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Penname: blueeyedshorty [Contact]
Real name: sara
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Member Since: September 06, 2008
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I am a 24 year old from a small town who has a bit of an obsession to twilight (don't we all?) I love reading new stories and other peoples take on the characters.

I love reading! it is a passion. I get so caught up in it that I forget about time and get myself in some trouble sometimes ;)

 unfortunetly I have not been bitten by the writting bug. I have tried and IM horrible. so being the avid reading that I am... I thought I would just read and rate.

 e-mail me if you have any questions at all or just want to talk. 

 


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Restoration by texbelle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1151]
Summary:

Ten years ago, circumstance interrupted their destiny.  Now it's time for everyone to go back to Forks for their 10 year high school reunion to face their past with hesitation, hope and maybe even regret.  Can they reclaim what was lost?  All human.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 166805
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2008 Updated: June 01, 2010


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Waiting for You

ohhh keep it coming!!!! I'm loving this story soooo much. update soon please:))))))

 
Summary: Feature

Stranger than Fiction is the FANTASY story of Robert Pattinson and Kristen Stewart's FICTIONAL off screen romance while filming Twilight.   I have a slide show of their pictures running in a small window on the upper left hand corner of my computer screen and they whispered this little story to me one day.


NO HARM IS INTENDED BY THIS STORY.


IT IS A TRIBUTE TO MY TWO FAVORITE ACTORS.



 



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Categories: AU-Human, Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 72497
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: April 09, 2009


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed
Date: September 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW! I think you have mad alot of husbands ( and wives) very happy after they read this. wow ? ;) lol

 
Their Singer by SarahJayne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 498]
Summary:

In Twilight, Edward told Bella that if her blood sang to James like it had to Edward, it would've meant a fight right there in the field. What if this was the case? Follow Bella as she is kidnapped and turned by James, and the Cullens' fevered attempts to get her back. Features James/Bella, but this is ultimately an Edward/Bella story. "NC-17" for language, situations, and eventual sexual content.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 34456
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I am loving this story! it was nice to see the relationship between bell and james but now I'm so excited to see how edward gets bella back. And how Bella is going to react to jasper and rose for killing james. AHHHHH update soon :P

 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4550]
Summary:

WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN

After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!Wishing Star Banner Readergoof

Thanks to Sleforever for below banner!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07, 2008 Title: Wishing Star

OME I love this story!!!! I started reading this last night around 11pm and I stayed up alllllll night reading it. I am quite tired as of now ..... but well worth it.   I cannot wait for the next chapter. please hurry. I think I'm addicted. lol

    so in other word this is truely AMAZING. youreally have a gift for writting. I love that we get to see every character point of view on things. the story abot love and family and their strenghts together is really endearing. PLEASE keep it coming.

your FAN :)  Sara

 
Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2008 Title: Wishing Star

yeah!!!! I LOVE this chapter!!! I like mthe journal entries we get a really deep insight into bella's mind and feelings.

Keepup the good work. you're AMAZING :)

 
Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2008 Title: Wishing Star

I love this story soo much!!! It is def. one of my top 3 favorites. please continue:)

 
Summary:

 

A story about Kristen Stewart and Robert Pattinson during and after the filming of Twilight. What happens behind the scenes on one of the most romantic movies of the year? Do the lines between fiction and real life get blurred?

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 31260
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2008 Updated: November 03, 2008


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed
Date: October 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

yeah !!! it was good. can't wait for the next chapter. ahhh the anticipation:)

 
Summary: Bella is a newborn vampire in Volterra with no human memories and an aversion to human blood. Aro decides to send her to live with the Cullens. Will Bella ever uncover her past? will she find what she is missing? What is Aro's master plan? Story came in second place for Best Vampire Bella at the Twilight Awards.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 135619
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: November 11, 2008


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Reverie

oh my goodness. you had me crying so hard. it was so good and the emotion so raw. it truely is a beautiful story

 
Summary:

Bella Swan meets a beautiful stranger, lawyer Edward Masen on a holiday in Rome. The chemistry is palpable, the sex passionate - and a physical relationship grows into something more. The days fly in a whirlwind of clothes, sand, sex and wine. After a painful realisation that the fantasy has come to an end, Bella returns apprehensively to Seattle, heartbroken at the loss of her love. 


But, little does she know that the 'beautiful stranger' isn't such a stranger, after all.

 

A surprise awaits Bella Swan in Seattle.

 

 

Rated for explicitly detailed sex scenes and language.

