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Loss and Gain by Halawia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 545]
Summary:

Death is one of the hardest things to go through. Bella and the Cullen's have had to say goodbye to people they loved and are trying to find refuge through the pain. Will they find that there is something to gain through their loss?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 348072
[Report This] Published: May 19, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2010


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Time passes and things change

Oooh, AWESOME twist!  Can't wait to see how a pregnant Alice & then a baby changes everything.  That might be what it takes to get Edward's head out of his butt.  Love your story!!



Author's Response:

Things get interesting to say the least :) Naw, Edwards an ass... little self absored, takes more then his sister getting knocked up to fix all his problems. Thanks for the review :P

 
Help Wanted by jaxon 22 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3035]
Summary:

Bella Swan applies for the job of PA to the rude, arrogant Hollywood film star Edward Cullen.

Can Bella keep her feelings for her boss in check so she can do her job?

A/H, OOC, luscious and graphic lemons and bad language.

A million and one thank yous to Rachel1313 for the spectacular banner! You are my hero, bb!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 52 Completed: No Word count: 473901
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2011


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Ugly Duckling

Ooh, I love, love this story, but PLEASE have pity on us & no more Jake/Bella and ESPECIALLY no more Edward/Tanya.  Aargh, that Tanya is the world's most annoying female, and she's messing with this thing between Edward & Bella and she just needs to drop off the face of the earth!!  Please? :)

Anyway, you have a fantastic story here & I can't wait to read more (even if I have to put up with E & B with others as long as it's only temporary!).  Please update soon!

 
Summary:

A Murmur of Fire in the Vein

One stormy Seattle night, the last person Bella expects to see appears without warning at her door. How will history - hers and his - impact their unexpected and growing friendship?

FitV art by Touchstone.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 97977
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: August 27, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: In Which Jasper Did Laundry

I'm loving this so far!  You're doing a great job with the characters and with building the plot slowly - I'm sure every reader like me is completely dying to figure out exactly what happened a year ago to break up not only Edward & Bella but also destroy her friendship with Alice & the rest of the family.  So mysterious!  I'm starting to wonder, though, if Jasper's breakup with Alice(happening coincidentally soon after E & B's) might not have been because Jasper didn't approve of what happened to Bella & of Alice's attitude or something.  Can't wait to find out & to read more interaction between J & B - I do love Jasper/Bella fics, and they're hard to find, esp. good ones like yours - so please keep it coming & update soon!

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: In Which Jasper Paid Attention

Wow, I'm SOO loving this story!  This chapter was fantastic - what a sweet thing for Jasper to do!!  I don't know about Bella, but I'm totally swooning right now!  I love to see their developing relationship and can't wait to see where it goes next!  Please keep the updates coming!  Great work!!

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: In Which Jasper Is Late and Rosalie Is a Bitch

Oh no!  What an awful place to leave us hanging!  Aargh!  Why, oh why, Jasper, did you fall back into old habits when things seemed to be looking up?  How can he have gone for 3 months or more clean and then suddenly get high again if he's actually addicted?  Or has he been doing drugs all along and Bella just didn't know about it?  Is Jasper still seeing a therapist, or geez...I hope he has help.  I mean, I know he has Bella and that she'll be there for him, but there's not much a friend can do to "fix" an addict.  Hopefully, her support and their close relationship will help Jasper get his act in gear...man I feel so sorry for him and now for Bella too and everyone who cares about him.  Please update soon so we can at least find out how Bella handles the situation and maybe what prompted Jasper to do this again.  Can't wait for more!!

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: In Which the Cart Is Put Before the Horse

Woah - didn't expect THAT to happen.  Well, I did, but not this chapter, the morning after Jasper showed up high.  But this is making sense - I was kinda wondering if he might not be having feelings for Bella that he didn't know what to do with & if that might not be getting to him.  I really hope they can have a good talk and work thru this together because they are SOO GOOD together.  Thanks for the quick update - keep 'em comin'!  Hot sex scene, by the way.  Can't wait for next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: In Which There Is No One Home

Oh NO!!!   I thought things might go well now with Jasper on a new medication.  This is so awful!  Please update soon, so we can know that Jasper's ok.  Man, I feel so much for Bella, for all of them really.  I never really thought about what the loved ones go thru in a situation like this, but you've really put us in the mind of Bella & Rose & all of them.  Geez, I hope Jasper can get the help he needs soon to fix this.  Aargh, please don't leave us hanging long!  Love, love this story - so powerful, you totally rock!!

