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Penname: Steelerfan [Contact]
Real name: Lynn
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Member Since: March 23, 2009
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Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3033]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: March 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Meeting

This story is very good... i see it hasnt been updated in awhile.... I hope you haven't given up on it

 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4550]
Summary:

WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN

After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!Wishing Star Banner Readergoof

Thanks to Sleforever for below banner!

Wishing Star Banner Sleforever


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Homecoming

love this story update very soon

 
Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: June 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: College

love this story.... cant wait to bella and edward see each other again

 
Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: June 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Cullens

please don't leave us hanging for long

 
Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: June 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Reunion

woohooo

 
Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Surprise

you cant leave us hanging

 
Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Family

love this story

 
Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Say What?

I am glad this story is back hopefully we don't have to wait too long for another chapter

 
Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Barbeque

love love love this story

 
Summary:

Full Summary: "Forever is not a word... rather a place where two lovers go when true love takes them there."- Unknown. It has often been said that one never forgets their first love. What happens when the memory of that love haunts you? Bella and Edward have spent years apart, each living a semi-contented life. When fate unexpectedly brings them together once more can they find a way to heal the wound's they've inflicted on each other and find a way to be happy again?

 

AU/AH Story.

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Thanks to the incredible MrsC for the faboulous banner!! 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 67563
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: July 09, 2009


Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: April 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

your story is very well written can't wait for the Tanya fall out



Author's Response:

its coming... she's a prescence in most of the story since she wont' physically be in seattle for the next chapters,... but her presence will be a big thing next chapter!!

chapter 10 is waiting for validation right now, so hopefully it'll be up soon! :D

thanks for reviewing! :D

 

 
Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: April 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

love your story



Author's Response:

thanks!!! :D

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: March 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: February 29, 2008

I hope you didnt give up on this story!

 
Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: June 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I was very suprised to see this story updated I am thrilled

 
Summary:

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A small shout out to WillBeAWriterSomeday for the amazing banner!

 

What if Edward left Bella again, after returning from Volterra? What if thirty years later he returns to Italy, in hopes the Volturi will end his existence this time? But what if Bella's among there coven and she's one of them?

Rated NC-17 for future chapters, will have a few different POV's but mostly Bella & Edward

GOOD NEWS!!! Tigress5cubs has honored me by taking on my story and being my beta. I love you...you are my saviour.

Twilightzoner has also honored me by becoming apart of my team for this story. Thank you dear. I love your work and all your advice.

 

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 12422
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: April 07, 2009


Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: April 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Breaking Away

cant wait to see what goes on in this story!!!

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is twenty-seven years old, newly single, and mom to an adorable Kindergarten student with a knack for accidents. On a typical, fall afternoon, she experiences the shock of her life during a casual conversation with her son. When an unexpected revelation leads to the most emotional reunion imaginable, how will Bella reconcile the path her life has taken with the past she never chose? Takes place nearly ten years post New Moon. Canon - AU. ExB


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 61197
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2011


Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: April 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

love this story.... will he change both of them? Cant wait to find out

 
Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: April 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

i love your story.... but it makes me sad that they wont be a real family

 
Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: June 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

love this story... how are u going to turn bella with a child?

 
Summary:

Edward's family hire Bella Swan to break the heartbreaker's heart in hopes to have him see the error of his womanizing ways. Bella realizes that they have a little too much in common and is having a little too much fun with this subject. EXB Lots of lemons later.

 

banner done by achelle131


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 322353
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2011


Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: April 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Assignments & Introductions

So a new banner... maybe a couple chapter updates? ha

 
Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5321]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: June 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Knock, Knock-Who's there?

glas you updated

 
Summary:

Edward is running from home, tired and lost he saves a beautiful hitchhiker from a terrible fate. They decide to travel the road together. Unknown to them there is a trail of brutal murders left in their wake.  The killer is closer to them than they think.  Lemons in future chapters

 Banner by the talented dazzlemebetch

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 89315
[Report This] Published: December 03, 2008 Updated: August 01, 2010


Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: June 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Out of the Darkness

love this story

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13645]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: March 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II

very good... hope the updates keep coming (haha)

 
Summary:

Ever since she can remember, Bella Swan has spent Christmas with the Cullens. Ever since she can remember, Christmas has been full of strange Edward-related complications that remain unresolved year after year. Last Christmas, it seemed like their strange affair had finally ended. Bella is keen to resolve her "relationship" and move on with life. But will her feelings remain the same, especially after she finds out that Edward has a new introduction to make?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 60805
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009


Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: June 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

love where this is going

 
Summary:

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Thanx to the beautiful Anne Cullen for the banner!

 

Picking up from Edward's leave in New Moon, Bella never rescued Edward, Edward never came back, but somebody did ... 

 This story is set five years after that sad day Edward left Bella in the woods.

For years Bella searches for Edward, eager to tell him her new found secret.  As Bella gives in to her fears, that Edward really is gone, she runs into her past in the least likely place.  Only to find out, her past has a secret to tell as well.

 

"The smell of the worn book had distracted me from the wonderful aroma that had engulfed the room.  It had subdued my venom, had forced me back into a human-like state, my inner monster slowly crawling back into his darkened hole.  I swallowed one last time, and decided to glance at this glorious teacher.  Obviously he was a man of impeccable taste.  I might actually enjoy Senior Literature this year.  

I glanced up quickly from under my eyelids, my amber eyes focusing on a lanky form in front of me.  I froze.  

… Oh shit. "

 

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Marcus, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 31919
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2009 Updated: October 30, 2009


Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: March 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Preface: The Hunter

So I got this account for my daughter... I was very skeptical of these kind of sites... as I was checking it out I found your story.... I am hooked .... I hope we get a new chapter soon... and how do we tell? just keep checking?



Author's Response:

Aw kudos to you getting an account for your daughter .. and kudos to you coming here :D  Im so glad you're hooked on my story :D

 

A new chapter is in the que to be up soon.  Hope you like it just as well ;D   You can actually subscribe to me as a 'favorite' story, then make sure to click in your profile you want updated as your favorite stories are updated ;D

 
Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: March 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Ivory Keys

Love this story... hopefully we have another chapter soon!

 
Reviewer: Steelerfan Signed
Date: May 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Broken Branches

love this story its so charlie

 




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