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Penname: ForbiddenFyre [ Contact]
Real name: Paige
Status: Member
Member Since: March 23, 2009
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I am a nobody who enjoys reading and writing. I have written a few stories but nothing that I have ever finished.
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Summary: In Twilight, Edward, Alice, Emmett, and Bella discussed the options on what to do about James. Bella just wanted to keep Charlie safe. Edward wanted to escape from Forks with Bella until James was taken care of. Emmett just wanted to kill James. Alice suggested a fourth option, one that Edward was completely repulsed by. It was an option that was never mentioned. This is what that fourth option could’ve been, and the consequences that followed.
6/6/09: Due to the complete chaos real life is right now, this story is now on hold. Once things slow down a bit, you can expect more updates. I'm sorry.
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Laurent
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 7006
[Report This] Published: April 12, 2009 Updated: May 06, 2009
Summary: What if Bella had went back to Phoenix after Edward left her? What if Laurent had found her and Jake and the other wolves weren’t around to protect her? My version of New Moon. Picks up after Edward and the rest of the Cullens leave Forks.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Phil, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 9647
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: September 15, 2009
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed 
Date: May 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Unwanted Visions
That was amazing!!! I love it when we are given the chance to look at things from a different angle and viewpoint, after all, there are two sides to every story!! I know it's kind of bad, but a sort of hope that Laurent at least bites her before Alice, Jasper, and Emmett get to the studio. Love the update, as the rest of your story very well written.
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked my Alice POV. I was worried that I didn't capture her 'voice.' But I guess I did okay! Thanks so much for your review! I hope you continue to read.
Summary: Bella's elevator ride with a gorgeous stranger becomes charged when the lift breaks down. Things become more complicated when she discovers the stranger is her to-be boss, Edward Cullen.
Thanks to katmom for the great banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 73337
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: January 01, 2010
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Love it!!! You should do it in Edward's POV. I would love to know what Edward was thinking!! Great add! Any chapter you want, perhaps this one or the one of the dance.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Well, that was good. The only problem that I have with it is that Bella is with Jacob!!! Jacob annoys the crap out of me! Anyhoo, great job on this chappy!! I just hope that Bella and Edward come to their senses soon!
Author's Response: Hmm, I wouldn't say she's WITH Jacob, it's only a date!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it!
Summary: Based upon Hagen of Baljan, Autumn Knights' Dream is a retelling of a Germanic fairy tale. It's an epic adventure involving intrigue, kidnapping, and finding true love.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 163407
[Report This] Published: April 19, 2009 Updated: October 19, 2009
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I thought that I wouldn't like this story but I was surprised! It's very well written and an enjoyable story. This is a new idea and that helps to write stories that are your own and original./ I don't know if you plan on updating but I think you should. This is a good story so far and it deserves to be finished.
Author's Response: Your review made me really happy! I'm excited that you found the story and tried it, thinking you wouldn't like it, but ended up enjoying it. I always feel really giddy after receiving reviews like that.
I'll be updating soon. I'm just waiting for Kathie to finish checking my grammar. Once I get the chapter back from her, I'll put it up here.
The entire story is already written. It's just a matter of editing it for grammar and making sure it flows properly.
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Another good update!!! I am so excited to see what happens on the tenth day! The matches were cool to read about. I always love stories with sword fights in them! Anyhoo, again, you did a great job on the chapter. The story is yours and original, yet you are keeping the characters a little bit like SM's characters.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed the sword fights. I did a bit of research to ensure that the moves I wrote about were possible.
There's many things I'd like to say about this review as well but I don't want to give away anything in the story. I don't want to ruin anything or give people wrong expectations.
I only hope you stay with me through the story as it's quite the ride.
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Yyyyaaaayyy!! They finally meet! I have been waiting and waiting to read about when they meet! There were really big eagles in Sinbad. Except for in Sinbad, there were really big diamonds in a valley. People would have really big pieces of raw meat and the eagles would drop the raw meat on the diamonds and the diamonds would get stuck on the raw meat. Anyhoo, this was a great update! I can not wait to find out what happens next! Would you by any chance, write by one of the girls POV? That would be cool.
Author's Response: I know you've been waiting for them to meet. The first few chapters were important and needed to be laid out before they could meet. So, yes, they have finally met.
I don't know anything about Sinbad actually. That's really interesting about the diamonds and the meat.
