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Penname: aciepey [Contact]
Real name: Patty
Status: Member
Member Since: March 25, 2009
Website: http://www.fanfiction.net/~aciepey
Beta-reader: No

Hi!  I'm a 37 year old mom to 3, married to my highschool sweetheart.  I read entirely too much fan fiction for my own good.  I was a nurse before kids, but now am simply a domestic goddess.  Detours is my first attempt at writing anything.  I mostly started it as a challenge to myself as my birthday approached- kind of a bucket list thing.  It's a fun creative outlet after a day of the baby barfing all over me while the girls fight about who stole what nintendo ds game. 


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Reviews by aciepey
 
Summary:

Both damaged, Edward and Bella meet and the chemistry is instantaneous.  Will she still love him when she discovers that he is the criminal defense attorney that got her rapist acquitted just two days before her attack?  Can he forgive himself enough to give her justice?

 

 

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Thank you, padme35, for the beautiful new banner!

 

 

Finalist - The Faithful Shipper Awards

Fiction You Most Wish Was In The Spotlight

and

Best Secondary Character AH - Cynthia

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Much thanks to throwitaway45 for the new banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Completed: Yes Word count: 248688
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2009 Updated: July 01, 2012


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - An Interesting Conversation

ok...so i have beenreading straight thru and not reviewing...bad fangirl!  I just had to say that i am loving your story aand i am bracing for the total heartfail.  Promise me it won't leave me with a hole in my chest like bella?  :)

"Let's get our estrogen on."  snort!  lmao!!

 
Summary:

After making plans to move to Forks at 17, Bella changes her mind when Renee and Phil settle in Jacksonville. Seven years later,  betrayed in the most horrible way, Bella is back in Forks, needing a new start, some time to heal- and to forget.

Edward Cullen, the new deputy at Forks police station, is suffering after a difficult betrayal of his own, chosing to ignore his feelings and shut everyone else out.

Will they be able to see that maybe what they need the most is right in front of them? Or are they destined to stay drifting, alone... stuck in retrograde?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Jessica, Mike, Nessie, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 13083
[Report This] Published: July 11, 2009 Updated: August 29, 2009


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

nice start!  cant wait to read the other chaps!

 
Programming by 1breezybri Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 498]
Summary:

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Bella is a plus-sized woman who loves her life. When she meets a man who has never been with a big girl before, she is reminded of the difficulties of a past relationship that left her broken. Can she overcome her insecurities and make him fall in love?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 34941
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2010


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Beneath the surface

i'm liking your story so far...looking forward to the updates! :)

 
Summary:

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Bella and her best friend Jasper are nomadic vampires. What happens when on their travels, they run into a family of vampires by the name of Cullen? Is it possible for them to settle down and finally find true happiness, or will someone from their past show up and take them away? OOC. Earns its rating for later lemons and strong language.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 30429
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Revealed

This is such a cool premise!  I can't wait to read more!  Well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the R&R! I'm glad you like it so far

~Mia

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 2. The Getting to Know You Game

:)  Me likey!!  i love that Bella has her own mystery!  And Alice is so darn cute!



Author's Response:

Haha thank you! Yes...Bella as a series of mysterious events in her past that you will learn all about.

Thnks for the R&R

~Mia

 
Summary:

Bella Swan works at a child care center and Edward Cullen is the single dad she falls in love with.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 190579
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2011


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Talk with Jakey Poo

I'm glad I found your story.  I love me a good DILFward!  :)

 



Author's Response: If you love DILFward...I suggest you read Confessions of a Nanny if you aren't already. That has great Dr. DILF. Thanks for the review.

 
Summary:

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Bella begins a new job at a university library, only to be haunted by dreams of earthquakes and the presence of a mysterious and tortured young man she just can't bring herself to stay away from. Edward is running from a dark past while remaining emotionally stagnant, nursing decades-old injuries that go more than skin deep.


Can they rescue each other from their pasts, and maybe find love in the process? AU/AH, OOC. Rated for Edward's foul mouth and for future lemony goodness.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 324214
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2009 Updated: September 09, 2010


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Me likey...Love me a good Dirty Word-ward.  Especially in bed...ooops, I said that out loud, didn't i?

:)



Author's Response:

:) All good. That's where I prefer to have him too. Thanks for the review!

