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Penname: rachaelprincess [ Contact]
Real name: rachael
Status: Member
Member Since: September 09, 2008
Website: http://www.fanfiction.net/~princessrachael
Beta-reader: Yes
I'm a solid Star Wars fan fiction writer who for some bizarre reason decided to write a Twilight story because it kept getting in the way. Don't worry - I keep the two genres very far apart. No overlapping whatsoever. Han Solo wouldn't believe in Edward Cullen anyway.
You can find my Star Wars stuff at the website listed above.
My Twilight work is posted here.
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Summary:  
This is Edward's side of the bedroom reunion scene in eclipse (Chapter 8: Temper, pages 185-195). Many thanks to psymom and MarcyJ for very thorough and extremely helpful betas - they're amazing! As usual, all the regular disclaimers apply: Stephenie Meyer owns all things twilight; no money is being made from this work; and absolutely no copyright infringement is intended. The dialog from eclipse here is copied only for clarity. Thanks to Stephenie for creating such wonderful characters! One other note: I am a member of team Switzerland - I do not dislike Jacob, so don't be upset with me. Edward, on the other hand, has his own opinions... In Edward's words...
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Totality
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Word count: 7339
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2008 Updated: April 18, 2008
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: September 09, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Homecoming
This was simply one of the best fan fiction pieces I have read on Twilight. Awesome, amazing job! It just was so smooth - so perfect with it's flow and edge. I loved so many ideas you brought forward - like the idea of everyone else being together after the hunt except Edward with Bella. Loved the shower idea. I esp liked how you had Edward struggling with killing Jacob after he realizes how his words have hurt Bella. Everything you wrote seemed to fit perfectly into the dialogue. Lovely! Lovely!! Keep up the good stories! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Edward's head is an interesting place to be - and this was a fun one to write. One time he's not so mopey or beating himself up quite as much... 8-) thanks for reading! blondie
Summary: 
Thanks Roo, for the amazing banner!
And more keep coming in! Thanks to m81170 for this lovely piece of art:
Here's another amazing pic that fits in with Dark Side of the Moon perfectly -thank you to JohannaL for ID'ing the author: http://smirks-works.livejournal.com/ check out her (I assume) other manips - she's a genius!
Updated November, 2009
This story is now COMPLETE!
Dark Side of the Moon is my version of New Moon from Edward’s point of view. Witness how Edward agonized over leaving Bella, hunted for Victoria, faced the Volturi, and came to realize that with Bella was where he was meant to be.
This tormented story has been a part of my life for about a year and a half – and what a ride it’s been! Meant to be canon and in character, I hope you enjoy angsty Edward and his suffering during New Moon. As unhappy as Bella was during this time, Edward suffered so much more (I think). So be sure and crack open a fresh box of tissues before reading!
Thank you to everyone for all the reviews, especially to those of you who reviewed each and every chapter! Your support and loyalty have been the driving force to me getting this project finished – and I hope it’s lived up to all of your expectations.
Love you all,
blondieakarobin
PS. As one last thank you, I’ve posted a formatted, printable copy of Dark Side of the Moon at http://bit.ly/2vLHMi, as will also post as an electronic version suitable for viewing on a kindle or MobiReader. I’m also posting a ‘Director’s Cut’ that includes citations of all of Bella’s quotes from Twilight, research notes, and even funny comments from my betas in this version in the same directory.
blondie
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Use of the dialog from the series is just for clarity - Stephenie Meyer owns all things twilight! I'm making absolutely nothing from this work.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 163080
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2008 Updated: February 26, 2010
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: December 07, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Distraction
Oh my gosh how painful! Wow - I really enjoyed how Edward met his parents after he ran from Bella. That was a nice touch. The connection with kissing and the envelope was a bit wierd - but it quickly faded. Seriously - this is so painful - I have to gear myself up to read another chapter when you post. :) Author's Response: Hee hee hee - the envelope was kind of twisted, but with vampire senses, the world is a different place 8-). Yup, stock up on tissues! Thanks for reading! blondie
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: March 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Ano Nuevo
This is so beautiful - in a terrible "ache-in-your-chest" kind of way :)
I think my favorite parts are when he finds himself speaking out loud. It's very powerful.
And now for my question - are you finishing this piece with some redemption? And by that I mean - please, please, please do the reunion scene at Italy (and maybe a little after)...... Author's Response: I'm hoping to do the whole book. I have pieces of scenes written nearly to the the end, so there's still a lot more to come. The reunion scene is two chapters away, I think.
Thanks!
blondie
Summary: My idea of what happened when Jacob went for a drive in Chapter 17 of Breaking Dawn and Leah came to talk to Bella. This is from Bella's POV.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Leah, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1066
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 17, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: A Visit
Love this. I have always wanted to see this conversation fleshed out and I love how you did it. Fantastic job!
