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Penname: hhawkes [Contact]
Real name: hillary
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Member Since: September 16, 2008
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I love to read and think this is a great way to try out lots of different types of authors. Since I began reading fanfiction I have been coming up with lots of story lines, but I am unable to get them on paper (I am not a writer, in anyway). I have one right now that keeps going through my head over and over. It is post breaking dawn and I do not think that I have read one like it before. Please let me know if you are looking for a new story and I can give you my idea. I don't expect anything in return, just let me know if you are writing it, so I can make sure I read it. 


 


Sorry if I never review, if you are on my favorites list then be assured I am reading and loving your story. If I have something to say I will say it, but I am such a bad writer that I have a hard time reviewing, even...lol.


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Reviews by hhawkes
 
Summary:

Full Summary: "Forever is not a word... rather a place where two lovers go when true love takes them there."- Unknown. It has often been said that one never forgets their first love. What happens when the memory of that love haunts you? Bella and Edward have spent years apart, each living a semi-contented life. When fate unexpectedly brings them together once more can they find a way to heal the wound's they've inflicted on each other and find a way to be happy again?

 

AU/AH Story.

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Thanks to the incredible MrsC for the faboulous banner!! 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 67563
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: July 09, 2009


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

What did she do to him, cancel the wedding?

Author's Response:

uhmmm how can I answer that... well they obviously didn't get married... so yeah she did "cancel" the wedding, but she got the message across in the worst way possible... i think i said to much.. LOL! don't pressure me for information!!:P

everything will be revealed!

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Wow I forgot about Tanya too, that sucks.



Author's Response:

LOL, I figured people would forget.. but, alas, she's still there.. :P

thank you for reviewing!

 
Summary: Bella's life was a fairytale until tragedy struck not once, but twice, changing the course of her life forever.  No matter what life throws her way, Bella accepts her life and trudges on.  Now, as she starts college, Bella meets some new friends who try to help her regain her fairytale life.  Will she meet prince charming in the process? 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 51114
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: August 27, 2009


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Fairy God Alice

Its a good story! Edward was probably just freaked out that he was all gross and stuff, but I don't know, I will be waiting to find out!

Author's Response: Yeah, there's nothing like b.o. to say hello--lol!  Anyway, that might be part of it--maybe.  I'm a lot of help, aren't I?  Heck, I don't even know where the story will go yet.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Conspiracy

Uh-Oh, not Jacob Black...

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Crashing Lunch

Yay! I am so glad that Jacob came to lunch because it forced Edward to do something about it!!! Are you finished now, or is there more to come? I hope there is more!!

Author's Response: Nope.  More to come.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Getting in Line

How sweet. It's kind of sad that she won't accept his love right away, but I understand, it makes the story more interesting!

Author's Response: Oh, she does love him, but she feel he needs to grow up a little, which, he does.  But he's still really hot and sexy, and I'm sure that he will make things a little harder for his competition, especially since he's living with her.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: How Not To Take Care of a Damsel in Distress

Haha!

Author's Response:

Glad I made you laugh.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: How to Treat a Lady

Alice warned him not to do that...

Author's Response: Yes, she did.  Not sure what I'm going to do with it yet.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The Answer

Yay, what a cute couple, as always!

Author's Response:

Yeah, I kinda' like them too.  Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Shiner

Poor Edward!!

Author's Response: Yeah.  He's so upset, bless his heart.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Moving Week

He really is being ruled more by hormones lately, lol!

Author's Response: Yep.  He is.  Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: High Def

Hmm...hopefully they will be able to get that money back, but I doubt it.



Author's Response:

I doubt that too, but it will turn out really well--you'll see.  Thanks for reading, hhawkes.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Textalicious

Uh oh! How did he find her?



Author's Response:

Victoria told her family what she saw, and there's the internet.  He's pretty resourceful.  Thanks for reading, hhawkes.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Unwanted Visitor

Edward is so adorable and loving, I just wish he were real sometimes...lol.



Author's Response:

My hubby is adorable and loving, but much more in an Emmett way, which suits my personality.  There have been times where he's "channeled Edward", but not many.  I think all of us wish that he was real.  Thanks for reading, hawkes!

 
Edward's Choice by happyphantom Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary: What was Edward’s thought process as he made the decision to send a wedding invitation to Jacob Black? Discover what his motivation was in inviting Jacob. See what he thinks of his proposal, the wedding invitation, Bella’s reasons for marrying him and her decision not to invite Jacob. This story fills a missing moment at the end of Eclipse.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1690
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2008


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Edward's Choice

I rather enjoyed this trip into Edward's mind. Thanks!

