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Summary:

Four years after Edward left Bella in the forest; Bella is finally moving forward with her life but it is someone from her past that helps her truly heal and obtain the future that she was always meant to have.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Completed: Yes Word count: 167857
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: August 14, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Holy Cow - I am so into this story!  I've recently developed a sorta Jasper/Bella leaning, but your story here, I am convinced, could probably convert the most diehard Team Edward people!  Your writing is fantastic, the plot has enough action & drama to be compelling without feeling overdone or too angsty, and the romance you've created here between Jasper & Bella is AMAZING!  All the chapters where their friendship was building, and the reader could see clearly how they were falling in love while they were both oblivious & fighting it - they were wonderful & they built up so well to the chapter with Bella's date.  I can't wait for what happens next, so please, please keep your amazing writing going & update soon!

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Another excellent chapter.  Whew, I am so glad to have gotten thru all the stress of that meeting with the Volturi, not knowing if Jasper & Bella would be alright.  But NOW I'm worried, obviously alongside Jasper, that since they're in a different room from the one in Alice's vision, if that means something else might be different too, like something go wrong or Jasper lose control?  Aargh, the suspense!  ...But I'll make it, as long as I know you will continue this tale soon and relieve me.  Please update soon!  I love it - this is just about my all-time favorite Twilight fic.

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Another great chapter!  Way to go!  My only complaint is that it was too short, and I would've liked to hear from Jasper this time too.  I'm with Bella - I can't stand for them to be separated now that they've finally been reunited & things are looking up again.  Excellent writing, such a great pairing, I just totally LOVE this story!  Please update soon, and let us hear from Jasper soon too!

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Agh!!  What a killer place to stop!  Bella needs Jasper; I need Jasper!  Please update soon & give us both their reunion.  I can only imagine what poor Jasper will be like as he experiences the awful depth of Bella's emotional pain right now.  I'm afraid he'll second-guess what they're doing & wonder if Bella really knows what she's doing just like Edward did at the end of Eclipse when she was so torn up over leaving Jacob.  But anyway...this is another great chapter - wow, such an intense conversation between Jake & Bella - I felt both of their anguish & everything.  Can't wait for more, so please don't leave us hanging long!

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: June 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Oh, mean!!  What an awful cliffie!  Aargh, don't leave us hanging - how does Bella respond to that bombshell? (once she gets past the disbelief, anyway)??  Great writing, as usual - please update soon! 

 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4551]
Summary:

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After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: United

Oh, what a cruel, cruel author!!  What a cliffie!!  C'mon, now you can't leave us hanging on this moment too long, can you?!  How do the Cullens respond?  Esp, how does Edward respond and how fast can he ditch that trashy Tanya?!  Super job on this chapter, as always.  Please let us see the reunion soon!!!

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: June 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Reunion

Thanks for the speedy update.  But it's sooo hard to witness Edward being with the wrong person, esp with that skanky Tanya and esp in front of Bella when she has feelings for him.  Please get rid of that skanky Tanya SOON and get Edward to come to his senses!  Can't wait for more! 

 
Summary:

a new take on Eclipse.

That's all I can really say without completely spoiling it.

rated R for intensity and violence.


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 14099
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2008 Updated: November 20, 2008


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: March 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Thanks for a great story - at first I was little skeptical of trying to take the battle scene in a different direction, but you pulled it off amazingly.  Kudos!  Keep up the great writing!

 
Let Me Ease You by flibbins Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 414]
Summary:

Edward realizes it is a struggle for Bella to deal with the physical boundaries in their relationship, so he enlists Jasper's help.  Set during Eclipse.  Edward/Bella and Jasper/Bella

Let Me Ease You


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 20931
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2008 Updated: July 03, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Begwards Can't Be Choosers

Wow - I sooo love this story!  For one thing, the smut is very well-written - this story is HOT! ;)

But also, I'm kinda partial to Jasper/Bella fic's, so this is really exciting to me.  The only thing bumming me out is I don't see how this can have a happy ending.  I mean, J & B are not the kind who can engage in sexual activity without emotions getting involved, so they're liable to get really attached, which will kill Alice & Edward if it's still canon couples.   Aargh!!  Can't wait to see how/where you take this.  Love the smut, and I'm quietly rooting for Jasper & Bella here. ;)  Please update soon!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up.

NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: March 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Solace and Slutterina Barbie

Awesome story - please keep it coming, I'm totally addicted.  What's crazy-weird is that I've always been completely Edward/Bella 100% - there was no other option for me, but your story is so well-done that I'm actually hoping Jasper & Bella get back together.  And that is really a testament to how great your writing is here.  You've just made their love & their relationship really compelling, and, although I'm glad Edward & Bella are able to be friends now, I think in this particular story, Edward fits better in the friend category permanently.  Like, I can't imagine how devastated Jasper would be if anything intimate happened between E/B, esp. after all the years growing up of coming in 2nd to Edward and this would be so much worse because Bella matters so much more to Jasper than anything else ever has.  As weird as thinking anything other than E/B is for me, I think it makes sense because your story is so original, the characters so different from canon.  So, this is my thank-you for a great story and a formal request to please let Jasper & Bella end up together and to please update soon. 

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Crimson and Gifts

It was great to see another chapter for this story.  I'm still really, really rooting for Jasper/Bella in this one.  Yes, he made a mistake, but Bella overreacted, I think, and is handling everything horribly.  Stringing Edward along while she tries to figure her head out, carving out poor Jasper's heart...  seems like maybe things will come to a head at the dance...please, please, let Jasper & Bella work it out!  They were so cute together!

 
1918 by teamEdwardonly Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
Summary:

What if Bella had lived in 1918? Would the story of Bella and Edward change or remain the same?

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 55339
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2008 Updated: March 28, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: March 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Monster

What a fabulous story!  Thank you for sharing with us such a creative alternative for our beloved Edward/Bella.   It's great how you're keeping some things the same (the core of their relationship, that consuming pull that neither understood or could ignore) while totally changing others, even the whole setting.   It's also really cool to think more in-depth about what it was like for Edward as a new vampire and the dark period when he hunted humans - you did an excellent job delving that in this chapter, using the Jeffries guy.  Please keep up the excellent work and share more with us soon - I can't wait for the promised Edward/Bella interaction! 

 
Unwanted by bloodredlust Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1577]
Summary:

Edward couldn't bear to watch his beloved Bella being torn apart from the inside by his baby… so how might things have turned out for our favourite couple if he had taken the steps to ensure Bella’s survival, rather than let his spawn kill her. Very dark, Angsty little 'what if' story.

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A HUGE thankyou to Emerald-Rosalie for the amazing banner.  I love it!


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 85602
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: March 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Intervention

Wow, when you said "dark" in your story summary, you weren't kidding!  Holy cow - I've cried so much thru these chapters I think I gave myself a headache, but just as you described yourself unable to stop working on it, I am totally unable to stop reading it - totally addicted!  Please keep up the excellent writing you're doing here, as I can't wait for where this horrible, wonderful tale goes next.  No matter how much angst we've still got to cover, I really, really hope there'll be a happy ExB ending.  I'm not sure how, since they're both broken so badly, but I trust your muse to find a way!  Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Aww honey, sorry for giving you a headache  *hugs*

I am glad you like it though.  Stick with me hon, i'm a sucker for HEA's.

-Bec

 
Summary:

The much anticipated sequel to A Lesson in Release.  Jasper has won the girl of his dreams and they are beginning a new life together at college.  But what happens when fate intercedes?  Will he be able to hold onto her or will fate return her to Edward?

