson needs to escape the crazy life of stardom- he finds an unlikely ally to see him to safety- a quiet bookshop owner who is secretly infatuated with Twilight, and a certain young British actor.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 97 Completed: Yes Word count: 829399
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2012


Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22-Alone

gah!   Who took Rob's phone!!!!????

I think it's one of Rob's sisters.



Author's Response:

Ooooooooohhhh! your theories are INTRIGUING!

Thanks for your review! the update will be up very soon!

steph

 
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89- Someone Like You

Yay - so happy to see this update.

 
Summary:

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

 

Outtakes Now posting on Twilighted.  This banner by yours truly :)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 71 Completed: Yes Word count: 482203
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Day From Hell

Liking it so far...  on to the next chapter!

p.s. - I like your impulsive, posting nature.

 
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment

Edward always manages to piss me off due to his denseness.

Poor Bella is having a really tough week!

 
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice

Girls nights out are good for the soul... a rabbi told me that once.

 
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper Signed
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Femmes Night Out

Can't wait for the next chapter... Oh Goodie!  It's here...

 




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