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Penname: hhawkes [ Contact]
Real name: hillary
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Member Since: September 16, 2008
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I love to read and think this is a great way to try out lots of different types of authors. Since I began reading fanfiction I have been coming up with lots of story lines, but I am unable to get them on paper (I am not a writer, in anyway). I have one right now that keeps going through my head over and over. It is post breaking dawn and I do not think that I have read one like it before. Please let me know if you are looking for a new story and I can give you my idea. I don't expect anything in return, just let me know if you are writing it, so I can make sure I read it.
Sorry if I never review, if you are on my favorites list then be assured I am reading and loving your story. If I have something to say I will say it, but I am such a bad writer that I have a hard time reviewing, even...lol.
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Summary: Edward Cullen is an Army brat, who has his entire life planned out perfectly, and can't wait to get out of this utterly dull town of Forks, WA. But then a whirlwind in the form of Bella Swan enters his life and before long, he can't imagine his life without her. Will he sacrifice his chance at what could be a beautiful life with her? And is Bella willing to make that same sacrifice... AU/AH, possibly some OOC
Rated for situations and lemons later on...
©2009 kyla713. All rights reserved worldwide.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 121063
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed 
Date: January 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Fairytale Life
She couldn't stop thinking about him even on a date with someone else.
Summary: After surviving a horrifying attack that killed her husband and child, Isabella Swan finds herself being protected by ex-criminal Edward Masen. Hidden by a new face and a new idenity, Edward assumes that Bella is safe. But Bella does not want to be protected. She will stop at nothing to seek revenge on the people who destroyed her life, even if it means getting herself killed.
Special thanks to Anne Cullen for making the awesome banner!
Categories: AU-Human, Crossover Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Lauren, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 29069
[Report This] Published: January 19, 2009 Updated: March 16, 2009
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: February 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I hope that Casius gets what's coming to him. Author's Response: Hmmmm, we shall see, yes?
Summary: Edward travelled half way across the country to forget what happened with his little sister's best friend. It didn't work.
MISSING MOMENT FROM HINDSIGHT- read that first to understand this. EB AH
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 621
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2009 Updated: January 24, 2009
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: January 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Distracted
Interesting. Is this a one-shot or are you planning on continuing it until he finally decides to return? Author's Response: It is a one-shot, sorry :-)
Thanks for the review!
Summary:  
While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse. When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help. But of course, fate has plans for this man. Canon Couples. AU. DARK Themes.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: October 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: The Bracelet
I am not great at reviewing since it seems that everytime I try to do so my 8-month old finds a away to stop me or write for me, so I apologize for that. I just wanted to say though that I do love this story and when I saw that there was and update today I got very excited and it made my day, so thank you for that. I thought it was a really good chapter, a lot of information, so worth the wait. Can't wait for anther one!
Summary: 
A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.
He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is hunting him.
Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company. She's also a 110 year old vampire.
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In the MYSTIC AWARDS:
GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE
CUTE CATEGORY:
Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes
Word count: 200265
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2010
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: August 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37~~Nomads~~
I have been following your story for the last month or so, and I am sorry to say I am horrible about making sure I reivew, so this is probably the first I will be saying anything. Your story is well written and a lot happened. I like the reversal stories like this, but a lot of times it just follows the same Twilight plotline too closely. I like how you did this and I like that they are older and you had your own story line. I have enjoyed reading this story and I can't wait for the epilogue. The only request that I have is please make sure that you are including an update on Jess, Mike, and the baby, I thought they were good characters. Also, I would love to see how they explain Edward's absense/death, sometimes people leave that out, it doesn't really bother me, but it leaves everything covered. Again, great story, thanks for letting me read it! Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review...I'm glad that you liked the changes I made...
There will definitely be more of the Newtons in the epilogue...and just what Edward's life is going to be like as a vampire...and whether he will be IN or OUT of the spotlight...
Thanks again, for reading, reviewing...and the lovely stars!
