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Penname: sweetness4683 [ Contact]
Real name: Nicole
Status: Member
Member Since: April 03, 2009
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About me...I am 27 and a big homebody! I am married to my highschool sweetheart (yes, it does happen) and I have four little dogs. I love all types of music and I love watching movies.
I was Team Edward for the longest! After watching New Moon I am now Team Switz! During the movie I really wanted Jacob and Bella to kiss, but anway! I love Twilight.
Right now my favorite match is Bella/Jasper or Peter.
I have a story completed and am trying to perfect it to post it on twilighted, but no success so far. I'm writing another story and want that posted on twilighted also.
If anyone helps writer's out, let me know because I cannot get my story possted on this site and I would really like to.
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Summary: 
It's been almost 5 years since that terrible day in the woods. Bella and Edward have both struggled with the devestating aftermath of their last conversation. Both have found solice in music, only in ways neither of them could have imagined. Can they find their way back to one another or is there just too much that time will not erase?
Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No
Word count: 119923
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2010
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed 
Date: May 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Brunch and Elevator Ecstasy
Can't wait to see the vision come to reality. I didn't think I would like your story but I have been sucked into it. Love your choices for music too! Very awesome! I hate to do this to authors but please hurry and post! :D Author's Response: That's one of the nicest things I've heard. I love that you didn't think this type of story would interest you and now you're asking for more!!! That rocks. Thanks for the review and for giving the story a chance.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Showers and Visions
Can't wait for the concert!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-Aromatic Hallucinations
Good chapter. I didn't like the names you chose for the band, but it was a good chapter! I'm really looking forward to the Cullens seeing Bella on stage!
Summary: 
An uneventful ten years have passed since the Volturi have left and the Cullens have let Bella and Renesmee stay near Charlie for too long. Bella agrees it's time to move and allow her daughter to venture out in the world. The entire Cullen coven - minus one half-breed - transition to a new location and begin school at a local college. What kind of excitement could possibly stir in a mediocre town where everyone knows everyone? Apparently a lot when another new-comer returns to town, but seems to have whoever he wants wrapped around his finger. There is a lot of love, plenty of lust, generous smiles, and pushed luck with their new beginning.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 7048
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2009 Updated: March 31, 2010
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed 
Date: April 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Leaving For Good
I like the beginning. I'm interested to see where you go from here. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Summary: A hot day in Forks, in more ways than one. How much damage could a little Sharpie really do? Find out...
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 6468
[Report This] Published: April 12, 2009 Updated: April 20, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Very cute and sensual! Great job! Author's Response: Thank you for the comments! I appreciate you taking the time to read, review, and rate this story! :D
Summary: 
AU. Bella Swan, hasn't spoke in over six years now - not since the day of the accident. She has since sunk into a depression & has grew tired with living. She trust no one. As a last resort, her Mother sends her, to live with her Dad, Charlie in the small town of Forks. Bella is considered a freak & an outcast, by all apart from the mysterious Edward Cullen. Could he actually be the one to change Bella? And could they together unlock the mystery, that is her forgotten past.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Renee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Word count: 12462
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Saturday January 1st 2005 - 12:35am (V)
Interesting beginning! Before reading I found your chapter titles interesting too. Now, of course, I understand.
Can't wait for the rest of your story! I love long fanfic! Happy writing!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Sunday 2nd January 2005 - 2:42pm
Looking forward to longer chapters! And of course the big move to Forks!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Monday 3rd January 2005 - 5:25pm
The cutting thing throws me off a bit, but I like the story regardless.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Friday 7th January 2005 - 7:46pm
Looking forward to the story picking up! I'm interested in what happens!
Summary: We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.
