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Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3026]
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AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Lucky

I just read through the whole story and I must say that it is AWESOME!  You are a great writer and I am anxiously what happens next.

 
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Date: April 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Leader

So happy to see an update!  I am weak...I can't stand being left hanging.  Great chapter...really good to see Jacob's POV for a minute.I particularly LOVE the part where he felt like he was having to choose between the two and the voice said, 'you already made it.'  VERY nice touch!

Eagerly awaiting more. 

 
Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
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Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 20, 2009


Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Preface & Chapter 1: Sixteen

Very good start!  I'm already hooked into the story.  I can't wait to read the rest.  

 
Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Break

I'm really enjoying the story so far.  I like the way that many things have stayed the same--school, their course of study (R&J) and Bella's trips to the ER.  I particularly like the contrast of how Jacob reacted to the mention of Romeo & Juliet in comparison to how the Edward we all know and love reacted.  Very nice touches! 

 
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Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Kissed

I cannot wait for the next chapter!

 
Summary:

Breaking Dawn spoilers!

A missing moment from Breaking Dawn - Rosalie's thoughts as she holds the baby while Bella lies dying upstairs, fits in P.354.

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1639
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008


Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed
Date: April 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Butterfly Kiss

That was very good.  I really like to read how people perceived Rosalie.

 
Betrayal by rozebudz Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 36]
Summary: Feature

What really happened on the return journey back to Forks after Edward and Bella's honeymoon? How did Edward deal with the fact that Bella wanted to keep the baby?

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3517
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008


Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed
Date: April 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very, very good! 

 
Finding the Key by eibbil Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 571]
Summary:

Bella woke up in the Phoenix hospital and couldn't remember how she got there. A year later, she's living in Jacksonville with her mother, but she still has no memory of her four months in Forks. Can she recover what she lost by returning?


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 49326
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: March 19, 2009


Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I'm already captivated.  Very good so far.  I especially like the way you describe the scar as taking on the qulities of a vampire's skin and 'sparkling.'  Very nice touch!

 
Unwanted by bloodredlust Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1577]
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Edward couldn't bear to watch his beloved Bella being torn apart from the inside by his baby… so how might things have turned out for our favourite couple if he had taken the steps to ensure Bella’s survival, rather than let his spawn kill her. Very dark, Angsty little 'what if' story.

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A HUGE thankyou to Emerald-Rosalie for the amazing banner.  I love it!


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 85602
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2008 Updated: September 15, 2009


Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed
Date: May 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Dedication

I am very sorry to hear about your friend.

Thank you for taking the time to write another chapter for us to enjoy.  :)

 
Summary: Feature

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Bella is devastated by the loss of her mother and is forced to go live with Charlie, her Mom's best friend, when there is no one else to take her in. She gives up on living, too lost in her own anger to let anyone close to her. Enter Edward, the handsome teenage vampire, and the beginning of a complicated love-hate relationship. Neither can deny the connection between them, but can their love survive the fear that rules her and the secret he hides from her? AU and OOC, Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 292396
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: December 25, 2009


Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Shift

I'm am thoroughly enjoying spending my Friday night reading your story.  Great so far...can't wait to read the rest.

 
Into the Sunset by vampyr913 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
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Set after Breaking Dawn. "I think things are going to be kind of boring now, aren't they?" That hope is shattered as the Cullens' world is turned upsidedown. Will they find their happily ever after, even if it's not what they imagined it would be?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Collin, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Other Character, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Seth
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 36196
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2009 Updated: May 02, 2010


Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed
Date: April 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Panoramic View

Not Rosalie...nooooo....  Good story, keep the chapters coming!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Summary:

Metamorphosis Banner

 

She got what she wanted. My venom flows through her bloodstream, changing her, reshaping her from a human to a vampire. Soon, that transformation will be complete. And I'll be able to keep her forever.

I am the most selfish creature that has ever walked this earth.

Edward's point of view in "Breaking Dawn", beginning with Book Three.