 
Summary:



Once upon a time... for that is how all good stories begin...


In a time when legends are more than just stories, and monsters are more than just figments of the imagination, can love truly conquer all?  Amidst curses, monsters, pain, betrayal, and a mysterious legend of a once noble family, two souls will find each other in the dark of Swan Forest...

And nothing will be the same again.

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 36150
[Report This] Published: June 09, 2009 Updated: October 04, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Be Our Guest?

Oh, I totally LOVE it!  At first, i admit I was a little skeptical of your idea, but this is turning out SOOO well - how fitting that Alice is still the bubbly, welcoming type and Edward the brooding, scary one.  Poor Edward - he's convinced he's a monster, so he's acting like one, and this will make it hard on him when Bella finds out how he treated her father!!  Can't wait for more, esp. for Bella meeting up with the Cullens at the Castle.  Please update soon.  Wonderful job!!



Author's Response:

Aw man!  That means more to me than if you'd been a huge fan from the beginning!  =)  I'm so glad you like it. 

And wait until the next chapter.  Edward's going to be in so much trouble!  =)

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: The Deal

Hah - I love it!  I loved James as that nasty Gaston and Angela as the wise horse.  Your characterizations are awesome!  So now poor Bella is stuck at the Castle with the Cullens including Edward who apparently wants to eat her.  Funny how both Edward and Bella are carrying around Titanic loads of guilt & self-loathing - no wonder they're perfect for each other.  By the way, a question - it seems like Alice still has her visions, so is Edward also able to hear everyone's thoughts except Bella's in your story?  Can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it!  I tried to put characters where I thought they best fit in the fairy tale.  =)  As for your question, I pretty much kept the main characters as close to the books as I could.  =)

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Truth in Love

Awww!  FINALLY their feelings are revealed!  Yeah!  This totally ROCKED!  Sweet, doting, worried Edward was perfect as he watched over Bella in her recovery, and their final explosive conversation was also just perfect.  Favorite line: "I don't care because I love you."  WOW!  I so love this story and can't wait for more, especially now that they've confessed to each other.  Also can't wait to find out what Edward & family do when Bella tells them about the monster chasing her.  Is it possible the Cullens don't know about James hunting in their forest?  It seems like they would already know about him and be especially worried for Bella's safety, maybe even assuming that he was the one who scared her in the meadow.  Anyway, please update soon!  Great work!! 

 
Like Night and Day by EllaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1274]
Summary:

“Three things cannot be long hidden: the sun, the moon, and the truth.”

Alice’s werewolf blindness never allowed her to see Bella’s cliff diving at La Push, so she and the rest of the Cullens continued to stay away from Forks.

Bella struggles with her changing feelings for Jacob, her pain from Edward’s rejection, and her lingering feelings of love for the vampire who broke her heart and disappeared. Will Jacob and Bella find their way to each other and get their chance at happiness? And when a miserable and heartbroken Edward returns to beg Bella for forgiveness, what will she do?

As relationships change, Victoria continues her vendetta.

** Nominated for a Bellie Award for "Best 'Edward Who?' Fic!" **

** Nominated for two Indie Twific Awards for "Best Love Triangle" and "Best New Moon Story!" **

** Like Night and Day placed second in The Wolfpack Awards for "Favorite Jacob" **

Thanks you to catonspeed and the ladies of Altered Lions and Sacrificial Lambs for the new banner and your general awesomeness!

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 127337
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: July 19, 2010


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - A Stolen Kiss

Ooh, I just found this story and I really, really like it so far.  You've got me hooked - I can see that it will probably be a slow build for J/B in this one, but the journey looks to be compelling.  Usually, I'm Team Edward, but you're making a very sympathetic Jake figure here so I might swing for him in this one.  Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

It's slow in some ways, but fast in others...just wait!