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella at the beginning of New Moon.  Bella then moves to the East Coast to escape her past.  As she takes the final steps to heal completely, the past, both hers and others, comes back to find her.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 21037
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2010


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Playing House

i can't wait to read the other chaps!!

:)



Author's Response:

I can't wait to get them validated!

 
Last Night In Forks by Rushed Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 442]
Summary:

On the last night of her annual trip to Forks to see her father, Bella finds herself a gorgeous distraction from ex boyfriend James.  Thinking she’ll never see the gorgeous Edward again she goes further than she ever thought she would with a complete stranger.   Will this be the last time they ever see each other or does fate have other ideas?

Thanks to the fabulous Mkystich for my lovely banner!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 94747
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2009 Updated: May 31, 2012


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Friends

glad he realizes that he's being Toolward!

You have a wonderful start here!  looking forward to more!

:)

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Alice

you're doing a great job!  he really needs to open up to B about his mom...i suspect that will come, hopefully sooner than later! 

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: His

I just wanna hug alice, that poor pixie. and wtf with Jasper?  does he like her or is he flirting?  or is he just flirting and then realize that he likes her? hmmmm, can't wait for more!

 

 
Summary:

"I have no idea how I survived that day...

All I know for sure is what happened because of it.

Two things.

First, I lost my friend, Jacob Black. ...I never saw him again. And I knew it was because, for some reason he didn't want to see me.

And secondly, no one ever touched my bare skin again for the next five years of my life."

Bella Swan is looking for answers and solutions, and hopes to find them when she befriends "crazy" Alice Brandon, thus meeting Edward Masen, the guy living in her attic. Suddenly, answers might not be what she wants. ExB.

Banner credit: Transatlanticism

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Categories: AU, AU-Human, Other Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 51038
[Report This] Published: July 31, 2009 Updated: July 08, 2010


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: A Different Day

Bella's breaking my heart!  And we all know that she can do better than Newton!

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Intrigued By Magic Sights

What a well written story!  I'm really looking forward to your updates.  Oh, to have Edward staring at you!!

 
The Deluded by FantasyMother Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 648]
Summary:

Edward lowered his eyes to his lap, obviously uncomfortable with my question.  But there was nothing odd about it.  It shouldn't cause tension, or reveal hidden secrets, or cause the amount of angst currently contorting his features.

I had simply asked him why he lived in the woods.

He grabbed a grape off the table, popped it in his mouth, and raised his head while he slowly chewed  - scanning the trees ringing my office, as if he was searching for an answer to give me.  I could see a faint blush to his cheek, and a hint of unshed tears in his crystalline green eyes.  I could almost hear his heartbeat pick up speed as he finally turned to me.  Closing his eyes for a moment he took a deep breath, willing himself to calm.  Then his eyes snapped to my face and with renewed determination took another deep breath.

"Bella, I live there because I'm a vampire."


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 119614
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2010


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Disillusionment

love your writing!  can't wait to see this one unfold!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  I really do appreciate your kind words :-)

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Vegetarian

first of all, when you are through with your muse, send her my way....i have been total fail with my story lately.

Second, I love the little dots that you are leaving all over the canvas for us to connect, some accurately, and some not, i suspect....

A fast moving Edward...me likey lots!  Perfect therapy for Bella's blues!

:)  On to the next chap!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm about 900 words into the next chapter.  The muse is still here.  And he'll stay here *glaring at muse*

As for the dots - interestingly enough, I'm not misleading you with any of them.  I personally don't like mysteries that mislead.  Now, I might misdirect you...  ;-)

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Bitch is Back

what??? I'm a gonna have to check out the forum... I'd love to know what others are thinking!

sigh...i guess I'll have to find my own muse...perhaps in the formof a few Mike's Hard Lemonades.  It's been a crazy weekend with the hubs away!

So...e has been watching Bella since her childhood?  the bike memory?  And Carlisle asking about her.  and the glittering in the woods.  and her eyesplaying tricks on her.  But, he eats (he can always purge later) and he has green eyes (contacts) he's warm with a heartbeat (????)

insufficient data for me as of yet.

And perhaps Lauren can go on a business trip to Volterra and never return?

Good job, girlie!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Oh, there's sufficient data ;-)

But I agree with you.  Lauren needs to go on a business trip to Volterra.  Absolutely.

