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Penname: sweetness4683 [ Contact]
Real name: Nicole
Status: Member
Member Since: April 03, 2009
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About me...I am 27 and a big homebody! I am married to my highschool sweetheart (yes, it does happen) and I have four little dogs. I love all types of music and I love watching movies.
I was Team Edward for the longest! After watching New Moon I am now Team Switz! During the movie I really wanted Jacob and Bella to kiss, but anway! I love Twilight.
Right now my favorite match is Bella/Jasper or Peter.
I have a story completed and am trying to perfect it to post it on twilighted, but no success so far. I'm writing another story and want that posted on twilighted also.
If anyone helps writer's out, let me know because I cannot get my story possted on this site and I would really like to.
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Summary: This is the sequel to Socially Awkward Vampires, so if you haven't read that, you should probably read it first.
Carlisle is all set to become the fourth member of the Volturi brethern. But Alice has a vision of the future that will change not only the Cullen's lives, but the entire world as we know it. Thankfully, Alice's visions aren't set in stone. The Cullens just have to figure out what decisions to make and to create the right set of circumstances to change the outcome. Will they be able to do it? Will they survive?
Questions about the brethern, Tanya, Alec, and the other members of the guard will be answered as the tale is spun.
Told with angst and humor, just as SAV was. Oh, and the Cliffhanger Anonymous 12-step program didn't completely cure me, so there will be some cliffies in there too.
Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Alistair, Aro, Bella, Billy, Brady, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Charlotte, Demetri, Didyme, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Gianna, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Liam, Maggie, Marcus, Peter, Quil, Renata, Rosalie, Sam, Santiago, Seth, Siobhan, Sulpicia, Tanya, Zafrina
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 11062
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed 
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Paris
Nice way to start off! Looking good!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Paris
Nice way to start off! Looking good!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Do Not Disturb
I like the fluff in between the drama! Well done!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Invitation to the Guard
I love it when Bella is all badass! Love what you are doing with her ability! Sequel is looking awesome! Can't wait for more!
Summary: The much anticipated sequel to A Lesson in Release. Jasper has won the girl of his dreams and they are beginning a new life together at college. But what happens when fate intercedes? Will he be able to hold onto her or will fate return her to Edward?
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges: Series: The Lessons Saga
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes
Word count: 171842
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Love, Life, Everything
Aw, man! What a place to stop a chapter?! Want more! ;)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
That song was perfect!! Nice touch requesting that we listen while reading! I loved it!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: Decima
You are an awesome writer! I gotta say I don't like the whole Bella and Jasper thing and I still couldn't stop reading. You have a great way of drawing the reader in. I'm sooo hoping she picks Edward! They are meant to be! I can't wait for your next chapter; I miss the next button. :) Happy writing!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38: After All
Very sweet! Can't wait for the rest!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30: Duet
Can't wait for more. I love how you got Bella and Edward back together! Happy writing!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Welcome to Manhood
Great job! Can't wait for the rest!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed 
Date: May 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Hello Again
Writing has great as always! I liked the POV switches this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter! Happy writing!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: We've Only Just Begun
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: This is Halloween
That wasn't so bad I guess; I though you were going to have a lot more drama. But I guess some of the damaged has been done! Love the writing and the chapter! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36: Ohio State vs. Michigan
I like how you are portraying Heidi and Felix! I hope they don't have to get all mean because of Aro. I like them falling in line with the Cullen lifestyle. Beautifully written as always. Can't wait for the rest!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37: At Last
Aw man!!!!!! I love the "I'm a man" paragraph! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39: My Name is Adrian Michael Peters
Wow! Can't wait to see Italys reasoning on this one!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40: Morta
OMG! Jasper changes her! OMG! Edward will be pisssed! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41: Honesty and Understanding
Are you nuts? Theres only one chapter left?!?! Loved everything Bella did from kissing/punching Jasper to spitting out cow's blood. I can't wait to see what the last chapter has in store for us! Great job with the story! Sitting on the edge of my seat!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42: Nona
I have mixed feelings! The chapter was great; writing is always awesome. But I don't know how I feel about them splitting up. It made sense in the way you did it, but I guess I'm a little sad. Anyway, it was great!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue: Guys' POV
Another sequel, perhaps? My god, you are like a machine! Loved the story! Can't wait to see what else you put out there!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: July 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue: Girls' POV
Loved the chapter! Nice ending!
I loved the whole series. You are an awesome writer!
Summary: This story begins after the conclusion of Eclipse. Newly engaged, Bella and Edward explore the physical and romantic boundaries of their relationship. Together they will embark on a new level of intimacy neither of them has experienced before.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 24340
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2009 Updated: March 07, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Aw man, you got to finish this story! This is one of the few stories out there where I actually believe this may have been their behavior. You keep it lust-y but innocent. It's more seductive than any smut out there. Even if there's only a chapter or two left you have to finish it.
I love the whole scene with Emmett! I love the parents walking in on a make-out session, so awesome! It's funny, sexy, and interesting! I so interested to find out who this William is!
PLEASE UPDATE!
Summary: 
All trace of torment fled from my body the moment I thought of Jake. Of course. Jake was the one good thing that had been given to me after Edward had left, again, for the second time. But then...hadn't he been here all along? Each day Edward had been missing from my life Jake had reached out with his hands, as well as with his heart, and had taken a hold of mine without hesitation, without a second thought as to how it could have affected him. He didn't realize just how much that little deed had done for me, how even those small signs of affection had meant so much.
Emptiness. The one thing Bella thought she would never feel again - but she did. Edward has left for the second time, and for the same reasons he had before. He backed out of their plan once and for all and has refused to turn her into a living blood-sucking monster. Bella is miserable, and she is positive this time that she'll never again feel the touch of happiness. But with Jake still in her life to patch things up, maybe things won't be so bad after all. Edward may have had the power of an eclipse, but sun can shine through almost anything...including a shattered heart.
A story in which Jake finally gets his happy ending.
Special thanks to Anne Cullen for the banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Angela, Bella, Billy, Edward, Embry, Emily, Eric, Jacob, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Quil, Renee, Sam, Seth
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 42188
[Report This] Published: January 18, 2009 Updated: November 18, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue: Shadows of the Sun
That was a lovely story! Being Team Edward I can say I really enjoyed your story. You didn't have to turn Edward into a villian to get him to back off of Bella and that's special. Happy writing! Author's Response: Thank you! Wow, there are a lot more Team Edward people reading my story than I thought! Thanks so much for supporting my story, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
~Mystic
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: I Won't Stop You From Loving Me
I like this chapter; vey playful!
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