 
Summary:

"Should a man be sentenced to hang, he may be saved by a virtuous maiden who agrees to marry him." -Early French Colonial Law 

E/B, AU, AH

Passing By


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 79344
[Report This] Published: June 24, 2009 Updated: November 17, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Plans

Great work again on this chapter!  Love seeing the developing relationship between Edward and Bella even amidst the unusual level of tension and uncertainty.  Now I'm really curious as to Edward's background, why he reacted the way he did to the mention of his family.  Can't wait for next chapter - hopefully he & Bella can start bridging the wall between them and become closer. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Yes, Edward is one big mystery, we'll get there I promise!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'll look forward ot hearing from you again!

 
Visceral by four-letter-word Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 324]
Summary:

She’s making all the wrong choices, and she can’t bring herself to care. He’s just trying to make a life for himself. When their paths cross, will Jasper care enough to save Bella from herself? Does she even want to be saved? JxB


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 34188
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: August 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: I've Wasted Opportunities

Aw, grrr...a cliffie!  I really want to get to Jasper & Bella's next interaction.  I think it may get pretty intense when jasper figures out just how much Bella has been suffering & that his anger at her is completely unjustified, not to mention poor Bella's guilt when she finds out what happened to the Cullen family as a fallout of her birthday night back in Forks.  GREAT story you've got, and I can't wait for more!!  Please update soon!

 
Summary:

The story is built upon canon, going AU at the point of the battle with Victoria and the newborns. This time, the battle is not so simple, and Esme, Edward, Jacob, Leah, and Paul are killed.  

This is the story of how Bella and the Cullens pick up the pieces after the terrible tragedy and find a way to live again. It's quite emotional and slow-building, and I've done my best to keep it as realistic as possible (for the Twilight world, lol) and keep everyone in character.

Here's a preview:

"Bella, everything you heard in those letters was true. You are a Cullen, no matter what. We love you, and we want you to stay."

She looked up at me, her eyes brimming with tears. "How, Carlisle? How can you want me to stay?"

I took her face between my hands and looked directly into her eyes. "Because Bella, I can't make it if you don't. I need you now. You are the only one who can understand the pain I'm in, and I yours. We all need each other. This family will fall apart if we separate now. Please, Bella, say you'll stay with us."

 

"But since we lost Esme and Edward, I've felt his feelings toward her - he thinks of her as a friend. A best friend, perhaps. He has loved her in that way since the battle. And she feels for him in the same way. And I've noticed, especially in the last few months, that the connection they feel for each other seems stronger somehow. When they are not together, they both feel incomplete, but together, they both feel secure. They really rely quite heavily on each other." 

 

 

 

 

 

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 140263
[Report This] Published: July 22, 2009 Updated: January 07, 2010


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Isle Esme

Holy cow!!  I think this is the saddest freakin' story I've ever read...like, ever!!!  I just started it tonight (took me awhile to work up the courage to try it as I'm amazingly chicken about character-death stories) and I read the whole thing so far in one sitting.  I cried CONSTANTLY and now have a stuffed-up nose & a headache!!  Don't feel bad, though, because on the upside you apparently are a VERY skilled writer and you have a fantastic story on your hands if your readers can just handle the emotional trauma (and the headaches from too much crying!)  I look forward to reading more, esp as the Cullens start another chapter at Dartmouth, and to seeing how the closeness between Carlisle & Bella develops.  Great work!  Update asap!

 
Summary:

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What if Bella realized Edward was planning to leave her after the incident at her 18th Birthday party? Could she let his family give up the one place where they could be truly comfortable? Would she be able to disappear to give the Cullens a chance to live normal lives? She has to find the strength to walk away before Edward has a chance to break her heart – something she is certain she would not be able to survive.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 65697
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2009 Updated: June 03, 2010


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Consequences

I love this story!  Your twist on Mew Moon is wonderful, though hard, and I can't wait to read more.  Please update soon!



Author's Response:

It's hard to write too. I hate seeing these two apart! But they are just so stubborn, especially Bella. I thought it would be Edward, but she's way worse :-)

Hopefully you won't have to wait too much longer for more.

 

Thanks!

 
Two Forks by nowforruin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 420]
Summary:

Story picks up right after Bella jumps in New Moon. Alice actually listened to Edward and didn't see Bella, and Edward never goes to Volterra. Yet with Bella alive and well in Forks, how long is this separation really going to last? And how is Edward prepared to deal with Bella's new reality should he decide to return?

