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Penname: rachaelprincess [Contact]
Real name: rachael
Status: Member
Member Since: September 09, 2008
Website: http://www.fanfiction.net/~princessrachael
Beta-reader: Yes

I'm a solid Star Wars fan fiction writer who for some bizarre reason decided to write a Twilight story because it kept getting in the way.  Don't worry - I keep the two genres very far apart.  No overlapping whatsoever.  Han Solo wouldn't believe in Edward Cullen anyway.    


You can find my Star Wars stuff at the website listed above. 


My Twilight work is posted here.


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Reviews by rachaelprincess
 
Summary:

 

 

"In a moment’s time, I’d be his, entirely. The one thing I’d wanted more than anything itself. The pain, the pleasure- it was worth it knowing I’d be able to claim to be his…at long last.

 

"The silence in the room was deafening. The intimacy of this moment made the world hold its breath in anticipation. Time ceased to exist; the only fathomable concepts were Edward and me."

For all of us who read Breaking Dawn, closed the back cover and said; "Yeah...not what I expected..."

This is my version, my ending of the Twilight Saga. In short, it's purpose is to show how Edward and Bella meet the trials and tribulations of being newlyweds, Bella being a newborn as well as other things life has to offer. It's meant to highlight their love, devotion, the strengthening of their bond as well as how they grow together emotionally and physically.

Rated NC-17 for Mature themes, language and adult and sexual content.

WARNING: quite a few lemons here ;]

 

ON HIATUS!! LOOK FOR MY NEWEST WORK AND THE FOCUS OF MY ATTENTION, "Love Story" !!


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Beginning
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 132794
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: November 15, 2009


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Here Comes the Bride...

I loved the details of her dress!  It made a beautiful picture.

The very last of this latest chapter had me confused with Bella's movement.  At one point she was sitting against Alice's chair and then it wasn't Alice - it was Edward, and then suddenly Edward was across the room and then Bella was slowly backing up the stairs?  Might have been just me - I couldn't follow her positions. 



Author's Response:

that's allright...she was sitting against alice- when she realized it was edward singing, not alice, she met his gaze; he has the undulated look of lust and desire on his face, and she only gets more nervous. She stands up to get away, walks over to the steps to catch her breath...Thats's when he comes over and...the rest is yet to come ;)

 

It's relle subtle..didnt wanna over do jerky movements and ruin the purity of the moment =)

 
Yes, Please by Coquette Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 82]
Summary: One-shot. While out of town, Bella devises a way to finally seduce the ever virtuous Edward – with a little help from an unexpected source.
Categories: AU, Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7768
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: October 30, 2008


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh - I bought everything!!  And I thought what was most brilliant about your story was how much you captured Edward's character.  You had to stay in canon somewhat here and you nailed it - even down to the dialogue and physical hesitation.  Bravo!  Really well done.

Encore?

 
Summary:

A question from Renesmee leads Bella to reminisce about other times her daughter has asked difficult questions.  About her unique nature, about children... about Jacob.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2965
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was lovely.  I really was intrigued with your brief exploration of the idea that Jake was forced to love Nessie and that it might concern her if the feelings were not genuine.  Great idea! 

 

 
Summary:

 

What if Bella had left Edward in New Moon rather than the other way around?  

Bella has left Edward, thinking it was the right thing to do for him and his family.  Now she is back in Phoenix, but what happens when Victoria enters the scene determined to seek out revenge for James' death in the worst of ways?

 

thank you Anne Cullen for the beautiful banner!!!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Jasper, Laurent, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 34420
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2008 Updated: April 01, 2009


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow.  Okay - I hope there's more to come.  Interesting idea.  Would Edward follow regardless?  How long could they stay apart?

Author's Response: we'll find out! ;)

 
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: He'll Get Over Me

Yay!  An update!

Author's Response: yay!

 
Summary:

When the Cullens encounter a powerful vampire, there lives are turned upside down. The future collides with the past when Renesmee is thrust into a different time zone and wakes up more than just miles away from her home. While striving to make things right again, Bella falls prey to the same fate as her daughter, only this time she doesn't have Edward to help her.

A million and one thanks to Anne Cullen for the amazing banner!

 


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Eclipse, Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 17661
[Report This] Published: November 01, 2008 Updated: January 15, 2009


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: There's No Place Like Home

Okay - interesting start.  You definitely pulled me in and I'm dying to see how Bella and Edward react when they see her. 



Author's Response: Thanks. I know how some first chapeter's really drag on and I tried to make it interesting. Bella and Edward are coming up soon ^_^

 
Music Lessons by locqua Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 498]
Summary:

Music can be quite the aphrodisiac, even for vampires. When Edward shares his passion for classical music with Bella, they discover a whole new world together just weeks before their nuptials. Set at the beginning of Breaking Dawn.

Winner of "Best use of Music as Inspiration - Complete" at the Twilight Indie Awards!

 

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 78097
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2008 Updated: April 14, 2009


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Davies Hall

I'm loving your story!  Great build up and detail - and I'm dying for your next chapter.

