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Penname: aciepey [Contact]
Real name: Patty
Status: Member
Member Since: March 25, 2009
Website: http://www.fanfiction.net/~aciepey
Beta-reader: No

Hi!  I'm a 37 year old mom to 3, married to my highschool sweetheart.  I read entirely too much fan fiction for my own good.  I was a nurse before kids, but now am simply a domestic goddess.  Detours is my first attempt at writing anything.  I mostly started it as a challenge to myself as my birthday approached- kind of a bucket list thing.  It's a fun creative outlet after a day of the baby barfing all over me while the girls fight about who stole what nintendo ds game. 


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Reviews by aciepey
 
Summary:

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Bella went cliff diving, but it didn't turn out so well. She broke her back. A decade later, Edward reappears in her life on the same night she loses her best friend and husband to a freak accident. Now a graduate student in Women's Studies, Bella isn't thrilled to see him. But when the Cullens re-enter Bella's life, they bring change, hope, and a new joint project that will require all their expertises.

Also, you can find a SPANISH version here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4829851/1/En_un_parpadeo

AND you can find images for various things like Esme's house, Edward's piano, Bella's wheelchair and Rose's car on my ff.net profile page:

http://www.fanfiction.net/~thatwritr

OR in my LJ gallery:

http://pics.livejournal.com/that_writr/gallery/000010z2

Special Update:

For personal reasons (a ridiculously full teaching schedule and being recently put in charge of a bi-annual local conference and ongoing project), I am no longer able to reply to reviews and questions. But that said, I wanted to give a BIG THANK YOU to EVERYBODY for the wonderful feedback and kind words that have been sent my way since the completion of this story in August 2009. I do still check my messages about once every 1-2 weeks and read *every* review. I just have too many to reply to anymore, but I didn’t want anyone to think I was ignoring her/him in particular, or didn’t appreciate readers taking time to leave a review. Writing this story was tons of fun and I’m thrilled readers seem to enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed the chance to write it. I can’t tell you how flattering that is!!! As I used to reply to all reviews, I feel a little badly about this decision, but work has been requiring virtually all of my time since the new (academic) year began.

Best to all of you in 2010 and beyond!

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Completed: Yes Word count: 221619
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2008 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: aciepey Signed
Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Just found your story...and I can't wait to finish reading all that you've written so far.  Edward's devotion is heartbreaking.  sigh. 

On to the next chapter!  Can't wait to see how you weave the details together!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I hope you like it!

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed
Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i feel bella thawing a bit...



Author's Response:

Slowly, yes. :-)

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed
Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

i love how the puzzle is falling into place. i'm wondering if mark didn't have a latent gift like bella's?

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed
Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I love the reference to"Orion!"  It is a song I often think of when I am outside walking my dogs at night.  I learned it back in 1983...6th grade music class with Mr. Cox.  It was a shitty year for me, but I adored music and band classes...they helped me escape.  I'll be sure to check out the link!

 

Loving the story.  It's nice that they're all growing up.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  My sister taught the song to me. Ha.

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

You have me on the edge of my seat!  Thanks for the quick updates, too!

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

oh, i can't wait to see how you handle the charlie factor!  this is on-the-edge-of-your-seat good!!!

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

i love martha...will she and carlisle click?  and i hope that edward opens up to her...



Author's Response:

Ha.  Martha meets Carlisle in the very next part.

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

this is my favorite chapter so far in your wonderful story!  Bella won't lose charlie if (when) she is changed!  i can just picture the scene in my head,charlie aghast at edward, only accepting what he has to for the time being.  i really like martha.  you've created awonderful character in her. And brilliant how rose is blunt about  the way things are and what needs to be done.  

eagerly waiting for the next chap!  great job!



Author's Response:

I think of the Cullens, Charlie would get on best with Rose, Carlisle and Emmett.

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

omg...cliffie!  how ya gonna salvage this one????

i am thisclose to going all out fangirl on you...

 

ilove emmett and jake working together!  and i can't wait to see how alice's visions change with the knowledge of the video and hannah's confirmation that brady sent it!



Author's Response:

The next few parts are VERY intense.

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

more, More, MORE!!!  I love Martha, and hope that she is in their lives forever!  Or as long as she can be.  :)

 

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Perfect. 

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68: Epilogue

Hey, Katie-

First of all, congratulations!  You finished a wonderful story that I am glad to have read.  I can't say that about some fics! 