Top 5 Finalist Indies Winter 2010, WIP Best Love Triangle

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Rosalie, Jasper, Jacob, Esme, Emmett, Edward, Carlisle, Bella, Alice
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 129251
[Report This] Published: August 16, 2009 Updated: March 14, 2010


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: II. scars are souvenirs you never lose

Awesome story!  The emotional roller coaster that  Bella is on and has been on since Edward left is very apparent through your writing, so very well done!  I can't wait to read more, so please update as soon as possible. My favorite quote - this just totally rocked, the way you worded this little rant of Bella's had me smiling and cheering -

“I’m going inside to start on the mountain of homework I have. And to try and de-stress from my terrible day you know nothing about because you didn’t bother to ask. And when you get over yourself, maybe then you can tell me what this giant problem is that was so big it could wait until after you had a temper tantrum about my ex.”

...Go, Bella!! :)



Author's Response:

not gonna lie, this story definitely started out as me wanting to write something where Bella has more of a backbone... thanks for the review!

 
Unknown Beginnings by maired75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 535]
Summary:

Bella didn't make it to Edward in time in Voltera. After faking her death and moving in with the Cullen's, Bella shuts down and buries herself in her grief. Will the Cullen's be able to pull her out? When her feelings change for a certain Cullen, how will she handle it? Will she be able to pull herself out of the darkness or will the guilt tear her apart?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 47131
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2009 Updated: November 21, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Working Through It

I love this story!  Wow - what a great twist this plot's got goin' on!  Your writing is superb, and I can't wait to read more.  I've always liked Jasper/Bella fics, and this one is  a particularly good one!  Please update soon!

 
Summary:

Set two years after that fateful night in the forest except Edward never came back. Bella is away at college trying to pick up the pieces of her life. What happens when she runs into the one Cullen she never thought she could ever have anything in common with? A Team Jasper story.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 92438
[Report This] Published: September 12, 2009 Updated: February 28, 2010


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ooh, I'm really liking this so far!  I always love a good Jasper/Bella fic, and this certainly looks like it's gonna be good!  Can't wait for Bella's birthday weekend at Jasper's!  Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and responding. I hope you will enjoy this Jasper/Bella tale. I look forward to showing you where I'm headed. I'll post soon:)

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yes, I am enjoying it.  I still like what you're doing with this story and with Jasper & Bella together.  Now, however, with some of the cryptic comments in this chapter, I'm beginning to worry that Edward will come back in the picture and steal Bella away from Jasper, like Edward's really supposed to be her fate all along.  I REALLY hope you don't do that.  Doesn't matter if Edward comes back in the picture; in fact, that might be best so everyone can know for certain that Bella's issues with him are truly in the past and she is truly committed to a future with Jasper.  Just please, please, don't let Edward get in between these two!  I don't think you'd do that to us, since the description for this story mentions that it's "Team Jasper", but I wanted to clarify my feelings at any rate! 

Again, wonderful job so far and I look forward to Jasper & Bella's growth as a couple.



Author's Response:

Thanks for responding. I promise that this will remain a Team Jasper story throughout. I will add conflict just not in the traditional way. This is a J/B love story. I hope you'll stick with me to see where I take them. I'll post soon:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for responding. I promise that this will remain a Team Jasper story throughout. I will add conflict just not in the traditional way. This is a J/B love story. I hope you'll stick with me to see where I take them. I'll post soon:)

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward are "buddies" and while Bella wants more, Edward pulls away every time she tries to make things more official.  Then one evening, she meets a tall, dark, handsome man out in a club, and he promises her everything she always wanted.  Will Bella take it, even if it's not with the person she thought it would be with?  And what will Edward do when his friend is suddenly no longer available?

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 36646
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: February 11, 2010


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Ch 3: NYC

Argh!  Not a cliffie!!  Please, please update soon so we can meet this mystery man & hopefully start finding out how Edward reacts when suddenly Bella becomes less available to his every whim.  A great, great story, although I'm burning with curiosity as to what on earth is wrong with this Edward that he gave up his relationship with Bella.  Please keep the story coming so I don't suffer too long! :)

 
A Betting Man by mybluesky Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2594]
Summary:

A Betting Man 

Now Complete!