 

 

Beautifully accurate banner by the beautifully talented MrsC. Thank you!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 65735
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2009


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Back to My Place?

holy freakin moley that was HOTTTTTTTT!that was hella sexy. whew!  So you should def. update like now becasue I'm loving this story soooo much.
you two are so amazingly great at the writing. :)

 
Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Once bitten....

man am i getting my sexually fantasy fix's or what! you two are great. keep it coming ;)

 
Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Are you enjoying the view out of the window?

haha bella is a cock tease :) I love it!!!! I was wondering about the whole "not using protection" thingy. glad you brought it up.

 
Vertigo by FallenFlowers Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 227]
Summary:

Alternate Universe

Bella has had a less than perfect childhood, and due to certain circumstances she is now the human pet of James's coven.

Now the Cullens have kidnapped her to lure James out. How will Edward react to her blood? Will Bella ever find love again?

In various POVs, rated NC-17 just in case.

 

Vertigo is officially on HIATUS LEAVE

because I have gotten slightly bored of it and I think everyone else has too.

I will continue (and finish it; I think in several more chapters - maybe 5?), when inspiration chooses to pop back into my mind.

Please check out my other stories!

(if you don't mind a little advertising... ;))

XX/XY: The Story of Cesario if you like AH and/or Hana Kimi

Seraphim, if you like AU Twilight/Fantasy-Scifi themes

Charcoal: A One-shot if you like AH/JasperXBella pairings.

Orange if you like AH and a significant age difference between Edward (older) and Bella (younger)

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 58371
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2008 Updated: March 27, 2009


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: 10: The End

ahhh poor bella!!!! I kind of wish that james would have suffered more it went by fast but i understand why it had to be that way. this is really great. keep em coming :)

Author's Response:

Aww, I know! I really really wanted Edward to torture him more so he could get his pay-back, but 1) Bella was dying, 2) Victoria was there and he was alone, 3) I felt kinda sad for James cause his wife was an ass and now Bella's in love with another guy.

Haha. That didn't really make sense but :D Thanks for reading!!!

 
Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed
Date: November 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: 13: Hell

I have to say the going back and forth was a bit confusing. but other than that I'm interested in what going to happen andhow or if they are going to find bella

Author's Response: I'm sorry, what back and forth? Do you mean the point of views? But thanks a lot for reading! :D

 
Summary:

Vampire brothers Edward, Emmett, and Jasper are stuck at age 17 forever.  Unfortunately, though all of them have lived for over 100 years, they have very little experience with dating girls, especially modern ones.  What happens when their vampire powers and inexperience collide?  Will the results prevent them from winning the hearts of the girls they love? 

If you like humor, angst, and edge of your seat, nail-biting cliff hangers, you'll like this story. 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 108776
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2008 Updated: January 09, 2009


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Denali

ahhhh your killin me smalls!!!!!!!!!!

update update update haha.

poor bella :( I hate tanya I hope that edward rips her a new one!!!!



Author's Response: I've updated.  I have four chapters to my beta.

 
Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed
Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Family

aww so good. A total shocker that carlisle killed royce!!!! I gasped out loud and my friend came in and asked what was wrong with wide eyed. haha. Very nice keep up the awesome work :)

Author's Response: I covered that in a previous chapter.  He told Esme before telling the kids.  Thanks for the compliments.  I appreciate you.

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008

very nice. I really like this chapter. Even I'm so team edward I m actually likeing jacob here. hmm I wonder if jacob is going to be "in the loop" at some point in this story. I can't wait for the next chapter (and for edward to come home).

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Your wonderings are quite interesting. Next chapter goes up Thursday, I think. :)

 
Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: April 17 - 19, 2008

ahhh you are horrible for teasing us like that haha! still love ya though:)
keep up the amazing-ness

Author's Response: Sorry for the tease, but thanks for reviewing. :)

 
Hindsight by elizabeth18 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 481]
Summary:

When Bella's roommate Alice tells her that her brother Edward is coming to stay with them she is not exactly thrilled.  In fact, she wants nothing to do with him.  Can Edward change her mind?  Or is the past too powerful?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52590
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2009


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Rehashing Barcelona

I'm loving where this is going!!!!  Please please oh please  update soon. I don't usually write reviews on here but I know that this is going to be a great story :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks for the review.  I really appreciate it.  I always love hearing what you guys are thinking of my stories...

 
Summary:

 

All-Human. Bella/Edward. Lemon. Short story.

