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Penname: Always Sunny [ Contact]
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Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: Always Sunny Signed
Date: April 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
she always knows... ;)
Summary:  Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).
Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010
Reviewer: Always Sunny Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Us Washingtonians never own umbrella unless we're sitting in the rain, like at a little league baseball game or having a picnic... when it's raining. (Okay, bad example.) Because it rains so much, Washingtonians just don't care anymore about getting wet and the wet-dog look is practically in style.
Ah, the ride to Seattle. I had a feeling that would show up in this story for some reason. I wonder what they're relationship will look like then. They've moved into friendly touchng now -- his shoulder pat -- and I can only imagine what's next... ;)
I feel kind of naive too whenever Edward talks about his use... I've experimented but there's a whole other world that experimenting just doesn't even touch on. I'm glad Edward feels comfortable enough to talk to Bella about his past and that Bella doesn't judge Edward about it.
I love this story. I'm really enjoying myself.
Reviewer: Always Sunny Signed 
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Oh my gawd. I'm just a pile of goo.
I love this relationship you've created. It's sweet and simple. They just like each other. That's it.
I like how Edward can tell her things. This isn't a secret relationship and he's not supposed to have. He knows it's probably not what he's supposed to do, but so does Bella. He's probably going to tell Jasper. It's just... I'm not doing a good job of explaining. I just like how there isn't any miscommunication drama that everyone writes about. This is new and orginal and more like a real life kind of situation. You're not afraid to write awkwardness... and when you do, it's endearing - not painful.
It's just brilliant. It's wonderful writing, style, content. I love this story! I'm sad this is the last chapter that you have posted, so please update soon. :)
Reviewer: Always Sunny Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Oh my gawd.
I loved this chapter. :D
Reviewer: Always Sunny Signed 
Date: January 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
This chapter really surprised me. I'll tell you the truth; this chapter wasn't at all what I was expecting. But, I don't know what I was expecting in the first place. I’m almost… confused.
Bella really confuses me. I feel like I’m totally missing something with her… or she is with Edward. I don’t expect her to react when Edward tells her of his dark past, but she doesn’t have any reaction. I feel like there is a conflict that she’s trying not to see. What she wants to do with Edward and what she knows she shouldn’t do with Edward. It’s like she doesn’t really want to know what Edward was up to, you know?
I really want to know what Edward thinks. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
I loved the whole part with the boots and the kissing on the stairs… I became mushy. The awkwardness during the sex – I think I would have been put off if they had sex and it was really hot and perfect. It made it more relatable that there was this awkward stretch of time that they were hesitant and decided not to.
I really did like this chapter. I’m excited about the next one. I’m dying to see where you take this story
Reviewer: Always Sunny Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I love the witty banter. It's not as in your face as some stories, but it's sweeter and more personal this way.
I'm glad they're getting into a more comfortable zone when they talk. There aren't a lot of awkward silences anymore.
Reviewer: Always Sunny Signed
Date: December 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I already love this story. It's brilliant.
Reviewer: Always Sunny Signed
Date: December 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Edward's point of view was really, really intense. Bella's is more what I'd expect an unharmed subconscious to feel like. Simple almost. She's aware of whats going on around her, unlike Edward who was trying to get some sort of balance in himself. The intensity of Edward's thoughts brings that same kind of force into Bella's mind when he's around, as though his energy, like she mentioned, invaded her space.
This story is brilliant. I'm dying to see where you take it. I want to know what Bella thinks of Edward after he's not mysterious anymore... is his past intimidating to her?
Reviewer: Always Sunny Signed
Date: December 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Even when he's not high, Edward is an intense character. There's something so morose about his routine life. It's calm is powerful.
The first part of this chapter was very powerful. There wasn't much difference in his day and it's scary because he knows that without something to look forward to, he could fall into his old habits. I would be nervous too.
He's depressed too. I liked how you described the cement block as not being painful, but just heavy on his chest and enough to keep him from breathing easy. That would also make him not want to go into the bookstore... that was terrible he couldn't remember! I felt horrible for him. How would you explain?
I really love this story. It's awesome. :)
Reviewer: Always Sunny Signed
Date: December 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I love Edward. I just want to give him a huge hug and tell him he's going to be fine. He's too timid.... and Bella really likes him. He should know that.
I didn't think that was the going to be how the whole addiction thing came out in the open. Interesting that Jasper's in AAA. I like how everything is slowly reveiled. Makes for a really entertaining read. :)
I love this.
Reviewer: Always Sunny Signed
Date: December 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Oh my god. Edward is... so intense. There should be another word I should be using for him, but that's all I can... really come up with. I don't think I was breathing through his whole confession. It brought tears to my eyes... to be that out of control of yourself. To not recongnize yourself in the mirror. Edward completely lost himself. He wasn't mingling with reality and while he was aware of how forgone he was, he didn't know what to do about it.
I hope Jasper helps him. Jasper's a good, soild, steady soul to lean on when you can't stand up on your own. That's good for Edward.
It was kind of sad to see that Edward can only be friends with Bella. I mean, that's okay, but I would think it would be hard to not have that option at all. It's like not being able to use your left arm. That all possiblity is gone until further notice.
Your writing is flawless. I'm in love with the style in which you write and tell the story. It's just refreshing. There aren't any unnessary details wieghing down the important parts and I just love reading it. :)
I love this story.
Reviewer: Always Sunny Signed
Date: December 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Oh my god. I'm giggling! That was the sweetest thing I've ever had the pleasure of reading.
I love this story. It's absolutely brilliant.
Reviewer: Always Sunny Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Dang. I wanted him to kiss her even though I knew it wasn't going to happen, but that was... I love how it's so awkward and they like each other and it's just... simple. Complicated, but what they say is simple and meaningful and totally... sweet.
I liked the 'trying to get a glance at the guy sitting next to me' Bella was doing. Doesn't everyone do that? ;)
I have to sleep now, but I'm finishing your story tommorrow. I love this. It's amazing.
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