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Summary: Then I smelt it. His scent, mixed with hers in the most horrible way. I had never felt an anger such as what exploded from me just then,and I had never run so fast in my existence. I reached the door I knew she was behind,fearing I was too late to save her.
Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 9972
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2008 Updated: July 29, 2008
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: August 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Haunted
I think this is a great begining, and you should definitely continue it.
Summary:
A running smutline of Edward and Bella's honeymoon . . . and everything afterwards.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 100790
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2011
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: August 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Goodbye
Wow, that was powerfull, and beautiful. Still, I hope the next chapter is happier.
Summary: I felt my face seize up, panic twisting then freezing my mouth, my eyes, my forehead. Unable to help it, I turned towards the hallway, to where Bella had gone, to where I knew she was. The thought of letting her go scalded my insides and brought my basest instincts crashing to the fore again. The urge to go to her, to where she lay in the bath, lay so quiet, so dull, so gone. It took everything I had not to make that first step and a low growl trembled from my throat with the effort. Edward comes back for Bella after leaving her in New Moon, but winning her back is not so easy. Or is it...?
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 16623
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: December 06, 2008
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: May 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
this is a really good story so far. i hope you continue it.
Summary: 
Renesmee is a week from her half birthday, the day she will be fully mature and Jacob will be able to have her to himself for the rest of their lives. However, the two are having a hard time keeping their hands off each other while the day slowly draws nearer. With Edward and Bella breathing down his neck, Jake is split between wanting to give his love everything she wants and trying not be killed by her vampire parents.
Rated NC-17 for crude teenaged humor and language and eventual sexual gratification in later chapters.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Nessie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 24942
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2008 Updated: February 01, 2009
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: January 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Forever on Fire
Best Jacob and Nessie fic I've read so far.
Can't wait to read more.
Summary:
When Charlie catches Bella and Edward in a compromising position how will he react?
What tactics will Edward and Bella have to resort to in order to get time alone together again?
Thanks Mandi for the banner!
Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes
Word count: 134267
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2008 Updated: December 07, 2009
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: June 17, 2010
Title: Chapter 43: Oh Look at Me, I'm a Sparkly Super Strong Vampire! (VJ - Got Milk?)
I really loved this story. It was at times funny, sexy, heart breaking and touching. Really amazing, and I hope you continue to write Twilight fanfiction for a long time to come.
Summary: Bella never thought things would get this way. It had never crossed her mind. The hurt and betrayal from all parties stung like constant bee stings, but something more important is at stake.
**Rated for violence and rape and takes place between New Moon and Eclipse.**
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 39771
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2008 Updated: July 29, 2009
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: January 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Crash
Ok, I liked this story untill the baby died, that just seems like too much anxt, and I would have appreciated a warning.
Summary: 
Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...
Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.
Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: November 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
this is probably the best twilight fanfiction ive ever read. please keep writing, and good luck with your book.
Summary: After returning from Volterra at the end of NM, B/E's relationship is at crossroads. Bella wonders if Edward is as perfect as she once thought. Relationship dynamics are shifted. They descend from their pedestals. One Shot.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 6585
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: January 08, 2009
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: May 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
this was a really amazing story, i really hope you keep writing.
Summary: 
What if Bella’s thoughts on the plane flying back to Seattle from Italy take her in a different direction from the plot in New Moon? Just where could a little twist of fate take the characters? An indepth look at Bella's thoughts and feeling at the end of New Moon and into an AU Eclipse.
Canon couples, and rated NC17 just to be safe. I am Bella and Edward all the way, so if you like Bella and Jacob, then I am afraid this is not the story for you.
Dying By Degrees on discussion forum. http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=19&t=9136
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 106997
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: June 19, 2010
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: May 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Wow, new uptade. I've really been looking forward to this, and I was not dissapointed. This was a wonderfull chapter. Poor Bella, I hope happier moments are in her future, but either was I can't wait to raed more.
