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Penname: springlilys86 [ Contact]
Real name: Veronica
Status: Member
Member Since: September 19, 2008
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Beta-reader: Yes
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Summary: After their marriage, Bella has disappeared, shattering Edward and the Cullens. When Emmett finds her, alone and pregnant in a strange city, will he and his family be able to make things right?
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Word count: 31135
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2008 Updated: November 15, 2008
Reviewer: springlilys86 Signed
Date: September 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I absolutly love your story! I love your characterization of Edward and the interaction between Bella and the rest of the Cullin family. In a lot of ways I was a little bit disappointed in the way the baby sistuation was brought about in Breaking Dawn. Something like this would have been a lot more understanding with the storyline, or so I think. If you're still looking for a beta reader I am available! I've never beta read for a twilight story before, but I'm more than willing to give it a shot!
Summary: Can people change, or are some things just not possible? Could you do anything if you had the right reason? Is resistance about physical abillity, or the right motivation? For Jasper Hale and Alice Brandon, it is a matter of love or death. PG-13 just in case.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice
Challenges: Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 38296
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2009 Updated: February 20, 2010
Reviewer: springlilys86 Signed
Date: April 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue, Part I
Wow, this is a really original idea....
...I think I'll keep reading.
Author's Response: Thanks! I like it when people keep reading!
Reviewer: springlilys86 Signed
Date: April 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Prologue, Part II
"If you were the Confederacy’s most promising officer, it’s no wonder they lost the war!"
-Best line EVER! Author's Response: Heh. Thank you. I like it when my little quippy lines are appreciated :D.
Reviewer: springlilys86 Signed
Date: April 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1
Ok, the puppy eyes did it. I think this story a lot so far. As I said before, it's very original. Can't wait to read more;) Author's Response: My puppy eyes tend to do the trick. I'm glad you think it's orginal; the whole time I was writing, I was in constant fear of some sort of alice/jasper/human/vampire plot boom.
Reviewer: springlilys86 Signed
Date: April 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3
I'm liking this very much. I would like a little more back story one how Edward and Bella came to be. This is an interesting way of looking at things...
...I can't wait for more! Author's Response: Edward/Bella backstory will be hinted at quite frequently, but I'm saving it for later in the story. HINT: I'm saving it for when Jacob gains a little more prominence. Chew on that, if you will.
Summary: Bella has been with Jacob for four years and everyone thinks they have the perfect relationship. Their friends and family expect an engagement any day, but Bella is having second thoughts. A story about old love, new love, and friendship.
Canon pairings. Slightly OOC. Rated for later chapters.
FINALIST IN THE INDIE TWIFIC AWARDS! CATEGORY: BEST AU HUMAN-COMPLETE.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 76222
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2009 Updated: June 05, 2009
Reviewer: springlilys86 Signed
Date: May 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Just friends! Ugh! Yeah right! I'm loving this so far. Please continue!
...btw, I love the superhero story!
Reviewer: springlilys86 Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
My vote is that they're both stupid. Bella is kind of overreacting and Edward is kind of controling. They should both say they're sorry.
Good story though! Can't wait to see what happens!
Summary: 
"You pierce my soul. I am half agony, half hope...I have loved none but you."
- Jane Austen (Persuasion)
Bella & Edward have the perfect life - until an event tears them apart. Lost and alone, Bella is barely making it day to day. Upon Edward's return and Bella's refusal to listen to Edward, an unlikely ally steps in to help Edward gain Bella's forgiveness and help her see that true love never left her; it simply got lost along the way.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 56255
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: May 02, 2011
Reviewer: springlilys86 Signed
Date: April 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Pain
Oh my! That's so sad! Please update soon!!
Summary: Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.
Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?
Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011
Reviewer: springlilys86 Signed
Date: June 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Late Night Activities
Ok, really liking the story, but...did you have to make the Wings the bad guys? I mean, really? We don't have anyone on our team remotely like James! I'm hurt!
...Still liking the story though! Author's Response: It was mostly becuase there has been a pretty big rivalry between the two teams for a few years now...Since the 96 playoffs I think (Don't quote me on that I'm not positive) I have nothing personal against the wings.
I was pretty happy when they lost to pittsburgh though!
Summary: 
Isabella Swan never imagined that one night at a club would change her life, that it would jeopardize everything she had worked so hard for, everything she held dear. If only she had known when she met Edward Masen that it would be the beginning of the end of life as she knew it, perhaps she would have turned the other way. Then again, maybe not?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 204380
[Report This] Published: July 23, 2009 Updated: February 05, 2010
Reviewer: springlilys86 Signed
Date: October 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- There Goes the Bride
Ahh! This story is really going to kill me! I have to say, I kind of expected Bella to call the wedding off in spite of what Edward told her. But it works this way too. Please hurry with the next chapter! We must find out what's going to happen! Author's Response: Awe, I hope it won't kill you, that would be a terrible weight on my conscience :) Bella has her reasons for not calling it off before and those will be revealed in her next chapter.
Edward's POV coming soon!
Reviewer: springlilys86 Signed
Date: November 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- The Price of Being Edward
Oh no! That's terrible! I certainly hope you can fix this, missy! Grrrr! The emotion was almost too much to take! Please give is a break soon! Author's Response: I know this chapter left both Bella and Edward emotionally raw and shaken, and now Edward feels lost. Yeah, I'm a sucker for emotional moments and angst and this story has plenty of it. Don't worry, it won't be all tears and tension. Bella's POV up next. Thanks for sharing.
Summary: Bella has to say goodbye to her husband, who has been sent to Iraq. Story is written from Bella's point of view with possibly a few chapters from EPOV.
Canon pairings, All Human.
Rated for mature themes.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 58666
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2009 Updated: December 09, 2010
Reviewer: springlilys86 Signed
Date: February 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Vertigo
Ok, seriously, not cool! You'd better be updating this some, missy!
I really like the story, by the way!
Summary: A tale about a hockey-playing boy who loves his girl. This is Edward's story from Major Misconduct.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 185715
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2011 Updated: July 05, 2011
Reviewer: springlilys86 Signed
Date: July 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: The Proposal - A Future-shot
Love the ending of this story! Love that he's a Red Wing! I'm from Detroit and a big wing fan. I think Edward is everything the wings look for in a player!
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