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Penname: hhawkes [ Contact]
Real name: hillary
Status: Member
Member Since: September 16, 2008
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I love to read and think this is a great way to try out lots of different types of authors. Since I began reading fanfiction I have been coming up with lots of story lines, but I am unable to get them on paper (I am not a writer, in anyway). I have one right now that keeps going through my head over and over. It is post breaking dawn and I do not think that I have read one like it before. Please let me know if you are looking for a new story and I can give you my idea. I don't expect anything in return, just let me know if you are writing it, so I can make sure I read it.
Sorry if I never review, if you are on my favorites list then be assured I am reading and loving your story. If I have something to say I will say it, but I am such a bad writer that I have a hard time reviewing, even...lol.
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Summary: Bella Swan changed her life and ideals for a guy . . . who then dumped her in the middle of a mall. Even if she's happier now and her life is back on track, she still needs to realize that the past is the past.
Enter Edward Cullen, devastatingly handsome and hopelessly in love with Bella after knowing her for only a short time. Can he prove to Bella that she's not the type who should be loved and left? Can he help her get over her past and put her self doubts behind her?
Rated M for later chapters.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 95381
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2013
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed 
Date: December 30, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Guys and Dolls
Its understandable that she isn't trying to get into a relationship, but it really isn't cool of James to make out with some other girl in front of the one he is supposed to be at the bar with. Author's Response: Right? I wonder what he's playing at...hmmm..guess we'll find out soon enough. LOL
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: January 07, 2009
Title: Love Me or Leave Me
Now I am imagining Edward in a cowboy hat, yum! Author's Response: right?! yummy. it was actually inspired by my hubby, whom i met the same way this bella met edward, and who was also wearing a cowboy hat. hee.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: January 09, 2009
Title: Love Me or Leave Me
Wow, an hour and a half on the phone he must really like her.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: January 15, 2009
Title: Love Me or Leave Me
Sexy Cowboy Edward is in a band? I don't think it gets much better than that. Author's Response: LOL. right?! i don't know if i could handle a real-life cowboyhatewearingguitarplayingedward. guhhh. my head would explode.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: January 20, 2009
Title: Love Me or Leave Me
Aww...they didn't kiss but a hug is still cute! Author's Response: i know! it always bugs me when i want them to kiss and they don't. heehee. but just you wait... ;)
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: January 23, 2009
Title: Love Me or Leave Me
She shouldn't feel worthless, obviously Edward feels somethting for her. Author's Response: edward adores her already. but bella has some issues to work through. more will be revealed in future chapters! thanks so much for reading!
Summary: 
Inspired by Taylor Swift's 'You Belong With Me'.
Bella has been Edward's best friend since third grade. Now it's senior year, and nothing [not even his girlfriend Tanya, or the creeper James, or even her own insecurities] is going to stop Bella from making Edward see that he belongs with her.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 53887
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2010
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 18, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Tuesday
Wow! They are way too close for him to have a girlfriend. Good start!
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Party 'n Park
Where did Edward go? To Tanya's?? I sure hope not!!
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Bleachers
Wow, things get more and more ackward every day for them. I really hope that they finally are able to talk about things, or that he at least breaks up with Tanya.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Weak
Crazy Edward does need some kind of name tags.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: January 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Big World
She should feel really loved that he wants to be with her!!
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: January 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Stupid Girl
Was Tanya trying to tell Bella that Edward broke up with her?
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: January 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: The Other Woman
She is right to stop the making out with him. If he loves her, he would be with her and only her, not Tanya. I think they need to actually talk about whats going on between them. Maybe it really is time for Bella to reveal her feelings.
Summary:  With Bella's love of cooking and Alice's flair for parties their dream comes true of owning their own business. Both Bella and Edward have pasts to deal with. Will love help them and can they help each other?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 65 Completed: Yes
Word count: 271821
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: April 26, 2009
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 19, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Really a great start! I can't wait to read more of it! Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 19, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
LOL, their mom is funny! Author's Response: thank you. there is more comming belive me! Author's Response: thank you. there is more comming belive me!
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 20, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I don't like that Edward is a jerk, but I understand, at least he's not brooding. Anyways I like this Rosalie a lot! Author's Response: thank you for noticing that. there is a reason why he is the way he is. it will come out.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Bella didn't seem to find Edward all that attractive. Author's Response: you are not the only one to say that but things will change as the story goes further along. thank you!
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Short, but sexy! Author's Response: it was short because of the next chapter! it is all about Edward. thank you for reading.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Hmm..its a great story and very well written, I am enjoying it considerably. The only complaint (and its more like constructive critism) that I have is that I get a little confused at times because you jump from POV's rather quickly at times without specifying who's it is. Its still really good, but sometimes trying to figure out who's mind we are in is a tad bit distracting. Again, its really meant to help you not hurt you, I really do like the story! Author's Response: i am sorry for that. i am having problems taking this from ff to here. i will try to make things more clearer. thanks for reading.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Aww...Alice and Jasper are so cute!!
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Edward mentioned something about not talking to any women except in his family, but I thought he was dating Tanya for appearances or something like that. Author's Response: Yes he dated Tanya but it was more like a date here or there. Tanya was just a blip in his life compared to his mother or even Rosalie. thanks for reading.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
What a fun little suprise this will be! Author's Response: thank you for reading. there are more suprises comming!
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 29, 2008
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Well I don't really understand the rules to the competition, but as long as Bella does, thats what matters! Can't wait to see how it goes! Author's Response: i took the rules off food tv and tweaked them a bit. i hope you enjoy what is to come and thank you for reading.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 29, 2008
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Wow, what a sad story, but thank you for telling it from Emmett's POV and not Edward's, it would just be too hard to hear it from him. Author's Response: ahhhh thank you for saying that. i appreciate your kindness and i hope you are enjoying it as much as i am.
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: December 30, 2008
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Yay!! She won!! Edward should have never doubted her. Author's Response: he doubted her cause he doubts himself. thank you for reading!
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