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 250382
[Report This] Published: March 05, 2009 Updated: November 30, 2009


Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed
Date: April 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Defection

Excellent chapter!  Now I'm curious as to what is building up that he's going to have to tell her...hmmm...excellent hanger!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I have mixed feelings about cliff hangers. On one hand, they are a ton of fun to write. On the other, they sometimes make me crazy with suspense when I'm reading.

But I'm glad you liked the one I added. :)

 
Fall For You by Live720 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 672]
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Banner made my the wonderful, my hubby is no edward.

 

What if Bella never jumped off that cliff?  This story picks up from that part in New Moon.  It gives Jacob his chance, finally.  If Edward decides to come back, who will Bella choose?  Who is Cole and what are his motives? Bella/Jacob and Bella/Edward

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Other Character
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Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 128687
[Report This] Published: March 10, 2009 Updated: October 12, 2009


Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Powerful Proposition

Wow....this chapter really got me curious.  Can't wait to read more and find out what's going on.

 
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*Takes place during New Moon in an alternate universe.

On March 16, 2006,  the World changed, and everything and anything that the Cullens ever cared about was lost. They had to find their own way in this New World. Edward never wished to exist in a world where Bella didn't.  Unfortunately, his family desperately needed him, so he'd stay to help them.   And by doing so, he hoped to redeem himself for his failure to save the one creature he couldn't protect. 

With rumours in the South of humans feeding off the living and stealing people from their beds, the Cullens have a responsibility to protect the ones they can from those monsters in the night.  This was Edward's last chance to fight for his soul and his salvation.  He would finally be ready to face Judgement day and be deemed worthy enough to be with Bella once again.  Or would something or someone change the path he was destined to go down?  Faith, hope and love are powerful things, and Edward is about to find out just how powerful they are.

 

Yes... this is the story that is set during a post-apocalyptic nuclear war. Just try the Prologue to get a feel for it before passing judgment. You might be surprised. Warning: There is violence and disturbing images the further the story goes along.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 315697
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2009 Updated: March 25, 2012


Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Enough is Enough

Arg!  I've started reading this a few days ago and now I'm left in such suspense!  Great story.  Can't wait to read the rest of it!

 
Summary:

 

When the dawn breakings the day has to come to an end and that is when darkness descends on our world.

 

Prologue

    The truest and simplest fact of life is that nothing last forever. It doesn’t matter if you are human or otherwise; someone out there holds your life in their hands. But things don’t always happen the way you expect them to. Sometimes an individual comes along and intervenes; effectively postponing the evitable. For the Cullen clan and their friends, that intervention was me. They were living in what was a seemingly perfect existence, but each and every one of them had a sickening feeling in the pits of their stomachs. There was a threat overshadowing them that desired nothing more than to destroy their serenity.
    I could say that I choose to get involved because it was the right thing to do, but that would just sound cliché. The true is that I did it for vengeance. I did it out of anger, hatred and resentment. I did it for regret, guilt and to atone for the lives I had destroyed. I did it for a moral belief in justice and that all have the right to live their lives without fear that someday someone will come along and destroy everything they hold dearest. I did it for the family I had lost and the one I had to gain. And I did it for love. I could have just as easily walked away and never looked back, but had I done that, I wouldn’t have been me.
    My name is Taven Curry and I am a vampire. It sound strange, but believe me, there are far stranger things in this world than just vampires. I am not what you would call your typical vampire; in more ways that one. For example, my moral compass points true north. I have a very clear understanding of what is right and what is wrong. However, just because I know when something is wrong doesn’t mean I always follow in suit. I am far from a saint. I have loyally and willingly served a trio of tyrants who stood for everything I hated and threatened to destroy the last person alive who remember who I once was before I became the monster. I have also hunted, killed; feed and I would be lying if I said I didn’t enjoy it. A moment of true satisfaction for an eternity of regret. A burden of guilt that I am happy to bare. It acts as a constant reminder that some part of me is still human. A tool I use to keep my demons at bay. It is a constant struggle and I welcome any help I can get. With the things I am capable of, I fear for the world and all its inhabitance should the day come when the darkness consumes me completely.
    There is one thing that all vampires have in common; we were not always. I was human once, normal…well as normal as any seventeen year old pubescent male can be. I had a family once and friends. And I had one best friend that I care about more than anyone in the entire world and she changed mine more than once. A very larger part of who I was, who I became and who I am is because of her influence. Life has a twisted sense of humor and a way of altering a person permanently in the most unexplainable ways. She had changed my life when I was human, but neither in my wildest dream nor my darkest nightmares did I ever expect her to do it again in my life as vampire. Though time and circumstances had separated Bella and me for years, another circumstance had brought us back together and in the end she was my saving grace.
    My name is Taven Curry, I am a vampire and this is the story of what happens after happily ever after ends.

