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I'm 23 and I've been married for 6 years. (shut up) I have a son who is two and believes that he's Buzz Lightyear, and a new baby girl. My husband, and everyone else I know, has no idea I do this.
I hope you find something below that you like.
Thanks for reading, have a nice twilight! :)
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Summary: 
AU Post-New Moon.
Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?
Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.
Bella Swan is slipping under...
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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: October 13, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: Race Against Time
Here is my summary suggestion:
The thing about love is that it doesn’t know the rules. Nobody knows this better than Bella Swan, an English Literature teacher living in Rochester, New York. It’s been 6 years since the love of her life left her alone in the forest on a rainy Washington afternoon. She knows that since that day he hasn’t aged at all, and neither has her heart. But a vampire can’t be in love with a human, a 17 year-old can’t be in love with a 24 year-old, besides, it’s not like she‘ll ever see him again... One day a flawless and familiar face unexpectedly enrolls in her class and another rule is broken, because a teacher can’t, under any circumstances, be in love with one of her students.
Will the always unfortunate conditions from their past continue to drive Edward and Bella apart, or will Edward be able to convince her of the true, unchanging feeling he still has for her? Will Bella stop fighting the past? Can she come to realize that the real thing about love, is it always finds a way...
You're welcome to use it in whole or in part or laugh at it hysterically while you hit delete...
Author's Response: Oooh this is good. I might combine some of this with some of the ideas from other readers.... I'll let you know. I might even use the contact function on your profile. So yeah, just to warn you before your inbox gets flooded with emails from me lol.
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed 
Date: October 13, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: Race Against Time
Here's another summary suggestion because my previous one was sort of long: This story freakin' rocks, just look at how many reviews it has... What are you waiting for? Read it! Author's Response: AHAHAHAHAHAHA LOL! That made me grin :D Thank you!
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: October 15, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: A Meeting
Gee, thanks...
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: January 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Lucky
Another great chapter! I feel like you must know Edward personally, because you capture him so well.
I really liked the bit with Esme. I didn't feel like she got much page time in the series. We really didn't get a chance to know her very well, or to see the depth of her kindness. We basically just got told that she was kind and loving and there weren't a whole lot of opportunities to see it demonstrated. I'm glad you remedied that.
Your chapters are worth waiting for, I for one, don't mind the gaps between. On the one hand, suspense is killing me, on the other, I know that when it does come, the update will be brilliant.
I love that you now have to create a seperate email account to help you control people's enthusiasm for your story. I'm a little jealous of that, but I don't envy the time you must have to spend soothing everyone's fears and assuring them that you have not, in fact, fallen off the face of the earth.
I've heard about your blog before, I'll have to go check it out!
Thank you for your time and talent. You rock!
jax Author's Response: Wow, what a review jax. Thanks for taking the time to give me this feedback :)
I don't feel that I really know Edward at all, compared to some of the authors on here (blondie in 'The Dark Side of the Moon' springs to mind) but thank you for saying that :)
I'm glad you liked the bit with Esme. Whilst writing this it has kind of been my aim to devote a sceneish to really get to know each of the Cullens. Edward & Emmett's fight in the courtyard, Alice & Bella's chat in the corridor, Edward & Jasper in the car outside Bella's appartment, Carlisle & Edward in Bella's hospital room and now Edward & Esme. I've still got to 'do' Rosalie; hopefully I can fit that into the next chapter. I think one of the biggest things that was missing for me from the series was proper character development for all the minor characters- they kind of got swept aside by the Bella/Edward/Jacob dynamic.
Thank you for saying that about the updates- it's a relief to know that not everyone is baying for my blood!
Ha yeah about the email account... at first I didn't want to make it because I'm aware that it has slightly arrogant connotations... that's not how it's supposed to be interpreted at all, I was just having difficulty responding to everyone at once. It got to the point where I didn't want to check my inbox anymore because I was scared of how many: 'I HATE YOU' emails I'd have received. I hope you don't think any worse of me for it.
I hope you like the podcast!
And no, you rock! And your fanfic is the next one on my list of 'to-reads', I swear.
<3 Rialle
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: May 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Leader
I've already reviewed elsewhere, so you already know how I feel about the awesomeness that is this chapter - but I need to say it again - for the benefit of the masses, and also because you need 1393 reviews instead of the mere 1392 reviews that you already have.
You do Jake's POV brilliantly. I told you this already, but you need to write a whole fic this way. About anything, I don't care. I just need more. I would print it out and display it in my curio cabinet right between my wedding photo and the ceramic mold of my son's baby feet. I love it that much.
Take as long as you need. We'll wait. Patiently.