Second, you had me in tears over Martha's death.  It is almost 5 years to the day that I said goodbye to my mother-in-law, who I was fortunate enough to have met when I was 14 and fell in love with her son. I knew her 18 years. She changed my life for the better, and while my kids won't really remember her, I try to remind them often of her love and spirit.  I'm glad that your Bella got her goodbye.  My mil was unconscious as I talked to her, but tears were coming from her eyes while I talked to her.  I like to think she heard me. 

I'm also glad your edward resolved his issues of the soul.  Eternity is a long time to be carrying around such a heavy burden, vampire or not.  I think that things can weigh your soul down much more profoundly than any physical burden can. Kudos to you for a fantastic and plausible resolution!

I'm hoping that you continue to write.  I enjoyed the journey!

Patty



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I'm so glad you liked it!  And yes, poor Edward needed some spiritual resolution.  And I hope your MIL did hear you.  I trust she did.  People who come back later say they *can* hear things said to them, even when "out." :-)

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: September 4 - December 23, 2008

I just love your story and am always glad to see an update! 

I breathed a sigh of relief when Edward showed up!

:)

Patty

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up.

NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2009


Reviewer: aciepey Signed
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Slow Dances and Awkward Glances

so i just found your story.  i have tons of work to do, but i keep telling myself, "just one more chapter!"  Screw work...

 
All Keyed Up by BlueJ Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 266]
Summary:

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Edward and the gang are college age and heading to Key West for summer jobs. Excitement, laughs and romance abound. Rated NC-17 for adult situations/lemonade. AH, some OOC moments, canon pairing.  Give it a chance and enjoy!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Other Character, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 122278
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2008 Updated: March 13, 2010


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

i have lots of chappies to catch up on...looking good so far!! :)

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Wet 'N Wild Dreams

I must have become Amish or something, because I felt all giddy and excited about the secret handholding!!!  God help me when the sexin starts!

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Booty Drops And Skimpy Clothes

yay!!! good writing, y'all!  Love the sneakiness of Carlisle and Esme! 

 
Sugar and Spice by alaskangirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 534]
Summary:

banner for sugar and spiceWith Bella's love of cooking and Alice's flair for parties their dream comes true of owning their own business. Both Bella and Edward have pasts to deal with. Will love help them and can they help each other?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 65 Completed: Yes Word count: 271821
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: April 26, 2009


Reviewer: aciepey Signed
Date: June 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's a great start!  I realize that I'm reading this after it has been completed, but figured you'd like the review nonetheless!  I'm excited to tuck in to a nice, long story.  :)

 
Rescue me by venomousgal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2836]
Summary:

 

 Bella Swan is accident prone and always in need of rescuing. Sexy neighbour Edward Masen is an EMT and more than willing to handle the job.

 

THANKS TO FALCONCRANELOVE FOR THE WONDERFUL BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 100511
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2008 Updated: November 10, 2009


Reviewer: aciepey Signed
Date: July 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

the playful banter is fun!  looking forward to the nookie!

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Well, it's about freaking time!!!!  Bring on the fun second trimester sexin' cuz we all know that it's awesome.  :)

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

One of my ob'snames was Holehouse.

You are doing a fantastic job with your story.  I'm really enjoying it! :)

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

this was the best chapter so far...love the party!

 
Reviewer: aciepey Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

damn james!!! 

 
Behind the Reel by jakeward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1460]
Summary: Feature

"Once upon a time, there was girl that just wanted to get swept off her feet. Little did I know my co-star would be the one to do it. And with texting no less."

A fictional tale of Rob and Kristen realizing their feelings for each other and getting their signals crossed.

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Thanks to falconcranelove for the banner!

Sequel: Behind the Lens http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=11639

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 193022
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2008 Updated: April 09, 2010


Reviewer: aciepey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i loved thoe choose your own adventure books!!!

 

loving this.  shmexy rob is hot. kristen all unsure is adorable.  great job!

 
Identity by idrivelikeacullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 520]
Summary:

Bella and Edward's relationship is frowned upon by both sets of parents.  They find themselves separated without the means to find each other.  With the help of Alice and her infatuation with the personal ads will Bella be able to find her long lost boyfriend?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 64331
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2009


Reviewer: aciepey Signed
Date: June 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i started dating my hubs when i was 14, too!

 




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