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Penname: Doyle [ Contact]
Real name: Doyle
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Member Since: March 31, 2009
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Well I am wife and mother of 3. So I don't have many time for hobbies and books have got expensive. To be fully honest the only type of books that really got my attention was the Twilight series. I stumbled on this site on accident, I have never heard of fan fiction, but when I read others thoughts and possibilities, I was enthralled!
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Summary: Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012
Reviewer: Doyle Signed
Date: September 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: June 14 - June 20, 2008
More please? I have been reading this for hours now and I am very intrigued on where this is going! Author's Response: In October :)
Summary: Set during New Moon. Bella didn't jump. But a vision from Alice sends the Cullens running back to Forks. What if Bella wasn't the only one who fell apart when she lost the love of her life? What if Edward couldn't handle being apart? What if he fell? How far could he fall? Who committed the murders at the Swan residence and what happened to Charlie? Just how bad can it get?
Read and find out!
Thanks to the amazingly talented Anne Cullen for the Banner.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Billy, Brady, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Garrett, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Kim, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 77631
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2008 Updated: March 03, 2010
Reviewer: Doyle Signed  
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Honesty
More please?? :)
I was very captivated by your choice of personality for Edward. Edward was portrayed as a "perfect" human being, strong with hardly any faults. I know in "New Moon" he was a brooding vamp that missed his true love. However you pushed those emotions he had in "New Moon" to a new level and gave Edward a more mellow yet self destructive side. I enjoyed the way you portrayed all of the characters, Bella's back bone wasn't expected either! I liked your story very much. You really do need to finish this however.. I am really wondering where you are going with this!!!! *Sitting at the edge of my seat* Pretty please? Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am glad you have enjoyed this story so far. I always felt that if Edward loved Bella the way he did then he too would fall when they were apart. I wanted to play with that on the story. I also knew it would take a monumental event to bring the Cullens back into Bella's life. Some of which you have already discovered and the rest? I promise that you will find out soon :)
Thank you so much for reviewing, I do appreciate it. I love hearing what people think of how I have developed the characters. I hope you stick around and continue to read and enjoy this story.
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin? 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010
Reviewer: Doyle Signed
Date: May 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Sweat
....cliff hanger???? Duh duh duh! I'm in love with this story lol, you must finish! :)
Summary: It has been 8 long years since Edward left Bella on their wedding day. Bella has finally come back to Forks to visit Charlie, only to find that Edward has also returned, and he has been keeping a big secret from her.
Banner by allycubed
Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 115303
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2009
Reviewer: Doyle Signed
Date: May 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
.....wow? I have forgotten that I have children and a husband for the day! I could not stop reading it. Please please please please pleeeassseeeeeee add another chapter soon? Orrrr maybe 10 chapters....heck if you could finish it...yesterday...that would be great :)
It all honesty I loved the story, I think its a great take. I have never been fond of a human Edward/Cullens but I am now praying they can keep their human existance or atleast a happy ending for all. I may just have to hunt you down if you don't finish it LOL jk but please... feed my feeble little mind? It loves you right now LOL ;)
Summary: 
Edward has been filling his thirst for blood with an insatiable appetite for flesh for the last 80 years. A new girl arrives at Forks High School that baffles him, and just might turn his world upside down and break him of his rapacious behavior.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 39573
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2009 Updated: March 19, 2009
Reviewer: Doyle Signed
Date: April 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: New Beginnings
Wonderful... Author's Response: Thanks! Unless this was an April Fool's Joke. ;-)
Summary: Found unconscious after four years of being held captive by two nomadic vampires, Bella is rescued by three members of the Cullen family. When she awakens, the family is apalled to find how deeply she's withdrawn into the roll of an abused pet. In time, she begins to trust and find comfort again but the Cullen's worry if she will ever regain her full humanity.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 33925
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2009 Updated: June 04, 2009
Reviewer: Doyle Signed
Date: April 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow, this story really has me feeling Bella's emotions going through this whole process. I was badly abused by my first husband. I was hurt for the smallest things. I wasn't allowed to see my family or my friends. The furthest I went in 6 years was a trip to the grocery store once a week. And that wasn't without long sleeved shirts or pants. No matter how hot it was. I can almost relate to how she is feeling. I wasn't very trusting myself for almost 3 years..3 years after EMTs found me with a fractured skull after being struck by a telephone. I didn't go out, didn't eat, barely slept. The physical pain was almost a relief. It actually drew my attention away from my inward pain. I was overweight at 325lbs after giving birth to "our" son. I lost 160lbs in 8 months, and it wasn't from "dieting". Today I stand 6 feet tall at 165lbs. After I thought the torture was done, safe at home with my parents, I was plagued by nightmares. They were surreal, he would jump through my window and take me back to our "home". Yet that time he would be even more angry than he ever was. I would wake up screaming so loud that I would lose my voice for the whole day. It wasn't until my car was broken down on the side of the road. I waited for my parents to get home from a wedding so I could get in touch with them and tell them to come and get me. A man pulled over on the side of the road to help me. He bought a part for my car and returned. He took me and my son (who was sleeping in the backseat) to get something to eat. I was forced to trust him, something made me. Can't even describe it. I didn't even think about dating for years. But I found comfort in him, and the nightmares stopped when he would hold me at night. We're now happily married, and we have 2 little girls together, and my son which he adopted. Sorry for rambling, but I feel like this site is an escape, as we all put our thoughts and emotions without anyone passing judgement. Kudos to all of you! And you my dear are a fantastic writer! Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for sharing your story! My biggest hope from this story would be that I don't in any way cheapen or make light of what real abuse victims go through. I myself have been lucky that while my husband can occasionally get a little too controling, he just pouts when I give it straight back to him. I've been lucky to very rarely in my life doubt that those around me really do love me. I'm so glad that you've found that from somebody now and have what sounds like a very loving family. Thank you so much for the compliments, you have no idea how much they mean to me, and big hugs for all you've managed to overcome in life!
