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Penname: hhawkes [Contact]
Real name: hillary
Status: Member
Member Since: September 16, 2008
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I love to read and think this is a great way to try out lots of different types of authors. Since I began reading fanfiction I have been coming up with lots of story lines, but I am unable to get them on paper (I am not a writer, in anyway). I have one right now that keeps going through my head over and over. It is post breaking dawn and I do not think that I have read one like it before. Please let me know if you are looking for a new story and I can give you my idea. I don't expect anything in return, just let me know if you are writing it, so I can make sure I read it. 


 


Sorry if I never review, if you are on my favorites list then be assured I am reading and loving your story. If I have something to say I will say it, but I am such a bad writer that I have a hard time reviewing, even...lol.


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Reviews by hhawkes
 
Twist of Fate by IsabellaCullen Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 77]
Summary:

What if fate took a different course for Bella Swan? What if, after Edward left her to keep her safe, the werewolves were just a minute too late to save her from Laurent in the meadow? Would she eventually find her way back into Edward's arms?

 

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 76778
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2008 Updated: September 20, 2008


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Bonfire

I can't wait for the rest. I hope you update as soon as possible!

 
Restoration by texbelle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1147]
Summary:

Ten years ago, circumstance interrupted their destiny.  Now it's time for everyone to go back to Forks for their 10 year high school reunion to face their past with hesitation, hope and maybe even regret.  Can they reclaim what was lost?  All human.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 166805
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2008 Updated: June 01, 2010


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Waiting for You

Excellent story!! I hope its not over!!

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Freeze

I don't think that there is anything wrong with her rule. They have technically been on more than 6 dates though, they were high school sweethearts, afterall. Anyways, it was another good chapter!!

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Bless the Broken Road

Wow, so she is actually agreeing to stick to her own rules.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Pretty Please

Well Bella really shouldn't be suprised that Edward is so accepting of her friends, they are his friends too, not to mention, Emmett is his cousin.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Torch

Wow, she must really miss Emmett!

 
Summary: After Twilight, Bella spends the happiest summer of her life with Edward. What did they do? Lots of dating!
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 30793
[Report This] Published: May 08, 2008 Updated: August 28, 2008


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I really enjoy this story, I am new to the site, but so far, its one of my favorites. Its just nice to see Bella and Edward interacting and loving in a normal way! I really can't wait to see where else you take it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! It's really been fun to write this story!

 
Summary: Feature

Dark Side of the Moon banner

Thanks Roo, for the amazing banner! 

And more keep coming in!  Thanks to m81170 for this lovely piece of art:

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Here's another amazing pic that fits in with Dark Side of the Moon perfectly -thank you to JohannaL for ID'ing the author:  http://smirks-works.livejournal.com/ check out her (I assume) other manips - she's a genius!

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Updated November, 2009

This story is now COMPLETE!

Dark Side of the Moon is my version of New Moon from Edward’s point of view.  Witness how Edward agonized over leaving Bella, hunted for Victoria, faced the Volturi, and came to realize that with Bella was where he was meant to be. 

This tormented story has been a part of my life for about a year and a half – and what a ride it’s been!  Meant to be canon and in character, I hope you enjoy angsty Edward and his suffering during New Moon.  As unhappy as Bella was during this time, Edward suffered so much more (I think).  So be sure and crack open a fresh box of tissues before reading!

 Thank you to everyone for all the reviews, especially to those of you who reviewed each and every chapter!  Your support and loyalty have been the driving force to me getting this project finished – and I hope it’s lived up to all of your expectations.

Love you all,

blondieakarobin

PS.  As one last thank you, I’ve posted a formatted, printable copy of Dark Side of the Moon at http://bit.ly/2vLHMi, as will also post as an electronic version suitable for viewing on a kindle or MobiReader.  I’m also posting a ‘Director’s Cut’ that includes citations of all of Bella’s quotes from Twilight, research notes, and even funny comments from my betas in this version in the same directory.

blondie

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Use of the dialog from the series is just for clarity - Stephenie Meyer owns all things twilight!  I'm making absolutely nothing from this work.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 163080
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2008 Updated: February 26, 2010


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Decision

Still doing a great job!!