A Lesson in Fate


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: The Lessons Saga
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 171842
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: October 28, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: April 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II

Oh no, no!!  Please, please don't let her go back to Edward!  I'm not necessarily anti-Edward (I like E/B stories usually), but "Lesson in Fate" has been my JasperxBella fix and I don't want to lose that.  In your story, it just seems that Jasper & Bella are better for each other than she & Edward are.  Please let her & Jasper be ok!  Aargh!  Now I really can't wait for an update - I'll be wanting her & Jasper to get back together, but even if you don't take that route, I'm so hooked, I'll have to read about her getting back with Edward like I'm watching a train wreck!  I understand her need for space & time to think, but it doesn't seem like Bella is being fair - I never would have pictured Bella being in love with two guys like this.  The suspense is killing me! (By the way, you're doing a fantastic job weaving this tale, if you couldn't tell from how addicted I've become to it!)  Pleae keep up your great writing & update soon!

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: April 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: The Worst Kind of Torture

Oh man, I can't believe how awful this situation is - awful for Alice & Adrian being worried about each other and having to separate, and 10,000x more awful for Edward & Jasper & Bella.  I feel so sorry for Jasper - just when he was starting to get a  handle on his insecurity over Bella (who, by the way, I think has been too hard on Jasper & not reassuring enough) now has to deal with Edward & Bella acting coupley again.  Please, let the torture end soon and bring Jasper & Bella back together!   Can't wait for the next update.  Keep up your great writing!

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: May 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Welcome to Manhood

Aww, I mean, you're doing a fantastic job, and Edward/Bella together are amazing, of course (very hot sex scenes, by the way!), but...but...I still really wanted Jasper & Bella to stay together in this story.  I know, I know, the whole "you can't fight fate" thing, and now it seems that Jasper's got a singer too so it looks like he & Heidi will fall for each other & that'll mean everybody gets a happily ever after...but...but

Anyway, from your AN at the end, I guess it's possible you'll reward us with an alternate ending where Jasper & Bella do get back together which would make me so happy (hint, hint) SO I guess I'll be patient!  Can't wait for more!  ;)

 
Haunted Memories by SheeWolf85 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 127]
Summary:

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Edward leaves Bella for her own safety and tries to forget her. The rest of the Cullens stay behind to protect her and Bella’s friendship with Alice continues. Bella is determined to do what she must to be able to be with Edward again. As Alice searches Edward’s future to find him again, they realize that he does not want to be found.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 60855
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2009 Updated: July 03, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Great work so far!  And thank you for the chapter end note because I was starting to freak out that it would be several more years before Edward would GET OVER HIMSELF.  I really can't wait for him to wake up & understand how badly he has screwed up & how much he & Bella belong together.  Can't wait for some resolution next chapter, so please don't leave us hanging too long.  Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Great chapter!  I loved it.  Of course, it makes sense that with Edward's frame of mind & abilities, the only way this awful goose-chase would stop would be if he was somehow incapacitated before the Cullens caught up to him.  Excellent plot twist! Now I'm really excited to see what happens between Edward & Bella when he comes to (he will, won't he?!)  Can't wait for more! Please update soon!

 
Second Chances by aerialla Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 221]
Summary:

 After trying to attack Bella on her birthday and the farewell of his family can Jasper get a second chance. Can he live on his own and resist the urge for human blood. *Sequel to my one shot story titled One Drop which should be read for better clarity*

Story is so far in Jasper's POV and goes AU immediately following Bella's birthday party.

SecondChances

 The beautiful banner image was made by the incredible Emerald_Rosalie.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 50423
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2009 Updated: July 08, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: April 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Confidence

Wow, definitely a big thank you for choosing to share this story with us - it is really good!  Just like you, I developed a really strong interest in Jasper as a a result of the two stories you mentioned in the beginning.  In fact, I 'm every bit as into JxB stories now as I am ExB.  Will this eventually be a Jasper/Bella story, or is it just about Jasper?  Either way is fine, but I do kinda hope you work in a romance between him & Bella eventually because they make such a great pair.  You're doing an awesome job with the character development & I love how you're unfolding this spin-off of the New Moon plot.  I can't wait for your next update!

