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Penname: hhawkes [Contact]
Real name: hillary
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Member Since: September 16, 2008
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I love to read and think this is a great way to try out lots of different types of authors. Since I began reading fanfiction I have been coming up with lots of story lines, but I am unable to get them on paper (I am not a writer, in anyway). I have one right now that keeps going through my head over and over. It is post breaking dawn and I do not think that I have read one like it before. Please let me know if you are looking for a new story and I can give you my idea. I don't expect anything in return, just let me know if you are writing it, so I can make sure I read it. 


 


Sorry if I never review, if you are on my favorites list then be assured I am reading and loving your story. If I have something to say I will say it, but I am such a bad writer that I have a hard time reviewing, even...lol.


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Reviews by hhawkes
 
Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
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Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: Monster

I wasn't thinking any of the things that your a/n implied. I actually understood this chapter. He thinks she is already happy with Jacob and that she can continue to be. If he were to find out that Jake is about to become a wolf though, I am sure he wouldn't mind breaking up their relationship. On a happier note though, I am happy that she at least was able to convince him to stay in Forks and in school.

 
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Date: November 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 26: Over

good chapter, i think writing it like a robot as you stated was good cause that was what bella had become.

 
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Date: November 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 27: Survival

so when is Edward going to tell her the truth??

Author's Response:

That's the big question, isn't it?  And how do you know he already didn't tell her the truth?  Maybe he doesn't love her at all...  Seriously, things are progressing, but, of course, I can't give you too many details w/o spoiling my own sick, twisted fun.

 
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Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 28: Fine

Whoa! I did not see that coming. Will there ever be more Edward and Bella action??

Author's Response:

It's like 80% E/B action coming up.  He's not going to be in the background anymore. 

 
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Date: December 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 29: Scarred

Didn't she hear what Edward said to Jake? How could she not know that he was talking about giving her up?? He loves her, so much!

 
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Date: January 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Uninvited

Aww...he can't stay away!!

 
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Date: January 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Relentless

She is way, way too stubborn!!

 
Summary:

Bella feels both strangely attracted to and repulsed by the standoffish boy who sits next to her in English. She and her best friend, Alice, are looking for love, and they refuse to settle for anything less. ExB, JxA. A modern 'Pride and Prejudice.'


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 12361
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2008 Updated: October 14, 2008


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

What a good story so far! I hope Bella doesn't react stupid to this question, I hope she says yes!!

 
Don't Cry Out by LollirotXoX Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 69]
Summary: Then I smelt it. His scent, mixed with hers in the most horrible way. I had never felt an anger such as what exploded from me just then,and I had never run so fast in my existence. I reached the door I knew she was behind,fearing I was too late to save her.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 9972
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2008 Updated: July 29, 2008


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Haunted

I think that he should watch the tape and I think that you should maybe write about some of the struggles that they go through. Like, does she still want Edward as badly, does she even let her touch him, does she really need him or do they gradually grow apart because this has made her so numb and distant? I understand if you don't want to continue, its your story, but it would be interesting.

 
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The day Bella went to the Cullens’ home for the first time.  Starting at Chapter 15 of Twilight from various Cullen perspectives.  This story is the behind the scenes look at the day Bella met the Cullens.  What did they think and what went on where Bella could not see them?  

 

 

Carlisle’s POV, Esme’s POV, Jasper’s POV and Emmett's.

 

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Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper
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Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 17689
[Report This] Published: July 22, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Siblings - Jasper's POV

I really enjoyed it! I thought you did an excellent job. Another chapter from Emmett would be excellent. Especially since he doesn't get to meet her the first time until the baseball game.

 
Their Singer by SarahJayne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 498]
Summary:

In Twilight, Edward told Bella that if her blood sang to James like it had to Edward, it would've meant a fight right there in the field. What if this was the case? Follow Bella as she is kidnapped and turned by James, and the Cullens' fevered attempts to get her back. Features James/Bella, but this is ultimately an Edward/Bella story. "NC-17" for language, situations, and eventual sexual content.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
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Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 34456
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I hope that the next chapter comes soon! Its a really interesting story, can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I hope that Edward saves her from disgusting James. Anyways, the story is going great and you seem to update quite often, so Thanks!

 
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Date: October 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Good, I am glad that Jasper killed James. It didn't matter if he loved Bella, he was not Edward!

 
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Date: October 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

She has to be his, she has to be!!

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yay, they are together again!! Good story, great job!!

 
Summary:

 

Did you ever wonder why Bella was so comfortable around vampires? After meeting someone she never expected in the clearing after Victoria's death, Bella hears a story and realizes her acceptance of all things supernatural may just....run in the family.

 *Attention - the story has been given a makeover! Chapters have been deleted and it is starting new and fresh and how I wanted it to go - but the idea is still the same, just a little different look.*

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 26708
[Report This] Published: July 27, 2008 Updated: January 12, 2009


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting, I am interested to see what this is all about.

 
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Date: October 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmm...I really have no idea where this is going, but I really find it intriguing.

Author's Response: Have faith! It needs a few more background chapters before really going anywhere!

 
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Date: October 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Cue Carlisle...

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

wow that answered a TON of questions!!!

Author's Response: Oh thank you, I thought it might never go anywhere :)

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Uh oh, it must be some kind of weird princess of Volturra ring or something.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Not much gets past Bella. It makes sense that they were saved in Volterra now, I never really thought that Aro would give in that easily...

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow, its great that she is finally able to talk to someone about everything that happened.

 
Music Lessons by blondie Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

Music Lessons 

WINNER:  Mr. Perfect at the Mystic Awards

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WINNER:  Best Daddy Edward at The Twilight Awards

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A missing moment from Breaking Dawn - some bonding time between Edward and Nessie... and Jacob!  Some Jacob/Rosalie action as well...

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward, Jacob, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2014
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2008


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Music Lessons

that was cute!

Author's Response:

thanks!

blondie

 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4550]
Summary:

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After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2008 Title: Wishing Star

I like this story, a lot! Its a little depressing at times, but funny at other times, very sweet throughout and hot when the time is right! Great job, I hope its not over yet!

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09, 2008 Title: Wishing Star

Very good chapter, I love that everyone is so worried about her!

 




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