Author's Response:

8-)  and still sane... I think...

blondie

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Stitches

Wow, just wow. I don't know what else to say to this. Its like you somehow got into Stephanie Meyer's head to get into Edward's head. I can't wait to read more. I tried to do New Moon from Edward's POV and it was no where near this detailed and enthralling. I know its a lot to ask for, but I would absolutley love to read all of it from Edward's POV (or as much as you are willing to write for us). Thanks!!!

 

PS I also enjoyed Phoenix rising, excellent!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  My intention is to do the whole thing... I'm already 45,000 words into it (not all of it is posted yet 8-).  I'm really close to having everything done through 'The End', and have started Edward's hunt of Victoria.  That will take us up to SM's Extra (the call from Rosalie from EPOV, posted on her website).  I then have from there through Heaven written.  I've also started playing with a few scenes after Heaven... it kind of comes in fits and spurts.

It just depends on what Edward feels like giving me... 8-)

Thanks for the great review - the fact that it sounds like SM's Edward is a very high compliment!  8-)  More coming soon... looks like the next chapter will be a LOOOONG one!

blondie

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Separation

I think that you really have Edward and his angst down!B

Author's Response:

I tend to get Edward on the brain at times... I'm probably borderline certifiable by now 8-)

blondie

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Domestic Disturbance

He's so angsty, it hurts my heart. The first time I read the break up in the book made me cry and this is making me want to cry again and again.

Author's Response:

Sorry!  But you know Edward... he's the king of angst.  Thanks for reading!

blondie

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: The End

Wow, that was intense. It hurt me, but then when he was saying good bye to charlise and esme, I couldn't hold it in anymore, great job. I will be waiting for December.

Author's Response:

I always lose it when he says goodbye to C&E... I've had that written for months.  It's nice to finally post it!  Sorry for the tears...

blondie

 
Summary:

What's the farthest thing from The Cleavers? The Cullens. How will Bella fair being a human, in a house full of vampires, with a past that might come back to bite her?

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Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 49288
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2008 Updated: January 02, 2009


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great story!! Nice cliff-hanger also...

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen, just finished his senior year in highschool, decides to spend his summer vacation in Phoenix, Arizona. He's not expecting much - all he wants is to get away from the gossiping residents of Forks. He's certainly not expecting the beautiful girl next door. But can he trust her? After he's already been hurt once? And how much can three little months really change? AU All Human. Canon pairings.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 30394
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2008 Updated: February 21, 2009


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Wake Up Call

What a great story, I really like it. I can't wait to read more!

 
Summary:

What if Edward had gotten to Port Angeles too late and was faced with Bella begging him to do everything in his power to save her? She knows he has the power no one else does...what will he do? One night changes everything.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 38841
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: April 30, 2009


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Shattered Glass

Great story!! I hope he gets to her soon!

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Daydream

I hope he lets her go back.

 
Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3033]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Race Against Time

Wow, this story is amazing! i honesety cannot wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Lucky

Jaccob is not going to be happy to see them!!

 
New Kiss by ladyakako Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary: As Bella begins her third year at college, she befriends Alice Cullen and finds herself falling in love with her new friend’s older brother, Edward, despite his aloofness. All human AU. Edward/Bella.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 14438
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2008 Updated: July 21, 2009


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Alice is always scheming! Good story!

 
Summary:

After college, best friends Bella, Rosalie and Alice have a run-in with their past. . .and maybe their future? A farcical, romantic comedy with a healthy dose of angst.  Nominated for Best Romance & Best Edward Characterization (Incomplete) at the Twilight Awards.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 144638
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: December 29, 2008


Reviewer: hhawkes Signed
Date: September 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I like this story because its unique. Most stories are about how Bella and Edward are being hooked up by everyone else, but this one is the other way around. Plus it's hot, I can't wait to read more!

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Another good chapter! Can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Aww...so sweet. Alice is willing to dress down for Jasper, Bella knows now that she is Edward's girlfriend, and Rose and Emmett are finally going to be together, great chapter!

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Wow, they are one horny group...lol.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Personalized panties would be way more fun than personalized t-shirts, they make a lot more sense! Good chapter, but I feel bad for Alice, not knowing where they really stand and being too scared to tell him the truth.

 
Reviewer: hhawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

He loves her too, but he is obviously having a very difficult time admitting it...

 




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