On a side note - I'm glad you mentioned that Esme had a Steinway - because in chapter 3(??) I think you said Kawai - and I just cant see Edward playing on anything less than a Steinway and Sons. :)



Author's Response: Actually, Edward inherited the Steinway from his mother.  But he bought a Kawai (because the special "action" of the Kawai's keys are more conducive to vampire's fingers) as a second piano way back when.  He had both pianos in use until Rosalie broke a few keys (see Dueling Pianos).  Then at Carlisle's request, he put the Steinway in storage to prevent future abuse from his siblings, as it was very sentimental to him.  Now he just has the Kawai, and he loves it dearly!  :)  

 
Summary:

 

 

Bella and Edward imagine how things would have been different on their first day in Biology if Bella were the vampire and Edward the human.  BxE fluff.  And Emmett humour – I mean, really, what’s a story without Emmett?! LOL

 

 


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2228
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2008 Updated: November 04, 2008


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was great!  Hilarious and very close to canon and character descriptions.  I thought your detail on background events, behavior - all of that was so good. 

Wish you had a chapter 2 :)

 
Betting on Success by Twitch Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 209]
Summary:

The time had come for us to relocate. Again. I’d caught a few stray thoughts from several of the wary, yet still exceptionally unobservant humans, who seemed to find it odd that in the seven years of living here we seemed to lack the aging gene.

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15 years have passed since Renesmee was born, and now the Cullens are relocating. Renesmee, Jacob and Bella experience the high school charade for the first time with the rest of the family. But what happens when Jacob wants to start a little bet?

 Edward's POV at first, though it might change in later chapters. First Twilight fanfiction, so please read and review.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 21887
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: December 27, 2008


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: It's On...

This is a fantastic start!  Great idea.  Looking forward to the rest.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it so far. I've been curious about this idea as soon as I finished Breaking Dawn so I thought I'd write how it plays out in my head.

=)

 
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Gossip

I am loving Edward's POV.  Not that Bella's isn't interesting to hear as well - but I guess since we get nothing from Edward in the canon - it's nice to hear him in fan fiction pieces - and you're doing a wonderful job!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying my Edward, thank you very much

=)

 
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: December 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Observe

You're kidding.  All this tension and NOT do a lemon? :)  Waiting for the big bang.  You're doing a wonderful job!

 
Distractions by teamEdwardonly Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 59]
Summary:

What all were the schemes of Bella when Edward tried not to touch her on their honeymoon? Read on for the trials and tribulations of a wife lusting after her vampire husband...

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Vote for this story at the Twilight Awards! http://twilightawards.this-paradise.com/?page_id=105


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 27291
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2008 Updated: December 27, 2008


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Day Four

Your story is fabulous!  I had never even thought - never ever read about this particular missing moment being done before.  Kudos for all your work and writing.

You've got the characters - esp Edward done so well.  The dialogue is amazing.  Edward is sometimes (for me) hard to write.  But you have done this flawlessly.

My only thought is I bet Bella (being Bella) might have started to cry just a bit during their argument.  I almost felt like crying - because she just wants to be close to Edward.  So hard to have him there and not to be able to even kiss.  Hard, hard life :)

Cannot wait to see where you're going next.

 
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Day Five

Edward's reluctance is so killing me.  I totally sympathize with Bella's feelings of sadness and frustration. 

Are you planning to keep going after she wins?  I hope so.  You're doing a fantastic job!



Author's Response:

The boy is strong, but we all know Bella's hormones are stronger in the end. :)

From what I read in BD, there's not much left after Edward finally gives in; I think it's just that afternoon after the third "try" that we don't know about. I'm thinking of a little bonus clip, but we'll see.

 
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Day Six

I loved, loved, loved this story!  Definitely one of my personal favorites at the site.  And while I was thrilled to see an update, I'm so sad to see that it's ending.  I wish you would keep writing - or start another story soon after this one "Part II" :)  You have such a wit with the dialogue and interaction between them - it's catchy, fun and such a great escape into their minds.  I loved this! 

 
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Day Six

PS - thank you, thank you for the BONUS.  Not only was it good - but it tied the entire story into a well-formed conclusion.  Bringing all the missing pieces together, so-to-speak.  Nice touch.

 
Summary: It's Edward's birthday. Bella plans a little surprise for him. All vampires, AU. Rated NC- 17 for lemons.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 15646
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2008 Updated: May 02, 2009


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Surprise

Okay - what the...?  Leaving us with that cliff hanger?  Totally killing me here. 

I love this idea for a story.  Great plot! 

Please update soon!!

 
Raspberries by Isabel0329 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary: Summary: Edward has a fantasy about Bella that he’s been desperate to see come to life. One that involves fruit. And he’s determined to make it happen.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3156
[Report This] Published: November 08, 2008 Updated: November 09, 2008


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

It's so rare to see Edward actually acting out on a fantasy.  I loved this!  Any chance for a sequel??

