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Penname: dana_knockouts [ Contact]
Real name: Dana
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Summary: Claire's mom took their family away shortly after finding out about Quil. The implications of a broken imprint are far reaching and can impact you - body and soul. The bond is deeper than anyone ever realized.

Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Quil
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No
Word count: 39574
[Report This] Published: July 30, 2008 Updated: September 28, 2009
Reviewer: dana_knockouts Signed
Date: September 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: breakdown
Love love love Quil!
I'm so glad you're back!
Summary:  Edward faces a monumental crisis and finds Sanctuary in the one place he refuses to look for it. All Human.
This story contains Religious themes and Mature themes: Edward is a priest struggling with his role in the Church and as a man.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No
Word count: 99900
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2010
Reviewer: dana_knockouts Signed
Date: September 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 31: Seventeen
Wow, completely heartbreaking.
The writing in this chapter holds a lot of similarities to the African Safari Papers by Robert Sedlack. (Super crazy book you should check out if you can find it.)
Poor Edward.
Fucking awesome chapter, though.
Summary: [AU. E/B.] What if Bella had been a vampire ages ago? What if Edward had met Bella as a vampire? What would happen when they finally found each other after being lonely for so long? Who would gravitate to who? Who would chase and be chased?
Preview of Prologue:
They say, it is dangerous to walk by yourself at night. It is absolutely true. But there was a time when I was young and I was foolish, and I disregarded what my mother had always told me and I walked out of our quaint townhouse to the park a block away to get out of the house.
I should have been all right – we lived in a good area and my father was a respectable constable – except then I did not know what I do now. There are things in the night that are unnatural and impossible to wrap the mind around and I just happened to attract one of them.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Alistair, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No
Word count: 27098
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2009 Updated: April 12, 2010
Reviewer: dana_knockouts Signed
Date: August 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Departure
Very interesting story so far.
I have to say it seems unlikely, given the time period, that Bella would have just gone out by herself at night, and that she wouldn't be kind of freaking out about being alone with two men who are not family. Surely some sense of what was 'proper' would remain with her even if her human memories are missing.
I also wonder why Edward didn't know about Bella. Wouldn't he have seen it in Carlisle's mind? Why, in the present time, does he not keep in touch with them?
I'm also curious about Alistair's motives for changing Bella and what their relationship is now.
Reviewer: dana_knockouts Signed
Date: August 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Lecture
yes and yes
Summary: Summary: AU. A powerful group of humans know of the existence of vampires and werewolves and strict rules are in place for the uneasy coexistence between the three kinds. Transforming humans without tacit permission is banned and all violators and victims are ordered destroyed. Bella was attacked when she was eight years old but miraculously survived. She returns to Forks during her junior year in high school and encounters the Olympic Coven. Against her will, she is drawn to Edward Cullen and into the dangerous world of shifting loyalties and deadly intrigue.

Thanks to JO (Cullenitis) for the AWESOME banner!
Thanks to another JO (sleepyjo at ffnet) for reading and editing the first 13(!) chapters.
Please direct your thanks to her for saving you from the whiplash that is born from my confused tenses and wonky grammar.
Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 73297
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2010
Reviewer: dana_knockouts Signed  
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Bella reacts to seeing Edward
Very interesting concept! Your tenses are a little inconsistant, which is a bit distracting.
Reviewer: dana_knockouts Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Mates
I have to admit, I'm really not at all fond of mean-creepy-cruelward. I hope he finds some way or redeaming himself.
Summary: School is in session and there are lots of lessons to be learned. Bella Swan, the newest student at Forks High School, needs to amend her shy and introverted ways and her guidance counselor has just the thing: tutoring! Besides, newbie Bella is probably the only student naïve enough to tackle Edward Cullen, a juvenile delinquent in training. Edward’s main pastimes include avoiding school and hanging out with his lovelorn, best friend Jasper Hale. In Edward’s opinion, Jasper needs a tutoring session of own in order to get over his ex- Alice. However Alice is too busy trying to console her friend Rosalie –who is only interested in one lesson: how to win the affections of Edward Cullen.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 162183
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: December 28, 2010
Reviewer: dana_knockouts Signed
Date: August 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Breakin' Me
OMG OMG! When I saw the chapter title I was all like "man, I wonder if it's that Jonny Lang song"
Dude, I was so in love with Jonny Lang in high school!
OK, I'm going to finish reading the chapter now.
Good story by the way!
Summary: 
“Three things cannot be long hidden: the sun, the moon, and the truth.”
Alice’s werewolf blindness never allowed her to see Bella’s cliff diving at La Push, so she and the rest of the Cullens continued to stay away from Forks.
Bella struggles with her changing feelings for Jacob, her pain from Edward’s rejection, and her lingering feelings of love for the vampire who broke her heart and disappeared. Will Jacob and Bella find their way to each other and get their chance at happiness? And when a miserable and heartbroken Edward returns to beg Bella for forgiveness, what will she do?
As relationships change, Victoria continues her vendetta.
** Nominated for a Bellie Award for "Best 'Edward Who?' Fic!" **
** Nominated for two Indie Twific Awards for "Best Love Triangle" and "Best New Moon Story!" **
** Like Night and Day placed second in The Wolfpack Awards for "Favorite Jacob" **

