Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Penname: mgg [Contact]
Real name: Melissa
Status: Member
Member Since: March 22, 2009
Website: thelovelybrunettdiaries.blogspot.com
Beta-reader:

Hey everyone I'm a big fan of RP Fic, I've been writing my own, not sure when I'll get the nerve to posted but, keep at it you great writers.


 


[Report This]
 
 
Reviews by mgg
 
Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3026]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

ALSO POSTED ON FANFICTION.NET


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: mgg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Ghosts

I love your story, I think I read it somewhere else, I really don't remember, What I do know is that what happend? You haven't writen anything for a long time, are you ok??, we miss you here!!

Hope you update soon!

XXOO

mgg

 
Art Model by dollegirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 133]
Summary: Bella needs money.  Her friend convinces her to pose nude for an art class. 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6937
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2008 Updated: November 09, 2008


Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: March 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was HOT!!

 

I love it, specially Bella´s snarki remarks!!

 

 
Wake Up Call by the shrew Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 260]
Summary:

A real person fiction that starts off with a view of the relationship of Rob and Kristen through the eyes of an unusual source.  What did Michael see?  Watch his psyche self-destruct in 17 pages of Robsten lemony goodness.

Then read as Kristen has her own Wake Up Call from these events.  Follow her time with Rob when her world seemingly falls apart.

Not an Herb-centric fic, but he sets up the story.  ROBSTEN all the way.

 

Disclaimer: An imaginary tale of Rob/Kristen. Written with love for the real people.  No disrespect, no harm, no infringement.  We are the fans happy to squee over the idea of them, and wish the real people happiness, success, and privacy in their real lives.  This is for fanfiction purposes only.

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 62484
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2008 Updated: July 01, 2010


Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: April 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OMG IT´S SO VERY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THANKS!!!!!!

MGG



Author's Response:

Dear mgg,

THANK YOU for reading and reviewing!  I love that you liked this story.  Can I tell you that I am a BIG fan of exclamation marks?!!!!!!!!  Oh yeah, I love to 'exclaim' on this site, and so stoked that you do too!!!!!  There are sooooo many fabulous fics here that make me wanna shout to the heavens, and how else can that be conveyed, but through the use of the fabulous '!'  :)

Your kindred in '!'

the shrew

 
Reviewer: mgg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Kristen's POV: Stay

OMG I think jakeward has some competition, I think I'm in love with you, well only if you write more, haha

No but seriously, please, I'm dying

XOXOX

MGG (Mel)



Author's Response:

There's already like 5 pages or so to the new chapter.  I'm working still. 

Please don't die! ;)  I will get it to you as soon as it is written and decent enough to post.  I love this story too much, not to give it my all.  It deserves that, and the lovely Robsten RPF readers deserve that too.

Thank you for continuing to read.  I just did the final proof on another one shot.  It's the Kristen Commentary piece I wrote you about before.  It's been reworked, as I have been totes meticulous with it to make it the absolute BEST that I possibly can.  I hope you will like that one too.  I am currently writing for WUC and chapter 4 of The Return. 

Your comments that you enjoy what I have written are helpful to me.  They maybe make me think I am not entirely crazy for thinking that I should keep doing this. ;-)

Thanks ever so much!

the shrew aka edmett

 
Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Kristen's POV - On Borrowed Time

Oh, My GOD; I just love your story, I´m a huge fan of youre writing, I´ve writen a story, but don´t know how to post it, please help, I´d love for you to be my beta, (is that´s what that´s called), please help!!!

 

Also I love the ever after series, 

Please if you get the chance!!

mellglez@hotmail.com

Melissa



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for the review.  Let me PM you for more info. :)

 
Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Kristen's POV - On Borrowed Time

great job, it´s smoking hot!! but we need more

 



Author's Response:

I am working on it.  Did you get my PM?

 
Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Kristen's POV - On Borrowed Time

Hi, I´ve reviewed before, asking; ok, begging you to please continue this story, I love it!!!

I also, have a question for you: How do I get a story up on this web page, I have one that I would just love to get out there, but I´ve tried several times with different chapters and have failed.

You are my inspiration for several chapters on my story, it´s a RP, fiction, would it be to forward if I asked you to be my beta, I just love the way you write, (you and your ficwife, are my favorite writers.

Just love the story!!!

Thanks

Mel



Author's Response:

Hi Mel!

I am guessing that my PM never made it to you.  Okay, I will try it again, if you don't receive it in a day, then PM me from my profile page on this site. 

I am working on this story.  I will only post it when it fits and is of a decent caliber.  I thank you for your patience.  It's been a challenge to have this story blocked this summer.  I will NOT abandon this story.

I may be able to assist you with getting something posted.  A beta relationship is VERY IMPORTANT and PERSONAL.  Just because you like my writing does not mean that I would be a good beta for you.  However, depending on what kind of assistance you need, I will either be able to help you, or I can point you in the direction of someone who can provide better assistance.

