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Penname: hhawkes [Contact]
Real name: hillary
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Member Since: September 16, 2008
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I love to read and think this is a great way to try out lots of different types of authors. Since I began reading fanfiction I have been coming up with lots of story lines, but I am unable to get them on paper (I am not a writer, in anyway). I have one right now that keeps going through my head over and over. It is post breaking dawn and I do not think that I have read one like it before. Please let me know if you are looking for a new story and I can give you my idea. I don't expect anything in return, just let me know if you are writing it, so I can make sure I read it. 


 


Sorry if I never review, if you are on my favorites list then be assured I am reading and loving your story. If I have something to say I will say it, but I am such a bad writer that I have a hard time reviewing, even...lol.


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Power of Destiny by xsecretxkeeperx Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 275]
Summary:

She was sought after for her scent, but soon revealed to be more than just a monster's drug. It was her destiny to embrace destruction, and nothing could have prepared Bella for what lay ahead in the dark chambers and corridors of Volterra Castle. As far as she was concerned, her life ended the day she stepped foot in that cursed city. She didn't count on Edward Cullen.

With a soul as kind and pure as Bella's, how could anything evil come from her? Edward and Carlisle are willing to take the risk in rescuing this broken, beautiful girl, but the challenges are more than any of them could have imagined.

Carlisle on left, Aro in middle, Edward and Bella on right with angelic glow. Title in the middle with Aro.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Gianna, Heidi, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Destiny Series
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 47068
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: December 03, 2008


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: No Choice

Oh wow, I can't believe they are changing her. It must be because they found "the light".

Author's Response: I really tried to leave her human a little longer, but the Aro in my head would never risk Edward distroying Bella while she was still human. He's as in the dark about the prophecy as all of you haha ^_^

 
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Date: October 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Everything Changes

Crazy chapter. She is way powerful. I also like the extra sotry about Alice.

Author's Response: Danke ^_^ I really tried to incorperate alot of the original story into mine.

 
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Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Heaven Awaits

Awesome chapter, I just wish I knew what happened to get them home...

Author's Response: It will all be explained. I promise.

 
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Date: October 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Peace, Love, and Understanding

Yay! They are getting married!

Author's Response: They are ^_^ I wanted them to be together, but I couldn't change Edwards character so alas! we have a wedding! haha

 
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Date: November 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Ghost of Humanity

tough seeing charlie the day before her wedding.

Author's Response: yeah, it is hard. But I had to deal with the fact that she was in the same town as him and she hadn't delt with losing her humanity yet either. and it was important for another reason ;) but I'm not telling that one haha.

 
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Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Calm Before the Storm

very sweet wedding, but i am worried about the vision she had at the end, quite the cliffie!

Author's Response: teehee! I know. I was contemplating just leaving with our favorite couple in bed and starting the next chapter with the vision, but I wanted to give you all a little taste ^_^ I'm so glad you liked the wedding. I wanted there to be more, but I'm not to good with fluff.

 
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Date: November 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Will to Fight

NO! Not Edward!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm so sorry for the cliffy! I'll update as soon as the next chapter is foolproof. It's done and I love it but I want to look over it one more time to make sure it's golden. *notice how autor says nothing about Edward* << sorry for that to :-)

 
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Date: November 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Saying Goodbye, part 1

Wow! What an amazing gift! She just gave Rosalie and Esme everything they could ever want!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I always wanted Rose to be able to have her family and I got to make it happen ^_^ Thanks so much for the review!

 
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Date: November 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Saying Goodbye, part 2

What a good way to say goodbye!

Author's Response: Thank a million. I really liked it but I was worried as to how everyone else would like it. I'm amazed at the positive reviews I keep getting. Thank you, thank you, both for reviewing and for reading. It means the world to me, really!

 
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Date: December 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue

Awesome ending!! I loved it!! Your story was really great and I hope you buy yourself something nice for finishing it!!

Author's Response: haha ^_^ most definitely will do that! I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for all of the support and awesome reviews! You're amazing ^_^

 
I Like You So Much Better When You're Naked by marve, wish_girl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1473]
Summary:

Marve's Edward meets Wish_girl's Bella in high school. Hilarity and hijinks ensue.

 

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Categories: AU-Human, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 88732
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: December 14, 2008


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Push It

What a dick.

 
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Date: October 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Kiss With A Fist

Haha! It was funny, I liked it, I can't wait for more!

 
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Date: October 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Laid

Funny! keep em coming!

 
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Date: October 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Why Can't I

LOL! Another good chapter!

 
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Date: October 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Bigmouth Strikes Again

I didn't realize how much Bella really liked him. If he was only her second then I guess she wasn't the slutty girl she portrayed. I am interested in where this story is headed.

 
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Date: October 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: When The Levee Breaks

I think Bella is already too deep in love with Edward to actually care about James anymore, but I will have to wait to see.

 
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Date: October 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: The Rapture

uh oh!

 
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Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Sing For Absolution

LOL!

 
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Date: October 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Run Baby Run

Uh, oh...Bella ran away...

 
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Date: October 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Gone Daddy Gone

I don't think she is necessarily afraid of Edward, I think that she is probably afraid of the entire situation.

 
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Date: October 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Love Lockdown

Why can't she be sane and accepting of his love?

 
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Date: October 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Writing To Reach You

LOL...there is no way he can hold out...I don't think either of them can.

 
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Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: How Can I Tell You?

Wow, Edward actually made it through their first meeting without having sex with her...

 
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Date: October 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Disarm

I hope she won't be pissed at him for buying her bike.

 
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Date: November 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Sweetest Perfection

Good thing she did that for him, cause i can't imagine the blueballs he must have had the whole day.

 



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