 
Summary:


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Isabella Swan, infamous rich girl from SoCal, meets Edward Cullen, the dark, mysterious guy from the wrong side of the tracks after an unfortunate accident. Lost in the dense forest surrounding Forks together, they must survive complete isolation while gradually unearthing--and sometimes running from--one another's secrets.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 47619
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2009


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am loving this story so much!  The imagery is wonderful and i love to read as brick by brick, the wall between them comes down.  Masterful.

It is a treat to read something and know that in the end, you won't be wishing for the time you invested in reading back again!

:) Thanks for writing

 
Fragile by B-RizzleDizzle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Bella, a pregnant widow, moved with her best friend to Los Angeles to forget her painful past. Four years later, she meets Emmett, a handsome celebrity who just wants to be liked for who he is.

EmxB, ExR

Cursing, drug use, and a sincere attempt at well-written lemons in later chapters.

Again, Readergoof and her double x hardcore extreme awesome banner-making skills! Mad props R-Dog.

Banner by ReaderGoof


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 9275
[Report This] Published: August 08, 2009 Updated: December 16, 2009


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Love Comes

It's a tough thing, going against canon.  I can't wait to see how you tell your tale!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope you end up liking where I take this story. And thanks so much for the review!

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is a nurse in the trauma center at Harborview Medical Center. She is introduced to Medical Director Dr. Carlisle Cullen's son, Dr. Edward Cullen, the trauma center's newest physician. Though their chemistry is undeniable, they try to ignore it. When Bella accompanies Edward to the tattoo parlor, sparks fly. 

WARNING: CONTAINS A VERY GRAPHIC LEMON. FOR MATURE READERS ONLY!!


Categories: AU Characters: Carlisle
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8962
[Report This] Published: August 08, 2009 Updated: September 01, 2009


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, honey.  Butt seks rules.  just sayin'.

Well done, well done!



Author's Response:

Oh, you found my devious little one/shot, too, huh aciepey? I know, buttsecks is fuckawesome. Not enough of it around FF, IMHO. Thanks for your comments!

 
Bold as Love by crc0170 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 105]
Summary:

To make the transition from friends to lovers requires just the right amount of finesse.

In this case, it needed a little boldness as well.

 

A two-shot. B/E, AH, lemony fresh.

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another banner inside, because it's not suitable for all viewing ages.

 


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 13077
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: November 23, 2009


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Ribbons of Euphoria

that was so sensual!  i love a confident bella!



Author's Response:

thank you!! I'm glad you liked it:)

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed
Date: November 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Last Time He Saw Bella [vjgm]

my heart is breaking, bb!  hea? please?



Author's Response:

they got their hea! remember? this was just a glimpse into their life before the seduction-- right before she went on her year long africa trip after she got her masters...

so no worries, dear, they got their happy ending. go read the first two chapters, it will cheer you up:)

 

 

 
Summary:

 

 

When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins.  He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own.  This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction.  Can they find their way back to each other?  And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?

HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2012


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: How to Save a Life

I can't remember if I have reviewed for you yet, but wanted to say that the story is really sweet.  I thought E's reaction at prom was a little over the top, but it fits well with the story.  It goes to show how much one event can really change your life.  if anyone needs a do-over, it's these two. 

This chapter was very touching.  Achingly beautiful.

:)

Patty

 
Summary: Feature

 Thank you, hellacullen, for the awesome banner!

Edward’s rebellious period didn’t last a few years; it lasted seventy.  A solitary hunter on the fringe of society, he stumbles across a young woman praying. Can he seduce her away from everything she's ever known? And will he be willing to fight for Bella instead of fighting against her?

AU, a bit OOC, canon couples.  Rated for lemons, violence and adult subject matter.

Banner by Zesty_T, awesome!

Banner by n7of9 Thank you!

Banner by readergoof, thank you!

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 129165
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2010


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Prodigal Son Returns

Wow!  I am so fascinated!  I can't wait for more!!! :)  Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for the stars! More coming, alot more, very soon!

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Innocence and Ecstasy

excellent!  you show us edward's struggle so well!



Author's Response:

Thanks! More coming soon!

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Before God

Poor Bella.  I hope that Edward was listening so that he's able to draw on her humanity to resist her...

 

 




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