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Penname: nurse deb [Contact]
Real name: debby dutko
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Wake Up Call by the shrew Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 261]
Summary:

A real person fiction that starts off with a view of the relationship of Rob and Kristen through the eyes of an unusual source.  What did Michael see?  Watch his psyche self-destruct in 17 pages of Robsten lemony goodness.

Then read as Kristen has her own Wake Up Call from these events.  Follow her time with Rob when her world seemingly falls apart.

Not an Herb-centric fic, but he sets up the story.  ROBSTEN all the way.

 

Disclaimer: An imaginary tale of Rob/Kristen. Written with love for the real people.  No disrespect, no harm, no infringement.  We are the fans happy to squee over the idea of them, and wish the real people happiness, success, and privacy in their real lives.  This is for fanfiction purposes only.

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 62484
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2008 Updated: July 01, 2010


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: July 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Kristen's POV: The Soft Goodbye

Love, love, love it!!!!!



Author's Response:

Excellent!  So glad.  Thank you for reading. :)

 
Summary:

 

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After talking with Carlisle, and with some insight from Alice, Edward thinks he and Bella should test the waters of their physical relationship before jumping in, head first, on their wedding night.  Will desire push them into deeper waters or will they stick to the shallows?

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Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 13807
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: February 04, 2009


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: April 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: One More Time

Loved it!  Glad they didn't wait till after the wedding!



Author's Response:

Me too ;-)

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review!!!

 
Taking Chances by Evenstar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1306]
Summary:

 

Amazing new banner by SoapyMayhem!!!! Thank you so much sweetie! You're fantastic!

 

Summary:

Robert has two more days in London before he has to return to his hectic life in LA. He has no intention of letting himself anywhere near emotional attachment. Despite this, he finds himself unable to resist the brave invite of a beautiful girl at a nightclub in Soho, thinking it would be a one night thing only.

 


Join us in the forum (Others)for chapter teasers, discussions or if you just want to say hi :)

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Other Characters: Other Character, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: Taking Chances - Stories and outtakes
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 289305
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: May 05, 2011


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: September 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Heartbroken In Disrepair

update please!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: June 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Heartbroken In Disrepair

Please update soon!!!  No pressure....LOL

 
Summary:

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All told from Edward's POV, The Acclimation Diaries, chronicles Edward’s struggles with learning to control himself and taking things one step at a time as he acclimates himself to Bella sexually in preparation of their impending wedding night.  Can he keep his desire in check or will he snap?

 

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A companion story for my one-shot, “Show Me”

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Indie Banner by: AngstGoddess

 


Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 84817
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2009 Updated: September 19, 2009


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: June 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Soixante-Neuf

Guess I get a gold star since I knew what the chapter meant before I read it.!  knew those 3 years of french would come in handy some day!    love the story!



Author's Response:

Total gold star for you babes!! 

Thank you so much deb for taking the time to read and review my little fic!  You rock!!  *MWAH*

 
This Time Around by bluedom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 213]
Summary:


Exactly a year ago, Jasmine left her disastrous past in Australia and moved to LA. She makes a modest living playing music on the street and working in a record store, reveling in the anonymity of her now relaxed life with her new friends and comfortably messy home.

Robert Pattinson is, give or take, the most wanted man in the world, an overnight prodigy. When chance has it that he quite literally crashes his way into Jasmine’s life, he accidentally can’t leave her alone. A few more change meetings take them on a journey of discovery where they experience the effects of sleep deprivation, Steve Buscemi’s face etched into a wall, some amazing live music and a great deal of food based nostalgia. Oh and they may or may not have a crush on each other, or something.


How important is it to stay true to yourself, when the bright lights of Hollywood threaten to burn right through you?

NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 52108
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: July 10, 2009


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: All I Want

Hurry! Hurry! I love it!

 
Summary:

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There is real life, then there's Real Life.

 

We all know that Rob and Kristen belong together. So what happens when that finally happens, just years down the road? Enter Ever After . . .

 

A series of one-shots, that are tied together by the moments that make up a couple's life together. Add a few 'sex-haired' babies and some Twilight friends for fun.

 

Rated NC-17 because you just never know when the lemon muse will show up.

 

A new series from  jakeward and the shrew.

 

*stories will not be necessarily be in chronological order. Cause that's how we roll. :)

 

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kellan Lutz, Kristen Stewart, Other Character, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: Ever After . . ., The Robsten Files
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 118030
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2013


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Date

Me likey!  I was confused as to how many lids they have.  4? Anyway, this story way cute and loved the lemon.  Now write the honeymoon!

 
Summary:

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"It’s twilight,” I murmured reluctantly. As I looked out onto the western hemisphere at the setting sun, invisible to the weaker human eye, I pondered how many sunsets I had witnessed. How many days had I lived through - and yet none had meant as much to me as today.

