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Penname: sweetness4683 [ Contact]
Real name: Nicole
Status: Member
Member Since: April 03, 2009
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Beta-reader: No
About me...I am 27 and a big homebody! I am married to my highschool sweetheart (yes, it does happen) and I have four little dogs. I love all types of music and I love watching movies.
I was Team Edward for the longest! After watching New Moon I am now Team Switz! During the movie I really wanted Jacob and Bella to kiss, but anway! I love Twilight.
Right now my favorite match is Bella/Jasper or Peter.
I have a story completed and am trying to perfect it to post it on twilighted, but no success so far. I'm writing another story and want that posted on twilighted also.
If anyone helps writer's out, let me know because I cannot get my story possted on this site and I would really like to.
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Summary: Bella Swan has to leave her home, so goes to the only place she can think of where she can be accepted and live as she is; Forks. But she didn't expect to see others like herself there... with pale skin and golden eyes.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 8772
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2009 Updated: September 26, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed 
Date: August 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great first chapter!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed 
Date: August 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Loved it! Thank God you are doing it different! I thought they were going to meet in the school!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Haha...she ran away!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Awww man! I really want to read more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 (Ninapolitan)
Awesome to see you posting again! Love your story and can't wait for you to continue! I like the thought of Edward teaching her "vampire 101". Looking forward to next time!
Summary: It is a long, hot summer in Forks, Washington. Edward is struggling with the aftermath of James' attack. Bella has survived, but it's brought to light all of Edward's worst fears. The Cullens are for a time split between bringing Bella deeper into their world and trying to keep her out of it.
But Fate has more surprises in store for Bella and the Cullens. As the summer grows, Bella slowly realizes that something is happening to her. Too afraid now to trust the Cullens to stay by her side, she struggles with the events on her own.
However, something this big, this monumental, cannot be hidden for long. Join Bella and the Cullens as they discover that which even they could never have predicted: That Bella is a daughter of the Pale Crescent.
Join them as Bella lives her Final Year as human. And even so... she is not entirely human in this final year. She was never human, and she has been marked for death.
Many thanks to Readergoof for the awesome image!
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 6190
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2009 Updated: August 12, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Dreaming the Impossible
Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Thank you - the next chapter is coming up soon! :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: First Sign
Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Glad to hear it!!! :)
Summary: After 100 years, Edward's gift is beginning to be more of a curse. He finds it difficult to be around his family and is nearly always alone. What happens when he meets a mysterious, sad, and broken vampire named Bella, whose thoughts he cannot hear. AU
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 8673
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2009 Updated: December 09, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That was a beautiful start! I was a sad for Edward at the beginning but the introduction between Edward and Bella was great! It was a great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: December 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Glad to see you are okay an updating. Can't wait to see what's in store!
Summary: When Bella has lost all hope and purpose, she finds out she is meant for bigger things. Can she find the strength to be her own person? The world is in peril and finding Edward is the only way she can fulfill her destiny. Will this new independent Bella able to forgive?
Set after Edward leaves Bella in NM. AU, Canon pairings, with some new characters. Rated NC-17 for sexual content, violence, and language. Somewhat OOC.
Beautiful banner by: AchelleDenaliCullen
Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 7168
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2009 Updated: July 07, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Acceptance
Caught my attention enough to read the next chapter! Let's see what Bella is...
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Wild Horses
Good chapter. I'm still not sure about your story, but I'll follow along!
Summary: The Cullens return to Forks to keep an eye on a new generation of Quileute shape-shifters. They find this new pack of wolves to be not only large, but led by the impulsive Jacob Black. When Edward falls for Bella Swan, who just happens to be Jacob's girlfriend,what will happen between the Quileuetes and the Cullens ?
Amazing banner by Anne Cullen
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Aro
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 79824
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: January 23, 2010
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Vision
Good chapter!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: First Day
The chapter flowed very well and easily. Great job! Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Family Matters
Lemon
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: The Meadow
It was great!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: The Visitors
:D
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: The Dance
Hell no! The way you are playing Jacob, I wouldn't trust to be alone with him. Love the dress! Author's Response: Seems like most people agree with you! I guess we'll have to wait and se. *grin*
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: The Call
Happy times are always ruined! Can't wait to see what happens! Author's Response: Don't worry, more good times ahead. Just gotta get through the whole "finding a body" thing. ;-)
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: The Confession
I don't know; this whole things seems genuine and fishy at the same time! Is that possible? Can't wait to see what happens next! Author's Response: Jacob probably thinks it's genuine, but it more out of desperation than anything. I felt like it was a little glimpse inside Jacob's head and Edward just happened to be here. It doesn't neccesarily reflect his feelings toward Edward, he just doesn't have anyone else. You figure his pack won't listen to him and he's probably feeling like he let Billy down so he can't talk to him. The Cullens are really his only other option since they know about the wolves.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Christmas Gifts
Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Thank you ;-)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: October 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Heart and Soul
Great chapter can't wait to see what happens!
Summary: "Disarm you with a smile,
And leave you like they left me here,
To wither in denial.
The bitterness of one who's left alone.
Ooh, the years burn."
-Smashing Pumpkins, Disarm
This is an alternative plot to when Bella is on the cliff, picking up from the top of page 358 of New Moon. Bella does not rush back into Edward's arms. Bella struggles a great deal with depression, anxiety, and esteem. Several characters may be slightly OOC in that they use occasional profanity.
"This story contains incidents of self-harm. If this is disturbing to you, please do not read."
What if Bella broke down on the cliff and truly tried to kill herself? What if Edward got the news in a different way and hadn't gone to Volterra? Where would it leave Edward and Bella? Where would it leave Bella and Jacob? This story will be an angst filled alternative, but I do believe in happyish endings.
Thank you for the banner, Roonie!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Harry, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 28947
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2009 Updated: August 11, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Almost Lover
Good first chapter!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Nobody's Home
Hey, where did the next button go? Great story! Sorry I haven't reviewed each chapter but when you get sucked into a story theres no coming out! Can't wait for your next chapter!
Summary: 
“Three things cannot be long hidden: the sun, the moon, and the truth.”
Alice’s werewolf blindness never allowed her to see Bella’s cliff diving at La Push, so she and the rest of the Cullens continued to stay away from Forks.
Bella struggles with her changing feelings for Jacob, her pain from Edward’s rejection, and her lingering feelings of love for the vampire who broke her heart and disappeared. Will Jacob and Bella find their way to each other and get their chance at happiness? And when a miserable and heartbroken Edward returns to beg Bella for forgiveness, what will she do?
As relationships change, Victoria continues her vendetta.
** Nominated for a Bellie Award for "Best 'Edward Who?' Fic!" **
** Nominated for two Indie Twific Awards for "Best Love Triangle" and "Best New Moon Story!" **
** Like Night and Day placed second in The Wolfpack Awards for "Favorite Jacob" **
Thanks you to catonspeed and the ladies of Altered Lions and Sacrificial Lambs for the new banner and your general awesomeness!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 127337
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: July 19, 2010
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Fate's Decision
What a great chapter to end a fantastic story! That was heartbreakingly beautiful, bittersweet. Great job!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: November 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Healing
Chapter was awesome and so was New Moon!
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