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Penname: sweetness4683 [ Contact]
Real name: Nicole
Status: Member
Member Since: April 03, 2009
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About me...I am 27 and a big homebody! I am married to my highschool sweetheart (yes, it does happen) and I have four little dogs. I love all types of music and I love watching movies.
I was Team Edward for the longest! After watching New Moon I am now Team Switz! During the movie I really wanted Jacob and Bella to kiss, but anway! I love Twilight.
Right now my favorite match is Bella/Jasper or Peter.
I have a story completed and am trying to perfect it to post it on twilighted, but no success so far. I'm writing another story and want that posted on twilighted also.
If anyone helps writer's out, let me know because I cannot get my story possted on this site and I would really like to.
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Summary: 
All trace of torment fled from my body the moment I thought of Jake. Of course. Jake was the one good thing that had been given to me after Edward had left, again, for the second time. But then...hadn't he been here all along? Each day Edward had been missing from my life Jake had reached out with his hands, as well as with his heart, and had taken a hold of mine without hesitation, without a second thought as to how it could have affected him. He didn't realize just how much that little deed had done for me, how even those small signs of affection had meant so much.
Emptiness. The one thing Bella thought she would never feel again - but she did. Edward has left for the second time, and for the same reasons he had before. He backed out of their plan once and for all and has refused to turn her into a living blood-sucking monster. Bella is miserable, and she is positive this time that she'll never again feel the touch of happiness. But with Jake still in her life to patch things up, maybe things won't be so bad after all. Edward may have had the power of an eclipse, but sun can shine through almost anything...including a shattered heart.
A story in which Jake finally gets his happy ending.
Special thanks to Anne Cullen for the banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Angela, Bella, Billy, Edward, Embry, Emily, Eric, Jacob, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Quil, Renee, Sam, Seth
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 42188
[Report This] Published: January 18, 2009 Updated: November 18, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed 
Date: May 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: I'm Letting Go, I'm Letting Go Now
I cried! Great writing!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Making Memories Of Us
That was surprising! I liked the way you ended it! I am Team Edward...but, that was still a beautiful story! Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate you reviewing. =]
~Mystic
Summary: 
Thanx to the beautiful Anne Cullen for the banner!
Picking up from Edward's leave in New Moon, Bella never rescued Edward, Edward never came back, but somebody did ...
This story is set five years after that sad day Edward left Bella in the woods.
For years Bella searches for Edward, eager to tell him her new found secret. As Bella gives in to her fears, that Edward really is gone, she runs into her past in the least likely place. Only to find out, her past has a secret to tell as well.
"The smell of the worn book had distracted me from the wonderful aroma that had engulfed the room. It had subdued my venom, had forced me back into a human-like state, my inner monster slowly crawling back into his darkened hole. I swallowed one last time, and decided to glance at this glorious teacher. Obviously he was a man of impeccable taste. I might actually enjoy Senior Literature this year.
I glanced up quickly from under my eyelids, my amber eyes focusing on a lanky form in front of me. I froze.
… Oh shit. "
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 31919
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2009 Updated: October 30, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Preface: The Hunter
That was a really sad beginning. I love what you did with the animals.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Wolf Claws
Wait...so are the rest of the Cullens still vamps. I want Bella to run into Alice...thats a reunion scene I want. Your choices from before don't matter as long as Bella and Edward get to talk soon. I'm dying over here! :D
Keep updating!
Summary: It's been 100 years since Edward left Bella and she's still kicking. What will she do when she strays across her once would-be family in the same place it all started: Little Forks, Washington?
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 10238
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2009 Updated: June 02, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed 
Date: May 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: When The Memory Catches Up With You
cant wait for more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: When The Shock Catches Up With You
Poor Angela! Wondering where you are going!? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: When The Shock Catches Up With You
Miss your story! Hope you plan on finishing the story!
Summary: 
Edward, Bella and Alice are drawn into a no-win scenario in Volterra after Edward's attempted suicide-by-Volturi in the Palazzo dei Priori . Aro confronts Edward to make an impossible choice, with Alice as Aro's unwitting accomplice. How will Edward's choice affect his reunion with Bella, and what future can they hope to salvage in the aftermath?
Story begins in New Moon, during Chapter 21, "The Verdict," but enters the AU when Aro reads Alice's mind...
AU, but canon through New Moon, with canon pairings.
~*~ warning ~*~ story contains very dark themes, including a sexual assault in the first chapter. if this subject is a trigger for you, please do not continue.
If you are a survivor of sexual abuse and need assistance, please contact RAINN http://apps.rainn.org/ohl-bridge/
Disclaimer: I do not own the Twilight series, nor any of the characters created by Stephenie Meyer. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Twilighted Supervisory Beta: psymom Twilighted Validation Beta: Lion_in_the_Land
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Word count: 95553
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2009 Updated: November 25, 2012
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 16, 2009
Title: Aro's Heir
That was really cute with the pictures! Author's Response: i loved writing that proposal. glad yu liked!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 16, 2009
Title: Aro's Heir
Looking forward to the next chapter! Author's Response: me too! thnks!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 30, 2009
Title: Aro's Heir
I can't wait to see how they get out of this one! Looking forward to more! Author's Response: hang in there - we're in for a bumpy ride!