I'm glad you enjoyed the update and are excited about what happens next. As the story progresses, you'll get to see different points of view. It is mostly written from Edward's point of view, but eventually Bella, Alice, and Rose each have a voice as well as other characters. Bella's point of view shows up several times in later chapters.
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
That was really good. Your information was written interestingly and very informative. If I ever had to do anything like they are I would probably use what you wrote about. Anyhoo, I wonder what the secret about the girls is. They're probably princesses from some foreign land or something. But that is just my guess. Loved the update and can not wait to see what you feed us next!
Author's Response: I spent a long time researching that information. Some of it I already knew, because I worked at a wilderness camp, but others I spent hours researching.
There's more than one secret. They will be revealed, it just takes time. Love your guess and I'm not going to say yay or nay on the subject.
Kris
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Love this new update!!! I saw that you had updated and I was soooo happy!! Anyhoo, congratulations on your oldest graduating from Kindergarten. And I hope that everything goes good for you. Back on subject, I am sorta surprised that Edward hasn't realized that Bella is what he's searching for. I seriously can not wait until the meadow 'cause then he'll probably realize, I mean I hope he'll realize, that Bella is the woman from the dream! Now I am even more curious about the girls' past. I can not wait to find out just like Edward.
Author's Response: Thanks for the congrats. I'm sure things will be fine, the summer will just be busy.
There's a lot I want to say, but I don't want to give any of the story away. So, I'm going to just tell you that you are going to have to wait to find out what happens. I will reassure you that it won't be too long of a wait.
Kris
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: June 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Love the look into what's been happening with Carlisle and Esme. The whole notes in the crosses thing is a really, really good idea! Also a very cool idea!! Anyhow, I just knew that Bella was from court and I hoped that Charlie and Renee would be in the story as well. I can not wait to find out what happens next!! I am also dying for the guys to find out who the girls are!! You are doing an amazing job with this story and I thank you for sharing your talent with us and taking the time to update and read our reviews!!! You're doing an amazing job!!!
Author's Response: The next chapter should be up really quickly. My beta has it as we speak. I'm sorry it took me so long to get another update up. I was working on another piece which I will eventually put up here. It was just a one-shot, but it was an intense amount of work.
You'll find out more about Bella in the next chapter. She really opens up to Edward. It's not my favorite chapter, but it's one of the ones I really like.
Thank you so much for your compliments. I love reading the reviews and responding to everyone. It means a lot that people are actually reading this and have such positive things to say. So, thank you.
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: June 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Awwwww, it's like the princess bride!!! That was an absolutely amazing chapter! I am so glad that Edward and Bella have finally faced their feelings for each other! And I shoulda know that Jacob would be in your story and betrothed to Bella!?? Oh well, I have a feeling that everything will turn out in the end. Again, that was as wonderful as the rest of your story! Thank you for taking the time to share your talent with us! And sharing such a wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Keep that trust, because from here on in, the ride gets wild.
Thank you for the compliments. I truly appreciate hearing from you each chapter.
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: July 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Yeah!!! Maybe Jacob will go for Renesmee instead of Bella and Bella can be free to marry Edward! I really hope that they get rescued soon! Anways, that was lovely written and i can not wait until we get to find out what happens next in your story~ You've done a marvelous job.
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see what happens. I promise there's so serious action coming up soon.
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: July 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Wow!!! That was another amazing chapter! You are truly an amazing talented writer. I should have guessed that Emmett and Rosalie were having a physical relationship. I mean, when I read about Rosalie retching I wondered if it was morning sickness. But anyways, that was wonderful and I can not wait to find out what happens next! I am really hoping that they will get back to the castle before Rosalie gets too far along.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I really appreciate your kind words.
When I first started writing it, I had thought Rosalie was merely going to be sick, but it grew into more than that. I'm actually quite pleased with it because of the next chapter. Hopefully, I'll get that out soon.
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: July 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Ohhh!!! The eagles are attacking!! I hope that everyone will be alright! I must admit that I am wondering what in the world Edward's idea was? Will we now not find out because of the eagles? Anyways, I hope that everything is alright. Can't wait to read about what happens next! And the ceremony was amazing. On Valentine's day I went to a friends wedding and at their wedding they had the ribbon ceremony. So I have witnessed the ceremony in real life. It was amazing in your story and amazing at the wedding.
Author's Response: You'll find out later what his idea was. He's not letting that one go. Of course, it doesn't appear until near the very end of the story, but it does appear.