Kathie
Summary: Belittled and verbally abused by Renee, Bella thinks poorly of herself. Heading back to Forks to live with her brother Emmett, will her friendship with Edward blossom into romance? Can he make Bella see that she’s worth so much more than she thinks?
Thanks to falconcranelove for the amazing banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 60539
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: December 14, 2009
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: August 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 (vjgm)
Wow, I just started reading your story and I have to say it is really good so far. I feel so bad for this Bella and when Emmett was thinking about how mad she was that she hadn't contacted him in over a year, I almost cried. It seems like the emotional trauma is so major for her. I am not really understanding one thing though, did she finish high school? Were we just supposed to assume that there weren't many days left, so since she was a good student that she didn't really need to go the last few weeks or days? I guess its not a major part to the story, so not a big deal. My other concern is that why didn't Charlie or Emmett try to go get her sooner. I guess, you did kinda mention that though, when you said that Renee had told Charlie she was doing wonderful. How horrid for her. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Summary: 
A special thanks to NaughtySparkle for the banner!
HE'S SMIRKY. SHE'S SNARKY. AND THEY'RE FLOATING DOWN THE RIVER OF DeNIAL TOGETHER!
Edward Cullen is a well-known director for an independent film company, Masen Masterworks. He is filming his latest project in the town of Forks, Washington. Bella Swan is a baker for her best friend Alice at Alice's Wonderland Cafe and Mad Tea Party, also located in Forks. Desiderata is latin for “desired things or something that is needed, wanted.” This story is meant to represent that state of feeling for both Bella and Edward. What happens when their pig-headed stubbornness gets in the way of true love and happiness? Based upon the Desiderata of Happiness by Max Ehrmann and Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 151974
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2009 Updated: November 26, 2009
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: August 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: IT'S RAINING MEN
I just started reading your story, and I have to say, I love it. She is really snarky, its funny. I am looking forward to more, I always like the T-shirt sayings, too! Author's Response: So glad you found the story and enjoy it! I'm having a blast writing it, certainly. I think the t-shirts kind of say it all, don't they? Makes me wish I could wear them to work, too!
Summary: Bella has been with Jacob Black for 2 years in what she thinks is a loving stable relationship which turns out to be anything but. Fed up with her routine filled safe life she applies to New York University on a whim. With the help of her cousin Rosalie she decides to take the leap that will change her life. Will life in New York City be everything she hoped for or will she crash and burn?
AU-All Human, Canon Couples
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 41963
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2009 Updated: February 08, 2010
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: August 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: A Save Situation
Well, I just started reading this story, and typically I don't comment until I am caught up, unless I feel the need. I am a little confused, it seemed like you had said in the description that they were together 4 years and then Bella kept thinking 1 year, but she said she was 20 and that they met when she was 16. Hmm, well I guess I am a little confused by that, but I am going to read on because I really like your writing style and it is an excellent start so far.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: August 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: A Mess To Be Made
Ok, well this chapter, chapter 2, cleared up my earlier confusion2 years it is. I am glad that Bella didn't just stand back and run off, Jake deserved a good groin kick and face punch.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: August 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Me vs Maradona Vs Elvis
Wow, he really is the definition of emo, isn't he. Great job on the Edward angst!
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: August 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Jesus Christ
He gets more emo every chapter. So, that was his first bj? Is he a virgin?
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: August 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Ne Me Quitte Pas
Wow, so Bella is musical too, huh? That should be interesting. I think that Angela and Bella will be good roomates too. Angela must be a little older than Bella though, right? I guess it doesn't really matter for the story, I am just thinking that maybe Bella is the only underager. Anyways, I can't wait for more, you are an excellent writer.
Summary: 
Edward Cullen and Bella Swan have been married for three years and are on their way to Seattle, Washington to commence Alice Cullen and Jasper Whitlock's upcoming wedding. It is going to be a momentous occasion filled with family togetherness and heartwarming love.
The only problem is that Edward and Bella have been separated for three months, can’t stand each other, and—oh yeah—their family has no idea.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 162323
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2009 Updated: May 09, 2010
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Tonight Won't Last Forever
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