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Penname: KiyaRaven [ Contact]
Real name: Kiya
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Member Since: March 31, 2009
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Hi, I'm Kiya. I'm a quiet Gemini who likes long walks on the beach.
My stories:
The Screamers
Grasping Darkness
The Diva Diaries.
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Summary: Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: June 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: June 7 - June 13, 2008
It was great to finally get this update. I find your story enthralling, and extremely goddamn sexy!
And good on you for starting the awards - I know there's a lot of buzz about them. Author's Response: thank you!
Summary:
 What if the wolf pack hadn't interrupted Laurent before he bit Bella? This is the story of Bella being changed despite Edward leaving her to prevent it from happening.
Rated for later chapters. Just like in New Moon, Edward will make an appearance eventually!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Word count: 71429
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2008 Updated: November 24, 2009
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: April 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Reunions
Terrific writing Laura - very compelling. Loving it and looking forward to the next chapter....
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: May 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Reunions, Part III
Great stuff again...I love the intensity of emotion in Jake and Edward. Your writing is so like SM in tone it's hard to believe it's fanfic.
Props.
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: May 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Beginnings
Best chapter yet. Hot, hot, HOT!
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed 
Date: April 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Hey Laura
You fucking rock!! I have just read all 20 chapters in 24 hrs and apart from how incredibly HOT it is (and the subtle rpattz details eg. moles on the side of his neck - EXCELLENT touch BTW), the writing is just fucking great! You write so damn well - the characters all have their own voice and style and I have loved the couple of alternate POV's (eg Jasper and Emmett - more Jazz please - he's hot).
I am slightly pissed off of course that chapter 21 is not up yet, but hey, I'm sure good things come to those of us who will be waiting....breathlessy...for the next installment.
Keep up the amazing work - I will be following this story RELIGIOUSLY! (BTW your sex scenes are INCREDIBLE! Your boyfriend/husband/girlfriend/fuck buddies are VERY lucky people!!)
Many props and respect,
KiyaRaven xx
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: May 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful....
*sigh* Nothing more needs to be said.
Can't wait for more married shenanigans...
Mwah,
KiyaRaven x
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Very hot, very cool - everything I've come to expect from this smokin' story.
Summary:  
Bella begins working for the elusive and distant Edward Cullen who she discovers is hiding behind an elaborate charade to maintain his secret lifestyle. Bella is determined to find out the mysteries of Edward Cullen but with what results? AU. Mystery/Humor/Angst
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No
Word count: 173201
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Brilliant! You write so bloody well, it's always a pleasure to read, and quick update? Love it.
You had me giggling like a school girl with "Say it...out loud."
"That was the cosmic fate that now added the term 'gay' in front of Vampire CEO Crime Fighter." - bwahahahaha!
Another quick update would be great - you don't have anything else to do, do you?
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: June 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Ok, so can't remember Reviewing this story, but have to say I'm crushing on it hard. Love possessive, dark, super-heroward. Awesome! You write beautifully and I can't wait for the update. Rock on.
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: June 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Hmmm...intriguing. I love that Bella is inspiring EC to reaquaint himself with his humanity. A life without passion is a life half-lived and I think he is about to figure that out - in spades.
I love how you write Edward - uptight and formal, but with his beastial urges always simmering under the surface. It's quite electrifying.
More please...
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: June 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Oohh...yummy chapter. Violence, fear and lust - all my favorite emotions.
I love your Edward - very masculine, very sexy.
Thanks for sharing.
Summary: 
While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse. When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help. But of course, fate has plans for this man. Canon Couples. AU. DARK Themes.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: May 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: The Basement
Loving the tone of the piece...great writing.
Going straight onto the next chapter!
Best Wishes,
KiyaRaven
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: May 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: The Bath
Wow...hypnotic writing. Loving it and moving straight onto the next chapter.
Keep up the good work...and write fast! I only have 3 chapters to go before I finish and then I'm gonna need another fix...FAST!
Mwah,
KiyaRaven
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: May 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: The River
Arrgh! How dare you not have several dozen more chapters for me to read! I'm officially addicted to your story and no you've completely killed my high!
Please update soon...real life is over-rated. Write girl, write!
Mwah,
KiyaRaven
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: The Party
Aww...I love damagedward. He's so beautiful and fragile. Great job.
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: June 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: The Jump
Another beautiful chapter. I find your writing so soothing - like a little literary massage. *sigh*
Looking forward to the next one.