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: March 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Wow, I love this story. Really, really love this story. I love the direction you took with New Moon, It's both believable from a real life perspective and absolutely true to the characters which makes it all the more enjoyable to read.
Since I’m not really adventurous when it comes to Twilight fanfic (canan pairings, Bella/Edward centric, absolutely no AH, and a happy ending are musts) I tend to read the same basic story over and over. There’s a lot in this story that’s unique that I haven’t read in other Twilight fanfics, and that’s quite a treat for me.
I really like the Bella/Other Cullens interactions, because I don’t think there were enough of that in the books.
Also thank you for the song lists, I liked the Classical songs you added.
I’m really interested in where this story is going and I hope to read more soon.
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: June 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I love the idea of the charm bracelet, it's so sweet, and Edward's public apoligy was really great.
Summary: Bella and Edward just returned from Volterra. What will Edward do to assure Bella that he is hers, always and forever?
Storyline based off of a song entitled Blush by Ben Lee.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 7306
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2009 Updated: May 18, 2009
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: March 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This was a very good drabble, I can't really clasify it as a story because it didn't really have an ending, but it was still really good. A proper conclusion would, of course, improve it.
Summary: We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.
"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!" ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails
Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 30 Completed: No
Word count: 225614
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: January 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Mistletoe and Message Panty Payback
This is such a wonderfull story, I really wish the books had been like this.
Thank you for writing and sharing 'Fractured Hearts' and I hope you continue to do so for a long time to come. Or at least something Twilight, your understanding of the characters (especially Bella/Edward) is really compelling and believable.
I really like how you spent time in the story about the other Cullens and their reactions/consequences of leaving, I don't think that was adequately adressed in the books.
I can't wait to read more. I would just gush and gush about how much I love this story, but I'm exsausted from staying up late to finish reading it. Author's Response: Hi Katrina! Thank you so much for such a lovely review. Please accept some virtual eye drops for the fatigue on your poor eyes after staying up late to read this. I'm thrilled that you found my story, gave it a chance, and are enjoying it so much. I really have enjoyed the experience of relating and revealing the Cullen family dynamic to a more three dimensional degree. I always felt that a family like theirs just wouldn't work without a strong infrastructure and Carlisle and Esme are that guiding force. I'm happy you've enjoyed seeing more from all of the Cullens, and don't worry - this story isn't over yet. There are some exciting things just around the bend. ;) Again, thank you for reading and I appreciate the review.
~Lisa
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: February 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Blindsided
I really liked this chapter, I hope to read more soon. Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm working on the next chapter now. =)
~Lisa
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: June 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Fists and Fur
Great story, great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. I appreciate the fact that you haven't given up on the story, and for taking the time to read and review. It means a lot. =)
~Lisa
Summary: 
Awesome Banner by Anne Cullen!!
Edward's POV of Bella's pregnancy, burning and awakening in Breaking Dawn. Covers all the missing moments with Edward, Bella, Renesmee and the Cullens, and everything that they went through. Starts when Edward and Bella arrive home from Isle Esme and meet the Cullens at the airport. Find out what happened after Bella ran into Rosalie's arms...
In a fraction of a second, I was at Bella's side, the rest of my family still frozen. I put my hands on Bella's shoulders.
"Let her go, Rose," I said, my voice deadly. She just stared back at me grimly. I searched her mind, trying to get a hold of her plans. There was a resolve, a plan to protect the baby at all costs. And an aching desire she couldn't hide to have that baby as her own....
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Her face was so deathly still, no response. She was unearthly pale, and there was the slightest blue tinge to her skin, the sky pale at dawn. As I pressed my lips to hers, they were too cool. I blew in gently twice, watching her chest rise and fall mechanically. I moved my mouth to her ear as my hands began to move again.
