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Penname: sweetness4683 [ Contact]
Real name: Nicole
Status: Member
Member Since: April 03, 2009
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Beta-reader: No
About me...I am 27 and a big homebody! I am married to my highschool sweetheart (yes, it does happen) and I have four little dogs. I love all types of music and I love watching movies.
I was Team Edward for the longest! After watching New Moon I am now Team Switz! During the movie I really wanted Jacob and Bella to kiss, but anway! I love Twilight.
Right now my favorite match is Bella/Jasper or Peter.
I have a story completed and am trying to perfect it to post it on twilighted, but no success so far. I'm writing another story and want that posted on twilighted also.
If anyone helps writer's out, let me know because I cannot get my story possted on this site and I would really like to.
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Summary: 
You said you wanted forever.
You said you wanted me.
You said you'd never leave.
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Set in the perpetually dark times of New Moon and many years beyond, and shedding a new light on the story, Re-Born provides a sick and twisted alternative to what was written by Stephenie Meyer.
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After a terrible accident, Bella is changed into a vampire without her consent. Her transformation sets off an unforseen chain of events that no one is prepared to live with. In the end, some just can't hold on...
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WARNING: This story contains sex, violence, and high amounts of foul language. Not recommended for those with weak stomachs. ALSO, this story is VERY high-energy and VERY fast-paced. If you can't roll with the punches, I suggest reading something else.
-Shelbie Lyn Cullen
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Athenodora, Bella, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Marcus, Other Character, Rosalie, Sam, Sulpicia, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 40543
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed 
Date: August 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Waking Up
Loved the flashback! So is this a J/B or E/B story? Author's Response: E/B. But the'E' is not for Edward ;)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed 
Date: August 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Cheater
Chapter was great and your writing is good. However, for the story it seems a little fast that she would give herself to him. I know that you said they would be OOC, but my god! From how I understood your story this is her first time seeing Jake since Edward left. Does she know about the wolf? That's how I felt before I read your notes at the bottom! Now I can't wait to read the rest! Author's Response: Oh I didn't mean to make it seem so fast. I should probably add a note that her friendship is already blossoming with Jake and it just hasn't gotten to the part with the motorcycles, because I hated that.
But thanks for the review and the rating :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Friends
I didn't hate it. But it just seems it happened to fast, but I'm sure that's not the point of the story, so you may not have wanted to dwell on it. Whatever, I loved Edward and Jacob so I'll read anything. I'm interested to see what happens when she is "re-born". Author's Response: I read your other review and I understand your confusion. Just move your timeline up a bit, and have J/B already be good friends. It was like that in my head, so maybe it'll help you feel better about the speediness of things. :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Repetition
Looking good? I'm scared! :) Author's Response: Scared is a good emotion! Thanks for the rating!! :D
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Adrenaline
Awesome! Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Third Wheel
LOL! WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU DO?!?!? OMG! Did they really kill Edward? OMG! I haven't read a story where he dies with Bella being a vamp! Author's Response: Haha, I love your reviews!
The fuck? Haha, keep on reading and you'll know what happened.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Killer
I'm very disappointed that there is not another "next" button! ;)
I thought it was great! So Jacobs really dead?! That's so sad! You are messing with my emotions! I don't know if I wanted her to be with Edward or Jacob! Honestly, I don't know how you work it out because I wouldn't forgive either of them! Author's Response: "I don't know if I wanted her to be with Edward or Jacob!"
Neither did I. And so I chose....neither. :)
Thanks for the rating!! :D
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Family
I've never read a story of Emmett and Bella because I don't really care for them. But I think I'll give yours a try. Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read whats next! Author's Response: Thanks for giving it a try, and thanks for the rating :D
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Pressure
Good chapter! Poor Rose! I'm surprised to see that you have her and Edward hooking up! Can't wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: Thanks for the support and the rating. It's reviews like this that are inspiring the next chapter!! Author's Response: Thanks for the support and the rating. It's reviews like this that are inspiring the next chapter!!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Paris
Good chatper! Can't wait to see what happens from here! Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Visitor
Great chapter! Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for the rating!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: The Funeral
Great chapter! Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and for the nice rating :)
Summary:
A girl caught between two destinies… She must find the strength to choose.
A boy caught between two worlds… He must find true balance if he is to lead.
As if I never existed, Edward Cullen promised when he abandoned Bella Swan.
But some things can never be undone.
The vengeance of those left behind. A father’s quest for redemption. The obsession of a damned soul. A love that should have died.
The sunlight beyond the shadows of twilight.
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A Jacob/Bella AU FanFic set during the events of New Moon.
Mad props to xXSizzlingGirlXx and Oceanwaters2006 for the parade of AWESOME banners!
Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Charlie, Jacob, Jared, Leah, Sam
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Word count: 48566
[Report This] Published: July 02, 2009 Updated: December 08, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Bella
Very short first chapter! Let's see where it goes from here! Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Apparently, the chapters are growing exponentially. The most recent was almost 4k words. I wasn't sure anyone was going to read it at first - so I tried to keep my investment (word wise, at least) small.
--at5115
Summary: 
Banner done by the incredibly talented annamorphos.
