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Penname: greenfirl35 [ Contact]
Real name: Krista Verdun
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Member Since: April 03, 2009
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Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin? 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: June 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Sweat
Wow! Two days later and I'm finally finished and of course now I have to wait for updates just like everyone else does! I don't know how I'm going to manage that! You are doing such an excellent job of writing Edward and Bella both - I love how you have incorporated the "unobservant line" from BD in here! Who is at the door? The sound of the three BOOMs would normally seem to indicae Emmett, but as Edward was just about to confess his love for her, my guess is Jacob! Can't wait to find out!
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed 
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Keep up the excellent work! That one is going to be hard to top, but I have every confidence that you will! :)
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Additions
I like #17 -how is she going to manage that? Is she going to get Carlisle to help her "donate" a pint or two? Why not - the ultimate gift to Edward? Can't wait to read more...:)
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Additions
Oh and the panties in the bed for retaliation? Diabolical!
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Consequences
That was seriously hot - Jasper and Edward? Come on! That was over the top, but in a really good way! :) Your Alice is cracking me up, too...
I liked his thought that she is making him fall apart without even being present and the "This woman" lines - excellent! You have the physical and the emotional perfectly combined! Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Unexpected
I absolutely agree - #10 Definitely deserves a review! Whew! Where to begin? "Abort! Abort! I can't handle dominant Edward." That pretty much sums up the whole thing, I almost couldn't handle that either! :) I love how the they worked together as a team both times - very sexy. And I love the last paragraph! Keep it up - I never want the list to end! Thanks
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Awkward
It's okay...delay of gratification only makes the next chapter all that much better! Nice one on the missing panties - gee i wonder where theycould be - not to hard to guess...Loved it!
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: June 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Laura - Which conference are you going to? The one in Iowa City? Good luck! IT is supposed to be an awesome conference! I was just asking because I'm from Iowa originally and now live just across the river in Illinois!
Another great chapter, by the way! I loved when Edward played vampire with Bella and can't wait for that upcoming, eagerly awaited for scene! Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The Iowa Summer Writers Workshop Festival. I know someone who did a weekend-length one 9 years ago and loved it. My friend and I are doing one of the week ones and I'm so stoked!
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: June 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Laura ~
Let me know how you like the workshop! I'm doing a three-day workshop here in Davenport, Iowa this week (Wednesday - Friday) and I would love to hear how they compare - maybe I'll try the Iowa City one next year! You're only going to be an hour away from two of your most addicted fans (myself and twilightzone). I hope you have a great time! :)
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Summary:  
He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?
OOC, canon at heart.
Banner by FatApolloLove
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: September 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Dazed and Invited
Sex on the Beach! Great chapter! I love the battle of wills between Rosalie and Bella!
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: September 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Night Marish
Best hangover cure
McDonalds hamburger with ketchup only and a coke - if still okay half an hour later, add fries! Works every time! Disgusting, but extremely helpful! :) Great chapter!
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: September 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 36: Curtain
Did you write this story from the very beginning with Possession in mind? Because it sounds like it was written specifically for this story - I'm totally awed. Even without B & E this story could stand alone with different characters - think about it!
Summary:
Amazing new banner by SoapyMayhem!!!! Thank you so much sweetie! You're fantastic!
Summary:
Robert has two more days in London before he has to return to his hectic life in LA. He has no intention of letting himself anywhere near emotional attachment. Despite this, he finds himself unable to resist the brave invite of a beautiful girl at a nightclub in Soho, thinking it would be a one night thing only.
Join us in the forum (Others)for chapter teasers, discussions or if you just want to say hi :)
Categories: Other Characters: Other Character, Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: Taking Chances - Stories and outtakes
Chapters: 32 Completed: No
Word count: 289305
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: May 05, 2011
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Declarations
Wow - that was excellent - I couldn't believe he was going to leave with just that little kiss! I liked the littel taste you gave us! And I really loved all of their soul-searching honesty and what Miranda revealed and how much it meant to Rob. Keep up the excellent writing - can't wait for their date and Patrick's do.
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: August 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Emotional Suicide
No need for a defense! It was excellent! :)
Summary: 
While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse. When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help. But of course, fate has plans for this man. Canon Couples. AU. DARK Themes.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: May 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: The Exam
I am so totally addicted to your story and am glad to be coming to it so late so I get to just read, read, read! You're doing a great job!
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: July 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: The Truth
I definitely enjoyed - thanks for the update! I really like the conversation with Alice and the walk at the end!
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: The Bracelet
IWell, you did warn us. t was necessary, but yeah, I kind of feel really sick to my stomach right now! Like I really should throw up. But that's not a bad thing - I think it means you achieved your purpose for the chapter because I am sure Bella felt exactly as I do...so sick for Edward's pain and wanting to maim and kill those responsible. Who is that guy? Ugh... Iwould write more but it's late and I really don't feel so good! Your chapter definitely evoked a visceral reaction - so way to go! I'm glad to have some partial answers and glad that E opened up to B! More later!