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: July 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Sorrow

Oh my goodness!  This story just gets better & better every chapter!  I thought it was kind of a slow start, but now I can appreciate what you were building to with these last couple chapters.  Now I can't wait for the outcome, for Bella's reaction to finding out that Jasper stayed.  I dearly hope Jasper is able to heal her spirit & repair the damage Edward did even as she gets her body healed.  Can't wait for the next chapter!  Keep up the great writing!

 
Summary: Feature

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In the darkest depths of Port Angeles, a war has begun. Sociopathic vampire Edward seeks revenge on a Hunter, Jacob, and as images of a girl haunt Jacob’s mind, Edward is determined that he will hunt her down...

AU, Non–canon and Canon pairings, a bit OOC... maybe a lot OOC.

 Rated NC–17 for violence, lemons, bad language & overall dark themes.

 

Disclaimer: Stephenie Meyer owns everything Twilight – I own a rather active imagination and a tendency towards vivid nightmares. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: Lex Talionis
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 81157
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2009 Updated: April 25, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Invisible Wounds

Wow - what an awesome story - your writing here is amazing - I really admire the way you've captured a vampire's psyche.  It's so great to read the slow, steady transformation Edward is undergoing from the moment he meets Bella, even though he himself is ony beginning to realize the impact she will have on him.  I can't wait to see where you take their relationship - hopefully, your Bella can redeem your Edward as much as SM's did.  Please keep the updates coming - fantastic job!

 
Summary: Feature

 

Edward Cullen needs to pass Statistics. Bella Swan is his tutor. She thinks he's a flighty, arrogant--albeit sexy--asshole, and he thinks she's Bipolar, but tries to win her over, anyway.

Can he change her mind, or do first impressions really last?

 Thanks to my baby momma, Maximista, for the banner! <3


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 258464
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: June 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots

Awesome chapter!  Can't wait to find out about the hottie Bella will be sitting by & to get to see jealous Edward in action.  How much longer before these two wake up & see they're each other's soulmate?!  You're doing a fabulous job with this funny, addictive story.  Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps

Awesome work!  I love the fact that Bella met that amazing, hot guy and that Edward is jealous.  Can't wait for his POV to see if he's actually aware enough to realize that's what he's feeling.  These two poor people need a clue, don't they?!  Love your story - Keep the updates comin'!

 
Amour by jangoo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 154]
Summary:

AU. Edward Masen and Bella Swan are friends. But after the death of Edward's mother, Elizabeth, they find comfort in each other's arms. One day, Edward disappears, leaving Bella hurt and confused. What happened to Edward? Did his alcoholism finally kill him, or is something more sinister at work?

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 58288
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2009 Updated: June 11, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed
Date: March 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love this story - your plot is incredibly original and I'm addicted.  Are you going to have Bella run into Edward again at this party of Emmett's, now that he's a vampire?  I can't wait to see how this goes.  I imagine Edward feels tremendous guilt for how he treated Bella as a human and too much shame of what he has become to consider seeking her out again - am I anywhere close? :)  Anyway, you've got a great story here - please keep going!  I can't wait to read what happens next.

 
Summary: Feature

 

Bella begins working for the elusive and distant Edward Cullen who she discovers is hiding behind an elaborate charade to maintain his secret lifestyle. Bella is determined to find out the mysteries of Edward Cullen but with what results? AU. Mystery/Humor/Angst


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 173201
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: Nicole March Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Totally GREAT chapter!  Very cool - how Edward is realizing his lust as a man for Bella may be even greater than his lust for her as a vampire - with the great way you've written both of them, she is just what he needs in this fic!  I also love the rescue - how circumstances force Edward to close the gap between him & Bella that he might never have had the guts to if he hadn't been forced to in order to save her life.  Now, of course, since they're deciding to stay in each other's lives, Bella is going to start having questions Edward doesn't want to answer & noticing things about him he doesn't want her to know.  Can't wait to see what happens next between these two.  Please update soon!  You're doing a fabulous job.

 




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