"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!" ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails
Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 30 Completed: No
Word count: 225614
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Blue Balls
Awesome ending! I hope your next takes place from where you left off! That was awesome! I loved it from start to finish and the fact that it was a longer chapter made me giddy! Can't wait for the next one! Author's Response: It was a long chapter wasn't it? I worried for my poor fingers. ;) The next chapter does pick up right where this one left off. I'm just curious if Edward put his shirt back on before heading over to Bella's. Thanks for your continued reading and reviews. I appreciate it so much.
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: January 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Mistletoe and Message Panty Payback
Great chapter! I loved the present exchange. The nail was awesome! Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it and I appreciate the review as always. I hope that you had a wonderful holiday season.
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Toture Devices
I really liked this chapter; playful evil! Great job! I don't like the whole cutting thing, but whatever. I've enjoyed everything else so far! Author's Response: Awww thanks. I didn't want to write the cutting thing but the Bella voice in my head wouldn't let me write around it. So, whatever - I tried to write it in a way that would be tolerable and I'm glad you're sticking with me through the story.
Thanks for reading and revieiwng, I appreciate it so much.
Much love,
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Skipping Rocks
It did seem like a filler chapter, but still can't wait for the next chapter! I can't wait to see what she has planned for the Cullens. I always thought from the books that Bella should have fought for what she wanted! Can't wait for the reunion between Edward and Bella too. Good job and happy writing! Author's Response: I'm sorry you felt it was filler - it really wasn't intended that way. Bella had been bugging me to visit Jacob and this was the first place it actually worked as she was still waiting for the Cullens to get back. Don't worry though - the next chapter they're back and she's finally able to get a little off her chest. ;)
Much love,
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap
That was great! I laughed out loud at Rosalie's shoes! :D Can't wait to see the note Bella left Edward or their reunion. Please don't make us wait to long! Author's Response: I'm glad everyone is enjoying the destruction of Rosalie's shoes. Did you follow the link and look at them? It's almost criminal that Bella destroyed them, but it did make an awesome point to Rose. =)
I'm writing Edward's chapter now and hope to have it finished by the end of the weekend for proofing.
Thank you for continuing to read and leave me comments about what you thought. I appreciate it.
Much love,
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen
Loved the confrontation! I expected Bella to be a little meaner because of her other stunts, but I thought what you did worked well! I want Edward to break some minor rule so Bella can create some more torture messages! The next fight they get into it would be nice to see Edward lose a little control and just kiss her! Everyone loves an out of control Edward! ;) Loved how long the chapter was too! Happy writing! Author's Response: Aw thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think Bella followed the tread lightly and carry a big hamme theory. Meaning, she hurt him more with her quiet statements - but I think she's definitely yank the chain hard when he breaks the rules. ;) And knowing Edward, I don't think he'll last long before that happens.
Thanks for reading and reviewing - each comment is my own little calorie free treat. =)
Much love,
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Reality Check
I have to agree; Edward falling out of the tree what my husband looking at me like I was crazy! I'm glad Edward is starting to figure things out! I can't wait to see what you have plan next for them! Love her little strip tease knowing Edward would be out there! Awesome!
Happy writing! Author's Response: At least I'm not the only one with a husband that just shakes his head in wonder from time to time. =) I'm excited for where things go from here as well - I'm all about romance so the wooing and courting should be oodles of fun.
Thanks for continuing to read and leave me your thoughts. I appreciate them all.
Much love,
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Moves and Countermoves
I love a in charge Bella. The only one that can put Edward in his place! Loved the time she spent with Jasper and Jasper one sided talk with Edward! Can't wait for more. Oh, love the length of the chapter too. Author's Response: I'm glad you loved so much of it. =) I think now that the story is really on a roll the chapters will stay fairly close to this length. There's just so much dynamic involved with the family that it feels wrong to cut anything they have to say short for quickie chapter. Bella is the only one currently able to put Edward in his place, but his siblings never fail to let him know he's being an idiot - which I think is hilarious.
Thanks for continuing to read and leave your thoughts. I love each and every one.