Summary:
A running smutline of Edward and Bella's honeymoon . . . and everything afterwards.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 100790
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2011
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed 
Date: January 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Sensation
Katie, Katie, my dear Katie....
First of all - I was doing the 'happy dance' when I saw that you had updated your story. I had hoped, prayed and mentally pleaded for you to keep going. Only you can do this scene justice and I was dying to see you conquer the post-vampire scene.
And boy did you conquer it! You smashed it and now reign supreme! Wow!!! I think my favorite part was when Edward confessed he had waited so long to do this. So intensely loved how you did this. And I don't know who is possibly complaining about the missionary position - because how you put it here makes it fit completely! It wouldn't have worked any other way. You really did get inside their minds and set a perfect pace on how they explored each in this new phase of Bella's life. It was so perfect!
And the fact that you are going to keep going...I think you just made my week! Again, you are the best at these moments Katie - you have a knack for getting it just right and I'm thrilled to keep reading!!! Amazing job! Author's Response: Teehee!
I love me a good happy dance.
Thanks so much - I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I always love to hear that I've managed to stay in character while portraying the scene. And yay to you for not minding missionary - although, it won't be too much longer before BxE start to get a little. . .adventurous. hehe.
I have 4 outta the 5 chaps done already, so as soon as one chapter gets posted, the next will be on the way. I'm posting the next chap as we speak. ;)
<3 Katie
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: February 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Power
Wow - I think you handled so many positions in that one short chapter - it was amazing! Seriously, I dont understand how anyone could possibly top a post-change intimate scene after this? It was fabulous! And you kept the romance and sweetness of the pair in tune the entire time.
Is this the end? It concluded so nicely - but I'm so afraid we wont see you again??? Author's Response: Bb, we are far, FAR away from the end. I promise. ;)
And thank you very much - I figured it was about time they switched it up a little. And what better excuse than crazy newborn emotions?! haha.
<3 Katie
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: March 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Beautiful
Woohoo!! Update from one of my favorite authors! Love your writing always - of course continue!
Few things - I loved how you had Edward's acceptance at the end - such a pivitol moment and loved how you addressed it.
And I know there is another act left - but are we thinking of the same one? I was thinking of the night where Edward realizes the Volturi might win and he will lose Bella - so he's more aggressive? - you know? Or are you thinking the very end celebration? :) Author's Response: Haha, no no no.
The final act is just the last romp for their first night at the cottage. I still have the whole rest of the book to fill in! I couldn't give it up now!! ;) Trust me. . .both your suggestions will be filled in, as well as many, many others! :D
Thanks, bb!!
<3 Katie
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: April 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Craving
What a tremendous finish for Act 5. I would love to see that in Edward's POV. But I would also love the next act as well :) Are we too demanding of you?? :) Author's Response: My readers can never be too demanding - I love y'all too much!! ;)
Thanks so much for reading a reviewing, and I will tell ya right now that an EPOV is up next. There's currently a poll on my FF profile (fanfiction.net/~katiebellecullen) where you can vote for the EPOV chap you want next. There's currently a rat race between two of them though, so hop on over and vote for your favorite!
<3 Katie
Summary: The sheer force of these unblocked memories sent me reeling with wonder.
Edward finally gets what he's always wished for: A peek into Bella's mind. The last three pages of Breaking Dawn told from Edward’s point of view. Edward/Bella fluff. Winner of the "Most Romantic" category at the Twilight Awards
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1719
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2008 Updated: August 11, 2008
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: October 07, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: In Loving Memories
What a refreshing idea for a piece! Loved it! Amazing job. I'm so glad someone wrote this.
Author's Response: Thanks- it's not my favourite peice, but I'm glad it seems to be so popular. x
Summary: I felt my face seize up, panic twisting then freezing my mouth, my eyes, my forehead. Unable to help it, I turned towards the hallway, to where Bella had gone, to where I knew she was. The thought of letting her go scalded my insides and brought my basest instincts crashing to the fore again. The urge to go to her, to where she lay in the bath, lay so quiet, so dull, so gone. It took everything I had not to make that first step and a low growl trembled from my throat with the effort. Edward comes back for Bella after leaving her in New Moon, but winning her back is not so easy. Or is it...?
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 16623
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: December 06, 2008
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: December 06, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Wow - ouch! This is painful to read. So dark and despair. I hope we eventually see a happy ending.
Summary: Where this moment fits in Breaking Dawn: This would pick up after page 138, before the start of book 2. It's my interpretation of what SHOULD have been expressed regarding Bella's pregnancy. This moment takes place during Bella and Edward's flight home after their honeymoon.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1089
[Report This] Published: August 17, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 17, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Hope
I wish you would have delved deeper into the dialogue here and expanded your vision. You have a great start - it just ended so quickly.