Summary: 
All told from Edward's POV, The Acclimation Diaries, chronicles Edward’s struggles with learning to control himself and taking things one step at a time as he acclimates himself to Bella sexually in preparation of their impending wedding night. Can he keep his desire in check or will he snap?
A companion story for my one-shot, “Show Me”
TAD Banner by: falconcranelove
Indie Banner by: AngstGoddess
Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 84817
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2009 Updated: September 19, 2009
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Picture This
Awesome chapter. EXTREMELY hawwwt. Great job. Author's Response: Thank you very much!!
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: June 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: The Fantasy
Another chapter choc full of HAAWT! Fuck me. Edward pleasuring himself after the hunt? That shit needs to come with a health warning!
Brilliant! Author's Response: LOL! I'll put up caution tape next time ;-) Thanks so much for reading and extra smooches because you used 'fuck' in your review!
*MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Naughty Bella, Dirty Edward
*phew* Good chapter...(wipes sweat from brow)...very good chapter. Um...finding it hard to...you know...speak, at the moment. Feeling weak from level of HAAAAWTNESS!!
Jesus woman, awesome scene, in the Volvo no less! (or Vulva as I like to call it.)
Going to next chapter, but need to change panties first.
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you so much babes!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: July 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: It's Time
*Lights a cigarette and sighs deeply*
Soooooo worth the wait. Thank you. Author's Response: Thank you so much babes, you rock!! *MWAH*
Summary:
We all believe that Edward and Bella are meant to be together...but what if there’s more to that than meets the eye?
What if there are forces at work that they don’t understand? How will they cope with events that have no discernable meaning?
This story starts out two weeks before Bella and Edward’s wedding. But, right away, things go wrong. They struggle with mishap after mishap, all the while wondering if they’re destined to be at the center of conflict and angst.
All the major characters of Twilight appear. Canon couples. Lemons in various chapters. This is a more realistic view of Edward and Bella’s relationship before the wedding. He certainly wouldn’t carry her off to a desert island alone, having never even touched her. They would have experimented a bit.
Eventually all characters get their Happily Ever After. I just drag them through hell before we get there. No characters die before their time.
And I’ve adhered to canon up until the story starts—Post Eclipse. After that, it diverges from SM’s version. So...no Renesmee. No pregnancy.
I’ve poured my heart and soul into this story. It took me over a year to complete. I thought about it constantly. For that hard work and diligence to form, grammar and style, I’d like just one tiny thing from you, the reader.
I’d like a review. If you love it, if you hate it, if you’re just indifferent and will never look at it again, I’d like to hear that. It’s not a lot to ask. So...I’ll say thanks in advance for the wonderful reviews you’ll leave after you read each chapter!
Maria
twilight gypsy
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes
Word count: 178339
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: September 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Brilliant Disguise
Thank you!! Bella is scared of the transformation!! Yes!!
It makes me crazy when Bella has no reservations at all. I mean, she's giving up her LIFE to be with a BOY. It seems so frivolous to take that lightly.
And I like that you addressed that vampires are more powerful if they drink human blood. I can't remember if Miss Meyer addressed that in the books. I don't think she did.
Cheers,
Kiya x Author's Response: I think Edward tells Bella that she'll be stronger as a newborn because her human blood is still in her. It makes her strong. But yeah, I agree. She took it too lightly. My Bella is scared to death!
Maria
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: September 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Misery
I loved the analogy of Edward exchanging places with the monster. Don't we all have days like that?
Kiya x Author's Response: ha. I know I do! Thanks for reading!
Maria
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: September 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Fantasy
Bwahahahahaha!!!! Awesome.
My fave lines - Every day since the day I was changed, it was like that Groundhog Day. Every day was the same. Even though I tried to better myself in many of the same ways, I had no tomorrow. I had only an interminable now, full of nothing to look forward to, nothing exciting or new. And now, freaking finally, after falling in love with Bella, it was the next day.
The monster rattled his chains, I patrolled his enclosure, we all hoped for the best.
Loving it all,
Kiya x
Author's Response: I liked that bit too! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Maria
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: September 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: A Hard Day's Night
Well, hi. Thanks for your review for Grasping Darkness. I took your advice and checked out your fic in return, and I'm glad I did. Great writing. A very believable Edward. Some Edward's can sound very girly but not yours. Very canon to. I'm enjoying hearing his thoughts.
Cheers,
Kiya x Author's Response: thanks so much! Really, check out the twinklings! I would love to see your story on the site~!
maria
Reviewer: KiyaRaven Signed
Date: September 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Human Touch
Wow. Okay, I wasn't expecting that. Looking forward to seeing what happens with Bella. Or am I?
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