Reviewer: Doyle Signed
Date: April 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Sorry I was rambling so much, I didn't give much review on the actual story! I think its excellent and really portrays how emotionally hurt one can actually get. The human mind is very powerful thing, if you believe something so strongly.. its exactly what happens. So maybe Bella needs to find something else to believe in to make her come out of the state she is in.
IMO Edward is playing it cool, following everyones advice not to push her. But he isn't realizing she can't come out of it without being pushed a little. The force that was used to make her that way, has to be used to make her better. It probably took a lot of force make her that way, and it's going to have to take a lot of force to make her better. Insistance was actually used with me (IRL), he insisted I go to eat with him, he insisted that he should take me home. Not in a forceful/hurtful way but never gave me the option to say no. But in a way, it made me happy because it was exactly what I wanted in the end. Yes.. confusing.. but it apparently worked.. years later we are still together and extremely happy. Just a suggestion for you to use, no pressure :)
As for your writing skills.. I can usually figure out which way a story is going to go, but this one is throwing me through a loophole and I can't wait to see the next chapter to see what you are thinking! I know it will be amazing regardless!!!!
Reviewer: Doyle Signed
Date: April 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Wow, another great chapter.
Chocolate milk and oatmeal are my favorite too! However, I remember when I was younger, my mother used to make me french toast and tea with honey when I was sick or had a broken bone (what can I say, I was a tomboy till the tears came!). The warm syrup and the tea always sat well in my stomach! Not sure why :)
If you could another chapter soon would be great *hint hint* I understand you are busy, but this is one story I can't get enough of recently! *puppy dog lip* pretty please with sugar on top? lol Author's Response: I'll be getting to another chapter as soon as I can, but I have a major competition this weekend for my other hobby and a ten page research paper due the 30th that I haven't even started yet, plus it's only two weeks until finals. Thanks so much for the compliments though, I'm just floored by the response and am dying to have time to write again! The reviews have been so inspiring!
Reviewer: Doyle Signed
Date: June 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
*Faints* Talk about a cliff hanger! And I thought the teasers were bad, you so need another chapter asap! :)
I love how Bella likes the poptarts. My aunt Rachel (Rae), that just passed away last month, was like a mother to me. When my mom was at work and I was sick, she would make me poptarts since she didn't know how to cook well. Strawberry was my favorite! I need to go to the store and get me some poptarts!
As for Edward, I think you have something in store for him playing for Bella. If I am correct are you going to have him play Claire De Lune?? Maybe reminding her of her mom? Oooo the possibilites are endless, you seriously need to get another chapter lol This is the only story I haven't given up waiting for!
Summary:  
While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse. When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help. But of course, fate has plans for this man. Canon Couples. AU. DARK Themes.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011
Reviewer: Doyle Signed
Date: August 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: The Party
I have never in my entire life/..EVER.. sat till my butt became numb to read a story. And never have I ever enjoyed a story this much. I am an avid reader and I do have to say, I am TRULY addicted. I'd even give up coffee and cigarettes to read this story!!!!! THIS is my brand of heroin. Pleaseeee keep going? My brain will thank you!
Reviewer: Doyle Signed
Date: August 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: The Truth
Hrmmmm...more please? Soon? ...like umm..yesterday? ;) I enjoyed it very much, I'd like, no, NEED to hear more. Thanks :)
Summary: 
Edward loves baths--how they feel, how they smell--but sometimes, a bath can be more. Sometimes, a bath is a way to satisfy some more personal, physical needs.
Warning: Graphic MSolo, fantasies regarding M/F HJ.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Word count: 928
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2009
Reviewer: Doyle Signed
Date: May 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Ninty-Eight Point Six
..what happens when he gets to Bella??? Ohhh sooo many possibilities, you can't leave it like this! :) Please?
Summary: AU/AH, OOC: Bella is an alcoholic struggling to deal with her traumatic past. When she meets Edward in the bar she frequents, will his help be enough to save her? Edward has just returned to Seattle and has secrets of his own when it comes to Bella...
Dark themes, including addiction and violence.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No
Word count: 138331
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: October 26, 2010
Reviewer: Doyle Signed
Date: May 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Unintended
Heyyy chapter 5 wasn't supposed to have lemonade. Pleasant surprise, I wouldn't exactly call it lemonade.. buttt maybe if you drank half of it and left the ice cubes to melt in the sunnn.. ;) Regardless I love where its going!
Reviewer: Doyle Signed
Date: May 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Damage Control
LOL No one is mad, I've given into my husband for worser things! But its because I love him :) ...and cause he bought me a boat....
Summary: What if the first time Bella dreamed of Edward she wasn't really dreaming. Would their growing relationship be tainted by what had already occured?
Based on the 'that was the first night I dreamed of Edward Cullen' deleted scene from the Twilight DVD.
Thanks to m81170 for the banner.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 54658
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2012
Reviewer: Doyle Signed
Date: November 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Night Before
Oh..my..god! You have to add another chapter! That was absolutely amazing!!!! Author's Response: Another chapter is coming, I'm just taking my time over it a bit. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it so far :)
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