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Penname: hhawkes [ Contact]
Real name: hillary
Status: Member
Member Since: September 16, 2008
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I love to read and think this is a great way to try out lots of different types of authors. Since I began reading fanfiction I have been coming up with lots of story lines, but I am unable to get them on paper (I am not a writer, in anyway). I have one right now that keeps going through my head over and over. It is post breaking dawn and I do not think that I have read one like it before. Please let me know if you are looking for a new story and I can give you my idea. I don't expect anything in return, just let me know if you are writing it, so I can make sure I read it.
Sorry if I never review, if you are on my favorites list then be assured I am reading and loving your story. If I have something to say I will say it, but I am such a bad writer that I have a hard time reviewing, even...lol.
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Summary: Three very different women, with one thing in common, must deal with life, love and betrayal.   
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 71422
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2008 Updated: February 16, 2009
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed 
Date: February 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The End
Great story, lots of twists, you all should be proud of yourselves!! I kinda figured it was a twin thing, but I was thrown off from that when Anthony mentioned something to Bella, many chapters ago, about being in love once, but then the neighbor got in the way, so I thought that maybe he was talking about Angela and Ben. Anyways, you kept me reading with anticipation. Sorry to see it end, but it has a good ending, so great job!!
Summary: Click here to watch the video trailer created by lilabut.
At a pivotal moment in New Moon, a simple choice alters the course of Bella's future, and she is forced to endure several more weeks before Edward's eventual return to Forks. Victoria, a pack of young werewolves, and the blossoming of an undeniable bond become the least of Bella's concerns as she undergoes her own supernatural transformation. It turns out vampires and werewolves aren’t the only things that go bump in the night. Edward/Bella/Jacob
A huge thank you to placeofthunder for the lovely banner!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Kim, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 145984
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2008 Updated: August 30, 2010
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 17, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Crutch
How interesting. I don't know if you are still working on this or not, but it really makes me want to read more. Thanks!
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 19, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Scab
Another good chapter. Although, I love Edward more than Jacob, I still love Jacob and like seeing him happy. Can't wait to read more!
Summary: When something horrible happens to Bella will she be able to recover? A life she leaves behind haunts her with shame, grief, and depression but that is in the past. Will love find its way into her heart after the cruelest of acts? A darker take on the romance between Bella and Edward.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 6345
[Report This] Published: August 31, 2008 Updated: March 29, 2009
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I like it. I think it is a little dark, but that's alright, it makes it unique. I think that this is going to be a good story, I hope that you are able to update again soon!
Summary: 
Bella attempts to live a normal life after Edward and the Cullen's leave her. Finding herself face to face with an Edward look a like, Andy Masen, she hasn't a clue how he will lure her back into the world of the undead. She will learn how the vampire came into existence, and the political war that is stirring in the bowels of the vampire world. She must chose her side, either with her newfound friend, Andy, or the love of her life, Edward. Where do her allegiances lie? Join Bella on the painstaking journey, and the ride of her life, that may just lead to the end of it.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Other Character, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Word count: 67272
[Report This] Published: August 31, 2008 Updated: February 24, 2009
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Safe
yay! another good chapter. can't wait for more!
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 16, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Breeze
I like this story a lot, it really is an interesting take on things. I can't wait to see what happens next!! Oh, and I totally noticed Edward in the breeze.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: Enough
Why is Edward being like this, keeping her away? Author's Response: When you really love someone, you'll do what you have to just to see to it that they live the best life possible. Sometimes you have to love them and want the best for them enough to let them go.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 13: Evolutionary Thought
Craziness. I knew that Andy had to be some sort of vampire, but its almost like he's a half-breed or even a quarter-breed. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: January 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Shatter
Very interesting chapter, but I feel completely and utterly confused by it all.
Summary: Meet Bella- a secretary, stuck in the drudgery of office life. She has no boyfriend, and spends her days lusting after her boss- the confident, clever, sexy Edward Cullen who has probably slept with half the people in the office already. EdXBel. ALL HUMAN
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 13656
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2008 Updated: October 29, 2008
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 26, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Voulez Vous Coucher Avec Moi, Ce Soir?
Good story. I will be waiting to see what happens at the club!
Summary: 
This is an AU Story that starts a year after Bella gives birth to Renesmee.
Edward and the rest of the Cullens left when Renesmee was born.
How will Bella learn to accept her fate? Will she mope forever--like an insane never-ending continuation of AU New Moon--or will she strengthen and think clearly for once?? You'll also experience the budding romance between Renesmee and Jacob as Nessie grows and grows.
A confrontation is bound to happen...be there when it does! ;]
Thanks so much to RedRose15 for the fabulous banner!!! (And to the Twilight Awards for the 2nd place one.)
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 15830
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2008 Updated: April 06, 2009
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: November 15, 2008
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Disquieted
Hmm...interesting story so far. The only thing is, why did they all leave, it doesn't make sense. Sure, Edward could have left, but I just don't see Rose leaving Ness, no matter what Edward thought, Esme for that matter either. Also, I don't think that Alice would be able to leave Bella again, especially without somekind of constant contact. i guess I could see Alice leaving though because Ness makes her head hurt.
Author's Response: questions, questions, questions... i'll try to answer those in the story as best as i can! and keep in mind that bella is no longer knowing the cullens as who they used to be. (uhm, BD changed everyone's personalities?!)
Summary: Alternate Universe
Bella has had a less than perfect childhood, and due to certain circumstances she is now the human pet of James's coven.
Now the Cullens have kidnapped her to lure James out. How will Edward react to her blood? Will Bella ever find love again?
In various POVs, rated NC-17 just in case.
Vertigo is officially on HIATUS LEAVE
because I have gotten slightly bored of it and I think everyone else has too.
I will continue (and finish it; I think in several more chapters - maybe 5?), when inspiration chooses to pop back into my mind.
Please check out my other stories!
(if you don't mind a little advertising... ;))
XX/XY: The Story of Cesario if you like AH and/or Hana Kimi
Seraphim, if you like AU Twilight/Fantasy-Scifi themes
Charcoal: A One-shot if you like AH/JasperXBella pairings.
Orange if you like AH and a significant age difference between Edward (older) and Bella (younger)
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 58371
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2008 Updated: March 27, 2009
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: October 15, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: 8: The Sweetest Thing
What a good story so far! I am glad that Edward got some kind of revenge!! James and his coven must know what is about to happen...uh oh!
Author's Response: Hehehe thaaanks! I can't wait to start writing about James :P Because he's a big part of this story but he doesn't get much attention... Although there wouldn't be much of him. Ah, well. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: October 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: 9: La Valse
Was that last part a dream? Was it James or was it Jasper??? Update as soon as you can, thanks!
Author's Response: :O
You know I can't say! But thanks for reading :D I'll try to update ASAP
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: October 25, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: 10: The End
How can this not be the end, if she's dead?
Author's Response: :| Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: October 30, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: 11: Dark Chocolate
Too bad about her wrist. It was interesting to know why James kept Bella around!
Author's Response: I know :( But I thought it'd be strange if she almost died, but came away unscathed afterward. Thanks very much for reading! (and reviewing, and rating too :D)
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