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Penname: melizzymoo [ Contact]
Real name: aileen
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Member Since: March 26, 2009
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Summary: 
When Bella moves to Forks to live with her father, Sheriff Charlie Swan, she finds herself intrigued by the town’s occupants and despite warnings, unwittingly becomes a pawn in the intense and explosive rivalry between the Cullen family and their neighbors the Blacks.
Set in the American West circa 1880. All Human/AU. Canon Pairings. Rated R for violence and gun play.
Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 70936
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2009 Updated: January 12, 2010
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: April 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 (v)
hahahaha. oh i love awkward edward but that last line was the best. =] even though i'm not big on westerns, this story is too great. i like badass sharp-shooting rosalie. she's pretty awesome.
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: April 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
sigh. that was a fantastical chapter. the dancing was too cute. tooo too cute. and awesome jacob/edward fight moment. i do like that there's a legitimate reason to why jacob hates edward. too many stories just make jacob out to be an absolute jerk for no real reason. =]
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: May 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
poor poor edward. =( i liked the rosalie and edward scene. she was. delightfully deep. =] this update put a smile on my face. regardless that i have my accounting final in seven hours and i have no idea what i'm doing. thank you for the happiness. =D
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
i would absolutely love to read your story if you did an age of edward entry! and this story was so sweet, my teeth are hurting. but that's okay. 'cause sugary sweetness is my guilty pleasure. amazing amazing. =] their hug was absolutely delightful to read. it made me grin. thanks for the update. =]
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 (v)
eeeee. =] so cute. and quoting firefly isn't pretentious. just awesome. but i'm a nerd, so that might be why. haha. thanks for the update! it made my day. =]
Summary: 
Edward Cullen needs to pass Statistics. Bella Swan is his tutor. She thinks he's a flighty, arrogant--albeit sexy--asshole, and he thinks she's Bipolar, but tries to win her over, anyway.
Can he change her mind, or do first impressions really last?
Thanks to my baby momma, Maximista, for the banner! <3
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: No
Word count: 258464
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: May 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
this story is absolutely wonderful. heck. it's kept me up until 5 am on exam week. =X but right now, it's worth it. 'cause this story is hilarious. the myspace comment inputs with the pictures are awesome. hahaha. the rob picture is hot. the bella/edward interaction is great. i can't wait for moreee. =]
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts
wowserss. what an epic chapter. i love aquariums! they make me so happy. though, if that shark thing had happened to me, i might have screamed too. nooo to the adrian thing. =( but rosalie calling lacey lassie made me laugh out loud. thanks for the update. i can't wait for more. =]
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: July 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans
my iphone won't let me review on twilighted so this is long overdue. but last chapter. when you introduced jace, i laughed. 'cause i'm reading city of ashes by cassandra clare and there's a jace in there. so. i thought it was just weird. but love love love this story. poor mike. i can only imagine what edward's conspired to do. and you're putting glasses on edward! that made me squeal a little bit. hot nerds are my obsession. =] thanks for the update. i can't wait for more. Author's Response: Tis where I stole the name from, 'cos Jace Wayland makes my lady parts tingle like whoa.
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: July 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18: Dirty deeds & Dr. Fuck Me
hahahaha. poor edward. always having to deal with having such a hot dad. sigh. thanks for the update! it was great. =]
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois
back to school! i've been missing those silly myspace pictures. hahaha. at the end, them talking about sex with the other's parents though...kinda odd, but funny at the same time. thanks for the update! =]
Summary: Scarred by events in her past, Bella relies heavily on her best friend and roommate, Jasper. When Jasper falls in love with a girl named Alice, Bella is excited for him but can’t help but wonder – where will she fit in? Her answer partially arrives in the form of Alice's older brother, Edward, but as their friendship grows, Bella comes to realize that she may be too broken to give Edward everything he needs. Canon pairings, AH/AU
This contains explicit content, elements which may be offensive to some, and dark themes. It is intended for a mature audience.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No
Word count: 256064
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2010
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: April 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Curry Confessions
oh my gosh. is it sad that i felt right at home with all the slightly geeky references. i totally started reading the ultimates this summer! but i couldn't finish before i went off to college (it's my brother's book). and sf4. hahaha. i'm so pumped to play it. my friends have it at home and i'm going back soon. totally psyched. i'm not much of a WoW fan, but my brother bombed a couple of college courses because of it. and it makes me laugh.
