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Penname: Ninapolitan [Contact]
Real name: Nina
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Member Since: September 04, 2008
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Restoration by texbelle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1151]
Summary:

Ten years ago, circumstance interrupted their destiny.  Now it's time for everyone to go back to Forks for their 10 year high school reunion to face their past with hesitation, hope and maybe even regret.  Can they reclaim what was lost?  All human.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 166805
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2008 Updated: June 01, 2010


Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Special

This story is absolutely fantastic.  I read the entire thing at work today!  Your characterization of Rose and Emmett are spot on and throughly enthralling.

 

I'm simply captivated by your Edward and Bella storyline and can't wait for an update.

Cheers



Author's Response:

I have the best readers on the planet!!  Thanks everyone!

 
Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed
Date: October 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Freeze

Oh Good Lord Rule #9 needs to be disposed of STAT!!!

 

Love the chapter, poor Jasper broke my heart!

 

VICTORIA??? What's up with that!

 
Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Glitter in the Air

Ooooh, you are a tease, but a great one.  Excellent chapter.  I'm glad she's sticking to her 'rules' even though I'm dying for them to be together.

 

I loved the description of Alice, that's probably the funniest I've heard in while. 

 
Summary: It’s two days before the wedding and Bella has a plan…
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 14640
[Report This] Published: July 11, 2008 Updated: July 16, 2008


Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Part I - How Dirty Boys Get Clean

Good Lord!  That was hot, hot, hot and a far better honeymoon scene than BD!

 

Well done!

 
Summary: Feature

It was said of early vampire books and movies that vampirism was simply a poorly disguised substitute for sex. Back in the day, the entire genre was considered extremely risque'. With that in mind, this is a parody of Midnight Sun replacing all the vampirism with sexuality - no blood lust - just extreme human lust. AH/AU and consequently, OOC.  Thank you to Debussy_This for the fabulous (and hysterical) banner!!!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 85040
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: April 24, 2009


Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue

Many praises to you for giving the three the proper sendoff that this story deserves.  It truly was a wonderful ride with this story.  I know it's technically a parody but still, it's genius

 
Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen

This is such a good spin on the story, I love every minute of it.  Great job.

 
Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 27: Survival

This chapter had me in tears, I love this story like I can' t possibly tell you, i avoided it for so long, b/c frankly angst makes me hurt.  But slowly I'm dipping my toe into the cutting waters of e/b heartfailure and you are the one who pulled me in all the way.  It's a silly reference but fitting for me.  Eventually I'll go back and review all 20something other chapters, but I sat and read this whole thing today and I have no words for how much better it is from BD

 
Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 28: Fine

Holy shit, I didn't see that coming...excellent chapter, I enjoy the parallels to the actual story very much...but Jake clawing her...woah...sorry it's 12:30am and I'm incredibly inarticulate.

 
Summary:

When Jasper Whitlock and Alice Masen tied the knot, they hoped their own siblings would have the same happy ending. Jasper's sister, Isabella, was at the peak of her career, leaving very little time for love. Alice's brother, Edward, was in the process of moving thousands of miles in the name of business.

What happens when Jasper and Alice insist on accompanying Edward to Seattle while he finds his new base of operation, all while staying in Isabella's penthouse?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 77087
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2009


Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

First I love this story, but you totally broke my heart.  I see where she is coming from 'sortof' but it is still hard to read.

 

Well done though, I really enjoy this story

 
Vesper by dapixam_q Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 91]
Summary:

E/B alternate universe. The Cullens stayed in Alaska for three more years than in the books, so Bella spends the end of her junior year in Forks without Edward. How will she deal with her inevitable feelings for him when she's already dating Jacob and mostly happy with her life?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 85699
[Report This] Published: August 15, 2008 Updated: December 28, 2008


Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: First Sight

This is really a fantastic story.  I don't know how I didn't come across it sooner. 

I love every aspect of it, although I secretly want Jake to imprint soon!  Well I guess it isn't a secret, but I can't help but get carried away with your characterizations of E & B together.  It's perfect and I just can't wait to see how you finally bring them together

 
Going for the Gold by bethaboo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 701]
Summary:

Edward Cullen, an Olympic swimming star, goes to Beijing with winning gold medals on his mind, but is distracted by the beautiful but clumsy reporter he meets on his way. All Human AU.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 86569
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: May 09, 2009


Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 “wet muscles,”

 

Yum, the mental picture alone is making my head spin.  Love the first smooch!

 
A Time for Hope by tamelaine Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary: Bella, a shy, loving young woman joins the Peace Corps in an attempt to help as much as she can. She is assigned to work with a partner in establishing a medical clinic in rural Uganda. In a land of upheaval, poverty and despair, can love prevail?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 38226
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2008 Updated: February 28, 2009


Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Honestly this story is magnificent, it is so well written, I couldn't stop reading until I finished all chapters. 