... right guys? No more PLZ UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!!s
Patience is a virtue. Good things come to those who wait. The early bird catches the... oh wait, that doesn't apply.
But you get it. Leave the poor girl alone.
Love you,
Jax
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: June 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Dear Edward...
Oh Claire that was beautiful! That letter was perfect. When you look at a story like this, a story where Bella finds out who she really is and developes healthy feelings for Edward, it really throws into light how ridiculous she is in the real series. I'm so proud of you for this. It's excellent.
I hope you're well. I'm following you on twitter now. :)
Summary: 
Bella is an out of work actress living in New York City, when an audition comes along that could change everything. Does she have what it takes to impress noted Broadway Director Edward Cullen? And even if she does, will his biggest secret keep her from success in her career, or worse, in love? How is it possible for real love to form out of a fantasy?
AU Human, Canon Pairings, An ExB story
*The entire story is based on my favorite quote from Shakepeare's Venus and Adonis
Thank you RedRose15 for the AMAZING banner! And thank you Shakespeare for all your inspiration!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 48558
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2008 Updated: April 04, 2009
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: October 29, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: The Defining Day
Your story has inspired rhyming, I love it's feel and sense of timing. I love the way that you write Bella, and that perfect glorious fella. I love the plot, I love the friends, I can't wait to see how it ends. I hope you will not make us wait, hopefully, soon, you will update. Author's Response: This is quite possibly my favorite review of all time. Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: November 30, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: The Business of Misery
I'm so sorry for your loss. This is a great story, keep up the good work! Author's Response: Thank you. I really appreciate it
Summary: Bella gets the Flu, and Edward gets the chance to take care of her.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1843
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2008 Updated: October 01, 2008
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: October 01, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Gatorade and Ice Pops
Very sweet. Good job!
Summary: Imogen doesn't make a habit of eyeing up the customers, but there's an exception to every rule...
Imogen Page is pretty sure she knows everything there is to know about life and that nothing could ever faze her. But that's before he comes wandering into the diner where she works, one hot afternoon in August and she has her world turned upside down.
Jacob centric with some Jacob/OC and Jacob/Bella.
This story is set after the epilogue in Eclipse and completely ignores Breaking Dawn.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Jacob, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1354
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2008 Updated: September 24, 2008
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: September 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: New Beginnings
I like it. Finally, a character that feels real. I'm glad you totally ignored Breaking Dawn, that's what I've been trying to do since the moment I finished the last page of it. Keep it up, well done. Also, I haven't put in my review for SMS, seems pointless since you already have about a million, but I want you to know that it rocks. Author's Response: Aww thank you on both counts! Imogen jumped into my mind and all but possessed it for an entire day, so I had to get this story down. I wrote it before Breaking Dawn came out, but considering what a travesty that book turned out to be I felt no remorse in completely disregarding it by posting this. :) Thanks. I am absolutely stunned by the level of appreciation I've received for 'Seducing Ms Swan'- it started as a stupid idea I came up with in a Physics lesson and I never ever expected it to become as popular as it has done. Every time someone leaves a new review or PMs me I feel completely overwhelmed by their incredible comments- hence the reason I don't reply to all my reviews on that story! But yeah, just know that I am reading and loving them :) Thankis for reviewing!
Summary: If anyone asked me, years later, who my best friend from high school was, I would have responded instantly, with absolute certainty, that her name was Isabella Marie Swan. Not everyone in the Twilight Saga lived forever… One-shot. Angela P.O.V. on her life in Forks. Angela Weber sees Bella Cullen just one more time.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Angela
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2920
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: October 02, 2008
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: October 02, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: A Walk in the Lifetime of Angela Weber
I really liked it. It was very Angela and had a nice pace, which I always pay attention too because that's what I struggle with in my own writing. I'm glad Bella went to the wedding and I'm glad Ben and Angela got married. This is one of the stories I will probably store away in my head next to the actual saga. Good job. Author's Response: Wow, thanks. I'm always blown away with reviews like this, so... I'm at a loss for words at the moment. Just... thanks. x
Summary: Stranded in a strange town by stormy weather, Bella is befriended by Edward, a gorgeous man with a mysterious past. While she’s immediately attracted to him, she quickly discovers that the rest of the town doesn’t share her affections for the bronze-haired one, so she sets out to prove to them, and to Edward, that he’s anything but a monster.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes
Word count: 108250
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: November 28, 2008
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: December 16, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Stranded
I loved the first chapter! Do I get a prize for leaving the 1000th review? Author's Response: Yes! I am thinking about writing a one shot christmas story as an add on to this story and it will be dedicated to you if I do it! Or I can send you cookies!