Just two weeks before her best friend's wedding Bella gets dumped by boyfriend James when she refuses to give him what he wants. The next night she discovers he's made a bet with gorgeous pal Edward Cullen that he can't bed her. She brilliantly decides to string Edward along for a few weeks...and subsequently land herself a hot date for the wedding. Things soon get very interesting...

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 166948
[Report This] Published: December 08, 2009 Updated: September 13, 2010


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm loving this story!!  Of course, I'm hating it at the same time because of the stupid bet getting in both Edward & Bella's way, but hopefully it sounds like everything's going to get out in the open pretty soon.  At least, I can't really see Bella being able to keep on pretending not to know anything after she has read those awful, incriminating texts!  And I can't wait for the big reveal - so excited!  Keep up the fascinating work you're doing writing this!

 
Love Story by Alyssa Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Summary:

Love Story

The absolute last thing in Bella Swan's mind is uprooting her life, mid-semester of her senior year of High School, let alone move to Forks, the rainy, dreary town her homely father resides in. Yet the move brings her a sort of peace and optimism; things were definitely changing, and falling into a simple, easy routine. Enter the mysterious stranger Edward Cullen, who sweeps her off of her feet, exciting in her feelings of passion, hatred, and more importantly, passionate hate.

Will life ever be simple again? 

 

AU / AH OOC

Based extremely loosely on Taylor Swift's "Love Story".

RATED NC-17 FOR LANGUAGE, ADULT THEMES AND CONTENT, AND LATER LEMONS!!!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 54448
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2010 Updated: January 09, 2011


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: January 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Day 4: The Hallway

Fantastic story - can't wait to read more!  Please update soon!

 
Beyond Time by tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1732]
Summary:

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 286468
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: June 05, 2011


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Of Sunday Picnics and Shattered Expectations

Ooh, I love this tale!  But how heartbreaking for Bella to go thru this, stuck in a strange world with an Edward who not only doesn't love her or even remember her, but actually has a girl already!  How awful!  Please get Samantha out of the picture ASAP - Tom seems like a good candidate to take her! ;)  Can't wait to read what happens at the "double date", so please update soon!!



Author's Response:

Poor Bella does have her work cut out for her, doesn't she? I'm sure she's up to the task, however. As for Samantha - the girl's already getting death threats! LoL!

Thanks for reading... next chapter should be up toward the end of the week...

 
Leaves of Grass by nautical Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 577]
Summary: Feature

 

When Bella and Edward return home from Volterra in New Moon, she isn't sure if she can still love him after everything that has happened.  Their problems extend far beyond the vampire/human power imbalance, as she realizes that Edward will never allow them to be equal partners in the relationship.

The next morning, Bella awakens in a time and place she would have never imagined: Houston, 1862. Far from home, her family, and everything she has ever known, Bella must decide how far she is willing to go to follow her heart. (B/J)

(Thank you to Ms_Ambrosia, Starnosy, and So_Unseelie for the fabulous banners.)

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 89659
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2010 Updated: December 19, 2011


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow!  Fabulous chapter!  I love, love, love Jasper's letter to Bella - you captured the sweetness of his feelings for her as well as how formally & eloquently an 1860's Southern gentleman would probably express himself when writing a letter to his sweetheart.  Cant wait for next update, especially if there's more correspondence between these two - I just wish Bella would hurry up & figure out that it's ok, that she's supposed to be with Jasper!  ...If his letter didn't start to overcome her reservations, I don't know what it will take! :)  Great work!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed his letter. We'll definitely see some more Jasper letters.

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: April 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Aargh!  Meanie!  What an awful cliffhanger to leave us with!  Who's coming in the house with poor Bella all alone...and basically naked?! 
Ok, the optimistic side of me is whispering that maybe the mysterious male is Jasper, unexpectedly come home, which would be really, really awesome, as it would assure everyone that he's still safe despite no communication for a month and it would give Bella & him the chance to finally make it clear just how they love the other! 

Aargh!  please, please update soon with who in the heck this dude in the dark is.   Thank you for a wonderful story!



Author's Response:

If you check out the teaser on the LoG forum thread, you can find out who the mystery man is.

 




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