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Penname: maddaq [Contact]
Real name: Daiquiri B
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Member Since: September 10, 2008
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Summary:

Four years after Edward left Bella in the forest; Bella is finally moving forward with her life but it is someone from her past that helps her truly heal and obtain the future that she was always meant to have.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Completed: Yes Word count: 167857
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: August 14, 2009


Reviewer: maddaq Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am so relieved that you have posted another chapter.  I was afraid that there wouldn't be more.  I can't believe that Bella had that dream about Jasper...but it was fantastic!!! The way it was written I was shocked when it turned out to be a dream.  Beautiful piece of writing.

 
Reviewer: maddaq Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I wanted Bella to be able to kiss Jasper goodbye.  I guess that wouldn't have been to good with Jacob standing there.  Ah well, there is always after Jacob leaves. 

 
Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: October 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I feel just as hollow as Bella with no Jasper.

 
Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: November 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Finally an update!

I don't like Logan, he seems nice enough but something is definately off about him.   I don't know what it is but...it could just be that Bella doesn't belong with a human she belongs with a vampire.  

 
Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3033]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

ALSO POSTED ON FANFICTION.NET


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: October 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Race Against Time

Thank goodness you finally updated!  I think if it takes that long again I will send my three year old to come pester you...yeah...that will work, you will be begging to write then.

 

wonderful work as always.



Author's Response:

AHHH NO NOT A TODDLER!

I'LL UPDATE, I PROMISE, JUST DON'T SEND THE TODDLERS AFTER ME!!! *hyperventilates*

& thank you :)

 
Summary:

After college, best friends Bella, Rosalie and Alice have a run-in with their past. . .and maybe their future? A farcical, romantic comedy with a healthy dose of angst.  Nominated for Best Romance & Best Edward Characterization (Incomplete) at the Twilight Awards.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 144638
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: December 29, 2008


Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: September 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I am so glad that Jasper is coming to his senses!  need more. quickly please.

Author's Response: Jasper came to senses. . .momentarily.  That may not continue . . .just saying.

 
Purgatory by spaniard Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 357]
Summary:

Seven original members of the Olympic Coven, and seven deadly sins. Coincidence? Edward has lived too long to believe in coincidences.

He reluctantly relays the deaths and subsequent turnings of each member of his family to his new bride. Each death represents a deadly sin.

An astounding amount of praise and thanks to MrsC for the beautiful banner!


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 42807
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2008 Updated: June 03, 2009


Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: October 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Sloth (3)

Esme's story was sad and beautiful and written perfectly.  I am in awe.

Author's Response: Thanks.  It was the least macabre for me, but I guess you can never make the death of a child into something beautiful.

 
Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: November 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Gluttony (1)

Finally!! 

it's ok to make it three parts, I like Jasper and his tragic tale.  Please don't shorten it and/or leave things out just to make it fit a preconceived notion of lenght.  Let it be what it needs to be. Please?



Author's Response: I'm going to try to fit it into three...this might be a future project in the making though, oh no!  Thank you so much for reading.

 
Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: November 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Gluttony (2)

poor tortured Jasper.  He has suffered so much. 

Author's Response: It's that internal struggle that makes him so very appealing, though!  Thanks for continuing to read!

 
Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: December 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Gluttony (3)

you wouldn't really make us wait that long, again.  would you?

Author's Response:

Just kidding! ;)

I couldn't make you wait that long if I wanted to.  I've been waiting for six whole Cullen's to get to my favorite.  My will power is only so strong!

 
Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: March 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Wrath (4)

That chapter was amazing.  I am just in too much awe to form proper words.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I love that reaction!

 
Reviewer: maddaq Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Absolution

LOVE IT!!  i love that she doesn't have to say anything for them realize that she doesn't hate them for their past, they can just see it in her eyes.  Honestly, what could you say?



Author's Response:

Thanks maddaq, and thank you for your support each chapter.  You really helped push me through and get some chapters out that just didn't want to come.  I love your reviews!

 
Reviewer: maddaq Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Canto Final: Redemption

I love it!  I am so glad i found this story and that i liked it enough to join twilighted so i could tell you how much i love it.

 

thank you thank you for such a great story.



Author's Response:

Oh wow!  That is the greatest compliment ever!  Thank you so much for that!  I've loved all of your reviews!  Thank you for being there with me until the end. 

 
Going for the Gold by bethaboo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 701]
Summary:

Edward Cullen, an Olympic swimming star, goes to Beijing with winning gold medals on his mind, but is distracted by the beautiful but clumsy reporter he meets on his way. All Human AU.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 86569
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: May 09, 2009


Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

LOVE IT!!!

 
Summary: BPOV.  Edward's embarrassed, the Cullens tease, and Bella's naïve.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3442
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2008


Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: October 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Playing Solitaire

I laughed so hard I cried!! Thank you, thank you for putting some humor in my day.

Author's Response: You're welcome.  I'm glad I could help.  Some days you just need a laugh.

 
Vertigo by FallenFlowers Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 227]
Summary:

Alternate Universe

Bella has had a less than perfect childhood, and due to certain circumstances she is now the human pet of James's coven.

