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Penname: sweetness4683 [ Contact]
Real name: Nicole
Status: Member
Member Since: April 03, 2009
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About me...I am 27 and a big homebody! I am married to my highschool sweetheart (yes, it does happen) and I have four little dogs. I love all types of music and I love watching movies.
I was Team Edward for the longest! After watching New Moon I am now Team Switz! During the movie I really wanted Jacob and Bella to kiss, but anway! I love Twilight.
Right now my favorite match is Bella/Jasper or Peter.
I have a story completed and am trying to perfect it to post it on twilighted, but no success so far. I'm writing another story and want that posted on twilighted also.
If anyone helps writer's out, let me know because I cannot get my story possted on this site and I would really like to.
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Summary:
Bella: "It occurred to me that there was another way to let you taste my blood, without dying, and without needles. And I think I might like it too."
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 26841
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed 
Date: April 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Second Base
Can't wait for what's next! Love the last line! You have a nice gift!
Summary: One-shot. While out of town, Bella devises a way to finally seduce the ever virtuous Edward – with a little help from an unexpected source.
Categories: AU, Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 7768
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: October 30, 2008
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Love the ending! Awesome!
Summary: 
What if Bella had left Edward in New Moon rather than the other way around?
Bella has left Edward, thinking it was the right thing to do for him and his family. Now she is back in Phoenix, but what happens when Victoria enters the scene determined to seek out revenge for James' death in the worst of ways?
thank you Anne Cullen for the beautiful banner!!!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Jasper, Laurent, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Word count: 34420
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2008 Updated: April 01, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Our Meadow
I haven't seen a story quite like this and I am enjoying your story very much so far! I love how you flipped it! Of course Edward would accept this knowledge and I love how Alice knows that Bella is lying and it determined to get to the bottom of it! Awesome start!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Just A Plain Blue Sweater
Oh no...sounds like trouble!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: One Tiny Phone Call
Alice, right?
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: To Protect
Looking forward to the rest! awesome!
Summary: The trauma suffered by Bella for three years has left lasting mental scars. Esme and Carlisle are finally offered the chance to be true parents to a teenager that needs them. Surrounded by the support and love of the Cullen family, Bella begins to grow and finds out there is more to life than simply surviving.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 91654
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: August 19, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
The banner is awesome! Author's Response: Thanks! A fan of the story made it for me, and I love it. :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Aww! Come on! You can't stop there! Great story; I love the long chapters! Your story is an easy read; even though the chapters are long I feel like thy're are over in a mintue of reading! Looking forward to more! Author's Response: The latest chapter has been submitted, so you should be able to get another fix in soon. :) Glad you're enjoying and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Ooooh! Whatever could Emmett come up with?! Can't wait to find out! I wish you were able to post everyday! I was reluctant to read the story because of Bella's history, but I like how you aren't moving the story along to fast and are actually showing us her healing. I also like that in this Bella doesn't want to be a vampire (for now anyway). With the history you gave Bella I'm interested to see how you play Edward and Bella together. As always the writing was great!
Happy writing!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Awww, come on!!! I was going to say it's nice to see you posting again, but that was just wrong! Is it a car?? Poor girl, what are you doing to her?!? Loved the chapter! I think I said this in my last comment but I really love the banner. The excerpt chosen for the banner is brillant and the picture is great!
Can't wait for more! Please don't make us wait too long, I would like to not pull out my hair! :) Author's Response: *giggle* I couldn't resist myself. And I'm not saying what it is, other than whatever made Alice yell will be resolved in the next chapter. The banner was a wonderful gift from a reader, and that was the quote she chose. I love it too. :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Great chapter! I'm glad to see you're posting again. I can't wait to see what's in store!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Great chapter! I'm glad to see you're posting again. I can't wait to see what's in store!
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2008 Updated: May 02, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Control Is Overrated (V)
I can't wait to read Edwards reaction to the heart beat present! Awesome job! Post sooner rather than later ;) Author's Response: Thank you! I will!
Summary: Bella meets the Cullens after being seperated for about 70 years and things aren't what we've known them to be.