Damned as I was to live through the endless, cyclical rotation of day and night, I would spend eternity remembering this moment..."

This is my humble attempt to finish Stephenie Meyer's wonderful Midnight Sun... I was so upset that she didn't finish it that I felt I had to at least attempt it myself! It's a massive tribute to the magnificent Stephenie.

As you will all know, this is Twilight written from Edward's POV.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 108688
[Report This] Published: April 13, 2009 Updated: August 31, 2009


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Carefully, I Sealed Away My Heart

very good!

 
Summary:

 

The madness of being an actor is certainly getting to Robert Pattinson.  He loves his job, but feels empty and alone.  After meeting a mysterious girl at his friend Sam’s show one night in Vancouver, he starts to wonder if he could ever have a normal relationship.  As fate would have it, Rob meets her again at a poetry reading later that night and gets a taste of the one who hopefully will not get away. 

 


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 98788
[Report This] Published: May 17, 2009 Updated: June 15, 2010


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: June 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Doctor, Doctor

I saw those pics of Rob getting attacked by stupid girls in NYC.  It really pissed me off!  He's just a person, people!  It's one thing to ogle his pics online and make up stories about him, but to invade his personal space without his permission is just so pathetic.  I don't know how he's staying sane, but we're going to lose him from the entertainment industry if this doesn't ease up.  He doesn't have to do this.  He's intellegent and so talented in so many areas, and all this insanity is just crazy!  Anyway,   I love the story and your depiction of Rob!  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Poor Robbie!

That situation made me mad, too! I worry because he is such a sensitive soul...Thanks for reading and reviewing.

xox

Songirl

 
Reviewer: nurse deb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Keep Calm and Carry On



Author's Response:

Hello!

I was so glad to see a new review...but alas I could see no words.

Hope you like the story.Thanks for reading.

xox

songirl

 
Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 A Hopeful Heart

Ugh!  This one hurt.....what are you thinking?



Author's Response:

Sorry- never mean to hurt- Poor Teagan. I want to rub her back...I am writing fast as I can so you can find out as soon as possible what I am thinking.

Thank you for reading and letting me know what you thought!

xox

Songirl

 

 
Summary:

A real connection can only be denied for so long. Eventually, time has a way of unraveling it all. Romance. Lemons and Fluff - Rob/Kristen - A collection of shorts.

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Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 8931
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2009 Updated: November 23, 2011


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: June 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Italy - May, 2009

Definitely worth more!  MORE! MORE! MORE!  Loved it so far!

 
Summary:

**Banner made by: Oceanwaters2006**

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella's had enough of Edward holding back from her.  She enlists some unexpected help in her pursuit to get Edward to let go of his Victorian views on love and sex.  When unexpected events occur that change the plan for Bella's transformation, what course will their lives take?

Lots of lemons/humor.  Canon couples.  I took the story OOC because I wanted to let them be a little less uptight.  I wanted them to have a lot more fun and a lot less fighting.

THANKS TO OCEANWATERS2006 FOR THE AMAZING BANNER!!!


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 173485
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2009 Updated: April 25, 2010


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Where Else But Chez Cullen?

No, the sex is not boring.

 
Last Night In Forks by Rushed Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 442]
Summary:

On the last night of her annual trip to Forks to see her father, Bella finds herself a gorgeous distraction from ex boyfriend James.  Thinking she’ll never see the gorgeous Edward again she goes further than she ever thought she would with a complete stranger.   Will this be the last time they ever see each other or does fate have other ideas?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 94747
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2009 Updated: May 31, 2012


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Break Me

Make him earn it!

 
Need to Escape by lostluggage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5723]
Summary:

 

 

When Robert Pattinson needs to escape the crazy life of stardom- he finds an unlikely ally to see him to safety- a quiet bookshop owner who is secretly infatuated with Twilight, and a certain young British actor.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 97 Completed: Yes Word count: 829399
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2012


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Hearts

This is the second RPF that the ladies are hurting my Rob.  Poor Robbie.  No one thinks he can love them.  Love this story!



Author's Response:

he's a tormented boy isn't he... sigh...

thanks for the review! i promise- we'll get to the bottom of all this soon!

i don't like to see Rob hurt any more than the rest of you!

 
Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Time to Face the Music

MMMMM......sex on a piano......yummy!



Author's Response:

yesss... sex on the piano... so glad he didn't play the tuba, or the trombone...hahaha!

thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Welcome Home

Ok, twist my arm!  I love this story and I loved their little reunion scene at the end.  It was perfect.  I think Rob (the real one ) would fall for an old soul, regardless of age.  I don't think age would matter to him.  He comes across as an old soul himself so he'd need someone who could identify with him.  Don't know how you feel about Robsten, but I think that's why they jell so much.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much my dear!

i do think he has an old soul, and i would hope age wouldn't matter to him. I don't think it would. And he makes Jen feel younger in the story...