 
Summary: Bella Swan, a resident, is struggling with the realities of a medical career when she mets attending Dr. Edward Masen, a real life Dr. Love. Can he save her from her own self doubt? AU Human, OOC.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 14862
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: October 15, 2008


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, they are horny! LOL! I would be too, Dr. Masen is hot!

 
Summary: What happens later that night that Edward disables Bella's truck.  A missing moment from Eclipse.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 792
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: September 22, 2008


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

cute!

 
Summary:

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Bella went cliff diving, but it didn't turn out so well. She broke her back. A decade later, Edward reappears in her life on the same night she loses her best friend and husband to a freak accident. Now a graduate student in Women's Studies, Bella isn't thrilled to see him. But when the Cullens re-enter Bella's life, they bring change, hope, and a new joint project that will require all their expertises.

Also, you can find a SPANISH version here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4829851/1/En_un_parpadeo

AND you can find images for various things like Esme's house, Edward's piano, Bella's wheelchair and Rose's car on my ff.net profile page:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~thatwritr

OR in my LJ gallery:

http://pics.livejournal.com/that_writr/gallery/000010z2

Special Update:

For personal reasons (a ridiculously full teaching schedule and being recently put in charge of a bi-annual local conference and ongoing project), I am no longer able to reply to reviews and questions. But that said, I wanted to give a BIG THANK YOU to EVERYBODY for the wonderful feedback and kind words that have been sent my way since the completion of this story in August 2009. I do still check my messages about once every 1-2 weeks and read *every* review. I just have too many to reply to anymore, but I didn’t want anyone to think I was ignoring her/him in particular, or didn’t appreciate readers taking time to leave a review. Writing this story was tons of fun and I’m thrilled readers seem to enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed the chance to write it. I can’t tell you how flattering that is!!! As I used to reply to all reviews, I feel a little badly about this decision, but work has been requiring virtually all of my time since the new (academic) year began.

Best to all of you in 2010 and beyond!

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Completed: Yes Word count: 221619
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2008 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Another great chapter, I'll be waiting for more!

Author's Response: Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow. I am not a big fan of AU's cause I just want Edward and Bella to be together no matter what, but this is excellent. I have really enjoyed it so far. I can't wait to read the rest!

Author's Response: Thank you!  And Edward and Bella will wind up together, never fear, but hopefully on a solid footing. :-)

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

wow, that was a good chapter! I love how Esme sees something between them after all this time.



Author's Response: Thank you!  And yeah, Edward still loves her.  For Bella, it's more a memory of her infatuation.  She'll have to fall in love with him again. :-)  But there IS still a spark!

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Another good chapter, of course! I bet Bella was happy (or at least intrigued) to hear that Edward now specialized in her very problem. Maybe someday he will be able to help her out of the wheelchair.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

On Bella's disability, she has a severed spinal chord, so there's not much Edward can do for her medically, especially ten years out.  More than that, I won't say. :-)  But you'll find out the story of why he's a neurosurgeon in a future chapter.  (Not quite the next one, but soonish.)

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Its too bad that she didn't let Edward take her, but it was interesting to hear Emmett's take on things. Also, I got a little choked up when she went to her late husband's grave, it must be hard for her to know she will not be buried next to her husband...maybe she doesn't plan to ever be buried...

Author's Response: Thank you!  I think Bella's just not quite ready yet to spend a lot of extended time with Edward with nobody else around.  That'll change. :-)

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hmm...that was a very informative chapter. I liked at the end though when he was able to call her and just talk to her like old friends.

Author's Response: Thanks!  And yes, it's very important that he can finally react to her like a "normal" person, not like a teenager.  I can remember essentally "stalking" a boy I liked many years ago.  I'd go ride my bike over near his house; I had hs license-plate and phone number memorized.  I'd call the house just hoping to hear his voice answer "Hello."  It was all very silly.  But I was also about 13-14.  Edward's 100-and-something.  He shouldn't be acting like a teenager ... except of course, he's still a teenager too. Ha.  But he's starting to outgrow it, a bit.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Aww...they got to spend the day together!!

Author's Response: Yes, they did!

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Aww...he thinks shes pretty.

Author's Response: He does. :-)  And thanks!

 




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