After an unexpected run-in with her teacher from high school - the very one she fantasized throughout senior year - Bella has no choice but to share a study room at the library with him... And the fact that they are in a private, sound proof room doesn't escape her.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 36919
[Report This] Published: October 08, 2008 Updated: April 05, 2009


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Lovers

Day-ummmm that was spectacular!!!! oh I can't wait for the continuation. lve it keep it coming:)



Author's Response:

Eheh, thank you! Hopefully the wait won't be too much longer... but I can't make any promises.

that's me
ahhelga
AKA Pauline

 
Farewell by starcrossdlover Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 932]
Summary:

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It's Bella's 18th birthday, and what does she want more than immortality? Her darling Edward's loving company—minus the clothing. To her surprise, Edward caves and when Bella gets some, she gets WAY more than she bargained for. Cue Edward's standard self-sacrificing departure, a snarky, homicidal Victoria with some powerful connections, and a new Bella who grows a belly and a backbone and goes on her own little hunting trip in Denali to find answers.

Farewell is a twisted tale where everything is not always as it seems. There is an underlying current of betrayal that may knock your socks off on one or two occasions. A FRIENDLY WARNING: This story is not full of fluffy bunnies and rainbows and unicorns. It has the tendency to be very dark, in both drama and humor, on some occasions. If you choose to read, well, welcome to the dark side lovelies...

Special thanks to randigiles for helping me straighten out my synopsis. You rock, babe!

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Kate, Lauren, Marcus, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 214439
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: January 13, 2011


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed
Date: November 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: How Do You Get That Lonely?

oh what a cliffhanger that is. I truely hope you update soon because I'm dying with curiosity. this is truely a great story with the emotions played amazingly. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I shall try to update soon and in the meantime, please don\'t die from curiosity! Hehe. I wanna know what you think of the rest of the story! :)

 
Up to Speed by emarroquin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 851]
Summary:

Race car driver Edward Cullen has wrecked another car.  He's losing all his sponsors and funding.  His only hope is the incredibly sexy but stubborn Isabella Swan a brilliant engineer.  He can't get enough of her and she's keeping a secret that will change his life forever.

Banner by: dazzlemebetch-Thanks!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 140390
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2008 Updated: November 20, 2009


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed
Date: November 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Barfight

wait huh??? he didn't even ask her"officially". lol I guess there is bella taking controll again. lol  this is great!

 
Fears by superstarrh Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary:

Edward will do whatever it takes to help Bella get over her fears.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 7028
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: December 03, 2008


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Pagophobia - Fear of Ice

alright, i went and did soem research and found some phobia's that could be ........ummm........interesting ;p

* chrophobia- the fear of dancing

*linonophobia_the fear of string

*Mastigophobia-the fear of punishment

* Merinthophobia- the fear of being bound or tied up (this is my favorite one)

just some suggestions hope they help. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the research.  I love them...dancing could be very very interesting indeed.  Of course the fear of being bound is hot just by itself.  Writing these down for future chapters.  Thank you so much.  Another chapter is done finally and I may have to use these ideas for the next one.

Thank you again for the review.

 
Let Me Ease You by flibbins Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 413]
Summary:

Edward realizes it is a struggle for Bella to deal with the physical boundaries in their relationship, so he enlists Jasper's help.  Set during Eclipse.  Edward/Bella and Jasper/Bella

Let Me Ease You


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 20931
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2008 Updated: July 03, 2009


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: It's a Dirty Job, Jasper

wow I really like this. it wa a genius idea. I can't wait for more. this story should be interesting. :)

 
Summary:

Bella arrives at Forks High, already with a boyfriend, Jacob. However, Jacob and Bella's perpetual virginitis is holding them back.

When Bella meets a boy at school and is instantly attracted to him, could he be the key to finally getting some experience so she could know how to initiate her physical relationship with Jacob? After all, practise makes perfect.

What happens if Bella finds more in her practise buddy than she ever expected to?

E/B, OOC, All Human.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 12576
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2008 Updated: November 05, 2008


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed
Date: November 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I wasn't to sure about this story when i read chapter one but i am really liking it now. this should be fun :) update soon!!!! PLEASE

 
Summary:

Alice brings Bella home for Thanksgiving break to forget about her ex. After some drunken clubbing with the fam, Edward and Bella have a one night stand. Hilarity and drama ensue. AU, AH. Rated NC-17 for language and sexual themes.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 47715
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: July 17, 2009


Reviewer: blueeyedshorty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Morning After

oh this is a good story!!!! can't wait for the next chapter:)

Author's Response: Thank you!

 




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