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Penname: ForbiddenFyre [ Contact]
Real name: Paige
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Member Since: March 23, 2009
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I am a nobody who enjoys reading and writing. I have written a few stories but nothing that I have ever finished.
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Summary: 
A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.
He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is hunting him.
Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company. She's also a 110 year old vampire.
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In the MYSTIC AWARDS:
GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE
CUTE CATEGORY:
Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 48 Completed: Yes
Word count: 200265
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: August 30, 2010
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed 
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13~~Taken~~
Wow, Loved it!!!! I knew something was up when I read what Alice had packed Bella!! That sneake, evil, little pixie!! Anyhoo, this was a great chapter and I loved the Edward and Bellaness of it!! Again, I nearly cried when I reached the end of this chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Alice's change to Bella's wardrobe! Yes, she's going to pound her some day, but not right now...
I've put the next chapter into the line-up...
Thanks so much for reading, rating and reviewing ForbiddenFyre! Pixel candy for you!
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9~~Discoveries~~
Love your story and you are so right about Bella being prettier than the woman in the picture. I also love how you put Jessica and Mike as friends of Edward's instead of the perpetual enemies they always seem to be. Anyhoo, great job and great storyline can not wait to see what you come out with next!
Author's Response: Thanks so much ForbiddenFyre! Yep, the stories with Jessica and Mike as good people are very few and far between!
I appreciate your comments...
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11~~Before the Dawn~~
Love this new chapter!! Just like Edward watching Bella, Bella's watching him! At least Bella is a "good" stacker while Lauren's not. Oh, and the smilie is awesome! Love the fangs!
Author's Response: :F I like that smilie too! Fangs and all...
Yes, our Bella is watching Edward...but she came through the door, not the window!
Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and rating!
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12~~His Girl Friday~~
Loved it!!! I feel so stupid! I have no idea what is missing! I have been wracking my brains and can not come up with an answer! Oh, well, I'll find out when all is revealed! Anyhoo, wonderful job, ever chapter you leaving me dying for more and sad when the chapter is over! Lol :_F
Author's Response: Yes, all will be revealed...my daughter didn't get it either...and she had been reading from the beginning...
I'm so glad that you are enjoying this ForbiddenFyre! It's so much fun to write...
Thanks for reading, rating and reviewing!
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14~~Epiphany~~
Oh no!! And, not oh, no for your writing, but oh no what Lauren's mom has in store for Edward! Anyhoo, wonderfully written again. You also leaving me wanting more again! Love your story! So can not wait for the next chapter! The vision about Edward being a vampire! I hope that it comes true soon!! I hate the thought of Edward not being a vampire, when everybody else is! Again, great job!!!
Author's Response: Glad you are still liking this...and wanting more...next one is in the line-up...
I liked that vision too...flowers, a meadow...and golden eyes!
Thanks so much for R, R, and R!!!!
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15~~Gone...Just Gone~~
Wow, just wow! Mama is sooo off her rocker!! Poor Edward, I feel so bad for him and a little tiny portion of me feels bad for Lauren having to put up with a mother like that, but only a LITTLE tiny portion! Another lovely written chapter! I love how you incorporated the different POVs. Again, you astound with your marvelous talent! Can't wait to find out what happens next and I really hope Edward makes it to have a happy ending, with Bella!~
Author's Response: You are such a good person...feeling a bit sorry for Lauren...you deserve pixel cookies!
I'm glad my POV's worked...
Ah, remember: HEA...only way for me!
I really do appreciate your support, ForbiddenFyre!
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16~~Interrogation~~
Awesome!!! Wonderful update. And I do feel a little sorry for Lauren. She's not really all that bad, but with a mother like Mama, well, it's no wonder she's so confused!! Anyhoo, love the update and can not wait for more!!
Author's Response: Yep, no wonder she's confused...and delusional!
Next update should come soon...
Thanks so much for your support ForbiddenFyre!
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17~~Trying to Focus~~
Noooooo!!! What a terrible but cool place for a cliffy!! Cliffys are a good thing because they leave you wanting more! Anyhoo, this is a wonderful update!!!! I really hate Lorena Mallory! Knowing that the next chapter is called Resue, that makes things a lot better. Can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response: I'm so happy that I've left you wanting more...oh, did I tell you that I'm going on a six month tour of Asia? No updates until I get back...
JUST KIDDING! Now that would be a BAD CLIFFIE...for sure and certain!