Summary: 
Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...
Beautiful banner by the awesome achelle131
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes
Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: October 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)
Crazy, ill-advised and too fast flings are definitely a must have at least once and comparatively - B & E actually waited far too long to fall under the too-fast category and it doesn't sound like it will be ill-fated either! I'm loving your story! :)
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: October 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Swate Tay, Plays (V)
Ha, ha! I love it! So classically southern! "But she didn't ask me what kind of Coke I wanted. I wanted Dr. Pepper." I laughed my ass off on that one as well as "Swate Tae Plays" - I moved to Tennessee from the Midwest in 7th grade and that Coke thing was so confusing at first - but funny! And then they made fun of me for calling it "pop"! Haha! Loved it once again!
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: March 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise
You so do not suck! We understand about RL pressures and I am so thankful that you even take time to write in the first place! I don't review as often as I should because RL (ie kids) sometimes interfere, but just know that we appreciate your updates whenever they happen and are often the high point of our days!
I love this story and I am so glad that James got arrested, but maybe they should move to SC to get away with him...just to play it safe? :)
Krista
Summary: 
*Takes place during New Moon in an alternate universe.
On March 16, 2006, the World changed, and everything and anything that the Cullens ever cared about was lost. They had to find their own way in this New World. Edward never wished to exist in a world where Bella didn't. Unfortunately, his family desperately needed him, so he'd stay to help them. And by doing so, he hoped to redeem himself for his failure to save the one creature he couldn't protect.
With rumours in the South of humans feeding off the living and stealing people from their beds, the Cullens have a responsibility to protect the ones they can from those monsters in the night. This was Edward's last chance to fight for his soul and his salvation. He would finally be ready to face Judgement day and be deemed worthy enough to be with Bella once again. Or would something or someone change the path he was destined to go down? Faith, hope and love are powerful things, and Edward is about to find out just how powerful they are.
Yes... this is the story that is set during a post-apocalyptic nuclear war. Just try the Prologue to get a feel for it before passing judgment. You might be surprised. Warning: There is violence and disturbing images the further the story goes along.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes
Word count: 315697
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2009 Updated: March 24, 2012
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: September 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: To Err is Human, To Forgive Divine
I'm loving this story and am really intrigued. Your mention of "Lost" really cracked me up - it would drive me crazy if the world ended and I didn't know the ending, but obviously Edward has other things make him crazy! :)
I'm still caught up with your prologue and what Jasper found in the cage. When I first read it, I thought it must be Bella with her "shield" being Maria's secret weapon. Now that Victoria has admitted to killing Bella, my theory is that Victoria lied to Edward and did the one thing to Bella that she thought would be even more painful than her death - she changed Bella and handed her over to Maria? Just a thought - can't wait to find out what happens!
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: September 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: That Which Does Not Kill Us Makes Us Stronger
I liked your going out with a whimper - it made me cry! So much better than the over-dramatic explosions and I liked how Edward was fading in and out, hearing the transmissions.
I also like how you added the New Moon dialogue when he thought he saw Bella!
Keep up the excellent writing!
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: September 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: To Understand All is to Forgive All
Awesome! - I can't write long because I have done the unthinkable, I have broken my own reading rule. I skipped ahead! I have never done that for a novel or a fan fiction? Unbelievable! Your story has actually made me lose my morals (but just tht one.)
Seriously though - your story is better (an more addictive than Lost) which is high praise from me. Stephenie gave us the love triangle and you have given ou the "hatch" (ooh can we name the compound the hatch? Hmmm...maybe just the medical facility? We also have the Others = Ravagers (Maria's gang). Actually I can't compare it to Lost - it's even better. I love all of the Mad Max stuff! Very inspired.
Bella really is a survivor! So what I want to know is did Victoria change her, or did V decide to torture B by giving her to Maria to fight in the cages multiple times? Because how could a human Bella beat the others? Unless she somehow managed to harness her "gift" even while still human (kind of like how when people have adrenaline rushes and can lift automobiles in extreme crisis, etc. (Hmmm...now where have I heard that one before? Maybe I could go "google it!" LOL) And then as she fought more frequently, she learned how to control it? Guess I'll just have to wait until after Canadian Thanksgiving! I'm looking forward to your update as much as New Moon!
I also love her name "Phoenix" - besides being where she was...found. Not necessarily turned - but found. Interesting word choice...hmmm. The symbolism of the phoenix and the flame and her rising from the flames of transformation to become a powerful vampire? Perfect!
Your writing is just so amazing! Thanks you for your dedication to this story!
Okay, I'm off to read the beginning which from what I can tell from my skimming, is also probably going to elicit a review as well! Go Esme!
Sincerely, Krista
Reviewer: greenfirl35 Signed
Date: October 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: To Understand All is to Forgive All
Love the new banner!
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