"Come on, Bella, love," I whispered. "Come on, sweetheart. I'm right here. You did it. You've got a healthy baby. She's so beautiful. You were strong enough. Now it's time for you to come back. She's waiting. I'm waiting, love. I'm waiting for you, always...
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 191547
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2010
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: March 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Rebirth
Wow, just Wow. l love this story so much, it's amazing. Best Edward POV I've read no question. I think an Edward POV is both the hardest to write and the most interesting to read because of his gift. You obviously have a great understanding of all the twilight characters and an incredable gift for writing, which I hope you'll continue to employ for a long time to come. Specifically with fanfic and this story, which I'm very eager to read more of.
I hope you continue it intill Edward ad Bella's first night in the cottage, but anything would be amazing.
Again, thank you writing this and I hope you continue.
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: March 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Instinctive
YEY, new chapter. Amazing as always, I especially liked the hunting scenes with Edward and Bella.
Hope to read more soon.
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: April 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Justified
I absolutly loved the whole fight with Jacob, that was hilarious. Thank you for the update, this story is amazing.
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: June 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Paternity
I love all the glimpses into Renesme's mind, she's so cute.
Summary:
Edward and Bella finally got what they always wanted: to spend eternity together. Now, their relationship is free to thrive and flourish. A very canon, very in-character, very romantic exploration of the depth of E&B's relationship as they adjust to their new life-- both Bella's new life as a vampire and Edward's as a husband. Lots of light, fluffy moments balanced by more serious ones.
It's just E&B in the first several chapters, but the rest of the Cullens show up later. The time frame is set during the summer following BD up to Edward and Bella's second wedding anniversary.
If you like canon and in-character, please have a read.
**Nominated for two Moonlight Awards** (Thank you, Serendipitous and None!)
Please vote! http://themoonlightawards.yolasite.com/
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Word count: 51645
[Report This] Published: June 26, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2009
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: January 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Call of the Wild
This is a wonderfull story, but I have to admit I was hoping for more details in the sexual scenes, especially since there was such wonderful buildup.
Nonetheless, this is one of the best post-Breaking Dawn stories I've read, and I'm glad to have found it.
Summary: Rosalie muses on why Renesmee absolutely had to be brought into the Cullen's world.
Thanks to the lovely MegsD for making this banner for me.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2495
[Report This] Published: August 03, 2009 Updated: August 08, 2009
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Good story, but it's posted twice. Author's Response: Thanks. I do realise about the posting, that was something that happened during validation so there's not much I can do about it :)
Summary:
A woman awakes in a forest. She is lost, alone and has practically no memory. Three members of the Cullen family find her and take her to their home. But everything is not as it appears, especially not with the girl. How can the little she knows to be true actually be possible? It could be said that anything is possible when thrown into a world of myth.
Follow along as she travels on her journey to find, forgive and move beyond her past, all the while finding herself and something she never knew she was looking for.
This is mostly an E/B story though other loved and not so loved characters will be involved.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Raison D'être
Chapters: 25 Completed: No
Word count: 145399
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2009 Updated: May 01, 2012
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: January 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Confrontations
Can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.
Summary: What if the first time Bella dreamed of Edward she wasn't really dreaming. Would their growing relationship be tainted by what had already occured?
Based on the 'that was the first night I dreamed of Edward Cullen' deleted scene from the Twilight DVD.
Thanks to m81170 for the banner.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 54658
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2012
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: September 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: If Truth Be Told
Ah! new ch! I really love this story and how it's shaping up. I can't wait to read more and i'm looking forward to finding out how this Edward deals with Bella knowing.
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: February 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Unexpected Competition
I'm really enjoying this story, I hope you update soon.
And I hope Bella gets some emotional clousure, poor Bella. Author's Response: Bella's going to start dealing with the emotional turmoil that Edward inspires in the next chapter so hopefully it won't be as depressing as the last chapter anymore. Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Katrina117 Signed
Date: January 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Handle With Care
yey, i really love this story, can't wait to read more.
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