I love your reviews, forbiddenFyre...pixel cookies for you, too!
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18~~Rescue~~
That was amazing!!! Just as good and wonderful as the rest of the story you've given us so far!!! I am soooo happy that Bella finally found Edward! It nearly made me cry when I read the part about the damage that Lorena did to Edward!! (grr) Anyhoo, you're not a bad person, I am sure that everyone who read this would die for Bella to get a hand on Lorena. But that wouldn't be right. After what Lorena did, I think that she deserves whatever she gets!! Anyhow, I can not wait to find out what happens next! I have to admit that I was kinda hoping that Bella or Carlisle would change Edward so he could be whole. But Bella's sounds like Edward in Twilight, that she doesn't want to take away his humanity or "chance to live" Maybe, in the end he'll be a vampire! (nudge, nudge) :) LOL
Author's Response: *Amazing*...thanks so much, ForbiddenFyre!
Ah, another *Be Mean to Lorena* member! You can be vice president of the club... ;)
Bella does have a few issues, but not nearly as many at SM's Edward...I just couldn't write that much self-doubt! LOL
I feel your *nudges*...and I'm listening...
Thanks for the pretty stars too!
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19~~ Later ~~
Love this new update just as much as the rest of your amazing story!! I am sooo happy that Edward will be alright and will be able to play the piano again!! And all the people that loved Lorena's death should form a Lorena Hate Club or something like that, lol!! Anyhoo, is this going to be like Twilight, but Bella will leave instead of Edward? 'Cause I really hope not! Again, wonderful job and I will hold my breath until the next chapter is up!! lol, if I did that, I would probably die! lol :F
Author's Response: Ah....thanks so much ForbiddenFyre!
Nope, no leaving...on that I can assure you! Problems...yes...but leaving, NO!
I have just watched the NM trailer....three times....and each time Edward steps away, one of my children or another screams: JERK!
LOLOLOL!
Uh oh...don't hold your breath, that could be bad for your health, BUT it should be up soon!
Thanks again, I love the pretty stars!
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20~~The First Question~~
Love it as always!! I am so glad that he'll be alright and that he was awake for these kisses!!! Can't wait to see what it is that you give us next!
Author's Response: Thank you, forbiddenFyre! Yes, next chapter they get to go to Telluride...
Title is: It Was Time...
I hope you like it...
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: June 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21~~It was time...~~
Oh, my, gosh!!! That rental house is sooo beautiful!! I would love to go and rent that house with a bunch of people, that would be so much fun!!! I love this new chapter and the thing about Edward fighting being a patient makes so much sense with his character. You are doing such a wonderful job on this story! I don't know if anyone has told you, but thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story and sharing your amazing talent with us! We appreciate it so much, that you take the time off from your life to entertain us. Love your story and can not wait for the next chapter and all the answers to come out!
Author's Response: I think we should just make a trip there and wander around the house...maybe see Edward there...and Bella too!
Your words touched me so much...THANK YOU!
The next chapter...titled: ANSWERS...is my favorite one. He gets SOME answers, but more later....
Here's a peek:
“Vampire…I had become a vampire just like Carlisle and Esme.” Her eyes were wide as she looked at me. I’m sure she was wondering what I was going to do. Hell, I wondered what I was going to do, what I thought about this tale she was telling me. It all seemed so farfetched. Could this be real? Could she really be a vampire? The world as I knew it tilted just a bit.
I do love this...thanks again, ForbiddenFyre...your review really did make my day!
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22~~Answers~~
I absolutely LOVED this chapter!!!! I thought that it was amazing!!! This just might be one of the most amazing chapters that you've written. It was a wonderful way to put Edward finding out about vampires!!! WOnderful work and thank you so much for sharing your talent with us and taking the time to make such an amazingly, wonderful story with us!!! We really appreciate the time you spend and the thought you put into this! I I don not know much about vampires, sorry! :F
Author's Response: Oh! That is so nice of you to say so! I really did love this chapter too....
And all those lovely STARS...sigh...thanks so much!
Send me a pm if you'd like in on a secret....
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: June 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23~~Not Keeping the Secret~~
Oh, wow!!! I loved your chapter! am so glad that you updated! I was on vacation so I wasn't able to see if you had updated. This is an amazing story! You've done a great job on the story so far and I thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us!
Author's Response: Hope your vacation was a good one....