Now the Cullens have kidnapped her to lure James out. How will Edward react to her blood? Will Bella ever find love again?

In various POVs, rated NC-17 just in case.

 

Vertigo is officially on HIATUS LEAVE

because I have gotten slightly bored of it and I think everyone else has too.

I will continue (and finish it; I think in several more chapters - maybe 5?), when inspiration chooses to pop back into my mind.

Please check out my other stories!

(if you don't mind a little advertising... ;))

XX/XY: The Story of Cesario if you like AH and/or Hana Kimi

Seraphim, if you like AU Twilight/Fantasy-Scifi themes

Charcoal: A One-shot if you like AH/JasperXBella pairings.

Orange if you like AH and a significant age difference between Edward (older) and Bella (younger)

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 58371
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2008 Updated: March 27, 2009


Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: January 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: 15: Patience is a virtue

OOOoooOOO...Tanya is in trouble!! why can't Laurent just let Edward and Bella find each other again??

 

Oh, well it's your story, you will write it as the characters tell you to.  Hopefully it won't be as long of a break between chapters again.

Good job.



Author's Response:

Haha yes she is! Edward deserves to thrash her :) I hope not too... but I want to have staggered updates between this and my other story (XX/XY) so, yeah. Luckily this story gets chapter validation really really really fast :)

Thanks for reading!

 
Summary:

Vampire brothers Edward, Emmett, and Jasper are stuck at age 17 forever.  Unfortunately, though all of them have lived for over 100 years, they have very little experience with dating girls, especially modern ones.  What happens when their vampire powers and inexperience collide?  Will the results prevent them from winning the hearts of the girls they love? 

If you like humor, angst, and edge of your seat, nail-biting cliff hangers, you'll like this story. 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 108776
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2008 Updated: January 09, 2009


Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: October 05, 2008 Title: Socially Awkward Vampires

Carlisle.  I think it was Carlisle!!

 
Summary: Sixty years after the events of Breaking Dawn, the Cullens are returning to Forks following years in Alaska.  But what happens when a very familiar face returns to haunt them, and what if she doesn't remember anything?
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 6118
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2008 Updated: October 27, 2008


Reviewer: maddaq Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Memories

Poor Nessie! she shouldn't have to be subjected to teenage lust, even if she is married.  It's hilarious that edward and bella are worse than emmett and rosalie. 

 

Good job with this chapter.  It's a good basic introduction to school and a few of the new students.  Can't wait to see what happens next.

 
Summary: Bella's life was a fairytale until tragedy struck not once, but twice, changing the course of her life forever.  No matter what life throws her way, Bella accepts her life and trudges on.  Now, as she starts college, Bella meets some new friends who try to help her regain her fairytale life.  Will she meet prince charming in the process? 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 51114
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: August 27, 2009


Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: October 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Crashing Lunch

I'm sitting here slackjawed wondering why there isn't more. 

 



Author's Response: This story forces me to think before I write.  I have two other stories that I don't have to think as much on.  Gifted is my newest story, and it comes a bit more easily to me.  Now Socially Awkward Vampires writes itself.  That's why it gets updated so often.  I don't know why Cinderbella makes me calculate things more, but it just does. 

 
Summary:

I just wanted to be a normal girl, well as normal as you could be with a werewolf for a boyfriend and a family full of vampires. Normalicy may escape me, but i can still have fun. These are my Misadventures.

My favorite Review for the chapter "An American werewolf in....":

Thank you Panda!

Ok...so other than the fact that I think you have completely lost it, HAHA, it was an amazing chapter.  I love that Jake and the pack are legendary in the werewolf world.  Go Quiluetes!  waiting for part deux...

Manda

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 49213
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2008 Updated: February 06, 2009


Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: September 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Seattle

awwwwww...love it, love it.

Author's Response: Thanks, i have a few more chapters that i' trying to work on, this is going to keep going and going. i hope :)

 
Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: September 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Cheater

HAHAHAHA!!!! I love it!! sounds just like something that would happen in the Cullen household. 

 
Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: September 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Dance

It's so cute! I love a good nessie story.

 
Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: September 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Halloween Confessions

Poor (lucky) Alice.  She didn't get to give out candy but she got Jasper instead. (if only I had her problems!)

 

You did a great job with the transistion from NPOV to JPOV.  It flowed so smoothly that I almost didn't notice the change but it still felt so right for that part of the story.

 

 



Author's Response: wait until you read the next installment of halloween, more Jake and Nessie goodness!

 
Reviewer: maddaq Signed
Date: October 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Yellowstone and Buffalo

"CULLEN POV

Mmmmm…. hunting trip…"

 

HAHAHA!! That was too funny!



Author's Response: think about it, if you were going to a national park in a state where you see wildlife left adn right and you were a vegan vamp would you be salivating too? :)

 
Reviewer: maddaq Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: These dreams

You wouldn't really let Aro hurt her would you!?  Thank goodness that Jacob will be there to protect her.

 




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