I've never witnessed one of those ceremonies in real life. I went on what I could find for research. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll have the next chapter up as soon as I can get it edited.
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: August 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Oh, wow!!! I can not believe how far you've gotten with this story!! I absolutely love your ideas and talent!! I really, really, really, hope that they get rescued soon! Anyways, great job on the updates!! Author's Response: There's so much more to come.
Summary: When Bella Cullen and her family arrive in Forks, WA, they turn Edward Masen's boring life upside down. Will discovering their secret end his life or is it his key to eternal happiness?
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Edward, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Laurent, Leah, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 76185
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2009
Summary: 
Could the fairy tails from Bella's childhood be real? Renee and Charlie took the news of Edward and Jacob's secrets well. Is there a dark past that has prepared them for such unimaginable secrets such as vampires and warewolves?
Southern Skies introduces a new perspective to the Twilight Saga by Stephenie Meyer and takes place through out all four books.
Categories: Pre-Twilight, Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 24170
[Report This] Published: April 24, 2009 Updated: June 13, 2009
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4... Overwhelmed
This story seems to be very interesting. So the Cullens and Bella are all in the story right? Or just the Cullens? Anyhoo, this looks like it'll be really good and I can not wait to see what you give us next! Very nicely written and an original idea. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I get this question ALL the time! My idea is to keep Twilight, NM, Eclipse, and BD exactly how SMeyer wrote them. I'm just adding the possibility of Renee and Charlie hiding this HUGE secret of Renee's family (which was what the prologue was all about...) Basically while the four books are going on is when Southern Skies take place. I'll try to rush it along, but since it doesn't fit into the way SMeyer set up, Ann doesn't meet Bella and the Cullens till after BD takes place... I promise I'll rush through time so we can get to the good stuff. I just felt like everyone needed sufficient backgrond on our new characters.
Thank you so much for the R&R. I hope I answered your questions!
-Samantha
Summary: When the Cullens move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlisle's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness.
Will he be able to resist?
Thanks M81170 for the wonderful banner!
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 82473
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: October 18, 2009
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
So far I am loving your story!!!! A new and original idea! I so can not wait for Edward to meet Bella!! I just knew that that must have been what Alice was talking about!!! Are you going to make Bella a vampire in this story? I really hope so for two reasons. One: I love vampire Bella and I believe that Edward and Bella belong together forever!!! Anyhoo, nicely written and even though it only has two chapters, it is very good so far!
Author's Response: Thank you! Keep reading!
Summary: What happens when Bella, Alice and Rose win a contest to meet the members of the band, The Cullen Brothers? Will there be love? And if so, can they make it work? Will Bella and Edward get there happy ever after? Follow along with all the drama of falling in love with someone famous.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 2723
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2009 Updated: June 05, 2009
Summary: Edward and Bella in English. Bella is bored and her thoughts begin to wander. Edward wonders what she is pondering. Just a one shot bit of fluff.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1340
[Report This] Published: May 17, 2009 Updated: May 27, 2009
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This is an interesting idea so far. I like this chapter a lot. I think that you should definitely write more. Although I am wondering where you are going with this. For a second I thought that this was a oneshot. Although a full story is better that way it will last for a while. I love reading long twilight fanfiction stories. Especially ones where it is definitely B&E with drama and hilarity and sexual tension. After all, it wouldn't be the same without the sexual tension!! lol :) Can't wait to see what you hand out next!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading & reviewing. This, however, is a oneshot. It was a lot of fun to write, but it's really not going anywhere. I guess I could have done a series of oneshots of the two of them in school or somesuch, but there really is no rhyme nor reason to it.
Next will be a 3 chapter bit called First Time. I'm posting it today, so it should be up in the next week or two. Hopefully, something you'll like as well. After that, who knows.
Summary: 
*Banner by time_lights over at Livejournal*
After receiving an invitation to write the biography of the severely reclusive author Ethan Church, Bella develops a reluctant obsession with his novels and by extension him. When she accepts his offer, the old, dying man she's presented with and the young, too perfect man she comes across on the nearly empty estate have her convinced she's missing some very important parts of the story.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Word count: 36732
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2010
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre Signed
Date: May 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Letters
Love it so far. I know that it's only one chapter so far but it sounds like it will be a really good story. It's very nicely written and seems like you are taking a lot of time to write this. I hope that you decide to continue this story as I would love to hear the whole thing and I am sure that everybody else who reads this will too. Can't wait to find out what you give us to peruse next!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I promise it will be finished.
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