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Lucky Charm by profmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 508]
Summary:

Bella and Edward were secret best friends during one of the best periods of Bella's life.  Their friendship has waned.  When they are forced back together, untold secrets are revealed.  When the truth is out there, will anyone feel lucky?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jessica, Lauren, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 78205
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2008 Updated: April 13, 2009


Reviewer: Dreamrider Signed
Date: April 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Love is All Around

I really enjoyed this story, I really liked your versions of the characters and just the story in general. Definitely good! I'm glad I came across it!

 
Summary: Feature


He's a young but jaded keyboard player writing lyrics for his band, Breaking Dawn, and she's a naive and frustrated poet looking to break out of her shell; their words collide on-line.
What happens when they meet in high school, unaware of their literary connection?

OOC, canon at heart.
Banner by FatApolloLove


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 146168
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: August 27, 2009


Reviewer: Dreamrider Signed
Date: April 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Night Marish

Okay...so started reading this story and was really really really happy about it...until this chapter....saying mean things about Chad Kroeger...not cool...Nickelback is freaking amazing!

I have yet to decide if I shall forgive you for that one and continue to read this story....the story is good...but anyone who makes fun of Chad Kroeger not cool in my books

I'm conflicted



Author's Response: Perhaps Edward is a bit jealous of dear old Chad? Kroeger also started out in a cover band in his late teens with some family members before his lyric writing was taken seriously.

 
Reviewer: Dreamrider Signed
Date: April 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Nocturnal Prelude

fair enough...all should be jealous of Chad Kroeger...Except maybe someone like Tom Cochrane or something...Anyone who can make it in the big times out of Hanna Alberta (been there...small one horse town)..deserves to have people jealous of them...Edward Cullen is freaking Edward Cullen and all ...(damn near perfect)...but that kind of success is hard not to be jealous of.

So I may not be so conflicted anymore.

Curious though...do YOU like Nickelback?

 
Summary:

Bella's elevator ride with a gorgeous stranger becomes charged when the lift breaks down.  Things become more complicated when she discovers the stranger is her to-be boss, Edward Cullen.

ESS

Thanks to katmom for the great banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 73337
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: January 02, 2010


Reviewer: Dreamrider Signed
Date: April 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hey, just finished reading this, it's good! I'd lvoe tor ead more...sounds like it'll be fun!



Author's Response:

I hope to keep it fun!  Thanks for reading!

 
Bella? Marie? by Nyomi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1284]
Summary: Feature

ON HIATUS. [sorry guys :-(]

Bella (22) longs for love and acceptance, yet her fear of rejection keeps her guarded and single. Her craving to feel needed is fulfilled by working as a live-in nanny to Rosalie, who's a single mom to four-year old Henry.

For months, Bella has been secretly infatuated with Rosalie's ex-husband, Edward (29), but he barely acknowledges Bella during their brief encounters. That is, until one night when she bumps into him at a club.

However, he doesn't recognize her at all.

Afraid for her job, she tells him her name is Marie. He acceptes her pseudonym, and feeling safe with anonymity, Bella reveals her wild side. 

She makes the most of the night, but what happens when he tries to find the mysterous Marie?

When Mr. Cullen gets to know Bella, will he still want Marie?

How will that one incredible night shake their worlds?

AH/OOC/MA

*Rated for language, adult situations and sexual content from early chapters.

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 129626
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2010 Updated: September 30, 2011


Reviewer: Dreamrider Signed
Date: September 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Never Forget

I really am liking this story!,I'm glad you updated.

I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

 

Hey, Dreamrider! I'm thrilled that you liked chapter 12 and that you're enjoying the story so far! Thank you so much for reviewing. It means so much!

 

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to reply, but chapter 13 is now in with the beta's and will be up real soon. I hope you enjoy the following unbeta'd teaser from Bella in Chapter 13: Friends:

 

Tucking my hair behind my ear, I adjusted my glasses and took a deep breath before stepping out onto the patio. The delicious smell of grilled meat and onions was strong in the air, causing my stomach to grumble with impatient hunger.

 

The bright sunlight shone down on the patio, making me sigh in pleasure from the heat on my skin. I was glad I'd taken off my sweater before coming out into the warm sunshine, but I was still a little nervous about Edward's reaction.

 

He, and everyone else, was listening to Alice tell a story about something her boys did yesterday. As I walked towards the table, Edward glanced at me sideways with a smile on his face. The cheerfulness in his expression warmed my heart, but when he did a fast double take and fixed his eyes on me, a chill of concern made my breath hitch and my steps falter. He trailed his burning gaze over me, up and down. Fearful that he had recognized me as Marie, my stomach churned with queasiness and my breaths turned shallow. I slowed my approach to a near stop, my wide eyes glued to his.

 

I knew I shouldn't have taken off my damn sweater!

 

 





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