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Penname: sweetness4683 [ Contact]
Real name: Nicole
Status: Member
Member Since: April 03, 2009
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Beta-reader: No
About me...I am 27 and a big homebody! I am married to my highschool sweetheart (yes, it does happen) and I have four little dogs. I love all types of music and I love watching movies.
I was Team Edward for the longest! After watching New Moon I am now Team Switz! During the movie I really wanted Jacob and Bella to kiss, but anway! I love Twilight.
Right now my favorite match is Bella/Jasper or Peter.
I have a story completed and am trying to perfect it to post it on twilighted, but no success so far. I'm writing another story and want that posted on twilighted also.
If anyone helps writer's out, let me know because I cannot get my story possted on this site and I would really like to.
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Summary: We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.
"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!" ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails
Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 30 Completed: No
Word count: 225614
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: October 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Strawberries and Cream
The chapter was awesome! I love watching Edwards walls come tumbling down! Can't wait to see how the family reacts to their new found intmacy! Author's Response: Haha - yes, I'm pretty sure the family's reactions will be quite interesting. ;) I'm so glad you liked the chapter. Thank you for continuing to read, to review, and for showing so much support for this story. I appreciate it. :)
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: February 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Blindsided
Oh! Exciting! I really can't wait for next chapter! Author's Response: Thank you so much. I appreciate the review and I'm super excited about the next chapter too! =)
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: February 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: This Is My Hell
Great chapter! Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Thank you so much. The next chapter is started as I literally had to cut it out from the end of this one. As always, I appreciate the time you take to not only read, but also to review. =)
~Lisa
Summary: What if someone was watching when Edward left? What if they found sympathy for Bella to replace thier anger? This story explores that possibility and throws in the fact that Bella blocks out her year in Forks completely from her memory too.
The rating is for future chapters, in case you were wondering.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 25549
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: July 29, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed  
Date: June 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Flashes
Whats going on with Tori,hmm? I love the ending! The last paragraph was awesome! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Conflicting Nature
The last two chapters seemed to have come quickly, but I do wish they were a little longer. Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Changes
You know, I wish you had more reviews! I love the story, although the chapters are a little short for my taste. But I loved the orginial idea of Tori helping Bella even tho she may have a hidden agenda. I love that she went Carlisle, of course she would go to him.
I hope you can update that often. I can't get enough of your story! Happy writing!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Tori
Wow! That was unexpected! I thought she was going to have a horrible secret to try and tear everyone apart. Good job, I liked it. I think this could be a good ending; however, I am addicted so of course I want to see what happens afterwards! :) You could always do a sequel! ;P
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Freak Out
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: July 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Timing
Good chapter
Summary:  AU version of the "New Moon" reunion scene. Bella is not quite as quick to accept Edward's explanation for his actions in leaving her.
Banner credit goes to addicttwilight2, who is the most awesome person on the planet!!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Word count: 45075
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: June 30, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Alive
It sounds like a good ending; I'm curious to see what you are going to add! Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Thank you so much!! :)
Summary: Bella wakes up in a living nightmare, with superhuman powers she doesn't understand and one hell of a burn in her throat. As the events leading up to her death begin to come back to her, she realizes who is to blame for damning her to an existence of eternal night. Unharnessed powers swirling in her consciousness, she realizes she must learn to control and direct her fury in order to exact vengeance on her killer. And vengeance would be sweet...
AU/OOC
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 26738
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: January 21, 2011
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Cool beginning! Love the last line!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Wow! What a way to go?! Poor Bella!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Different Edward? Hm? Can't wait to see what happens next? Or how Bella is going to meet up with Edward?
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I'm sure she feels horrible, but felt he deserved it. That was harsh...I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Miss your story! Are you planning on finishing?
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: March 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Oh my God...I'm so happy you are back. How funny that you updated today? Last night I was going through my stories and weeding out the ones that haven't been updated in forever. In a last minute decision I decided to keep yours and the very next day you update. That's awesome. I love your story and can't wait to see where you take us.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
great stuff i love the description from alice's vision
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
So happy to see regular updates...I love your story. Great idea at the end...can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: March 17, 2013
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Hope u update again. I always loved this story
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: January 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
great to see an update, wish there were more...can't wait for more!
Summary: This is an alternative ending to New Moon AU and slightly OOC, for Bella anyway. It starts when Rosalie calls Edward to tell him what Alice saw. Rosalie tells Edward that Bella jumped and that Alice went back to Forks to check on her. Edward decides to come back to find out what is going on. Also, Victoria does not make a newborn army in Seattle...but don't worry about that just yet ;)
  
WARNING: This is not a "Jacob is the devil" type of story. Even though it will end up with ExB, if you want to stab Jake, then you probably shouldn't read this fic 'cause I love him and I will not write him as a complete ass.
Disclaimer: Stephenie Meyer owns everything Twilight
Copyright infringment is not intended
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Victoria
Challenges: Series: The Butterfly Effect
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 64370
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2009 Updated: April 09, 2010
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Great chapter! I can't wait for this conversation! I love the items you had in the box! The hair with the flowers...awesome! Author's Response: Thank you! Me either, lol! Thanks I had to really think about it and make sure I wasn't forgetting anything, lol!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Family reunions...the gang's all here
great start! waiting for more! Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 4 has been submitted for review, so hopefully it will be up soon :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Great chapter! I was looking forward to the next button and then realized there wasn't one! :D Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sorry! I'm working on chapter 5, so hopefully it will be ready for Kelly to proof soon and then uploaded for Red Chevy to validate :)
I usually post it on ff.net first so you can check for it there too :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Icky Vicky's Secret a.k.a. sometimes revelations suck
Looking forward to the next chapter! Author's Response: Thank you! It's in queue now :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Mighty big plans for such tiny hands...
Great chapter! Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 7 is in queue :)
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