 
Jacob's Story by Mary Elizabeth Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

This story begins during Chapter 23 of Eclipse.  It is told from Jacob's point of view.  It begins by shadowing the story written in Eclipse, but then changes to address what would happen if after Jacob and Bella's kiss, Edward decided to join his family and fight the newborns in the clearing.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 5128
[Report This] Published: November 08, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2009


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I cant wait to see where you go with this...

 
Fixation by EverScorpio Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Bella/Edward/Victoria Promotion BannerAU
New Moon. Sometimes the choices we make, to save someone, condemn them to what we sought to avoid. To protect the one he loves, Edward must leave Bella, forever. When realizing his mistake, Edward returns to try and save his relationship with Bella only to discover that she has gone missing. Can the one mistake erase an eternity of love?

Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 4297
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2008 Updated: November 11, 2008


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Unseen Consequences

What an interesting idea for a story.  Very captivated by your different POV - although love Edward and Bella most.  Looking forward to see where you're going with this.

 
Summary:

"She deserved better than me. She deserved better than someone who was constantly risking her life and putting her in danger- just by my presence alone."

Edward's POV from after Italy. Extensive flashback to family discussion after birthday party. Can he earn back Bella's trust, or will they face new issues?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 7881
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2008 Updated: November 29, 2008


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Melody Haunts My Reverie

This was very sweet.  My favorite was the ending - when he crawled in next to her.

Great job on writing the dialogue between the Cullens when Edward explains they have to leave.  I dont think I've ever read a scenario of that conversation - and you did it very well.



Author's Response: Thank you. Technically, the story was supposed to end when he got into bed with her. Unfortunately, I forgot to write "one-shot" on fanfiction.net, where it was originally posted on the same day. So I recieved a bunch of story alerts and reviews asking for the next chapter. So then I turned it into a story. XD

 
Summary: After his conversation with Jacob, Edward's imagination goes a little wild. Clearly, his mind is his worst enemy.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2617
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2008 Updated: November 11, 2008


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Love it!  Love missing moment pieces and you captured this one quite well - the agony and desperation - to the point of out right horrible fantasies that would drive Edward nuts.  Great job!

Author's Response: *blushes* Looks like I've done my job, then. Thanks for reading.

 
Kissing Bella by FatApolloLove Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary:

 

"Eclipse" EPOV. Mid-"Declarations" through "Wager". Jacob kisses Bella.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7523
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2008 Updated: November 12, 2008


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Kissing Bella

This was wonderful!  Love missing moments and you captured this really well.  I hope you have a second chapter or possibly 10th chapter coming :) 

I really liked how you talked about Edward's cravings and longing in the beginning - you did an excellent job of fleshing that out. 

And I loved the isolation he was in while she was gone - sitting on the Volvo alone.  Perfect picture.



Author's Response:

Ah, sweet Edward isolation and angst. Yes, that it something that I, too, love with all my heart. Unfortunately this was a one shot, so no new chapters. But I am working on another EdwardPOV thingie which will be longer than this one...and filled with even more angst and longing. I hope you'll check it out.

As I plug a story I haven't finished yet. How classy of me.

 
Mistaken Vows by twi_ction Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 523]
Summary:

Takes place several years after New Moon. AU. Bella never went cliff diving, Edward never went to the Volturi. For years Edward has been forced to live with the pain of Bella’s absence in his life, knowing that it is no one’s fault but his own. How will Edward and his family react when Isabella Swan turns up as one of Carlisle’s intensive care patients and has no where to go? Will the mystery of her condition and the events that she has overcome in Edward’s absence be revealed?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Phil, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 55312
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2008 Updated: January 17, 2009


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow - I'm so hooked.  Cannot wait till you update.  Your dialogue is so cute and heart-warming.  Loved the line -

Terrible. Awful. I think about you constantly. I miss you. I need you. “Fine.”

 

:)

 
Summary:

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What happens when a member of the Cullen family falls ill? Is it possible for a vampire to get sick? How the Cullen's handle Bella becoming an invalid and be there as they help her through these trying times.......


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Chelsea, Collin, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Leah, Marcus, Nessie, Phil, Quil, Renata, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Senna, Seth, Tanya, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 10384
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2008 Updated: January 09, 2009


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: December 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Black Hole

Each chapter is getting better.  Though I still have a hard time picturing Bella so at ease with Esme that she would mold so flawlessly to the mother-daughter relationship.  Some of your points though make it very believable. 



Author's Response:

I know it may seem odd for Bella to be in a great mother-daughter relationship, but over 9 years as a vampire, she has grown very close to Esme, considering that she doesn't get to see much of Renee anymore. Also, in furtuer chapters, you will begin to piece together pieces on why she is so "stuck" on Esme. I hope you enjoy and read on...

 
Summary: Awake Upon Dawn, a Breaking Dawn Redux, traces the story of Edward and Bella after the happenings in Twilight, Eclipse and New Moon and explores the dangers that their irrevocable love entails. An epic tale of romance, passion and its consequences.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 600
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2008 Updated: November 17, 2008


Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Preface

Would love to see where you're going with this.  Looking forward to more postings.

 




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