I will PM you again to see what we can work out.  Thanks as ever for reading. :)

 

 
Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Kristen's POV - On Borrowed Time

OMG. I check every day to see if you've submitted anything new, I'd dying to know what happends next.

 

Love your stuff, big admirer

MGG

 
Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Kristen's POV: Stay

DEFINITLY WORTH THE WAIT!!!!!

You rock, that was great, I love it!!!!

You write those two like you have camera in there room or you actualy know them.

I love it, can't stop sayint it.

 

I love it, Lots of love

MGG



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comments.  I am so glad that you still love this, and I am so glad that it was worth the wait.  The story continues on. 

I never heard from you about the beta thing, so I am guessing that you found one?  I certainly hope so.

Thank you for continuing to read this story.  I am so glad you love it.  I love these versions of them too. :)

 
Reviewer: mgg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Kristen's Wake Up Call - Here

I´m in serious need of some more chapters from your story, I´m feeling a little jittery from lack of new chapters, I wish you would write Rob´s pont of view from Kristen´s chapters, that would be awsome!!

 

Thanks for the great intertaintment.

XXOO

Melissa (mgg)

 
Reviewer: mgg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Kristen's Wake Up Call - All the Way

**She cheers uncontrolably and dances around the kitchen**

OMG you updated, that was awsome!!

I just love those two, the way you write them it´s like it could totally be real!!

And as always love your writing, and your creativity.

Thanks a zillion.

XXOO

Mgg

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much.  I am ecstatic that you enjoyed it.  xoxo the shrew :)

 
Reviewer: mgg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Kristen's POV: The Soft Goodbye

Hey there girly!!

 

Sorry to get here late, I read the last chapter but was so chocked up that I just couldn´t get myself to write a review yet.

I went to see Eclipse last night came back saw the alert on your story and just started reading.

As always amazing, I have def no more words, to describe what you do, and not just to me, but since I´ve started reading your fic, I´d been inspired to write my own (I know I´ll never be as good as THE the Shrew, but hey, I try)

I don´t really remember if I told you before, but you are GREAT, AWESOME, SUPERVE  at writing Robsten, the come alive with your words, and the seam more real to all of us. This was the first fanfic or RP that I´ve read and has been the most enjoyable, I´m sad to see it end but maybe, just maybe we can get more chapters from Rob´s POV out of you......OK I know I´m a greedy bitch, but I am what you made me!! hahaha

If there is a God (and I know there is, bc we have a Rob in the world) I know that there Real Life Story would be like this or even just as sweet and passionate as you write them.

So to top it all of, THANKS FOR WRITING THIS, WILL MISS IT, but we´ll read more from you.

LOST OF LOVE AND SUPPORT

Melissa



Author's Response:

Dear Melissa,

You are right on time, sweetie.

I cannot tell you . . . I was inspired by Edward/Bella, and then Rob/Kristen, with the help of a certain song, of course, ;-P to try this.  If I have helped you to try your own thing, that is wonderful!  And I thank you for letting me be a part of your fandom experience.  And please don't knock yourself down.  Everyone writes differently, we all bring our own perspective, our own interpretation of these stories and characters.  That's what makes this so much fun.  This is just MY version of them.  MY character study and MY suposition of what could be.

Thank you for your compliments.  I am very slow to updte, but that is because I never intended the story to be this long, and I need a lot of time to properly convey what they tell me. 

Rob has a couple chapters.  He will tell me how much he wants us all to know.  I promise to write out everything he wants me to. I will see it out to the end, no matter how long he or I take to do that. :)

I will be really sad when this is over, but there are still many stories to tell.  Thank you for fangirling with me over two soulfully gorgeous people!

<3 <3 <3 from the shrew

 
Behind the Reel by jakeward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1460]
Summary: Feature

"Once upon a time, there was girl that just wanted to get swept off her feet. Little did I know my co-star would be the one to do it. And with texting no less."

A fictional tale of Rob and Kristen realizing their feelings for each other and getting their signals crossed.

BTR BANNER

Thanks to falconcranelove for the banner!

Sequel: Behind the Lens http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=11639

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 193022
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2008 Updated: April 09, 2010


Reviewer: mgg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Hi>

I'm a huge admirer of your story, and your writing in general *please excuse my spelling*, I love how you write these characters so realisticaly, I'm infatuated with your Robert Pattinson, and I'm guessing that so is realife Kristen, I bet she reads your stuff and your ficwife's as well, you guys could defenetly be the best team writers ever, I don't want to come between youtwo, but can I at leased be the pet or the daugher that you never had or wanted?

Ok, enough said, please write more, I'm having serious whithdraweld.

Lots of XO's

Mgg *Mely*

 

 
Reviewer: mgg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 33

 

YAY!!!!!!

The end of an era, the begining of our lives!!!!

That was so sweet and a little painfull, I know that he def had a meltdown while in N.Y. and I guess so did she, just missing eachother.

That was a great story, I love your sort of ending, going to watch the video now, talk to you later.

Thanks

Melissa

 
Reviewer: mgg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 33

Hey I´m baaackk!!!