Bella is a half-immortal with a secretive past that haunts her still. She has to keep an eye out for the dangerous burning flame on the horizon. The Cullen’s are still vampires, but they don't know what Bella is... Or what she's capable of.
|| AU | A little OOC | Canon Pairings ||
Rated R for mild violence and some graphic scenes.
Not too bad, but rated R to be on the safe side. No sexual content.
>>> NO LONGER POSTING ON TWILIGHTED.NET!!! <<<
Please go to FanFiction.net for more chapters/updates.
Profile link: www.fanfiction.net/~tellytubby101
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 53028
[Report This] Published: July 05, 2009 Updated: October 18, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: First Day
That was a great first chapter! There was so much information to draw us in and the little Epov at the end was great! Can't wait to read the rest!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Falling Over
Good stuff!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Sunny Day
I'm loving your story! I love the banter between Bella and everyone. I love how you developed her character. I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Stormy Night
I'm so involved in your story! I can't wait to see what happens. The only disappointment I had is I thought that Emmett and Bella were going to wrestle. But I guess that would give her away right? Of course we want to see them kiss but I thought you ened it well. Edward being a gentleman and all; he can't pull a Mike Newton or anything. I love everything! Your next update can't come fast enough! :D
Summary: 
This story begins by re-imagining a favorite scene from Eclipse, in which Edward and Bella are stuck in a blizzard and must call on Jacob to keep Bella warm. The original scene hints at Bella's curiosity, Edward's awareness, and Jacob's lust, and the possibilities that lie within that love triangle. This version asks, what if Bella took what she wanted? What if Edward's long-dormant humanity were finally sparked? And what if Jacob's fantasy finally came true?
"Anything I had ever felt, allowed myself to feel, had been only a hint, a taste, a glimmer of that all-consuming heat. That heat that Bella had plunged me headlong into, mercilessly immersing me in Jacob’s subconscious, ruthlessly repaying me for her months of frustration. Teaching me desire in one cold, confusing night."
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Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Leah
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 54025
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2009 Updated: September 15, 2010
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: December 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Battle and the War
DAMN! THAT WAS A HOT ENDING! LOVED THE CHAPTER, BUT I CAN'T DECIDE WHO I WANT BELLA TO END UP WITH. I'M LEANING TOWARDS JAKE RIGHT NOW. HE SEEMS SO MUCH MORE CONFIDANT THAN EDWARD RIGHT NOW AND THAT IS SEXY. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
Great chapter...lemons are always excellent. However, this chapter has me rooting for Edward. Usually I leaned toward the man you choose to do a lemon with in the current chapter, but even though the lemon was with Jake this chapter, I'm rooting for Edward this time. So confusing...great stuff! Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Confusing?! Wait til you read the chapter I just submitted! Can't wait to see what you think!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice
Wasn't what I was expecting! I've read some of your reviews and certain people need to come off their high horse. This is fanfic! Go wherever your imagination takes you. Usually this isn't something I would read either, but at least you can give the story a chance or be constructive when you don't like something!
Your writing was awesome! I love how Jacob tries to get Bellas attention! That was brilliant! Happy writing!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Left in the Dark
Thank you for not letting them sleep togther! That just would have been too much for me! Love it so far!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Echoes
It is exciting that you don't have the whole story planned out!! I want her to be with both of them!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: January 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Broken Hearts Still Beat
There is one major reason I love your story! Every chapter my opinion on who Bella should end up with changes. Last chapter or the one before I wanted her to be with Edward; this chapter I want her to end up with Jacob. I know Edward inexperienced and everything but you'd think he could come up with his own way to please Bella instead of copying Jacob.
I love that Bella broke up with both of them. I always wanted to do a story where she broke up with both of them and ended up with someone else or no one else.
The only complaint I have is...let me think I'll find one...you should post on ff.net. Chapter's go up faster over there. That was lame! Oh well! It's still true.
Happy writing!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: January 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: A Glimpse
Great chapter! EPOV was great but I can't wait to get back in Bella's head. I want to see more Jacob action! ;) Although with this chapter I want Edward to win and I'm sure next chapter I will want Jacob to win. Overall as of right now, I want Jacob in the end.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Bitter and Sweet
Your writing was excellent and I still love your chapter and story. I reread your story several days ago and I was totally rooting for Jacob. So, I was a little disappointed when I read this chapter. I was hoping she would be with Jacob in the end. I hope this email isn't discouraging, I know how much those reviews suck! It was a great chapter, I was just wishing for a different ending. :) Looking forward to the next chapter. Author's Response: I kind of agree with you. I want Jake to get everything he wants, but lately I've been thinking that he might be wrong to want Bella and maybe there's something better for him - but that doesn't mean he feels that way. In my mind, my fic is kind of a mess, because I'm just working through it as I go and trying to follow the characters wherever they take me, and I'm not quite sure how or why it happened, but suddenly Leah appeared in the mix and declared what she wanted. I'm not saying it's going to be easy - Jake is still very much in love with Bella and very clueless about everything else, but I hope eventually that you will want this is work out this way, and for my part, I hope that it will (but I can't be sure where the story will go next!). So, basically, just because Leah showed up, doesn't mean it will all get tied up in a lovely little bow - if anything it just got even messier. :)
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