Thanks you to catonspeed and the ladies of Altered Lions and Sacrificial Lambs for the new banner and your general awesomeness!
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges: Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 127337
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: July 19, 2010
Reviewer: dana_knockouts Signed
Date: May 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Fate's Decision
Wow, well done!
This whole time I was sure that Jake would imprint on someone else and Bella would end up with Edward.
Despite my B/E preferece, I really loved the ending. I hope Edward does find someone. I hope you write a sequal!
I really enjoyed reading thia story. I loved the thought and care you put in. Looking forward to the epilogue!
Summary: Alice and Bella want what any couple wants, a baby. Bella asks her best friend Edward to contribute to the cause. He agrees but on one condition. B/A and B/E pairing. NC-17 for lemons and content.

Thank you christine30974 for this new banner!

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No
Word count: 49873
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: February 02, 2010
Reviewer: dana_knockouts Signed
Date: July 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Flesh For the Win
Hot.
Poor Bella, so complicated. I can't believe she didn't tell Alice about Edward's condition.
So not cool. Author's Response: so not cool, but helps out my plot quite a bit lol!
Summary: What if Jacob didn't see Renesmee right after she was born? What if he and Leah left town together instead? What if he came back five years later? What if the first time Jacob sees Renesmee, she looks sixteen, and he doesn't know who she really is?

This story picks up in Chapter 26 of Breaking Dawn with one small change. Jacob doesn't imprint on newborn Renesmee. Instead, he leaves town. When he finally returns for Charlie's wedding to Sue Clearwater five years later, things are very different between the Cullens and the Wolfpack. How will Jacob fit in with the Cullen family now, and should we be worried about the Volturi?
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Chelsea, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Kate, Leah, Marcus, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 28138
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2009 Updated: April 10, 2011
Reviewer: dana_knockouts Signed
Date: July 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Paper or Plastic
Man, this is totally good!
I can't wait for more. I can't wait for Edward's reaction!
Author's Response: Edward's reaction to this has been tough. I have run through ten or more different ways he could handle this. I hope you like what I come up with.
Summary: She’s making all the wrong choices, and she can’t bring herself to care. He’s just trying to make a life for himself. When their paths cross, will Jasper care enough to save Bella from herself? Does she even want to be saved? JxB
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Word count: 34188
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009
Reviewer: dana_knockouts Signed   
Date: August 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: And Lost My Grip
Great story so far. I don't really get jasper's motivation though. I find it hard to believe that Jasper would blame Bella and be so childish, wishing her ill and all that. And that stunt with Emmett. Just seems kinda mean. I hope Jasper starts acting a little more compassionate soon.
Did Edward lie to him about what really went down when he left?
I'm anxious to find out why Alice left and how Edward is doing. I like Bella/Jasper but I always feel bad for Alice and especially for Edward. He didn't ask to fall for a human.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Summary: AU. E/B meet under different, violent circumstances, his nature exposed to Bella from the start. Surviving that first encounter together, they navigate a slow road toward friendship, then romance. But obstacles begin to multiply around them, and soon the question arises: are these obstacles random or by design - and by whom?
Based on the following Twilight quote: "All this time [Esme's] been worried bout me, afraid that there was something missing from my essential makeup, that I was too young when Carlisle changed me."
Thanks to christine30974 for helping out with the banner.

Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No
Word count: 79807
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2009 Updated: January 04, 2012
Reviewer: dana_knockouts Signed
Date: October 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Wasting Time in the Waiting Line
Your writing is amazing! I just read this story and I wanted to leave a review evey chapter but I would have just said the same things over and over. This story is heartbreakingly beautiful. very different from the original Twilight universe in the best possible way.
I'm just wondering why you said his eyes were hazel in chapter 5?
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Summary:

"Her blood would be mine.
As would she.
Once she begged, demanded, and wept for my bite.
And she would.
The only question was how many would die first."
Vampire AU. Mature themes and graphic violence, though no sexual abuse.
Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes
Word count: 18537
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2009
Reviewer: dana_knockouts Signed
Date: October 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: See
Wow. This is spectacularly gruesome.
That's a compliment.
Summary:  
Thank you, hellacullen, for the awesome banner!
Edward’s rebellious period didn’t last a few years; it lasted seventy. A solitary hunter on the fringe of society, he stumbles across a young woman praying. Can he seduce her away from everything she's ever known? And will he be willing to fight for Bella instead of fighting against her?
AU, a bit OOC, canon couples. Rated for lemons, violence and adult subject matter.

Banner by Zesty_T, awesome!

Banner by n7of9 Thank you!

Banner by readergoof, thank you!
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 129165
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2010
Reviewer: dana_knockouts Signed    
Date: September 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Prodigal Son Returns
Great start so far. An interesting and detailed look into Edward's brain and heart. I can't wait for more Author's Response: Thank you! Next few chapters should go up quickly while I get caught up with ff net
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