obviously. i made it fourteen chapters in. i'm in love with your story. you depiction of their awkward courting is unbelievably wonderful. i love a jasper/bella platonic but powerful friendship and the way you write yours is absolutely beautiful. i'm definitely going to be waiting at the edge of my chair for the next chapter. =] Author's Response: Of course, I don't think it's sad that you get the geeky references :P I love all that stuff. And btw, SFIV is awesome. Love it.
I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and that you like the relationships I've written :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm writing chapter 15 right now.
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: April 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Courage and Revelations
ahh. too cute. =X as much as i missed me some jasper, i loved this chapter. edward is such a sweetheart. and bella's pov, her wandering mind and internal monologue is very amusing. =] Author's Response: I miss Jasper too...but he's coming back next chapter :) I'm so glad you loved Edward in this chapter - and I love writing Bella's wandering mind. She makes me laugh. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: May 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: The Aftermath
thank you for the chapter. it was wonderful. =] i almost miss their nerdiness. i hope it's brought back when the pack gets there! i can't even imagine the hilarity that will ensue.
Summary:
Edward Cullen is a fire-fighter who has run away from a haunting past in the city of Chicago. Bella Swan is a blossoming artist who is trying to rebuild her life after a tragic event leaves her with a broken heart. Their paths cross when the once simple town of Forks becomes the backdrop for a series of mysterious arsons. Is it just a coincidence? Or has someone's past come back to haunt them?
NEW BANNER!!! by Megs at ADF (adifferentforest) Thank you!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Phil, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 60967
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: September 02, 2010
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Pallette Knife
oh you devil you. taunting us with edward's past like that. =(
the chapter was amazing. i'm a big charlie fan, so i'm glad he's being included. =] i can't wait for more.
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: July 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Rags
i feel like edward has the mind of a pyrotechnic. haha. that whole "trouble putting everything else out of his mind" thing just made me think that. i dunno. i really enjoy what's going on, even though it's mostly a mystery. haha.
Summary: 
While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse. When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help. But of course, fate has plans for this man. Canon Couples. AU. DARK Themes.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: March 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: The Trial
poor poor vampire. =( this plot line totally intrigues me though. i'm loving it. are you ever going to mention how bella got to be friends with the cullen family in the first place? i'm curious about that. but other than that, i'm ready and waiting anxiously for the next chapter. =] Author's Response: Yep, I'll most definitely mention it at some point :D It's probably gonna be hella anticlimactic........... but I guess it is what it is! :D
I'm glad you're enjoying it, thank you for reviewing!
- Michelle
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: March 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: The Antidote
although i feel this was kind of just like a filler chapter, i love the way you portray edward and bella's relationship. it's just so intimate even though they don't really even talk.
i want to guess that they brought him food??? not that his old captors are here to take him away again like bella thinks. at least i hope it's not. =X but that's my guess. i'm anxiously awaiting chapter tenn. =] Author's Response: You thought this was a filler? Interesting! This is one of the ones that I thought was sort of crucial to the story! I won't go into the details of why, because you're fully entitled to think it's a filler, but I'd love to hear your reasoning behind that! pm me sometime!
Thanks for reviewing!
