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Penname: xDearAmbellinax [Contact]
Real name: Jolene
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Member Since: September 10, 2008
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Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
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Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: xDearAmbellinax Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Pumpkins

I read your entire story yesterday and loved every minute of it. You captured Stephenie's voice in Bella but you've still made her your own. And I love your spin on Bella's relationship with Jacob. Your story makes me pity him! Poor boy.

 I can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: xDearAmbellinax Signed
Date: October 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Crushed

I am so absurdly in love with your story. You capture Bella's conflict so perfectly. I've been in a similar situation and you write it to the t. Brilliant.

Author's Response: Thanks!  I try to keep it as realistic as possible, at least where the relationships and character development are concerned.  Honestly, SM created such amazing characters that I'm just following her lead. 





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