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Summary:

Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl? 

Banner by Twimom817 @ TA


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 226754
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2009 Updated: September 12, 2010


Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Somehow I'm afraid how Edward reacts. I'm sure that he will be happy about the baby. But for 11 years he thought he can't be a father.

I just hope that he Won't think that Bella cheated on him.

 

 
Summary:

Bella Swan has moved home to Forks. It's only a matter of time until she crosses paths with Edward Cullen, her former best friend and first love. They parted on bad terms years ago, and both thought that they had moved on... All-human, LEMONS.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No Word count: 132849
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue: Happily Ever After

The story end was perfect.

The idea that Jessica and Bella are driends is really sweet and Bree is so cute! And remembers me a lot of her mother with the talking.

And Edward and Bella have finally a baby. But I think they would also have been amazing adoptive parents.

 
Summary:

When Edward receives devastating news of Bella he isn't strong enough to stay by her side. Though he regrets his defection he realizes its too late. Until she agrees to meet him. 


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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5067
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: August 09, 2009


Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: July 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story was really sad. But also beautiful.

It has to be hard for them both. You only get Edward's point of view. What he did was wrong, but he thought he was right.

And for Bella. Not only does she get the note that she's ill but her husband leaves her. She has to be extremely strong to survive and give Edward a second chance.

A great story.

 
Let's Love Hate by Forever17 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1678]
Summary:

Edward Cullen and Bella Swan have been married for three years and are on their way to Seattle, Washington to commence Alice Cullen and Jasper Whitlock's upcoming wedding. It is going to be a momentous occasion filled with family togetherness and heartwarming love.

The only problem is that Edward and Bella have been separated for three months, can’t stand each other, and—oh yeah—their family has no idea.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 162323
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2009 Updated: May 09, 2010


Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Sour Retributions

oh god, this chapter was hilarious!! really funny... It's so Emmett to think that jail was brilliant... But it's true. The pranks were funny.

And finally Rosalie and Em know that what they did was wrong. I totally can understand why they wanted them back together!! Edward and Bella belong together but they didn't have the right to play with their lifes.

By the way, what animal made Rosalie and which name does it have?

 
Bundle of Joy by lilac17 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 185]
Summary:

Married for three years and expecting their first child, Bella and Edward were ready for their happily ever after, but that seems to be threatened when someone from the past reenters their lives, holding secrets that could break the couple up.

Thanks to MintKiss for the banner!

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Bundle of Joy


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 62261
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010


Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Friends and an ex girlfriend

That's right, Edward. She doesn't seem to want to ruin your marriage. But I bet she tries... And Edward totally falls for Tanya's acting.

I really wonder why Edward always says to Tanja that he's married to Bella and they are going to have a baby. But he never tells her that he loves Bella.         I'm sure that he doesn't love Tanya, but it's weird?



Author's Response:

 

I never noticed that he never said he loved Bella. I'll try to squeeze in some romantic scenes just for you, okay?

Yeah, Edward is being dumb right now because he's scared and he sees a good person in Tanya. She was his first love, after all. Thanks for your review!

 
Summary:

Bella is trapped in a loveless marriage with Edward Cullen - a man she hardly knows. When his father dies, Edward uproots them from their life in New York City and moves into his father's now-empty house in the heart of Colorado. Amidst the desolate, beautiful landscape Bella begins to realize that perhaps there is more to her cold, apathetic husband  than she thought.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 41782
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: January 31, 2010


Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: January 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Office

I really don't know what I think about this story. Its totally different from everything I read here. (I don't mean it in a bad way.)

I read it every new chapter and somehow it captures me.

I can't wait when we finally get to know what happened between the two. But it doesn't seem good. I'm really wondering if this story will have a happy ending.

 
Summary:

Small Fair

Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH, AU, OOC,

Rated M for later, they are adults & will do adult things!

Canon Couples 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 92216
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2010


Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

I love this story!

I started reading it today and I couldn't stop. I just had to go on...

And the end is so sad. I'm sitting here and cry, but it was perfect.

 
Loner by Nilla Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9900]
Summary: Feature

Edward Cullen was a loner, an outcast. He clearly hated everybody, including himself. He was not a nice person. So, why was I so drawn to him? And why did I get the crazy feeling he felt the same way?

WARNING: This story will deal with the aftermath of child abuse and rape. If that bothers you too much, I strongly recommend that you don’t read.

 


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Thanks to steffyxxface for the lovely banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 115 Completed: Yes Word count: 365612
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2011


Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Oh no. Somehow I'm afraid that Bella is touch ing him and he'll hurt her.Well, I guess I can only wait to get the answer.

I really like that you update your story regulary.

 
Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Oh, your chapters are really too short... NO, kidding. I love this chapter. Edward is there for Bella and I like it that it's him who can support her. Perhaps he realises that he's strong, too and Bella needs him, too.

I feel for Bella. But I'm sure Edward can help her.

 
Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: January 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh, Edward is relaxing a bit... Great. And the get to know each other.

And I love that Bella doesn't let Edward go.

Do you know how long this story will be?



Author's Response: Good question. And I have no idea. *lol* Sorry. At first I was like 'no more than 20 chapters' but I think it's safe to say we won't be anywhere near the end by then. So we'll just have to wait and see how long it turns out. I have to admit, I once wrote a Spuffy story that ended up being 96 chapters long, but those chapters were about half as long as the ones here. :) Thank you so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

oh, Edward is taking her to the meadow!! There's a process...

