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Penname: sweetness4683 [ Contact]
Real name: Nicole
Status: Member
Member Since: April 03, 2009
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Beta-reader: No
About me...I am 27 and a big homebody! I am married to my highschool sweetheart (yes, it does happen) and I have four little dogs. I love all types of music and I love watching movies.
I was Team Edward for the longest! After watching New Moon I am now Team Switz! During the movie I really wanted Jacob and Bella to kiss, but anway! I love Twilight.
Right now my favorite match is Bella/Jasper or Peter.
I have a story completed and am trying to perfect it to post it on twilighted, but no success so far. I'm writing another story and want that posted on twilighted also.
If anyone helps writer's out, let me know because I cannot get my story possted on this site and I would really like to.
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Summary: I can't live without Edward. Not now, not ever. I've got a plan. I'm just going to have to call in a few favors first.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 24893
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2009 Updated: May 11, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed 
Date: June 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Through My Eyes
Good story! I like what you did with Tanya! Everyone usually makes her to the bad guy! Good idea using Nessie's gift on Bella! Loving the story! Happy writing!
Summary: It's really hot out, and Bella takes a dip to cool down, a la naturale. Edward has no choice but to join. One-shot lemony zest, vampireEdward.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 5325
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2009 Updated: February 12, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I liked it!
Summary: An entry for *A Twilight Teasing Story Contest*
Bella comes into her room, fresh from the shower, wrapped in only a towel, to find Edward lounging on her bed instead of out hunting like he's supposed to be. Slightly OOC Edward, but not too much.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4481
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2009 Updated: February 17, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Show Me (v)
Awesomeness! Author's Response: Thank you!
Summary: What if Bella hadn't moved her junior year with her father. Instead she moved with her mother to Florida. Upon visting her father before leaving for college she encounters two members of the Cullen Family. Alice's vision tells her that Bella would change their lives forever.
Edward's first encounter with Bella is 30,000 feet in the air on the way to Darthmouth. With no means of escape will he be able to resist the temptation of her blood? Or will he bring the whole plane down for a taste?
~Edward's POV: Chapter 2
I closed my eyes to listen to the tones of voices around me. I heard at least one hundred passengers. It would be a massacre. Could I really justify destroying all the lives of everyone on this plane just to taste her blood?
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 71150
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2009 Updated: May 15, 2010
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Healing
I hope you don't spend to much time on the wedding. I can't wait for VampBella to take over! This is awesome so far!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 A Cry In the Night
I want to see your verison of VampBella! She has got to be kickass!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Coward
Loving your story! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Wicked
I'm glad you have time to write again! Im really loving this story! I love all the abilities Bella has. Love that Edwards going to give into the horny man inside! Sitting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Instinct
I thought it was a great chapter. You made my day today by posting. Work was dragging and there you go posting. I loved what you did; how Bellas powers affected the whole neighborhood. Funny as hell that she even affected the animals. Too funny! I like how she was still able to drop her shield during their time together. Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Summary: What if Edward kept his promise and Bella never heard from the Cullens again? Jacob was more than willing to console her, but would she have the sense to let him?
"You know what your problem is, Bells? You're in love - with the wrong thing. You think you're hung up on a guy who left you, but you're not. You're hung up on the idea of yourself as the heartbroken heroine."
Alternate ending to New Moon...just a nice love story, with monsters. Rated for certain chapters, at a sultry 108 degrees!
Many thanks to Sassenach Wench for the stylish story banner!
~*~A finalist in The Indie TwiFic Awards Winter 2010: Best New Moon Complete & AU that knocks you off your feet! Thanks for all the love and support! ~*~
Be sure to read the follow up fics '93 Million Miles' and 'Jacob's Ladder' posted here on Twilighted!
Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles, The Moonshadow Continuum
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 76998
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed 
Date: April 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Wildlife Management
I'm really enjoying your story! I like the relationship you are developing between Jacob and Bella. It's very sweet! Can't wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: Thanks, hearing from y'all really helps the writing.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Night and the Forest
That is one of my favorite Jacob and Bella encounters. Other stories I've read just rush through their time together. It was very sweet and gentle. Loving the story; can't wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: I wanted it to be really special for them...
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Morning
Looking forward to Renees visit. I love some of the Jacob and Bella stories and I can add yours as one of my favorite. I'm Edward all the way but your story is very sweet so far and I can't wait to see the rest! Author's Response: Thank you very much <><3
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Renee
You tease! Can't wait for the next chapter! I love your easy going story! Some times you need a break from all the angst! Author's Response: Thank you, that's kinda what I thought! <><3
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Confusion
Great chapter! I'm glad to see an update on this story. I love it! I like that they fought and great make up sex afterwards; doesn't get any better than that!
Looking forward to the next chapter! Btw I love the little teasers you put at the end of the chapters! :) Author's Response: Thank you. I've had occasion to kick myself for the teasers - when a chapter started going a different direction and I had to man-handle it back to what I promised! <><3
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Dots
Yea! I've been dying to read a wolf ride! I know it will be awesome even before I read it. Loved the chapter! Loved what you did with Leah and Bella; I'm glad it wasn't Edward (if he needs to make an apperance thats fine too, but I'm glad it wasn't yet). This is one of my favorite J/B stories. I love it! Author's Response: Thank you so much! I thought Leah needed a friend and a chance at a life... <><3
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: July 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Nightmares
Great chapter! I like how Bella was included during the tribe meetings. Writing was great! Can't wait for more! Wolf ride was awesome! Author's Response: Bella really has a community now... thanks! <><3
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: July 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Black Hole
great chapter! can't wait for more! Author's Response: Thank you, coming up soon! <><3
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Magnetic North
Good chappie! Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Thanks! More is on the way. <><3
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Easy as Breathing
Great chapter! Author's Response: Thanks so much! <><3
Summary: Found unconscious after four years of being held captive by two nomadic vampires, Bella is rescued by three members of the Cullen family. When she awakens, the family is apalled to find how deeply she's withdrawn into the roll of an abused pet. In time, she begins to trust and find comfort again but the Cullen's worry if she will ever regain her full humanity.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 33925
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: June 04, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Want to see more progress! Good job!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Miss your story! Hope you plan on updating!
Summary:  
Bella is devastated by the loss of her mother and is forced to go live with Charlie, her Mom's best friend, when there is no one else to take her in. She gives up on living, too lost in her own anger to let anyone close to her. Enter Edward, the handsome teenage vampire, and the beginning of a complicated love-hate relationship. Neither can deny the connection between them, but can their love survive the fear that rules her and the secret he hides from her? AU and OOC, Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes
Word count: 292396
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: December 25, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 32: Connection
Can't waig for the b ig reveal! update soon! Author's Response: It's coming, slowly but surely. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 40: Jeopardy
Are they ever going to get a proper reunion? Loved it! Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not. You'll have to keep reading to find out ;o) Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Disclosure
Love the story. Love how Bella takes here. I think swearing is funny and she cracks me up. Can't wait for the rest! Post soon! Author's Response: Thank you. This characterization of Bella definitely has a unique take on life and her very own way of expressing her thoughts LOL. The latest chapter is awaiting validation so I'm sure the next update will be soon. Thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 33: Conflicted
Good chapter! Can't wait for the big reveal! Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 34: Sagacity
Was this the calm before the storm? Great chapter! I loved the playfulness between the them. Hopefully we'll get to see some more playfulness banter. Still looking forward to her finding out the truth of Edward! Author's Response: Thank you. The story is definitely in transition right now. There are lots of questions with respect to Jasper and the future but I can promise some more playful banter in the next chapter. Thank you for the comment.
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