 

Thanks to my banner makers for this one. I'm still looking for someone with talent, time and know how to make a new one for this story. Whatever you want. If it fits the story I will post it.

Big Thanks to my readers and reviews and especially my beta, qjmom. Constantly rocking my world one post at a time.

NOTICE TO ALL Dated 04/21/11. Okay, so my life a changed alot since I started writing this. I've lost my desire to continue. I had intended on adding a few more chapters of Leah's POV, which is why I didn't continue. But since I'm unable to, I am just going to post the last remaining chapters I have had written. So I'm going to type them and try to post one a week until it is done. Sorry it has taken so long. Life goes on unfortuantly and we can stay 19 forever

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Afton, Alec, Alice, Alistair, Aro, Bella, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Chelsea, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Jacob, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Jessica, Leah, Marcus, Other Character, Quil, Renesmee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
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Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 157708
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2009 Updated: April 14, 2010


Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed
Date: June 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: How It All Began

I have enjoyed and appreciated the reviews you've left for me so far.  Looked and found that you had a story too and decided to read it.  Immediately, I'm hooked!

You have a really smooth, well defined writing style that is really enjoyable and seem it seems just from the 1st chapter that your story is very well thought out and developed.  Love the little cliff hangers and foreshadowing.

Not sure if it was intentional, but I particularly like the way that Taven seems to have a dislike for Edward, yet he seems SO like him in ways--bound to protect the innocent, sneaks around listening to other conversations, has a very cunning, plotting mind, etc etc.

Can't wait to read the rest and see how the story progresses.  :)

 
Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Killing Time

Very good so far.  I really like the character you have created.  Love the hints about how there is something about him that we don't quite know yet.  Thought you kept Jacob true to form as well.

 
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Date: June 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Confession and Fear

Very good story so far.  I really like the way you have set up the Leah/Taven imprint--it seems to make perfect logical sense instead of just being used for convenince to tie up lose ends as is often the case. 

I can't wait to read more and will be anxiously awaiting your next update.

 
Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: All That Brightness

Great chapter.  I'm glad that Charlie is in on the secret, but at the same time it makes me a little nervous for what that could mean for him.  I have to agree with the pack--it's good to see Leah happy.  Many times people try to 'fix' what they don't like about characters or their situations and they just choose an easy, often corny method for doing so, but the direction you have chosen to take it quite the opposite.  Great job!

 
Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: A Perfect Day; an Even Better Night

Very good chapter.  It is very interesting to 'observe' Leah's internal struggles and to see that she's not so different from everyone else.

 
Summary:

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Jacob stopped Bella from jumping off the cliff in New Moon and Edward never returned.

After 22 years, the Cullens move to Seattle for yet another fresh start and Edward winds up with yet another surprising lab partner... Bella's daughter.

She's so like her mother and yet so different. Is it possible to love both a memory and its reincarnate?

And does Bella's daughter have a few secrets of her own?

 

*Rated for language, sexuality and awesomeness.

SM owns Twilight but check me out if you're into sex and sarcasm.

Sloppy wet kisses to Kris (aka Mkystich) for the new banner!


Categories: AU Characters: Edward, Other Character
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Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 86339
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2009 Updated: January 16, 2011


Reviewer: XFireandIceX Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Evolve... O

Ouch...that was painful to 'watch.'  I  have to admit, I had my reservations about this story when I started it...the whole falling-for-the-daughter-of-your-true-love thing was a bit creepy, but WOW!  This is good stuff!





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