 

 
Attitude by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

Isabella is shipped off to Forks by her parents.  Can her cousin and his friends get her to drop her tough exterior and reveal the sweet girl underneath?

Thanks to MrsC for the Banner!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 15348
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2008 Updated: January 06, 2009


Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed
Date: September 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story, I hope that Edward sits and collects his kisses, you know she wants him to wait around for her to come out.  Wonderful job, can't wait for an update!

 
Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed
Date: September 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love this story and I hope you do choose to update sooner rather than later but I understand you have another story.  I haven't read that one maybe I'll check it out until you update this one again.

 

:)



Author's Response: Yea, Wishing Star gets updated more frequently...So, it might not be a bad idea if you want to continue to read my writing...

 
Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love this story and I was thrilled to see that you updated!  I know that you focus on the others but I really do like this one!

 
Summary:

It's a tough life being a music student, juggling lessons, practice, rehearsals, lectures as well as navigating through the social hierarchy.  Bella Swan, a gifted cellist, is given the opportunity to attend the prestigious Manhattan School of Music.  But it seems that she gets more than she bargained for when she meets the stunningly sexy piano major Edward Cullen.  When the rivalries heat up, and the competitive claws come up, musically and romantically, can Bella come out in the top of her class and win the love of her life?    


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 29117
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2008 Updated: December 07, 2008


Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm enjoying this story very much.  It is extremely well written and it is quite obvious that your musical knowledge is profound.


Well done

 
Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Edward's Interlude

I'm thrilled with the chapter, I'm glad that you provided some background information in Edward's voice.  Well done!

 
Summary:

Now, I love every single one of the Twilight characters, especially angsty, overprotective Edward, but let's face it - sometimes they can go overboard. This is a parody of the characters' personalities.

 


Categories: Eclipse, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 6030
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2008 Updated: September 18, 2008


Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Act 1

For the love of all things holy, I think I wet my pants laughing at this.  Perfection.

 

 
Summary: Bella's life was a fairytale until tragedy struck not once, but twice, changing the course of her life forever.  No matter what life throws her way, Bella accepts her life and trudges on.  Now, as she starts college, Bella meets some new friends who try to help her regain her fairytale life.  Will she meet prince charming in the process? 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 51114
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: August 27, 2009


Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed
Date: October 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prolugue

I love jealous, possessive Edward.   Nice job

Author's Response: Me too.  He pops up a lot in this story.

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: March 22, 2008, part 2

It was a fantastic chapter, I love Emmett in your story. He has such a good heart, Rosalie being a bit of a shit is spot on as well.

I hate cliffhangers especially when they are good ones like this. Hmpfh. Maybe if you get enough reviews you'll take pity on us and post the next chapter sooner rather than later.

Fingers crossed :)

Author's Response:

Glad you liked the chapter. I, too, have a soft spot for Emmett.

I am going to try and iron out my first draft of chapter 5 tonight, but we'll see. I'm not feeling quite as sick as I was, but I am still throwing myself a pity party.

 
Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: April 19 - April 26, 2008

Oh momma did you deliver.... I'll admit I was nervous with the way it was headed but boy oh boy was it good.

I'm glad that he was so gentle with her, I liked the similarities with the hot tub/relaxing and the book/ocean/relaxing before the 'deed'.

Really excellent work, the Jake thing threw me as well but alas, you are magnificent



Author's Response: Oh Nina, you wouldn't believe how much I fretted over this chapter. And now that it is done... I can FINALLY read your chapter.

 
Summary:

What happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas. Right? But sometimes, it's just the beginning of something special and you find what you never knew you were looking for. AU/AH, Canon pairings.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 74977
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2008 Updated: November 07, 2009


Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed
Date: October 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Perfect way of hooking up A&J!! Love it!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it.  :D

 
Hindsight by elizabeth18 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 481]
Summary:

When Bella's roommate Alice tells her that her brother Edward is coming to stay with them she is not exactly thrilled.  In fact, she wants nothing to do with him.  Can Edward change her mind?  Or is the past too powerful?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52590
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2009


Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed
Date: September 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Prodigal Sibling

I'm extremely interested in this story!  The flashbacks are outstanding, I'm eager to see the story progression.


Well done.

 

 
Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed
Date: October 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaagh cliffie

loved it though



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Ninapolitan Signed
Date: November 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love the ending and I'm sorry to see it stop but I applaud the decision to finish it.

I look forward to snippits and one-shots!



Author's Response:

Thanks :-)  

You'll be getting a one-shot thingy soon! 

 




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