 

Just saw the video, awwwww, I know it´s going to be great , can´t wait,

Laters girly

Melissa

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13669]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: mgg Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II

Wow!!!!!

 


When are you submiting a new entry???,I got to know!!!


You have a very dirty mind,congrats!!!!!!!

 
Summary:

A couple chaptered story of Kristen Stewart and Robert Pattinson's supposedly fictional off-screen romance. No one knows if they are together in real life or ever have been, but I think they've had some sexy times. XD

Rated for smut, some violence, drug use and language.


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 4218
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2009 Updated: February 20, 2009


Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Message.

please, write more, you defenetly have a gift, don´t leave us hanging.

 
Summary:

Making any relationship work can be a struggle.

Add the fact that you are two of the most famous up and coming stars in the world right now and it's bound to be interesting.


Categories: AU-Human, Other Characters: Cam Gigandet, Kristen Stewart, Nikki Reed, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 114377
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2009 Updated: February 04, 2010


Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Love, Actually

please, write more, we're dyieng here!!!

 
Summary:

      

A chance encounter leads to an odd attraction that develops into an addiction.

 There are so many things about this woman that fascinate me.  She's beautiful.  Classically beautiful at that.  Intelligent.  Articulate.  Witty.  She's everything any man could ever dream of or want.  Except I don't even know her name.

Warnings:  Lemons.  Lots of lemons.  Actually, more like Mike's Hard Lemonade.  Mild D/s.

 

 


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Anonymous Series
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 44658
[Report This] Published: March 18, 2009 Updated: June 10, 2010


Reviewer: mgg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: The Odyssey

OMG I still can't belive I'm leaving a comment....., It's so hot and I've since been obsesed with this story, please write more!!!!

 

 

 
Reviewer: mgg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: The Odyssey

more, please

mgg

 
Détruit by Somah4 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 459]
Summary:

 

“It’s all real. They did this, but I’m still here. Always, Bella. Find me.”

Those cryptic words, whispered in a last breath, continue to haunt Bella Swan five years after the supposed death of her love, Edward Masen.

 

                      


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 95630
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2009 Updated: November 08, 2010


Reviewer: mgg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow, great begining, I was hooked just by the description of it, and now that I read the prologe I want to know more, so here I go on to the first chapter, see you at the end o that, I´ll be the one reviewing like mad!!

 
Summary:

The hardest walk you could ever take is the walk you take from A to B to C.

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 23691
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: November 16, 2010


Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Hardest Walk - Chapter 2

Please, I beg you, I need to find out what happends next, your writing is great, but be kind, and finish.

 

:) MGG.

 
Reviewer: mgg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Hardest Walk - Chapter 3

WOW, I think it´s going to rain, or hale because you actually updated this story, just kidding, I´m so glad you´re ok, it had been a really long time.

I love this story so far, I despredly want to know what happends, so please don´t desapear again.

 

Lots of love

Melissa

 



Author's Response:

I know, I know.  Life went haywire and I lost my writing mojo for a bit, but one I started feeling better I got back into the groove. I've a grand start on the next chapter so hopefully it won't take too long.  (I've posted some of my smaller writings in this world elsewhere because they don't fit here - if you'd liked to read them just email me and I'll send you the link).

 
Reviewer: mgg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Hardest Walk - Chapter 4

WOW, great to have a new chapter from you, as always it´s worth the wait, love it simply lovely, I hope you update soon!!

 

Thanks for sharing

Melissa



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you think it's worth the wait!

PS My stories always update first at my writing journal - pud_fic.livejournal.com

 
Ever After . . . by jakeward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 683]
Summary:

banner

 

There is real life, then there's Real Life.

 

We all know that Rob and Kristen belong together. So what happens when that finally happens, just years down the road? Enter Ever After . . .

 

A series of one-shots, that are tied together by the moments that make up a couple's life together. Add a few 'sex-haired' babies and some Twilight friends for fun.

 

Rated NC-17 because you just never know when the lemon muse will show up.

 

A new series from  jakeward and the shrew.

 

*stories will not be necessarily be in chronological order. Cause that's how we roll. :)

 

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kellan Lutz, Kristen Stewart, Other Character, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: Ever After . . ., The Robsten Files
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 118030
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2013


Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: January 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: This Can't Be Happening

OMG, So sweet!!! With all the talk about the Golden Pattinson-Stewart Child... This is just beautiful!!!!  I would so love for them to have a little girl... I think Rob would go nuts about her... But he seams to want a boy... I guess all guys want a little mini-version of themselves... I know the hubs did... he got lucky he got two identical versions of himself and is totally devoted to them...I would love to know if Kellan in this series is ever going to be married or have his own kids.. just wondering.. not diying to know but curious!!!

Love it, love ya.. hope to see more.... and about the other fics... I'm trying to be pacient about it.. but I seriously need me some Wakeup Call... I miss it so much.. will there be en epi... or an outtake.. or something??? I know too demanding.. but you spoiled me rotten by writing this stuff that it's addictive.

Love to both!!!

Melissa

 

 




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.