Summary: 
Thank you MegsD for the beautiful banner!
Jacob Black is getting married. As he's waiting anxiously for his bride to join him, he remembers some of the key moments of their relationship. Join Jacob as he reminisces about the good times and the bad: when Nessie was first born, how he watched over her as a little girl, what they went through when she matured and suddenly everything changed, falling in love, jealousy, misunderstandings, dealing with the reactions of family and friends, asking the big question, and so much more.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No
Word count: 74565
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2009 Updated: March 04, 2010
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Shopping, Clothes, and Tiny Dressing Rooms (v)
I love your story so far and any lemons you are willing to drop would be icing on the cake. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far! Lemons ... not too sure yet - it's a possibility. Thanks for reading, reviewing and rating!!!
Val
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Perfect Gifts: 25th Anniversary: Silver; 50th Anniversary: Gold; Engagement: Latex? I Don't Think So! (v)
Love your humor! Looking forward to the rest! This is one of my favorite stories between Nessie and Jacob. Beautifully done! Author's Response: Thank you so much! Aww, really? That's so sweet! Thanks for taking the time to read, review, AND rate!!!
Val
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Bikinis, Hot Tubs, And Head Injuries. Oh My!
I love your story! It is awesome! I can't wait for your next chapter! Do you know how many chapters you plan on having? Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll have the next chapter submitted soon! I'm not sure how many there will be. I have 26 chapters written so far. I think there will be at least 30. It depends on what kinds of ideas I get. Thanks for taking the time to read, review and rate!!!
Val
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Dr. Fang's Words of Wisdom (v)
Love the last line by Carlisle! Funny! Can't wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: Things had been so serious for too long - I had to lighten it up a bit! I'm glad you liked it! In the next chapter, they'll go visit the wolf pack! It will be submitted in a few days. Thank you so much!
Val
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: A Sneak Peek at Nessie's Happy Little World (v)
Love your story! Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Val
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Tie-less, Shoe-less, Class-less Fools (v)
I love your story. The way you portray Jacob is my favorite! Author's Response: I'm really glad you like the way I portray Jacob! Thank you so much - for your review and rating!!!
Val
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 28: You Mean People Actually Pay For This Torture? (v)
Beautiful!! Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review AND rating!!!
Val
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Dancing Queen and Alpha Boy Go to Seattle
Good chapter! Author's Response: Thank you!
Val
Summary: 
Special thanks to mellyfrisco6 for this new and improved banner.
Post Eclipse. Breaking Dawn never happened. Bella and Edward are engaged to be married, but Bella can't seem to ignore the feelings she still has for Jacob. Will she stay with the vampire who broke her heart, or will she run to the werewolf who put it back together?
Coming Full Circle has won praise from The Wolfpack Awards:
MOST SUSPENSEFUL
MOST ORIGINAL PLOT
BEST IMPRINT
Winner of "Most Loved Imprint Character" in the Summer JBNP Awards!
*And special thanks also go out to precioustandi for this banner as well.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 46 Completed: No
Word count: 415372
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2009 Updated: September 24, 2012
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine
The ending was so funny! Awesome!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve
Good Chapter!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen
Wonderful story so far...sorry I didn't comment a lot but I didn't think I'd like the story..you know...being Team Edward and all. But I just couldn't stop pressing the next button. Your story showed me the wonderfulness that is Jacob Black.
I didn't think I would like this desperate Edward, but I kinda do. I felt kinda bad for him, it seemed like B/J were ganging up on him. Oh! And what he said as he was walking out the door...my husband had to ask why my mouth was on the floor! Your character just proves that Edward was used to getting his way. I love the more confidant Bella.
Are you going to do a confrontation with the Cullens? I hope her and Alice can still be friends?! Maybe not see each other everyday kind of friends but at least phone each other kind of friends.
Are you going to deal with the Voultri?
How long is this story going to be? Well done! I really enjoyed it! :D I hope you update fast. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat for the next one! Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your reviews. I especially appreciate you taking the time to read it when you're a true Edward lover. Please note that I am not an Edward hater. But, I do LOVE Jacob and I feel that the books and a lot of fanfiction stories don't really deal with the issues that I think existed between Bella and Edward. Anyway, I'm pretty sure a lot of your questions are going to be answered in future chapters. Thank you so much for all of your positive feedback. I hope to update soon.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen
I commented over on ff.net, but I thought I keep up with comments over here too. I was TeamEdward, now I can say that I'm Team Swizerland because of your story. Out of all the Jacob stories I've read, your story is tied with another favorite of mine. Even tho I favor Edward, I love the relationship you've established between Bella and Jacob. I liked that Edward kissed her too, it shows that he is not perfect. LOVE your story can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: July 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen
Haha! Poor Seth. I love the bit you wrote with the braclet. It's like taking something from the book and making your own. I loved it! Can't wait for the rest of the story! Author's Response: Thank you so much for always reviewing. I'm glad you liked the whole bracelet part, because that really irked me once I thought about it.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: July 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen
I love your story! One of the best Jacob and Bella stories out there! Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen
Love it! Author's Response: Thank you! :)
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