Much love,
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Gunpowder and Lead
I loved the first half with Emmett, it was awesome! I love badass Bella; who doesn't? I think Edward is making the wrong choice?! Can't wait for more! Author's Response: I'm completely with you - I think Edward is making the wrong choice as well. I can't see Bella being happy if he crashes the date, but Edward really is a stubborn thing isn't he? I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks for continuing to read and leave me your thoughts on each chapter - I truly appreciate it.
Much love,
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: July 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Too Much Testosterone
I loved the part with Jacob and Quil, although I'm curious how Bella and Jacob still stay friends after his transformation. Can't wait to see what you have in store! Author's Response: Thank you for reading and dropping me your thoughts. I always really liked Quil, even though we saw him only briefly in the book. I'm glad you were glad to see him again as well.
Much love,
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: July 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Blood Doesn't Make a Mom
I was looking forward to the other chapter with the first day back at school. But I did like this chapter. I like the addition you made with Bella's drawing. Nicley done! Can't wait for more! Author's Response: I promise the school day is up next. I'm even a good way into it already and hope to have it completed soon. I'm glad you like the addition of Bella's artistic talent. It provided a nice bonding moment for her with Esme and is a much healthier way to work through her emotional turmoil. How shocked do you think Edward will be? ;)
Thanks for continuing to reand and review - you know I appreciate them all.
Much love,
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Invisibly Shaken
Great chapter! I hope Emmett gets to grill Bella about something! That chapter with the underwear was too funny! Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Hahaha - Emmett is nowhere near done with teasing about Bella's underwear. His new favorite phrase to Bella is "What's the message of the day?" In fact, I've already written a nice little bit about it in the next chapter. Stay tuned. It's one of my favorite parts of the family dynamic. =) Thank you so much for continuing to read and leave me reviews - I appreciate it so much.
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Turning Stone into Silly Putty
Loved the chapter! I loved how Bella didn't show Alice her drawings. Although when Bella does finally show them to everyone you should have Rose reacted in a nice way to how Bella portrayed her in the drawing. That would be nice. I'm sure you can have a touching moment there. I loved the underwear bit of course, I was looking forward to more Emmett, but what you did with Edward and Bella was great! I loved reading the banter between them. It was awesome! Can't wait to read more! Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Emmett isn't going to let go his new favorite thing - asking Bella the message of the day - so I'm sure we will see more of him in future chapters. I'm not quite sure how the other family members will learn about Bella's drawings, they haven't shared that with me yet. ;) The playful banter between Edward and Bella was fun to write. I was so relieved that they're both learning that every moment of life doesn't have to be serious. This group date is shaping up to fun as well. Thank you so much for your continued dedication to this story and for leaving me a review. I deeply appreciate it.
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls
So fucking funny! Rose and her little stunt had me smiling ear to ear!!! Love the sense of humor! Author's Response: Haha - yes, she knows how to hit Emmett where it'll really hurt doesn't she? I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you so much for letting me know your thoughts. I appreciate it.
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Rounding Second
The previous chapter had one of the hottest intros to a lemon I've ever read! And this chapter was beautifully written! I love how she handcuffed him. I can't wait for more! Author's Response: Wow - thank you so much. Who knew that ice would be deemed so hot? ;) I'm thrilled that you felt this chapter carried on what was started in the previously chapter without straying from being true to the story. I appreciate the compliment and the review. :)
~Lisa
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: October 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Payback
I thought that was awesome! I love that Jasper stood up for Bella! Even to go as far as threaten Edward and state his admiration for her! It was well written and I can't wait for more! Author's Response: I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Yes, Jasper did threaten Edward, didn't he? Edward totally wasn't expecting that. *snicker* He so deserved it though. I also don't think Jasper was expecting to feel so protective of Bella. That kinda snuck up on him. ;) Thank you so much for your continued dedication to not only reading this story, but also for reviewing. I always appreciate it. :)
~Lisa
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