Will Bella be able to bring our favourite coven together again? Will she care enough to do so?
Very AU because it VERY loosely follows the plot.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 18854
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2008 Updated: April 16, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Meeting the Cullen's
That was a good place to end the chapter!
Summary: 
Bella challenges Edward's limits of self control by insisting that he build up his tolerance level to intimacy.
Set in the 6 week 'blank period' at the end of Eclipse / beginning of Breaking Dawn, between the battle, and the wedding. Bella and Edward expand and deepen their physical relationship in preparation for their impending marriage.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 70976
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: August 16, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Forty-Two
That was a cute line about making each losing count! Author's Response: i thought so too - i mean , i'd lose count, that's for sure!
Summary: After their bargain at the end of Eclipse, Edward asks Emmett and Jasper for some advice regarding his wedding night. What they tell him leads to a very uncomfortable conversation between Bella and Emmett, and leads Bella to ask a huge favor from Jacob--one that he is all to willing to grant.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 13198
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: July 10, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Done
That cliffhanger was criminal! Can't wait for your next post! Author's Response: It's coming soon-it's up for validation. I'm sorry for the cliffhanger! I couldn't help myself!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Let Me Be Free
Awesomeness! Can't wait for the next chapter! I look forward to seeing your story at the top of my fav list. :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: July 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Alice
Ohhh! I'm excited for the next chapter!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Alice
Miss your story! Do you plan on continuing?
Summary: 
A Breaking Dawn alternative story. Edward and Bella marry and go on a very romantic honeymoon. Complications interrupt and they return to Forks. Decisions must be made and the family has to move quickly. This story is an A/U from BD. There is no pregnancy and no more love triangle. It is about how Edward and Bella were meant to be together and then must stand together against all odds.
Canon Pairings. Lots of romantic lemons. AU because some story lines from Breaking Dawn were completely abandoned in place of ones that I like better! Rated NC-17 for the lemons and for possible future violence and occasional language when the characters get really stressed out and stuff!
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Word count: 193651
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: May 09, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Bella's Revenge
That chapter should win an award! I was laughing through the whole thing. I even had to read some things twice because I was laughing so hard! Awesome chapter! Author's Response: Wow! Another one I missed! YIKES! Thank you! This chapter was soooo much fun to write so I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Big Brother Emmett's School of Ass-Kicking
I gotta say I'm enjoying Rose. I like the relationship you are building with them. Most stories I've read always have Alice and Jasper with Bella and Edward. I like that you switched it up with Emmett and Rose. Nice job! Author's Response: Oh! I missed this review earlier! Sorry! Thanks for leaving it and I'm glad you liked my inclusion of Rose and Emmett. I feel that they are really underappreciated! :) Thank you!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Absolution
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU KILLED JACOB!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT!!?? Okay...I'm done!! I had to stay up all night to finish your story! I'm so tired, but I can't wait for the next chapters...let them have fun in your few chapters left? :) Author's Response: Wow... all night? Yikes! Sorry about Jacob... I've known that was going to happen since I started writing the story, but it still wasn't easy. :( I'm so glad you liked the story so far! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Endings and Beginnings
Great story! Sad to see it over! Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm sad too...
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue
Awesome ending. You should make a sewuel more years into the future about the great things they are meant for! Can't wait for aqnother story! Author's Response: Thanks so much! I haven't ruled a sequel out yet, but I haven't started one yet either. It is certainly a possibility! Thanks again!
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Bella struggles with memories of an Edward that never returned to Forks...
Now a Contributing Story to "The Bella and Jacob Chronicles" !!!
Thank you to DiamondHeart for inviting me to participate, and for creating a place we can count on for quality, positive Bella/Jacob stories. Yay!
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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3242
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2008 Updated: December 06, 2008
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: July 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
You should do another with Edward coming back. I loved it. There was a lot of information at the beginning which I loved and the ending was sweet! Author's Response: i started one, and it's been on hiatus for a while when i realized having 3 open stories at once for several months was more than my brain could handle. i hope to get back to it later this summer. thank you for reading!
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