Summary: One of the missing sex scenes in BD, that I am doing a series of. Includes the wedding night and the first time after that so far. 
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Word count: 6303
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: November 15, 2008
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 15, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Edward's Defeat
Wow! Wow! Wow! I'm such a puddle of water on the ground right now. That was exquisite! Please please please do not abandon this piece. Keep going!!!
Summary: What really happened on the return journey back to Forks after Edward and Bella's honeymoon? How did Edward deal with the fact that Bella wanted to keep the baby? 
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3517
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008
Summary: I am a monster. Point blank, end of discussion, without a doubt. It's never been a problem before. Until now. Suddenly, the scale is unbalanced? Suddenly, he's above me? Yes.
And I don't deserve someone as good as him. Bella is a mature vampire belonging to a cruel, powerhungry coven. When the Cullens move to Forks, she meets an old friend from her newborn days. BxE, AU.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 6530
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2008 Updated: September 08, 2008
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: December 22, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Wake Up
I hope you update soon. This is a great premise and would love to see where you go.
Summary: 
For True Edward Fans. An in-depth, accurate portrayal of the heart, mind, and soul of the beloved Edward Cullen as he deals with the complex themes and events taking place during Eclipse. RATED T FOR TEEN, ALTHOUGH CHAPTER 8 CONTAINS SENSUALITY. CANON. EPOV.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 64609
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2008 Updated: November 07, 2008
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 07, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Theme from Chapter 20 - Compromise - Part Two
Ah...an update. I never get tired of reading your stuff. You do some of the best missing moments/behind the scenes of Edward I've ever read. Still eagerly looking forward to you adding more chapters to your Breaking Dawn Edward.
Summary: Bella and Edward settle happily into married life at Dartmouth but Bella’s dreams of a mysterious child persist, drawing them into a centuries old deception with devastating consequences. A Breaking Dawn AU. 
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 75617
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2008 Updated: May 02, 2009
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: March 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Gabriel
I thought their reunion was so sweet! Loved the personal time on the bed :)
Other stuff was good too - but that part was my favorite... Author's Response: Don't worry, that was my favourite part too!
It wasn't how I was originally going to start the chapter but the tiny Edward in my head demanded he get some alone time with Bella, and really, who was I to argue? :)
Summary: He fascinates her. He stimulates her. He has always been beautiful to her, but now he is infinitely more. He is her anchor. He is her connection to the world. He is her husband.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Carlisle, Esme
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 768
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2008
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: October 06, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: He Is Her
Loved it! I have always been sensitive to how amazing Esme and Carlisle are to each other - throughout Twilight. I love reading pieces on them and you did a fantastic job!
Summary: Edward never returned to Carlisle, his "rebellious years" stretching into decades. Bella is in Seattle, avoiding a dance and buying books. But she's a danger magnet, and ends up attracting something she never expected.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 31630
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2008 Updated: July 14, 2009
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: January 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 (S)
Fabulous! Wow! What a great story idea!!
Summary: A look inside Edward's reflections upon leaving Forks to escape the temptation of Bella in Twilight and what brings him back. One shot, Edward's POV.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2390
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2008 Updated: September 22, 2008
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: November 04, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wait - is that it? You have a lovely beginning here. Hope you update soon.
This is really complex - love the idea of the museum and the moth. Keep going...
Summary: Just because Bella has married Edward doesn't mean the complications are over. Will she ever become a vampire? Does she even really want to? And what is she going to do about Jacob? And what is she going to do when something threatens her own life and the Cullen's existence?
Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Leah
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 8950
[Report This] Published: September 24, 2008 Updated: August 26, 2009
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: October 26, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Honeymoon
Looking forward to the rest!
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: December 04, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: First Hunt
Wow - rare to see the dominant side of Edward :) I'm loving your story - cant wait to read the rest.
Summary: Bella and Rosalie form their unlikely alliance. Here is what transpired between Bella's call and when we see Breaking Dawn through Jacob's eyes.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 2330
[Report This] Published: September 24, 2008 Updated: October 27, 2008
Summary: Bella works for the Volturi as chief interrogator. She passes her nights toying with the souls of the lost, hearing their confessions before wiping them away. At night she toys with the heart of a fellow member of the elite Guard.
But soon she will meet a vampire that will change her life forever. Is she willing to accept these feelings? Can finding love cause Bella to leave behind the only world she'd ever known, or will some things never change?
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 66195
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: January 28, 2009
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: December 25, 2008
Title: Changing Sides
Great last few chapters. Really had me on edge. Cannot wait to read the reunion between Bella and Edward.
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2008 Updated: January 21, 2009
Reviewer: rachaelprincess Signed
Date: December 22, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Broken
Oh gosh - must wait until after the holidays!? Sigh! Author's Response: LOL. Sorry. It doesn't help that I have two other stories going, too...
Thank you for the review :)
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