- Michelle
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: April 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: The Bedroom
hahaha. in your end notes. the "and the vamp is still naked" just made me laugh. i'm curious about this bonding moment between the vamp and rosalie. and the line "emmett kept talking to the vampire, which never actually helped.." made me giggle inside. 'cause that's so like emmett.
i was going to reread the last chapter and pm you about why i thought it was a filler, but i haven't had time really. i have a feeling that when i do get to reading it again, i'll probably realize why it wasn't.. but i had to read the update first and i hope the vamp gets better soon! and puts on some clothes. =X
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: April 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: The Sunset
yayy pants. imagining this story has been a bit strange for me since he's been naked this whole time. i'm just. prude like that. nakedness makes me uncomfortable. i'm curious to know if the reason the vamp is starting to trust carlisle is because he can read his mind again. ??? yes? haha. the ending scene is beautiful. it's such a little gesture to normal people, but for them it's huge. and things like that make me happy. =] =] thank you for the update. Author's Response: haha, and now he's in girls pants! They're oversized, so hopefully they fit :)
I'm sorry nakedness makes you uncomfortable, I think being clothed makes basementward uncomfortable! :P
Thanks for reviewing
-Michelle
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: May 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: The River
oh my goshhh. i had been thinking it was humans who kept him locked up!! i forgot what made me think that. but while i was reading the first half of the chapter i was like. hmmm.
but i'm loving this story more and more. everytime edward reveals something, it's just like. @_@ and then whoaa. how awesome. =] =]
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: June 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: The Jump
i feel like i did when i read about pinocchio coming to life. lol. but hooray. thanks for the update. =] even though i read it pretty late.
i hope RL isn't being too much of a bummer =(
Summary: Edward Cullen is Big Man on Campus at his high school in Port Angeles. Bella Swan is a quiet, sarcastic, marches-to-the-beat-of-her-own-drummer girl at Forks High. A part-time job brings them together, and an unlikely friendship and surprising feelings develop. Neither is brave enough to do anything about it, however, and they part ways when Edward heads off to college. Their paths cross again after a year of no contact, and Edward is determined to not only rekindle their friendship, but to man up and actually do something about his ever-present feelings for Bella.
Banner by the brilliant Anne Cullen
Come visit over on the forums! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=3850
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 144739
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2009 Updated: October 08, 2009
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: July 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
eeeeeekkk. =X that was absolutely delicious. i can't even find other words for that. haha. i love how he's sweet yet sultry at the same time. sigh. thank you for the chapter. now i can go off to study with a smile. =] Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'm glad you enjoyed. Hope your studying went well!
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: September 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
This is a bit of a late review. Packing and school starting has put me very very behind in my update reading. But yayy. I'm so much happier there isn't so much heartfail anymore. =] and I still very much enjoy that there's a flashback in every chapter that shows their development. It makes me =D So, even though it's late, thanks for the update! and I can't wait for more. Author's Response: No such thing as a late review - all reviews, at any time, are welcomed with open arms. :) So thank you - I'm very glad you're enjoying!
Summary: Womanizing Edward is in a cover band with his brother and best friend, who are pissed that Edward has managed to send their last three lead singers heading for the hills with his tendency to fool around carelessly. Emmett and Jasper decide to create a "no intra-band dating" rule.
But what happens when a gorgeous, talented brunette walks into the audition? Will Edward adhere to his bandmates' new rule, or will he pursue what's now off limits? OOC Edward/Bella. Rated for DIRTY HUMOR and lots of future LEMONY GOODNESS. Canon pairings.
(thanks to Evilangel6714 for the banner!!!)
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 171702
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
your last chapter and your references to both back to the future and the purity pact of the jonas brothers made me laugh. the list is sexy. i can't wait for more. and as for disney costumes. i'm all for aladdin and jasmine. 'cause they're my favourites. the story is wonderful. i can't wait for more. =]
Summary: Bella is reunited with her childhood friend Alice under unlikely circumstances. When sparks fly between Bella and Alice's older brother, will she be able to resist? And what secrets is he hiding?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Word count: 132141
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010
Reviewer: melizzymoo Signed
Date: July 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Bring It On
OH NO. i just finished reading all of no sleep for the wicked and then all nine chapters of this story and ahhhhh. both are amazing. i'm curious about all this hell breaking loose. =X you're amazing,i can't wait for more, though i understand the busy-ness of real life.
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