I am all for Rob being happy, of course I am trying to avoid the whole Robsten rumors right now because it puts a kink in my writing, but i want him to be happy...he needs someone in his life.

thanks for the review! sending a goody your way!

MWAH!

steph

 
Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

We all believe that Edward and Bella are meant to be together...but what if there’s more to that than meets the eye?

 

What if there are forces at work that they don’t understand? How will they cope with events that have no discernable meaning?

 

This story starts out two weeks before Bella and Edward’s wedding. But, right away, things go wrong. They struggle with mishap after mishap, all the while wondering if they’re destined to be at the center of conflict and angst.

 

All the major characters of Twilight appear. Canon couples. Lemons in various chapters. This is a more realistic view of Edward and Bella’s relationship before the wedding. He certainly wouldn’t carry her off to a desert island alone, having never even touched her. They would have experimented a bit.

 

Eventually all characters get their Happily Ever After. I just drag them through hell before we get there. No characters die before their time.

 

And I’ve adhered to canon up until the story starts—Post Eclipse. After that, it diverges from SM’s version. So...no Renesmee. No pregnancy.

 

I’ve poured my heart and soul into this story. It took me over a year to complete. I thought about it constantly. For that hard work and diligence to form, grammar and style, I’d like just one tiny thing from you, the reader.

 

I’d like a review. If you love it, if you hate it, if you’re just indifferent and will never look at it again, I’d like to hear that. It’s not a lot to ask. So...I’ll say thanks in advance for the wonderful reviews you’ll leave after you read each chapter!

 

Maria

twilight gypsy

 

  


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 178339
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Hard Day's Night

Hmmmm...I like the concept I'm just not sure Edward would slip like this.  He's been practicing this lifestyle for too long and he feels so angsty about being a vamp in the first place.  However, I can see how he would feel like it wouldn't really hurt anything to partake since the man was dying anyway.  I'm anxious to see where you're going with this and what the family has to say, not to mention Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for your thoughtful review! When I wrote this piece, I explored it from the angle that Edward is just frazzled after all the crap they went through with Victoria and the newborns, and the Volturi. He has promised Bella they will try and have sex that doesn't kill her  and this is in just a few weeks. So, when he comes across the guy dying in the woods, he gets too close, his vampire nature kicks in, and he feeds. He may feel angsty about being a vamp, but at the end of the day, that is what he is, and that is what I was trying to say in the piece.

Ch 2 was posted tonight for validation. Please continue reading and reviewing! Thanks so much!

 
Finding Forever by Carson1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1350]
Summary:

On her way to London, a broken Sarah Anderson meets the one person who can save her from her darkened existence. Their age difference is the least of their worries.  What will they teach each other and do you really have a second chance at forever?

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Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes Word count: 268155
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: February 14, 2011


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: March 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)

I'm loving this so far!  Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I'm glad you're enjoying it! Update should be later this week!

Cheers

 
Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12(shabbyapple)

Talk about leaving me hanging!  Love this story!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  I know...I'm evil that way :)  I'm so glad that you're loving this.  Thank you so much for your review.  Hope you continue to enjoy.

Cheers!

 

 
Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: April 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13(shabbyapple)

UGGGH!!!  You are such a tease!



Author's Response:

I know! LOL-Update is on the way...thanks for reviewing!  Hope you continue to read and enjoy.

 
Forgettable by Belindella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1628]
Summary:


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 166930
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2010 Updated: March 24, 2011


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: June 30, 2010 Title: Forgettable

Well, since the epiphany is Edward's, then it should be in his POV......but if he stops I'll kill him!

 
Summary:

Sometimes chores can be very satisfying.

Rob/Kristen one shot. KPOV.

Disclaimer: FICTION.  Not real.  I own nothing.  I don't know anyone.  No offense or harm intended.  No profit.  Only sexy-times.  For fanfiction purposes only.

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2186
[Report This] Published: October 13, 2010 Updated: October 16, 2010


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: October 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Dishes - one shot

Yummy yummy yum!



Author's Response:

:D Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks so much for reading. :)

 
Summary:

 

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What if the honeymoon scenes weren't just acting? Just a little more NC-17 Robsten lemony goodness inspired by Breaking Dawn filming. This time from Rob's POV.


Categories: Other Characters: Bella, Edward, Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: Robsten Lemon Shots
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2076
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2010 Updated: December 20, 2010


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: December 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

yummy



Author's Response:

Hehe - thanks, I try! :)

 
Summary:

Bella has a request that only Jasper can help her with.  A family bonding moment.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 5831
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2011 Updated: July 23, 2012


Reviewer: nurse deb Signed
Date: September 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Reason Why

Continue please!!!!!



Author's Response:

okay!!!!!





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