Thanks for your lovely words...they mean so much to me!
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: June 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24~~Anticipation~~
Ahhhhh, yeah!!!! Finally, they have both admitted that they love each other!!! I Am So Happy!!! Anyhoo, love your story and that was a great update. I hope that you have Edward change in the end. Either by Carlisle or Bella are my best guesses if you decide to change him!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, ForbiddenFyre! I do love that they've admitted how they feel...and it only took HOW many chapters? LOL!
Hmmmm...changes....Bella or Carlisle? Hmmmmm....they have to get beyond the visitors first!
That chapter is already in the line-up...and I hope you enjoy that one too!
Thanks for reading...and those sparkly stars!
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: July 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26~~Gifts~~
Loved it!!! I haven't been able to read in awhile so I had a few chapters to read at once. Anyways, this was as wonderful as the rest of your story. I love how Edward's meeting with the Denali clan went down. Also, I can not wait to until Bella makes Edward a vampire!
Author's Response: Oh, ForbiddenFyre, I'm so happy that you loved it! Oh...and getting to read more than one at a time is always fun, isn't it?
So, you think that Bella will change him? She's not going to dig her heels in and whine: NO! ?????
We'll see.... ;) ;D
Thanks for the review AND the stars!!!
Kathie
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: July 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27~~Options~~
Oh wow, oh wow, oh wow!!!! That was amazing! You did a wonderful job on this chapter and with all the different POV's too! Anyways, loved it and I really hope that the verdict is that they will change Edward and the Volturi won't have to be involved! But, doesn't matter. Even if Edward never becomes a vampire, and the Volturi all, this will still be my favorite story and one of the best written stories that I have ever read.
Author's Response: Thanks, ForbiddenFyre! I'm glad that you could tell who was who...
I appreciate your words so much...
Ah, the Volturi...those guys are just nasty...."Just who is this Aro guy?" I'm sure that Aro would like to take him out just for that...LOLOL
I'm so happy that you are still enjoying it...the next chapter will be up soon!
Kathie
Summary: Bella works at an uber trendy fashion magazine at the Upper East Side. She also took a part time job at an orphanage. What happens when her path crosses with a gorgeous, but distant and ever furious soccer coach, Edward Cullen? Ratings may go up.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No
Word count: 88858
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2009 Updated: May 18, 2010
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Everybody's Fool
Like that you gave us Edward's POV. Is the girl with black curls his wife or something? I know this is your story so just ignore my question until you give us your answer in the story or wherever you plan to uncover who the girl is. Sorry I'm rambling, anyhoo, this was a great chapter, a little short, but great. What's really funny is that while I was getting ready to read this I was listening to music and the song Everybody's Fool by Evanescence came on and this chapter is called Everybody's Fool.
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: My Paper Heart
I really liked this new update. A good insight into Edward's past. So, he married Angela Weber, that's cool. I love when people make their fanfics with the original character names but makes them their own. Great job! can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
Summary: Edward Masen in the music room; Bella Swan in the library; Emmett McCarty in the gym; Jasper Whitlock in the history room; Alice Brandon in the art room; Rosalie Hale in the garage.
With Emmett being out there with his goading of Rose, Alice quietly confident in her acquisition of Jasper, and Bella and Edward's almost silent seduction, being locked in school has turned into an experience of a lifetime.
AH, AU, a bit OOC. EdxB/JxA/RxEm Rated PG-13
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes
Word count: 38593
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2009 Updated: September 01, 2010
Summary: The government created a pathogen, a virus, that was used on soldiers to make them stronger. It got out of hand though and vampirism was born.
Bella and Jacob are in charge of a task force named Twilight who are sent to the island that was once Washington State. It is called Vampire Island and home to most of the vampires. It is while on the island that Bella's life is changed forever. When she meets a small family of vampires that are nothing like the rest.
Can she do what she is trained to do, kill vampires? Will this vampire family change her world entirely?
Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Heidi, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 9874
[Report This] Published: April 12, 2009 Updated: May 31, 2009
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: The Greater Good
That was good. Are the Cullens going to be on the island? This is a good story and I can not wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Meet The Cullens
like it!! Loved at how Bella stood up to Rosalie!! Awesome, and of course, Edward and Alice would be laughing, I am just quite surprised that Emmett, didn't! Anyhoo, great job! I wonder if Bella will ever be with Edward in this story, I am just curiously stating.
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