Summary: Edward finally gives in to his desire to "check up" on Bella after he left. He vowed only to watch her from a distance, but how can he resist the force of the love that brought him back in the first place? When Bella's life is in danger again, will Edward be able to save her one last time?
This is a story that's been bouncing around in my head so much it finally demanded to be written. Edward's POV.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Word count: 51875
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2012
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: October 14, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: 3. - Realization
I love this! Love it, love it. Keep up the amazing work and I'm totally adding this to my favorites. And hey, thanks for the reviews for my story. .jpg "stories/3516/images/fanficbanner_(3).jpg")
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You're the first person to "fav" me. ;-D I hope you'll like what's coming next.
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: October 16, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: 4. - Acceptance
Good chapter! You do Edward so well.
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: October 25, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: 6. - Phone Call
Hi. I liked this chapter alot. I think you captured Alice beautifully. I'm totally impressed by your writing, which is why... I have a favor to ask. But just now I read that you're very busy. I don't want to bother you, and feel free to say no, but would you be interested in betaing the story I'm writing for the twilighted challenge? I feel like I need someone else to read over it before I send it in. You were the first person I thought of... Don't be afraid to say no, I'll still love your writing. Author's Response: Of course, I would love to!! I'm immensely flattered, (of course, this may slow down my own writing process... at least for this week. ;o) I've e-mailed you back with all of my details. Thank you again for reading. :-D
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: November 05, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: 7. - Patience
Hello. Another incredible chapter, I don't know how you do it. Are you sure you aren't SM? You capture Edward so well. Thanks again for everything! You're amazing. In the words of Mater in Disney's Cars. "I knowed I made a good choice." Author's Response: Haha.. pretty sure. (That's actually something I've thought about other authors on this site before, though!) But thank you. As you know, I'm working out the Bella mirror piece to this story as I write, too, which is helping this one along. Omg I love Cars... Mater is the best character in that movie! Thank you again. ;o) p.s. - I try to remember to keep checking, but please let me know as soon as you find out how your story is doing!!
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: November 07, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: 8. - Running Away
Another great one! And hey, look at all of your reviews! You're a star. I can't wait to see what happens next... Just kiss her Edward, just go in there and kiss her. Stop overthinking it and just do it. She'll like it, I promise, or if you want, you could just kiss me... Author's Response: Oh thank you! I was planning on holding out for at least 100 reviews before I posted the next chapter, but you're #105!! woohooo!! Yes, if Bella ever decided to give Edward up, he would have more girls than he would know what to do with ready and willing to console him. But then again, if Bella did give him up, she'd be the world's stupidest person and we'd all hate her. ;o)
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: November 11, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: 9. - Enemies
Always awesome, keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you. :o)
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: November 15, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: 10. - Making A Concession
Another great chapter girlie!
Author's Response: Hmmm how did I know you'd be my lucky #160?? Thank you!! ;o)
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: November 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: 11. - Eavesdropping
'ello love, This is another amazing chapter. I know a lot of people are complaining about the suspense, but I think you've got it just right. There are things that needed to happen before they were reunited. I'm loving the pace of the story and the way you portray Edward. It's natural. I have to wait until Saturday to see the movie because I couldn't get a sitter, but I'm anxious to hear what you thought of it. Keep up the good work, this is a great story and you're a very talented writer. (and editor :) ) Forever in your debt, Jax Author's Response: Thanks Jax, I knew I could count on you!! ;o) p.s. - The movie was amazing, I already saw it twice. lol
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: November 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: 12. - How To Save A Life
Look! You have over 200 reviews! Yay! The reunion was very nicely done, you're on a roll! I can't wait for Ch. 13. This story is so good! Oh dear. I didn't love the movie. I know, I know... I'm going to give it another try. Author's Response: I know, all these reviews are amazing!! They're addicting, they make me want to write more and more, lol... Thank you so much for always leaving me one. :o) You have to give the movie another try, trust me. Everyone I know who didn't like it the first time LoVeD it on the second time. Those who loved it to begin with fell in love with it even more... it's addicting.
Reviewer: Jaxidy Alpha Signed
Date: December 03, 2008
Title: Chapter 13: 13. - No More Lies
I'm happy to read for you any time, you so did not have to plug me, but since you did, thank you!!! You paint such vivid pictures with your words which is part of what makes this story so captivating. You also stick very close to Edward and Bella's characters (and everyone elses; Jacob, Alice, etc.) which I always appreciate. I love where this is going, I love the pace and the plot and... I just love it all! Keep it up! Author's Response: N/p hun. ;o) Thank you Jax, I try really hard for vivid imagery, I want the reader to be able to see everything as I do in my head when I'm writing. Thanks for being such a loyal reader. ;o)
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