I have to saythat I couldn't stand Emmett at first. And how he treated Edward. But I think I misjudged him.

And I love how you worked the quotations of the book in your story.



Author's Response: Thank you! And as for Emmett, maybe he cares after all...

 
Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: February 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This cahpter was so beautiful!

I can't wait for them to get together. And their first kiss. But I'm afraid that won't be a nice scene regarding Edward's past.



Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you thought the chap was beautiful!

 
Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

The last scene was so beautiful...

I really hope that Edward starts to realise that it wasn't his fault soon...



Author's Response: Let's hope so, but he has a long way to go. Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I love this story. I really do. And I'm always happy when I see a new chapter. So, thank you!



Author's Response: You're welcome. And thank you! :)

 
Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Finally she knows what happened to Edward, well not all the details, but she gets the picture.

And she reacts like everyone, but Edward, knows. She doesn't run away... You Bella is really strong and I like that...

You shouldn't be nervous. It was a great chapter.

 
Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Finally! There first kiss.

And it's so great that Edward tries to forget about James and what he did to him and still feels comfortable with Bella.

Perhaps he now realises that a therapy could help him deal with his past?

Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I'm really glad that nothing worse happened. at the end of the last chapter I was kind of afraid how Edward would react. But nothing terrible happened.

And it's wonderful that Bella feels loved. Edward may think that he can't love, but what he does shows that's not true.

 
Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: June 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I have to say I'm impreddes. At the beginning you said that you planned something like 20 chapters and we are by 50 now. And the story isn't over yet. I'm glad. I love this story and hope to read a lot more.

 
Summary:

Sequel to The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and in to Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward.  When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain?

 

*Rated for lemons and language

 

Thank you, Selita, for making this fantastic banner!  *muah*

TMS

This is my first fan-made banner!!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you, dear!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone? 

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 168854
[Report This] Published: November 14, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2010


Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Proposition

oh my god! I knew that Phil is disgusting, but god!!

Is it okay that I want Edward to kill him? And maybe Renee too? She can't be serious and say that she doesn't know anything about this shit.

I hope their plan works.

Great chapter!

 
Summary:

Edward and Bella end up in detention together during Bella's first week of school. How will the meeting go, will they find love or end up hating each other?

OOC ONE-SHOT!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1819
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2009


Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Buh! Edward, why did you do that?

Wow, I really didn't expect that. I thought that Bella would do something so they would get detention together for a month. But that really is different.

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward are "buddies" and while Bella wants more, Edward pulls away every time she tries to make things more official.  Then one evening, she meets a tall, dark, handsome man out in a club, and he promises her everything she always wanted.  Will Bella take it, even if it's not with the person she thought it would be with?  And what will Edward do when his friend is suddenly no longer available?

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 36646
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: February 11, 2010


Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Ch 12: New Places

Hi.

I like your story.

And your Edward. It seems so typical that he doesn't talk to Bella and wants to do everything n his own.

Do yo want to finish this story untill the end of January or the next chapter?

 



Author's Response:

I meant the story.  The next chapter is pretty much done already :-)

 
Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Future Beckons

oh man, Tanya. Why am I not surprised that Edward is not the father? I feel really bad for him.

But I really can see him in Bella together now without dealing with Tanya for the rest of their lifes.

Greta chapter!!

 
Whisper by twilifed113 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary:

Edward Cullen fell in love with Isabella the moment he saw her. But Isabella’s frightening past keeps her from even imagining romance. However, she has no choice but to accept his marriage proposal after her guardian and beloved friend passes away, leaving her with nothing to her name but a box of letters and photographs.

Yet, those letters and photos are the catalyst to the unveiling of a mystery in Bella’s family that will consume them. Somehow, their true love for each other can only be discovered as Edward saves her from her own haunting past.  




AU-H, Romantic Suspence

thanks m81170 for the spectacular banner!

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Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 47383
[Report This] Published: December 09, 2009 Updated: February 18, 2010


Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: February 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Hope

I don't know what I think about Edward hiding something. They should be more oopen with each other. (I don't want to criticize your story.)

Oh Jacob. I like him but in my eyes Bella and him are not meant to be together. But still I feel sorry for him.

I hope you are well and will be okay soon



Author's Response:

Yes, they should be more open with each other, but remember that edward's first priority is keeping Bella safe and happy.  Whatever he does, he thinks it's right for her.

I'm feeling much better, thanks for asking.  Thank you for commenting!

 
Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Secrets

oh, that's s sweet. Finally Bella told him her feelings...

I know that Edward is only trying to take care of Bella, but I still don't like him having secrets. I can't see how that's going to be okay.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

 
Summary:

Bella is a grad student moonlighting as an 'Adult Phone Entertainer'. One night she gets a call she'll never forget. Fluffy O/S, BxE, AH. Rated R for language and adult situations.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8896
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2010 Updated: January 11, 2010


Reviewer: Ramona89 Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Time Caller

I liked your story. It was funny and at some parts I couldn'd stop laughing.

I can't wait to read your new story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review!

I’m so glad you enjoyed my little story. I was really worried about my skills in writing anything comedic, so I'm really happy to hear it made you laugh!

I have made the decision to expand this o/s  into a short story. I’m in the process of outlining what I want right now and I’m very excited to start writing. It might take a little bit for me to post because I tend to write a little slower, but put me on your alerts so you can see when it comes out!

 




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