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Penname: sweetness4683 [ Contact]
Real name: Nicole
Status: Member
Member Since: April 03, 2009
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Beta-reader: No
About me...I am 27 and a big homebody! I am married to my highschool sweetheart (yes, it does happen) and I have four little dogs. I love all types of music and I love watching movies.
I was Team Edward for the longest! After watching New Moon I am now Team Switz! During the movie I really wanted Jacob and Bella to kiss, but anway! I love Twilight.
Right now my favorite match is Bella/Jasper or Peter.
I have a story completed and am trying to perfect it to post it on twilighted, but no success so far. I'm writing another story and want that posted on twilighted also.
If anyone helps writer's out, let me know because I cannot get my story possted on this site and I would really like to.
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Summary:
Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more. As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow. Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted. Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse. J/B at first, but eventually E/B.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No
Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: First Day
I loved the staring thing!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen
Great start!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Bonfire
I like the softer side of Leah. Most stories don't portray her as such! Nice chapter!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed 
Date: May 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 32: Hypocrisy
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 34: Tightrope
The last two chapters were awesome! That was just a mean place to cut the chapter! I can't wait to see where you take this story! I like how you are going about the Jacob and Bella thread; how the boy she loved is gone etc. Can't wait for more! I love how long your story is too by the way!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed 
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 35: Kissed
Cool chapter! I like how there are meeting up on the stairs in front of the house! Can't wait for more!
Summary: Bella was saved from a human death and given a new life by an unfamiliar creature. Adapting to her new lifestyle and family, Bella's unknown human past comes back to haunt her and her beloved Edward. What will happen when old memories, feelings, and loved ones collide with new ones? How will Edward handle things as well as Bella?
Thanks to Mrs.C for the fantastic banner, A/U. NC-17 for possible future chapters. Slight OOC may occur on all characters.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, James, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 25179
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2008 Updated: April 06, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Such a Waste
What a beginning?!!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Bitter Decision
I'm curious to see how Jacob reacts! Do we still have the treaty in this story?
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Isabella Who?
Aww! Please tell me she'll remember herself?
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Tanya's Revenge
That's different. Usually Bella's the one being taken advantage of. Interesting switch. Tanya is such a bitch! I hope Bella doesn't go to James for comfort and I hope the Edward fights for her. Good chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Tanya's Revenge
Miss your story! Hope you plan on finishing sometime soon!
Summary: It's been three years since the day Edward left Bella in the woods...she is moving on but is still plagued by nightmares from time to time. Will someone from her past help her get through her difficult times? What danger lies ahead for her? Will her dreams eventually come true? Please read and review!
Dream sequences based on the hit song by Heart.
Thanks to the fabulous Mrs.C for the banner!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 70891
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: April 05, 2009
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Where do I sign up for dreams like that? Awesome! Author's Response: I wanted dreams like that too...dang it! Didn't happen...so what do I do? Write about it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Why doesn't he just go home (the Cullens) and protect Bella there? Author's Response: He being Jasper? He doesn't feel like he can. (Jasper that is) It is safer, in his mind, if he takes her where no one will know where she is. Keep reading...he does EVENTUALLY go home.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
That's my favorite chapter so far...that was a beautiful little mini reunion!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue
Loved the story! Great job! Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Summary: Bella is a newborn vampire in Volterra with no human memories and an aversion to human blood. Aro decides to send her to live with the Cullens. Will Bella ever uncover her past? will she find what she is missing? What is Aro's master plan? Story came in second place for Best Vampire Bella at the Twilight Awards.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 135619
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: November 11, 2008
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Forever
You should do a sequel with a kickass all powerful Bella! I loved what you did with her ability! Personally I always imagined her aborsbing others powers!
Summary: Click here to watch the video trailer created by lilabut.
At a pivotal moment in New Moon, a simple choice alters the course of Bella's future, and she is forced to endure several more weeks before Edward's eventual return to Forks. Victoria, a pack of young werewolves, and the blossoming of an undeniable bond become the least of Bella's concerns as she undergoes her own supernatural transformation. It turns out vampires and werewolves aren’t the only things that go bump in the night. Edward/Bella/Jacob
A huge thank you to placeofthunder for the lovely banner!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Kim, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 145984
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2008 Updated: August 30, 2010
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: April 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Precarious
great stuff can't wait to see what the "couselor" has to say to Bella. Last chapter was great too. i don't think I reviewed it. Sorry. Author's Response: I can't wait either! I'm so excited to start writing Vanessa. Woot!
Thank you so much. :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Together
The ending was cute! I like Jacob!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: What if?
Another playful chapter between Jacob and Bella (at the end anyway). I like the relationship you are building between them but it sucks that someone is going to be more hurt! I really enjoyed your story; can't wait for your next update!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: June 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Nightmares
Great; can't wait for more! Author's Response: Good, because I just posted chapter eleven. Less than a month between updates, baby! (Hmm, most authors wouldn't brag about that would they?)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: May 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: History
I like Vanessa, I like how you are writing her. I'm very happy with the chapter. I can't wait to find out more about her history. I love that Jacob came in and had Vanessa by the throat. Author's Response: Yes. Grrrr. Angry Jacob is hawt Jacob.
I'm glad that this chapter didn't come off too boring. It was A LOT of talking. But sometimes there's no other way.
Thank you. :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Forgiveness
It's a different twist. I don't think I've read a story where Leah ever attacks Bella. i like it. I just hope the damage isn't too severe; then the story becomes Bella recovering. Anyway...glad to see you posting again. Author's Response: No worries, I would never let something like that consume the storyline.
Thankyousomuch for taking the time to let me know you're reading!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Into the Woods
Love the chapter! Can't wait for more! Is this a B/J or B/E story? Author's Response: Well, obviously there's been some B/J and mention of B/E, but we'll just have to see what circumstances come up and what Bella decides. I can't give it away!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: August 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Human
Great chapter! I can't wait until Bella does something else weird. I can't wait to find out what happened to her when she was attacked by Leah! Author's Response: Oh, the wierdness is a'comin'! Just you wait. (I know, I know. You're SICK of waiting. Sigh. Can we please get this plot moving?!)
Lol, thanks!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 Signed
Date: September 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Constellations
Great chapter! Author's Response: thank you much!
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